I liked the premise and had high hopes. I'm definitely in the minority so please read other reviews as well to decide whether you want to read this. This just wasn't for me.
This is my first time where a book has actually gotten on my nerves and I found a few parts hard to read. I don’t normally DNF but I wish I had.
1 Liner Summary: Detective Sarah investigates a murder case where only 4 out of the 5 girls who had played the Midnight Man game (like Bloody Mary) in the Black Manor returned, forcing Sarah to revisit and confront her traumisiting past.
Read this if you like: Mystery, thriller, crime, detective, spooky, multiple 3rd person point of views.
What I Didn’t Enjoy.
• This book started off with a bang but I didn’t feel the impact. Since it was only chapter 1 I wanted to give the book a chance but it never recovered for me. Perhaps it was the writing, it felt quite simple, straightforward and surface level so I could never engage or connect with any characters. The parts that should’ve invoked some sort of reaction or emotion, had no impact on me (or maybe I just have a heart of stone haha).
• We were in 4 different points of views and except for the Midnight man chapters, the rest did not have a distinct voice. Other than Sarah, I didn’t feel like each of them added significantly to the story. The whole book could have been from Sarah’s point of view.
• There was so much mystery around Sarah’s past and yet the reveal about her partner and this mysterious incident was extremely anticlimactic. They were mentioned very briefly in conversations as if I was telling you about my bad day yesterday and then brushed under the rug never to be revisited again. It felt insignificant when in fact, they were extremely traumatic events!
• There was little set up around the midnight man game and the Blackhall Manor. It didn’t feel dark, creepy or haunted. We were told a bit of history and then I had to simply accept it.
• There was a lot of meandering around. In between the major events, I don’t remember much of the actual investigation, it felt like a lot of fillers. I was skimming the book pretty fast and by the time the twist came I had already lost all interest and just wanted to get it done. The identity of the Midnight man and his obsession was really random and didn’t make much sense to me.
Cringeworthy and what got on my nerves:
The Midnight Man and office dialogue was cringey and hard to read.
• The Midnight man sounded like a sassy teenager dishing out some lame comebacks. When the identity was revealed and why, it feels even more ridiculous because the tone was very very young and immature.
• The police workplace scenes were essentially petty and immature school yard drama. The protagonist didn’t grow from it and I didn’t feel touched when they slowly accepted her. It was completely unnecessary and wouldn’t have made a difference to the story if they had welcomed Sarah back with open arms.
It actually got on my nerves because it was outright bullying and for no good reason. The protagonist - Sarah had gone on sick leave for her mental health due to a traumatic incident. When she returned to work everyone treated her like crap, threw her under the bus where possible, gave her the less desirable tasks, gossipped and left her out. Initially, we were led to believe it was because they were blaming her for the incident (even then it doesn’t justify their behaviour), but it turned out they were angry because she took sick leave for a long time and therefore couldn’t backfill her role so everyone had to take on extra workload. I have no words. There simply wasn't enough world building of the workplace such as detail about the characters or impacts to make it feel realistic to me.
Here are some example dialogue that raised an eyebrow (These are adults talking):
“Slayton's biggest loser cop”
"I don't think you’re ready to play the Midnight Game yet, are you? Have you figured out who I am? No. Of course you haven’t. You’re not really cut out for policing, are you, Sarah? If incompetence was a sport, you’d come in first every time.”
“But then, you have a forgettable face. Your clothes blend in...even your house feels like its hiding”
“Shouldn’t you be going home, Ms Part-Timer? The grown-ups have work to do”
Many thanks to NetGalley and Emblabooks for the ARC in exchange for an honest opinion.