Baron Lee and Lady Bala are headed to Denshu, his gift from the King. There is an imposter mage who has taken off his province and he must woo the residents to support him while taking down the imposter. The town is 17th century in most of its infrastructure and trade. Lee knows the new king put his strongest mages in the southernmost town in the kingdom - adjacent to Darvist. Lee knows the King plans to abscond with the remainder of the huge loan it had obtained from Darvist and Lee's 'gift' of nobility and the Denshu province was to give the king time to get away from a followup invasion.
Lee has to upgrade the town and raise the standards of the people he has come to respect before they can assist him. He is experimenting with the two portals he confiscated during the last invasion to see if he can stop the next attack or give him the means to respond. He thinks he has some of the keys to using the magic to portals since he can't do it with 24th century electronics. He is mastering the ability to create matter from the zero-point mana energy he can produce. This nearly inexhaustible supply of mana may give him the means if he can learn to control it and teach his closest associates. Anna is staying by his side now and the town has become accustomed to her presence but she has limited powers. Bala is training the townspeople with magical abilities to support the defense of the town.
Ken R Pence, Ph.D. is a professor of engineering at Vanderbilt University. He is a retired captain from the Metro Nashville Police Department where he served 31 years (16 on SWAT) and has taught police and military in the US and Europe (England, Germany, France, and Northern Ireland) in confrontation management skills. He has researched sniper shot location for DARPA, acoustic sensors to protect African elephant herds and inexpensive magnetic levitation. He lives in Nashville with his wife and his large - drooling - black lab (Drools Verne).
MC has a completely inconsistent attitude and behavior. The minute he is bothered by killing an obvious sociopath, the very next chapter he off handily incinerated five guys before even talking to them. Acts as though he is a genius then flatly ignores how he is giving his enemies potential access to his very own trump card for no apparent reason. The whole thing is full of stuff like this, along with cold and stunted dialogue that is has about as much emotional content as reading baking instruction from a box
Well, sometimes an author uses a trick to get out of a situation, and it just blows the entire story. I won't say what the trick was in this case, but introducing the concept of this other person just blew the entire story for me. Not a single hint of such a person, then poof, suddenly there's an explanation for everything that's been happening, and with no need to explain a single thing. No, no, no. Not my style. I don't think I'll be continuing with this series. For what it's worth though, the story was fairly interesting up to that point.
Another great book in this series, if you liked lux but wanted more swords and sorcery fighting and mages then this is a book for you plus I think we have just started on the tip of the iceberg in stories for this world.
Lee is the hero of this two book series!It is far too heavy on telling the story. The tale of a compassionate mage that goes around fixing every wrong is entertaining. I hope the author take my critical view in the right way! Good tale Ken!
Magic and tech. The MC continues his life by taking care of his new people and then checking out Darvist. More fighting and cooking. More rescues. So far so good. What's next??