This mediocre book could have been a really good one with a little bit of proofreading, editing, and helpful hints from friends or a good police consultant. It was better than your average generic re-cycled bonnet romance plot with a little more danger and mystery, but it succeeded much better in the romance part than the suspense part--which was chock full of holes and hokey. It really bothered me how people would mysteriously show up at places they couldn't have known about, at homes of people they didn't know existed, specifically to find someone that they had no way of knowing was there. ESP? It also bothered me that they came by totally silent cars--like when the bad guys surprised the heroes at the hunting cabin deep in the silent woods arriving by a car that no one heard coming. No plausible explanation of how the bad guys knew to find them in that secret place, of course. How about when the creep attends an Amish gathering and nobody, except Daniel, in the close-knit community where everybody knows everybody noticed--"hey, there's a strange Englisher here who doesn't speak Deutsche but is dressed Amish and pretending to be a member of our ordnung," at a time when several violent crimes have occurred in their previously crime-free community putting people on edge? Multiply things like that by about 100 and you get the idea--way too many aspects made no sense--it seemed almost like paranormal fiction with people having special senses but totally lacking basic human common sense. This was a generally entertaining read interrupted by way too many annoying goofs; a well-developed romance interrupted by a really poorly-developed mystery. Recommended only for romance readers who have never read a quality mystery by someone who is knowledgable about police procedures.