I’m DNFing at 24%.
I just can’t keep going with this book for multiple reasons.
First, Aiden (MMC) is a walking red flag. If I wanted to read one of those I would’ve picked up a dark/taboo romance,
Things that are troubling about Aiden in the first 24%:
-He comments on kenzies drink when first meeting her and says she drinks that for the low calories or dumb health reasons and then says girls don’t get a body like that by not caring about what they eat.
-After she disappears on him at the bar, he spends the next few weeks texting her around 20 times, per his estimate, with no response from her.
-He stated that he’d wear her down, it was just a matter of time.
-He’s cocky to the extreme by his inner monologue going on about how he’s extremely attractive with an impressive physical presence and a hockey players stamina, no slouch in bed and women of MSU knew it. And then going right into “but he’s also a nice guy”
-He gets dared to get her to go on a date with kenzie and he intends to not fail. This reminded me of She’s all that, but instead of him being Freddie Prince, he’s Paul walker in that movie.
-He calls her “bunny” as in puck bunny, even though she repeatedly tells him not to.
-He asks Kenzie “what’s with the animosity” when she doesn’t want to talk to him, because she doesn’t know him and he won’t leave her alone.
-kenzie checks a message on her phone and laughs and then replies, aiden wants to know what’s so funny and she says nothing and then he just grabs her phone out of her hands and starts adding his number to her contacts so she won’t ignore him anymore.
-when she gets up and leaves, he follows her and grabs her arm and won’t let go and says if she agrees to go on a date with him he’ll let her go. She eventually yanks her arm from his grasp.
Yes, that was all from the first 24% and I honestly don’t care if he changes or whatever. Those things were not ok. Especially for someone he knew for all of 10 minutes.
Now onto other things that bothered me about this book. Yes, there’s more.
-Kenzies big hockey player brother Brent. He’s a complete overbearing asshole. Kenzie starts to have a panic attack just thinking about how he’ll react about her going back to school. He also gives off red flag vibes.
-I’ve listened to videos by black book reviewers who have stated that they’re tired of their skin being described as some kind of food in books and in this instance a stunning black woman is described as having “skin the color of a cup of coffee with a splash of cream in it”
-While this is the first in a series, there were 2 other books before this one that involved Kenzies brother Brent and his wife and another couple that’s introduced. I could tell by how much backstory they were getting that they must’ve had books before this, so I went and confirmed that. And while I’m sure this is still a standalone, there’s a lot of things I’m sure would be picked up easier and understanding the dynamics may have made reading this not as bad.
That’s all I can think of for now. I’m really disappointed by this book because as someone who has bad anxiety, I’m always looking for books with good anxiety rep. But unfortunately everything else about this book was a huge turn off for me