Good timing with the World Cup just about to start but unfortunately it fell so flat for me. The style of writing doesn't work for me and the dialogue was really clunky, none of it felt like anything people would ever say, let alone the type of people actually saying it. It's personal taste, I know, but I found it really hard to like or care about a twenty five year old professional soccer play who said "shitballs" and "hellballs" at least once a chapter. The coach speak and team dynamics didn't land at all for me and the interactions between everyone were really off. The idea of the plot is fine: Christine transferred to FSU during her senior year, gets off on the wrong foot with Keeley, they're forced to spend more time together, and eventually fall in love, kind of? - but no aspect of it was given enough time to develop into anything genuine. It was hard to understand why anyone felt the way they did and all of the characters were so simple that it was hard to connect to them. I think this is a common thread in romance novels right now, where there's a really linear plot that clips together at a fast pace and then suddenly there's a clear happy ending with no real understanding of how or why they ended up together. I know that's the point of romance and I usually can get into it if the characters are interesting and their relationship has chemistry or some sort of dynamic, but a lot of them are falling short to me lately and this is book is unfortunately in that group.
Onside Play is also really short and I never say that books should but longer, but the pacing felt off. There's dual timelines: 2019 at Florida State University and 2023 at the World cup, and it felt unnecessary to have both. There was weirdly a lot of filler for the amount of pages and everything about Christine and Keeley was rushed. The reason for their breakup is fine but it was so hard for me to believe they both had crazy, intense, real feelings after a few weeks for it to become the issue it did. Christine's actions were difficult to justify as she seemed to change her mind randomly every so often without any actual reasons.
I probably care too much about sports realism compared to most people who are going to read this book, but it's so hard for me to accept the most insane decisions related to a soccer team even if I know they're only there to get the two characters together. The book struggles when describing plays and the importance of the World Cup. I know it's only meant to to be the setting and not offer much more than that, and I don't want to get into, "I just wish this was another book" territory, but it's baffling neither of them seemed to care that much about winning except for throwaway lines and random extreme reactions to matches. It felt trite when Keeley would reflect on "What It Means To Be An Athlete." The writing wasn't strong enough to make it seem like anything more than, "sports are hard, winning is good, but it's okay if we lose because we tried hard." Logistically, nothing makes sense. I know it is a romance novel and the romance is the point, but having a main character who talks about it being her dream while also...not prioritizing the World Cup and can't wait for it to be over is so insane to me. Vague spoiler, but my biggest complaint about the reality of being a professional soccer player is the sex scene that takes place on the team bus during the World Cup. In what world? The last minute conflict was very weird and I think the book really struggled with dealing with Christine as a character. She was incredibly hot and cold, and since the POV was so tight to Keeley it was confusing to understand why she was still interested after Christine hurt her so many times and never really proved that she cared.
There's no actual tension with the romance or the soccer. Both story lines are nonsensical, the beats of the tournament are drawn out until the final match which is given no time what so ever on the page, and their relationship goes from good to bad to good with no real explanations for why. There were so many aspects that didn't make sense to me and I found it a difficult book to finish.