cardboard characters and a FMC in constant need of saving, just no
Rating: 2⭐️
And I’m out. Honestly I tried so hard to like this series and main character because it had so much potential, but in the end, the story, plotting, and overall poor character development just sunk it.
I’ll take it issue by issue, starting with the least interesting part , that of the plot elements and total story reveal early on.
I guessed at how all the various elements of this story came together to point to the main villain and his nefarious plan at around the 45 percentage point. But the author herself gets several characters to actually tell a small group the exact details of the storyline, the mystery, the villain, at the halfway point. So it’s a done deal. Just a matter of bringing him down.
For the rest of the book. Mystery solved.
Next. The biggest problem is the characters. Most are of the cardboard type. One dimensional. No layers , no history and very little details or any real reason to care for them. That’s the majority of the cast. One gets hurt or killed. It’s not a big deal because they are, for the most part, underwhelming and interchangeable. Only a few stick out, and that’s due to how often they appear throughout the book and their names. Like Dog, the werewolf bartender. But that’s all you really know about him.
The main character, Charley, is problematic is multiple ways. For me she’s a prime example of a TSTL character. She’s constantly doing things that are highly “stupid” in that both she, her circle of friends, and the reader know are traps, running into scenes where she’s outnumbered, or the villains or baddies are waiting for her. She’s either told herself it’s a dumb or stupid idea, her friends or even frenemies have told her it’s a bad idea. So, over and over, she goes through and does it. And yes, gets hurt , needs to be saved, and often gets others hurt too. Watch her repeat this pattern while asking yourself why you are still reading this book.
TSTL. Extremely frustrating to read about. And gives me little reason to invest in the character.
The magic and her lack of training, the nasty coven and that entire aspect of the story is full of flags and issues. But I’ll table those because the main character has so many herself.
Finally the romance. We don’t have much of any relationship history or romance development between Charley and the vampire Samuel. But instantly they are in love, committed and Dog is so happy for them. After a few minutes in the alley and a couple of times where he steps in and helps her out? Where is the relationship dynamic? Even instant love romances have more of a connection than this one does.
Add everything above and I barely got through the book. It was a struggle. So I’m definitely not going forward .
If you’re a fan of the author, then you might want to consider reading this.
I’ll leave it up to you.
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The Charley Underwood series -complete
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Bloodlust Curse
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