I have a vague recollection of reading this when I was younger but remembered very little about the plot. With my love for Christian YA series of the 80s/90s/00s, I thought I’d give it a try. I read the Kindle edition, which I have to say has one of the worst covers I have ever seen. It would’ve been better to have been a blank page with the title printed on it.
While I think the story premise is a good one the execution left a lot to be desired. This feels written for the 8-12 crowd, but the main character was 15 years old and read much younger. Not in an uncomfortably immature way, just inexperienced and innocent. It felt off to have her at 15, I think she would’ve fit better as a 12 or 13-year-old middle schooler.
The pacing was off – we meet the Scott family, our inciting incident takes place, and then roughly a year passes within a few paragraphs. During that time Juli meets Shannon and they become best friends. Throughout the rest of the book (which covers a few weeks time) their friendship is referenced as having a lot of history to it, which rings false for the reader because we know so little about Shannon.
Other things that stuck out to me:
As other reviewers mentioned, the misuse of “was” for “were” - it almost read as if a find and replace was run in the editing and made a lot of errors.
Shannon‘s misquotes of common clichés was supposed to be funny, but unfortunately became her entire personality, and each time she made a mistake everyone laughed until they cried, over and over again. That got old really quickly.
It was so odd to me that Juli’s mother always referenced Juli’s father by his first name when talking to Juli– she never said “dad” or “your dad” she always said “Gary Scott.” Perhaps there are people who speak that way and I’ve just not met them.
Lastly, this was billed as a Juli Scott mystery, and yet the “mystery” showed up around 40% through the book, and Juli had nothing to do with solving it. She had concerns about some suspicious things that were happening, and she interrupted the bad guy at the end of the book, and that was the extent of her involvement.
All that to say, I did like Juli and her friends and would be willing to try others in the series, though my hopes aren’t particularly high. I am a glutton for this genre.