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Fated is Overrated
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If you are looking for a story with a submissive, all-forgiving female lead, this is not the novel for you.
She smirks, before asking “do you like that, my little mate?”. I’m too far gone to even care about the “little” part now, all I want is her tongue back where it was a second ago. “Yes..” I manage to breathe out, before she licks it again, and shortly wraps her lips around my tip. F*ck. I moan, shivering when she pulls back. “Say please, my little mate” she taunts, her eyes still glued to mine and her hand still pleasuring me. “Please Lola” I breathe out. And just like that, she wraps her mouth around the tip, before taking in my c*ck until it hits the back of her throat. We both moan loudly, and I close my eyes momentarily in pure ecstasy. I almost whimper when she pulls it out again to say “look at me while I please you”. I comply immediately, and she grins before continuing her delicious torture. Her other hand moves to play with my balls and I know I’m not going to last long. I’m panting and moaning like a hot mess, when I hear Lola’s moaning increase.
I quickly avert my eyes back to Lola’s, not wanting to risk her to stop as I am so close to coming undone now. I can’t believe this is all happening. “I… I’m cumming” I croak out, when I feel I’m about to topple over. She pulls her mouth off, and immediately places my c*ck between her perfect breasts. Goddess this is hot. I move up and down slowly, as my cum starts to cover her breasts. “F*ck you are perfect” I breathe out in between my pants and moans. Lola is moaning louder and louder, as she is probably on the verge as well.
*****
Lola is an omega within the Red Dagger pack. She was found as a baby abandoned in the woods by her adoptive mother, who has long passed by now. Lola is not your typical submissive she wolf. She is sassy, with anger issues bubbling just beneath the surface. With her curvy body, blonde hair and green eyes she is the total opposite of all the other wolves appearance wise. And as a result, is treated like an outcast after her best friend Chris – the alpha heir – turns on her without warning as young children. Ignored by almost everyone and bullied and beaten by her former best friend and his gang daily, Lola long awaits the day and year she turns 18 when she gets her wolf and is able to finish high school to leave Red Dagger. All she has to do is withstand one more schoolyear of it all, despite the constant desire to fight back and the struggles to reign in her anger. But what happens when the bucket runs over and her restraint finally snaps? What happens when she faces off those who have tormented her for years, thinking she is a weak little girl, although she has been secretly training hard for years on her own?
As the story unfolds, she will come across those who desire her as well as her fated mates – the Lycan princes. Lola has never wanted a mate and after all betrayals is reluctant to trust anyone anymore – but will she let any of them in eventually? And what happens when her wolf is revealed and her origins are questioned when she gains special powers? Will she find her happy ever after with a mate, her fated mates, or stay alone?
If you are looking for a story with a submissive, all-forgiving female lead, this is not the novel for you.
She smirks, before asking “do you like that, my little mate?”. I’m too far gone to even care about the “little” part now, all I want is her tongue back where it was a second ago. “Yes..” I manage to breathe out, before she licks it again, and shortly wraps her lips around my tip. F*ck. I moan, shivering when she pulls back. “Say please, my little mate” she taunts, her eyes still glued to mine and her hand still pleasuring me. “Please Lola” I breathe out. And just like that, she wraps her mouth around the tip, before taking in my c*ck until it hits the back of her throat. We both moan loudly, and I close my eyes momentarily in pure ecstasy. I almost whimper when she pulls it out again to say “look at me while I please you”. I comply immediately, and she grins before continuing her delicious torture. Her other hand moves to play with my balls and I know I’m not going to last long. I’m panting and moaning like a hot mess, when I hear Lola’s moaning increase.
I quickly avert my eyes back to Lola’s, not wanting to risk her to stop as I am so close to coming undone now. I can’t believe this is all happening. “I… I’m cumming” I croak out, when I feel I’m about to topple over. She pulls her mouth off, and immediately places my c*ck between her perfect breasts. Goddess this is hot. I move up and down slowly, as my cum starts to cover her breasts. “F*ck you are perfect” I breathe out in between my pants and moans. Lola is moaning louder and louder, as she is probably on the verge as well.
*****
Lola is an omega within the Red Dagger pack. She was found as a baby abandoned in the woods by her adoptive mother, who has long passed by now. Lola is not your typical submissive she wolf. She is sassy, with anger issues bubbling just beneath the surface. With her curvy body, blonde hair and green eyes she is the total opposite of all the other wolves appearance wise. And as a result, is treated like an outcast after her best friend Chris – the alpha heir – turns on her without warning as young children. Ignored by almost everyone and bullied and beaten by her former best friend and his gang daily, Lola long awaits the day and year she turns 18 when she gets her wolf and is able to finish high school to leave Red Dagger. All she has to do is withstand one more schoolyear of it all, despite the constant desire to fight back and the struggles to reign in her anger. But what happens when the bucket runs over and her restraint finally snaps? What happens when she faces off those who have tormented her for years, thinking she is a weak little girl, although she has been secretly training hard for years on her own?
As the story unfolds, she will come across those who desire her as well as her fated mates – the Lycan princes. Lola has never wanted a mate and after all betrayals is reluctant to trust anyone anymore – but will she let any of them in eventually? And what happens when her wolf is revealed and her origins are questioned when she gains special powers? Will she find her happy ever after with a mate, her fated mates, or stay alone?
- GenresShapeshifters
492 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 28, 2024
About the author
Brenda Minnaard-Groen
5 books9 followersHey guys!
Thank you for taking the time to visit my author page. I started my journey in 2023 during my pregnancy as a hobby, and it is safe to say it has gotten out of hand just a little bit :-)
I live in the Netherlands (born and raised), so my native language is Dutch. However, I often times find it easier to express myself in English. I have 2 beautiful little dragons, aka my little girls, and another toddler that goes by the name "husband" :-) They're all sweet, though!
I hope you enjoy my books, and if you would like to see more content of me please visit my socials (IG: brendaminnaardauthor). I have written paranormal dark fantasy werewolf romance novels thus far, featuring ao enemies to lovers and fated mates. All my books feature a kickass heroine, strong female lead character.
XOXO!
Thank you for taking the time to visit my author page. I started my journey in 2023 during my pregnancy as a hobby, and it is safe to say it has gotten out of hand just a little bit :-)
I live in the Netherlands (born and raised), so my native language is Dutch. However, I often times find it easier to express myself in English. I have 2 beautiful little dragons, aka my little girls, and another toddler that goes by the name "husband" :-) They're all sweet, though!
I hope you enjoy my books, and if you would like to see more content of me please visit my socials (IG: brendaminnaardauthor). I have written paranormal dark fantasy werewolf romance novels thus far, featuring ao enemies to lovers and fated mates. All my books feature a kickass heroine, strong female lead character.
XOXO!
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September 12, 2024
I love you book
Please write more I would love to have everyone's love story I love reading and I have kidney failure and reading is my outlit I would rather read books like yours than ever watch TV so please you are an amazing writer and I cried I cheered and I loved everymoment one of the best books I have ever read and I have thousands of books and thousands on my kindle too amazing please write more I love it so much
Please write more I would love to have everyone's love story I love reading and I have kidney failure and reading is my outlit I would rather read books like yours than ever watch TV so please you are an amazing writer and I cried I cheered and I loved everymoment one of the best books I have ever read and I have thousands of books and thousands on my kindle too amazing please write more I love it so much
September 3, 2024
Great book
Absolutely loved the book! The author does such a great job with the story overall and makes you feel like you are seeing the scenes unfold before your eyes. Between the strong character development and amazing plot twists you can't help but wanting more. I was sad when the story came to an end without another to be read. Highly recommend
Absolutely loved the book! The author does such a great job with the story overall and makes you feel like you are seeing the scenes unfold before your eyes. Between the strong character development and amazing plot twists you can't help but wanting more. I was sad when the story came to an end without another to be read. Highly recommend
September 6, 2024
Fated Is Ocerrated by Brenda Minnaard-Groen
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. I am so glad that the book ended the way it did because I am a firm believer in true love. It took Lolya a long time to get there, but when she finally did get there, she shined as bright as STAR! All of Lola's pains and struggles molded her into the fierce Dragon Queen that she be. This book was well written and kept me wanting to read more. I am so glad that I could read this book on the Kindle platform so that I could afford to read the entire story to the end. Hopefully, the author will write more stories and publish them on Kindle.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. I am so glad that the book ended the way it did because I am a firm believer in true love. It took Lolya a long time to get there, but when she finally did get there, she shined as bright as STAR! All of Lola's pains and struggles molded her into the fierce Dragon Queen that she be. This book was well written and kept me wanting to read more. I am so glad that I could read this book on the Kindle platform so that I could afford to read the entire story to the end. Hopefully, the author will write more stories and publish them on Kindle.
July 26, 2026
great story
I’m very pleasantly surprised with how much I enjoys this story. For a first time author she did a wonderful job. The story kept me hooked snd unable to put it down. Yes there are editing errors but nothing they can’t be over looked since it is a first time author. These things happen even with the most experienced out there. These story between her and he fated mates was intense and had me crying at times but all in all I truly loved how the characters grew.
I’m very pleasantly surprised with how much I enjoys this story. For a first time author she did a wonderful job. The story kept me hooked snd unable to put it down. Yes there are editing errors but nothing they can’t be over looked since it is a first time author. These things happen even with the most experienced out there. These story between her and he fated mates was intense and had me crying at times but all in all I truly loved how the characters grew.
July 24, 2024
Loved the book!
I really loved this book. There were times when I wanted to punch the FMC and others that I wanted to throw my Kindle. There are also spelling errors, and it should really be proofread. However, the storyline is fantastic, and the characters really pull at your heart strings. I would recommend this book if you aren't bothered by any of the above-mentioned.
I really loved this book. There were times when I wanted to punch the FMC and others that I wanted to throw my Kindle. There are also spelling errors, and it should really be proofread. However, the storyline is fantastic, and the characters really pull at your heart strings. I would recommend this book if you aren't bothered by any of the above-mentioned.
June 22, 2024
Great book
I loved reading this book the love story is breathtaking and shame there isn't book 2 but some books need to end the way they do to keep the imagination going lol. I highly recommend the read.
I loved reading this book the love story is breathtaking and shame there isn't book 2 but some books need to end the way they do to keep the imagination going lol. I highly recommend the read.
August 16, 2024
a good read from beginning to end
His story pulled me in, I originally started reading on another app and so glad I found it on kindle. The heroine is such a strong bad ass female lead. The story pulls you in. Highly recommend
His story pulled me in, I originally started reading on another app and so glad I found it on kindle. The heroine is such a strong bad ass female lead. The story pulls you in. Highly recommend
September 18, 2024
very detailed til the end
Very good book! Wish the ending wouldn’t have abruptly came to an end.
Also, upset of how Felix didn’t play a bigger part like how it drawing him up to me.
But over all a very good book!
Very good book! Wish the ending wouldn’t have abruptly came to an end.
Also, upset of how Felix didn’t play a bigger part like how it drawing him up to me.
But over all a very good book!
September 20, 2024
Amazing story
Definitely a great book. The storyline will keep you reading. I was so engrossed I didn't even realize it was 3 am. I look forward to reading your next book! I cannot believe this was your first novel, because it was amazing...
Definitely a great book. The storyline will keep you reading. I was so engrossed I didn't even realize it was 3 am. I look forward to reading your next book! I cannot believe this was your first novel, because it was amazing...
January 21, 2025
thoroughly enjoyed
I really enjoyed reading this book. It had just enough and didn’t go overboard like so many others do. It was nice to read a book that didn’t have a ton of females trying to steal men.
I really enjoyed reading this book. It had just enough and didn’t go overboard like so many others do. It was nice to read a book that didn’t have a ton of females trying to steal men.
September 15, 2026
Totally loved this book
Really enjoyed this read,although part of me didnt want her to except the twins either I did think Felix was going to be her mate aswell at one point. But nick😭😭that was so sad.
Really enjoyed this read,although part of me didnt want her to except the twins either I did think Felix was going to be her mate aswell at one point. But nick😭😭that was so sad.
June 20, 2024
Wonderful book
I started this book on Goodreads and then found it on Amazon. Was very excited to read this book and the ending was so well done
I started this book on Goodreads and then found it on Amazon. Was very excited to read this book and the ending was so well done
June 20, 2024
Very good
The book was a good read. I would recommend this book. It was a slow build up and to me was not predictable.
The book was a good read. I would recommend this book. It was a slow build up and to me was not predictable.
July 17, 2024
The story itself is really good. However, portions of the book are poorly written. There is a lack of flow in some chapters with other characters. The use of acronyms rather than using other words to convey the emotions or terms.
July 20, 2024
Not bad
It was an ok read very very long and drawn out but overall it was decent. FL was strong and that's something I enjoy with supernatural books. Keep up the good work author
It was an ok read very very long and drawn out but overall it was decent. FL was strong and that's something I enjoy with supernatural books. Keep up the good work author
August 22, 2024
I absolutely loved the witty humor in this story and the lovable characters. It was such a fantastic book to read!
August 26, 2024
Great book
Very good book. Had me hooked from the beginning. It will hit all kinds of emotions for you. Happy, sad, angry.
Very good book. Had me hooked from the beginning. It will hit all kinds of emotions for you. Happy, sad, angry.
August 27, 2024
Loved this novel!!
Novel was well written and didn’t want to put down! Loved how everything came together even though some parts were heartbreaking! Overall great writing and story
Novel was well written and didn’t want to put down! Loved how everything came together even though some parts were heartbreaking! Overall great writing and story
August 28, 2024
So good! I do love a kickass heroine.
This is the first book from this author, and I am in complete awe. There are a few grammatical issues, but plotting is her super power.
This is the first book from this author, and I am in complete awe. There are a few grammatical issues, but plotting is her super power.
September 1, 2024
Soooooo good
So so so so so good. Was well written and very good plot. Would read other stories by this author
So so so so so good. Was well written and very good plot. Would read other stories by this author
September 3, 2024
Loved it
I have read this book twice so far, I am a little sad Felix didn't end up being her mate as well but still loved it.
I have read this book twice so far, I am a little sad Felix didn't end up being her mate as well but still loved it.
September 5, 2024
Excellent read!
Congratulations on your 1st book! I hope you write more! I love the ending as it was what I wanted! Looking forward to the next one!
Congratulations on your 1st book! I hope you write more! I love the ending as it was what I wanted! Looking forward to the next one!
October 23, 2024
keeps you on edge
Love how it kept me wanting more. Hopefully she keeps writing as Brenda is very talented. I will miss Lola’s fire.
Love how it kept me wanting more. Hopefully she keeps writing as Brenda is very talented. I will miss Lola’s fire.
February 16, 2025
freaking Awesome
I absolutely loved this book and characters and would you have created I never wanted it to end I hope there is more books to come in this world and from them
I absolutely loved this book and characters and would you have created I never wanted it to end I hope there is more books to come in this world and from them
January 6, 2026
overall a good story
Solid 3.5 due to some grammar & spelling issues in some of the book. Overall, great story with a very twists. HEA
Solid 3.5 due to some grammar & spelling issues in some of the book. Overall, great story with a very twists. HEA
September 16, 2026
Fun read
I enjoyed the book. Its a good mix of adventure, drama, and sarcastic comments, which i love. I read 3 other books from this author and enjoyed those as well.
I enjoyed the book. Its a good mix of adventure, drama, and sarcastic comments, which i love. I read 3 other books from this author and enjoyed those as well.
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