Thank you so much for allowing me to ARC read this! Overall, this was an enjoyable romantasy; this would make a great introduction to the genre for new readers.
The world building was simple and not overly complicated- it made the storyline easy to follow. However, I think the readers are missing out on a lot of the details... the "why" to the story. We know who has allied with who, who is at war with who, etc... but there's no why. No background information. We also don't know much about the different locations in the world, other than where they're physically located. There are also some character details I would have loved to get into, such as the markings on Timas's body. What they are and why he has them, who else has them... etc. I truly just wanted MORE so I could feel as if I was fully immersed in the story.
The characters on their own were great. I especially enjoyed the banter between the characters; some of their interactions and dialogue were really humorous! However, I do feel as though there is no real chemistry between Timas and Emelia. The "spirit bond" made this an insta-love. While I may be a bit biased towards disliking the insta-love trope, I don't think there was any real substance drawing the main characters together other than this magical bond. They both think the other is attractive and loyal to those they love, but there was no draw or no tension between them. Timas looked at Emelia and told her he was going to make her his queen within 7 seconds of laying eyes on her. And Emelia seemed more obligated than willing to fall for him.
While the spelling and grammatical errors are to be expected (and easy to overlook) in an ARC, I do think some things distracted me from the story. When indicating a character's inner thoughts, it might be better to use italics to help distinguish from the normal storytelling (especially when those inner thoughts are in the middle of a paragraph). It might also help to have better indication of which character is speaking... the dialogues were often not followed with "said Timas"or something of the sort and it was hard to tell who was speaking. The writing felt unnatural and choppy in a lot of areas... if I may make a suggestion, I would say the writing needs to be more consistent. Use contractions or don't. Use modern language or use old-time language... same goes for the culture. Use present tense or use past tense- there were times where the tense was changing mid-sentence or mid-paragraph. I found myself needing to re-read several times throughout the book, but I think another round of editing could really help straighten things out!
Overall, this was a very creative and interesting book to read. I think the author has a talent for creating a good story. The ending felt a little abrupt... I know this is intended to be a series so readers will learn more as the story continues, but I felt like it was a bit of an awkward spot to end the book. I'm not sure I would continue with reading the series, but I wish the author nothing but the best as they continue in their journey! Congratulations on your debut book!