I’d really like to give it a higher rating, because I feel like the author put a lot of effort into tackling the mental health issues of her heroine, but, unfortunately, that’s just not enough to make it a good book.
The main issue I have with the book is the fact that it reads like a diary, not a book. There are so many completely unnecessary details. Full pages of scenes and descriptions that add nothing to the plot and often times feel like those audio-descriptions on TV for people who cannot see.
I don’t need to know that the character opened the door to walk into the class. I can assume she didn’t just fly through the wall. (I think her entire walk to class was detailed, actually.) I don’t need to know that the character went to get a meal in the cafeteria and there was a chili on the menu, but no beans, because they don’t put beans in the chili in Texas. He didn’t even get the freaking chili, for crying out loud. I don’t need to know what the professor was teaching in a particular agriculture class. I’m not trying to study the subject. They even talked about the weather so much that although I’ve never been to Texas, I now have a pretty good grasp on its climate after reading this book. So. Many. Useless. Details.
Not only made it the story seem long and boring, but also made me question whether there actually was a plot or was I just getting a rundown of some students going through their day to day life at uni.
The writing style didn’t make up for it either. Half the time the dialogues felt fake and were giving the: “how do you do, fellow kids?” vibe.
What kind of a 20 yo guy describes a girl to his mom and says: “She’s captivating with her love for sports and action movies and her unique sense of humor.”
Seriously? Real people don’t talk like that. Ever.
On top of that, there were misogynistic undertones in there that were giving me an ick. Why does a brother get to declare his sister being “off limits” and tries to tell her what she can do and who she can do it with? Is she not an adult with an agency over her own body? Also, why was there a baby shower, where the dad-to-be was getting funny gifts for himself, yet the future mother was getting a bunch of stuff for the kid?
If all of that wasn’t enough, I really struggled to make sense of the plot.
I thought the ex drama was going to be the main conflict or at least a vital part of the story but it ended up being almost an afterthought, resolved in less than half a page.
That’s right. After reading whole chapters of unnecessary details, when it came to some actual action, we just got a quick summary of it after it happened. I swear I saw red at that point and felt like an idiot, because MAKE IT MAKE SENSE.
So, basically, the whole plot turned out to be two characters with very little chemistry having a secret relationship, even though there was no actual reason for it to be secret to everyone around them. And after it all blew up, there was even less reason for the aftermath to be so dramatic. I know, those were young people, but they were supposed to act college-young, not middle school-young.
On a somewhat plus side, the found family vibe was sweet, but since nobody seemed to be honest and trusting with anyone, it too ended up feeling like a facade.
Overall, I simply didn’t enjoy anything about this book.