My first novel by Jordan Harper, this was a look at the seedy underground of Los Angeles and good ol’ Hollywoodland. However, there’s no glitz and glamor here; this is the side of Hollywood that is actively being buried and kept far from public view in the most scrutinized city in the world. The characters include a Hollywood starlit who’s been pulled into a dark world of exploitation, a woman who is a fixer of sorts for the rich and famous—she essentially swoops in and cleans up their messes and spins a yarn for the media if necessary, and lastly a corrupt ex cop and a few others of his ilk who were truly the disgraceful definition of dirty cop, the kind you don’t want to be behind the wheel when you’re getting pulled over.
All of this makes for an excellent set-up. Mae’s introduction was fantastic and especially memorable; it painted a picture of exactly what she does in a way that feels grotesquely realistic. Chris’s introduction was almost as good—we were given a quick rundown of his dirty past, and shown where that behavior has gotten him.
But all that is just the beginning of the story. From there, we’re launched into all means of debauchery all over the Los Angeles underground. We’re dropped into quite a few, sometimes quite complicated, storylines, some of which work better than others. This is where the book started to feel meandering and a bit disjointed to me…like it wasn’t quite sure what it wanted to be, so it tried to be everything at once, told in a blisteringly fast paced style. The character development is minimal. In fact there really isn’t much character development here at all unfortunately, and I do think the book suffered from it. We had the backgrounds of the two main characters, but I still never really felt like I knew them. They weren’t especially likable, which is fine as I don’t need a book to have a likable protagonist, but in this case it really left me grasping for a character to grip onto, and I didn’t find one through the whole book.
Harpers writing is good, in fact I liked it quite a bit. Lots of great turns of phrase and descriptive language (the final sentence is one example), so his prose stuck out as well above average to me, surprisingly. The storytelling , along with character development, were the main issue here for me. It just rocketed into storyline after storyline. Some of them were good (and there are definitely a few very memorable scenes from the book), but the way it all rolled out worked against the book. I personally wish the author would’ve taken his time a bit more, and gotten a bit more immersed in the city and with the characters. The potential was there, the setup was fantastic, but it never really fully delivered in my opinion.
That said, the book is still worth a look. It’s seedy, dark, and at times, sickening. And at times, a bit graphic. Some of the imagery was disturbing, in a good way, and there’s one seen in particular that will stick with me because of the way it was presented. The book has faults, and is definitely a bit uneven feeling to me, but it’s still an above average LA noir that will likely satisfy most who are into that kind of thing and pick it up.
3.5/5