Spoilers.
So, loved reading this. Good story from the start. A few cliches but they are forgiven. (brooding detective, mean colleague, typical journalist a hole…blablablabla) the hero worship is a bit stupid too btw… never had that feeling toward any of my colleagues, no matter the size of the case they handled.
But catching storyline and I was hooked. Until the end…
Omg I don’t think the author knew who the killer was… or he kept changing his mind. It just does not make sense…
1. Author decided it was a dirty ex cop: they find liters of blood, omg it is all so bad never seen before crime scene, with the blood and dna of all the kids in that residence. Though this was all cleaned up, yet they find samples ( that should very much be compromised) that they can analyze in a day . Also who writes bloody messages on a carpet (to start with in a darn carpet??) only to clean it up again? That makes no sense at all.
2. they discover that the occupant of that residence was murdered, by a female no less ( nothing against women but considering she was all alone dragging a male corpse around) and afterwards dumped in its entirety in a tunnel that is as inaccessible as they come (author described it as such, not me) the kill was violent, loads of blood, but no cause of death given, no details on the how and when, just a guesstimate)
3. What is Sandy’s role? To date we still don’t understand. Did he kidnap most of them? Or just Jack? What was his role? How did he get involved? Also… why were they so stupid as to try and frame him AND NOT KNOW WHERE THE DUDE WAS.
4. Nice back story and reading for the actual killer except: a. The whole putting them to sleep thing does not make sense at all if scully was butchering them. B. For all hints given Scully was a paedophile so the fact that the kids were not messed with doesn’t make sense. C. Scully is everything that woman despises, heck she went to town on her father like a mad man, why would she help him do what he did? It would make more sense if she killed peadophiles. No sense at all to want to protect them from men like her dad only to give them to men like her dad. D. Who put the sand there? E. Her OWN daughter? Why? Trigger? Reason! Elaborate man.
5. Hello? You are indicating that a paedophile succumbed to his urges 20 years ago…yet somehow there are 10 years between one murder and the other. It is said the man was fired for grooming! In an online chat but no one did anything, not even open a case AND his colleague knew about his preferences but didn’t even come forward then? How did he meet Sharon? Why did the collude? There is no history behind this…
6. The whole Jack kidnapping made even less sense.. there was again no reason, no actual trigger for it five years later… had she received a death sentence by cancer or something… it would have been understandable. But no trigger at all. The way she went about it is even less understandable.
7. Why do they keep the kids alive for 5 days? Why is there blood if they are being kept sedated? What is the cause of death? Why boys and girls? The predilection seems girls? Killers have a profile, psychology. Team killers are even more bound to those rules. There must be a trust or healthy fear. One dominant one follower.. neither Scully nor Sharon seem either… there is no reason for them to be colluding.
As you can see the story is unhinged. While we have a sturdy build up of the main character and a very detailed description of Scotland’s cities and highways… the actual subject of the novel is left guessing. Almost like after thoughts they meant to work out later.
The funny part here is though, that it is written so well you keep reading to the end without question, thoroughly enjoying the read. The disappointed comes when you realize the read is over and none of your questions were answered.
Characters like mowat are introduced and then dumped when they have no more use. The man broke into a private residence (as did the cop btw) and no one does anything… when you write a police procedural… know the procedures. Lone Ranger bs is not an option.
I am very frustrated here because the read was exciting at first.