A Wife for the Werewolf
The concept of this book was very interesting. For the most part, it was a well-told story. However, the execution needs work. There are so many inconsistencies that it distracts from the story. One example, in chapter 17 Trent drives his truck out to a scene and takes his motorcycle back... very confusing.
"The drive was a blur, my truck eating the miles." "I yelled over my shoulder, already striding toward my motorcycle parked nearby."
Sometimes the story veers into overly wordy territory. For example, this ...
“Very well,” she said at last. “I will not completely withdraw my support. But know this, Kate Halloway, if your truths are inaccurate as to what you’re implying, you will have lost more than my support." Umm, What the what? There are also lots of typos or missing words. A couple of examples,
“I’m sorry, but I go. Even though I’d love nothing more than to stay.”
"But that’s not why I was trying other scare you off.”
Overall, I think that with a bit of proofreading reading this could be a 5-star book.