So many times I was ready to quit this book, but I carried on..... but I really wish I hadn't wasted my time as it did not get any better.
The premises sounded interesting, but the writing just pulled me out of the story, so much more could have happened in this book but didn't.
The authors writing style is not for me. I was so confused about who everyone was and how they all knew each other or how they all connected together. So many of the interesting parts of the story were off page.... fair enough, but then they are just summerised with a passing one-liners.... and I was like..... that's quite a significant part of the story, and it gets a line or two!?!? For example, she starts seeing Cal first, one minute they work together, and the next, they are a couple.... no converstions or time spent together on page, but we get a sentence mentioned that he kept on talking and asking her, and so eventually she gave in. But we don't see any of this at all, its just mentioned after the fact. This happens so much in this book. Way too much tell and not shown in this book.
The whole book was pretty boring, so many things are hinted at and suggested, but looking back, nothing really happens, and you find out nothing about the secrets of the lake. Some parts were in detail, but didn't seem to add anything to the story, then the next we've jumed time and lots has happened in between.
Remi has the maturity and attitude of a sulky teenager, but I think she was supposed to be quirky. She is 19 and uses marker pens to draw on herself and dresses up in the oddest combinations of clothes and wigs. Her attitude was awful, to pretty much everyone, but the guys all seem to be drawn to her, but I can't see the attraction at all.
OK, so this is an RH, and she has four potential love interests, but we hardly see her spend any time with them.... It's all off page, so I have no idea why these guys would possibly like her. I don't feel like we got to know any of the guys much, one minute they were friends, then the next they were never friends at all, but then the next they have a shared connection - I was so confused.
As much as I want to find out who it is, I can't make myself read the other books.... I mean, this is dragged out for another two books. I'm hoping I can find out as a spoiler in another review.