5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟- More if I could
This is the story of four young people of different cultures and backgrounds African American, Mexican and Japanese. All of them are struggling with various issues relating to their differences and families and yet they are friends. I really liked this aspect of ‘Pit Stop’.
John is a very busy loner, no time for himself. He’s a Political Science student at Duke University, works a couple of jobs, mainly as vehicle repair and restoration jobs, plus, the biggest problem of all, his alcoholic father is slowly dying from liver disease and John is his main Carer. He really resents his father because when he was 5, John’s mother died, his drank himself to the edge of an early grave at 50 years old, forgetting he had a child. Many times John wishes the man would just hurry up and die.
Aaliyah, daughter of a High Ranking Politician is John’s closest friend, she refuses to conform to her families political views or to follow the path they want for her, ‘marry and stay at home Mom’. Aaliyah is a wizard at Electronic Engineering, which she is studying also at Duke. She is politically active and both of them are working on a Transgender/Pride/LGBTIQA Event in the coming weeks. She recently started seeing Gonzalez, a Mexican immigrant guy, who is studying Psychology. Gonzales had an awful childhood and took his young sister and ran away from home. Luckily for both of them, Isamu and his family took them in and gave them a family life.
Isamu, of Japanese heritage, decided to serve in the US Army, unfortunately an IED on the streets of Afghanistan, put an end to that and also cost him a leg. Back home with only his Dad, because his Mom had to go take care of family matter in Tokyo, Isamu is struggling both mentally and physically, helped by Inu, his Service Dog. His father is such a wonderful man and father, but he is planning to sell the house and go back to Japan to be with his wife. But he is worried about leaving Isamu. So Isamu makes plans to travel around the US in a Camper van. This plan is what brings all four characters closer together, John via Aaliyah to Gonzalez, Isamu via Gonzalez to John.
When John decided eventually, after much cajoling by Gonzalez, to help Isamu convert an old van to suit his needs on the road, they kept their distance whilst working together on it, especially John. Isamu is drawn to John, but John is tight as a clam. Yes he has feelings, but he also has abandonment issues, and doesn’t let anyone get close, plus he has a secret he hasn’t shared with anyone, except Aaliyah.
It took me a couple of chapters to get a clear picture of each of these four characters but I was able to engage with each of them, especially John and Isamu. All four of them, plus John and Isamu’s fathers, made this such a beautiful, but sometimes sad read for me. But having such great friends can make another family for those who need one.
There was one small niggle for me, I don’t know if it’s the authors natural form of speech or just bad grammar, but here it is, when speaking of a character and their parent, “My father and I’s” house, dinner, whatever. This happens only twice but, just saying……. It doesn’t detract from the story in any way, it’s just a me thing.
I liked the inclusion of photographs which related to each Chapter, and the adorable photo of all the characters with Inu and Isamu’s restored van on the last page, just gorgeous.
I don’t know if this is a debut novel, but on the strength of the storyline and excellent character development, in ‘Pit Stop’, I would love to read more from Ellis Mae and would highly recommend ‘Pit Stop’ as an addition to TBR bookshelves.
Disclaimer: I received a free Advance Reader Copy via BookSirens and this is my unbiased review of ‘Pit Stop’.