To start this review, I would like to thank Penguin Random House for sending me a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review!
The Making of Another Major Motion Picture Masterpiece is the debut novel of legendary Hollywood actor Tom Hanks, though it's not his first book (he published a collection of short stories, Uncommon Type, in 2017). The story, when it eventually gets going, follows film director Bill Johnson and his crew as they film the next big hit superhero movie in a fictional equivalent of the DC or Marvel Universes. The filming takes place in the small town of Lone Butte, California, and there is a minor secondary storyline about a family living in Lone Butte during and immediately after World War II. This storyline is relevant because one of the family members eventually writes the comic book that forms the basis of the movie, and of course because of the setting of Lone Butte, where the movie is eventually filmed.
There's a lot to like about this book, but it has a lot of flaws. I really liked the storyline about the family in Lone Butte, and chapter two particularly, which was very well written. I think if the whole book was written with that level of quality, this would have been a literary masterpiece. I also really liked some of the characters, mainly Bill Johnson and an actor called OKB, who was a terrible person but was hilarious for how impossible he was to work with on the movie set. I laughed out loud more than once at OKB's antics. Hanks also has a general pleasant, upbeat tone to his writing that made the book mostly enjoyable to read. I also really liked the comic books! This book features three small comic books inside of it, and these were well drawn and a fun change from a straight prose novel.
Unfortunately, as I mentioned earlier, the book has many flaws. I have some issues with how the story and even the book itself are structured. Hanks starts out by telling the story of Bill Johnson, then completely drops that story for a long time and follows the Lone Butte family, then drops the family in favour of the Bill Johnson storyline focusing on filming the movie for probably close to 200 pages before remnants of the Lone Butte family are reintroduced into the story. So the book is all over the place. The quality of the writing also varies quite a bit between chapters. As mentioned, I thought chapter two was excellent. It was vibrant, had great character development, and had that "magical" feeling that only the greatest writing can evoke. But that was followed by chapter three, which covered completely different material and was lifeless, boring, and pedestrian.
The book also takes way too long to get going, and Hanks doesn't tie the two storylines (Bill Johnson and company making movies in Hollywood and the lives of the people in the small town of Lone Butte) together until page 156, over a third of the way through the story. Until then they were just two confusingly separate narratives that felt clumsily dropped into the same book. The part of the book about making an actual movie doesn't really start until about 200 pages in, which is almost halfway through the book.
Another fundamental problem in this book is that the movie-making storyline just isn't that interesting. It's basically 300-or-so pages of random scenes being filmed, actors and actresses going in and out of makeup, directors discussing things with the crew, and random events and challenges coming up. The plot of the fictional movie seems ridiculous and like something that would never be filmed, and this doesn't exactly help in terms of immersing you in the story. I also feel like the atmosphere on the set is largely unrealistic, which is a theme you'll hear a lot about in this review. Everyone on set is always super friendly and helpful and encouraging and supportive, and even the main stars of the movie are like this. I feel like making a movie wouldn't be this positive, upbeat, and sentimental of an experience, and that egotistical millionaire movie stars would not act that friendly and normal, even toward one another.
And this might just be a "me" thing, but I absolutely detest long chapters in books, and Hanks does that here. Chapter two was 80 pages long, chapter three was 59 pages long, chapter six is nearly a whopping 150 pages long, etc. The entire book is only seven chapters, and it's over 400 pages long. These chapters are way too long without a break in the narrative, in my opinion, and I wasn't a fan of that.
Another thing that I found bizarre was that, in the first hundred pages of the book, there is a comic book that tells a short story of a U.S. Marine with a flamethrower in World War II, but then later in the book Hanks takes about two full pages of the book's prose narrative to retell part of that comic book. I mean, why do we need to read a retelling of this? We just read the comic book version of these same events, worded and visualized exactly the same, a few dozen pages ago. So that seemed like unnecessary filler to me.
A lot of details in the story are also quite bizarre, and in at least one case I happen to know this is because of Hanks himself. From what I understand, Hanks collects old typewriters, and yet in this book, and apparently in his previous short story collection Uncommon Type, there are a lot of references to typewriters. I get that he personally collects and has a fondness for them, but there were references to typewriters right from the beginning of the book, and numerous characters in this book, writing in modern times (I know it's set in the present because Hanks repeatedly mentions COVID-19), use or are otherwise involved with old typewriters. It's simply not realistic that in modern times this many people would be involved with such an old technology. In another strange detail, numerous characters in this story put Ovaltine in their coffee? That seemed a bit odd to me as well. I suspect this is another instance of something Hanks does himself that he unrealistically also has many of his characters do, but that's just my guess. In any case, it was weird.
A lot of the characters in the book are simply unrealistic as well, making Hanks seem out of touch with what ordinary people and everyday reality are like. For example, there was a ride-sharing service driver who texted his fare and asked if she wanted a coffee before picking her up. Has your Uber driver ever asked you if you want a coffee and then bought you one prior to your ride? I doubt it, because that's probably never happened to anyone, ever. To think that a ride-sharing driver who makes minimum wage would go above and beyond at their job to that degree, and at their own expense, is simply not believable. Couple this with the fact that this driver then proceeds to eventually become essentially her chauffeur and personal assistant, tending to her every whim and driving her around exclusively for months, and it becomes ludicrous.
It also seemed like every forty or fifty pages (and sometimes in two pages in a row) a character would talk about how they were "making another major motion picture masterpiece" or "making a motion picture", which became annoying after a while. Hanks is also prone to writing long comma-separated lists of inconsequential items, like the available food options on the movie set, and sometimes these lists went on for almost an entire page. I personally detest long, tedious lists like this, so the large number of them in this book was another source of annoyance for me when it came to this book. To me, such lists are just lazy writing. It's the author being like: "I've just told you about this thing that obviously will have ten or fifteen different items to it (e.g. food options, the physical objects present in a room, etc), but instead of just leaving it at that, I'll go ahead and fill up paper by listing a dozen of them for you." I truly hate it, and Hanks does it. A lot.
Finally, in the second half of the book, there is a part of the story involving an actor who is incredibly difficult (impossible, really) to work with. I felt like that went on for way too long, and that any reasonable film director in real life would have fired the actor way before even a tenth of what occurred in the book transpired, so I found that to be unrealistic and heavily overdone.
Overall, The Making of Another Major Motion Picture Masterpiece was a mixed reading experience for me. It's highly unrealistic, overly sentimental, plodding, and poorly constructed, but it also features some great writing in places, some interesting characters, and a general pleasantness that makes it mostly enjoyable to read. I don't think I'd recommend this book to anyone other than hardcore Tom Hanks fans, or those curious about his writing. I'm definitely a fan of his myself, but not a diehard one, and for me this book was just "okay". Casual readers who have no interest in Hanks or his work could pass on it, as there are certainly better books out there.