Lesbians + Zombies = a guaranteed hit. Right? Hell, you barely have to put in any effort!
At least, I think that's what happened here. First off, the story starts after the outbreak. This is fine, but you miss the perfect set-up for atmosphere and tension, plus you make more world-building and work for yourself. Well, Maser fails to gives us much of any of that. It's just lesbians and zombies, really. Plot is thin, character development is thin, it's all a little lacking. But that's just the start.
I noticed the punctuation first. Lots of missing or wrong punctuation. Okay, you skipped the editor, typical self-published shit. I hate it, but I tried to ignore it. But then came the spelling mistakes soon after. And not one or two, just repeating, page after page. Complete misuse of the English language! I know they weren't just simple mistakes, because she kept doing it, to the same words. My favorite, which I clocked twice within the first half of the book, was what should have been 'theirs' and was instead 'there's'. ..... Can we please have a moment of silence for the death of language and proper grammar?
I want to give kudos for having disability rep, I really do, especially in a zombie novel. As someone with health issues, I am quite sure (I've given it a disturbing amount of thought) I would be one of the first to die. But if you can't see the zombies?? Um, the already terrifying prospect just got a lot scarier. But Maddie was written well, in that respect, and as far as I know, medically accurate. It seems to be the one thing Maser put effort into! Why just that? No idea. But I will give credit where credit is due. Now if only that extended to the rest of the book! And I really wanted to see Maddie expanded upon more, as a character. This story would have had room to be fleshed out, and improved upon in the most bare minimum sense, if it had been at least two books.