I've never been more conflicted on how to rate a book.
On one hand - it was thrilling, fast-paced and kept me reading. I would give it 5 stars.
Ryan is in jail - undercover to monitor the arrested member of the child traffic ring - and it's terrible, cruel and keeps the reader glued to the pages.
Jake is rebuilding his life and reconnects with the people, who he now can see. Menawhile, Ryan being back from his undercover stint is long overdue.
All in all - really captivating.
But on the other hand - it had stupid and really more stupid stuff in it.
I have so many questions:
Jake has not left the house since he can see besides absolutely necessary appointments, he still is light sensitive in the beginning of the book, he has PSTD and is afraid of leaving the house, he has troubel adjusting to seeing.
Nonetheless - he somehow aquired a driving licence. The only explanation is, that he had already been driving as a blind man on the beach with Ryan's dad - therefore it was possible for him. WTF???
Ryan should monitor Chipchase in prison, for one hopefully getting information also to be alert on escape plans. They are kept in single confinement. There is only very few contact at all. His prison contact for emergencies is a now-show. He's mistreated by guards, doesn't get his medication, is warned by others that after latest 6 weeks the guards will demand 6ual acts from him...and still he denies the two times his uncle comes in disguise and asks if he should organize his leave. Then he is forced, retaliates, is severly beaten , is sent to the "coolers" (dark single confinement) has the chance twice to end this (btw. his wedding is the next weekend and he has two little boys at home beside his partner, who, when he went into prison, wasn't able to leave the house) and still stays in the coolers. Despite the fact that in the coolers he is unable to monitor Chipchase - his purpose for being in prison. This makes no sense at all and is probably the most annoying decision a character in a book ever has made. It annoyed the h*** our of me.
Then Marty, who is a genius, grew up in the system and had been Jake's seeing aid. He suddenly has the knowledge to do farm repairs etc. in a place where he can't google how to do handy work.
There are other minor moments where reality got streched a bit but - yes - I'm highly conflicted about this book.
If it hadn't been so well written and thrilling, I would have DNFed it with 1 star. But this author has potential. But please, next time, hire a proof reader who is actually honest and critical for plausability.