What do you think?
Rate this book
My Secret Portal to A Fantasy World #3
My Secret Portal to a Fantasy World Book 3
Jack's return brings a new Earth is on the brink of joining the Omniverse Nexus, and it's happening faster than he anticipated. Thanks to Jack's relentless leveling and monster-slaying, the Dungeons for humans of Earth have arrived way ahead of schedule, and now he must delve into their depths with his two lovers, Shana and Bri, and his formidable companion, Onyx the Shadow Leopard.
Their goal is daunting yet reach level 25, defeat the final Boss by year's end, and claim a mysterious prize promised by the enigmatic Custodian of the Guardians of the Portal. But what exactly is this prize, and why is it something that Jack feels would be a game changer for him and his fellow humans? As Jack and his team plunge into the unknown, they'll face unimaginable challenges, uncover hidden secrets, and test the limits of their abilities in a quest that could change everything.
Join Jack and his companions on an epic journey through the treacherous realms of the new Dungeons, where danger lurks at every turn and victory comes at a steep price.
Their goal is daunting yet reach level 25, defeat the final Boss by year's end, and claim a mysterious prize promised by the enigmatic Custodian of the Guardians of the Portal. But what exactly is this prize, and why is it something that Jack feels would be a game changer for him and his fellow humans? As Jack and his team plunge into the unknown, they'll face unimaginable challenges, uncover hidden secrets, and test the limits of their abilities in a quest that could change everything.
Join Jack and his companions on an epic journey through the treacherous realms of the new Dungeons, where danger lurks at every turn and victory comes at a steep price.
388 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 27, 2024
175 people are currently reading
15 people want to read
Ratings & Reviews
Friends & Following
Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!
Community Reviews
Displaying 1 - 16 of 16 reviews
June 8, 2024
Contradicting Every Plot In Book 1 & 2
I’m not going to point out specifics, but many main plot points and rules of this system are completely reversed in this book. The author tossed plot consistency out the window on multiple occasions. Not only that, from one paragraph to the next things reverse. Unsummon companions and then 1 paragraph afterwards they are instead sitting outside an inn. Numerous times levels are supposedly gained, but if you go back 2 chapters the character is the same level, or half a book previously a stat is improved to a point and then it’s done all over again to the same value later. This has been one of the weakest, most poorly defined and implemented system universes I have ever read. I’m done with this series and probably this author. I couldn’t finish the book and gave up at 92%. To much inconsistency wrapped in a weak string of plots with poorly developed characters and events.
I’m not going to point out specifics, but many main plot points and rules of this system are completely reversed in this book. The author tossed plot consistency out the window on multiple occasions. Not only that, from one paragraph to the next things reverse. Unsummon companions and then 1 paragraph afterwards they are instead sitting outside an inn. Numerous times levels are supposedly gained, but if you go back 2 chapters the character is the same level, or half a book previously a stat is improved to a point and then it’s done all over again to the same value later. This has been one of the weakest, most poorly defined and implemented system universes I have ever read. I’m done with this series and probably this author. I couldn’t finish the book and gave up at 92%. To much inconsistency wrapped in a weak string of plots with poorly developed characters and events.
June 1, 2024
Great story
The story is great. The editing needs a little more attention to detail. A few typos, such as the word gone, instead of done and in one chapter in a paragraph it says he unsummoned his animal companions because he didn't want to leave them outside all night and the very next paragraph it says he left them outside.
This is something that used to be quite common in this authors early books but it's the first time in the last few I've noticed it again. Hopefully ot won't become a habit in the series.
The story is great. The editing needs a little more attention to detail. A few typos, such as the word gone, instead of done and in one chapter in a paragraph it says he unsummoned his animal companions because he didn't want to leave them outside all night and the very next paragraph it says he left them outside.
This is something that used to be quite common in this authors early books but it's the first time in the last few I've noticed it again. Hopefully ot won't become a habit in the series.
June 12, 2024
A little better than the last one
This book still had some glaring inconsistencies, but there was a lot less than the last book. The heavy handed nature of science not working in the future is bothersome, and doesn't really make much sense, I wish the author would drop that thread, or at least tone it down. As someone else mentioned, the last bit of the story felt rushed and out of left field, and was not described very well, i am still confused as to why it happened at all.
This book still had some glaring inconsistencies, but there was a lot less than the last book. The heavy handed nature of science not working in the future is bothersome, and doesn't really make much sense, I wish the author would drop that thread, or at least tone it down. As someone else mentioned, the last bit of the story felt rushed and out of left field, and was not described very well, i am still confused as to why it happened at all.
May 30, 2024
Not very good! Lazy writing and weak plot.
Disappointment on entire book. Lots of needless filler, poor plot lines with holes everywhere. Weak male character who comes off as dumb not heroic, saved by his smart female supporting cast. No thrills or surprises. Bad pacing makes it hard to even want to finish the book. Just bad writing.
Disappointment on entire book. Lots of needless filler, poor plot lines with holes everywhere. Weak male character who comes off as dumb not heroic, saved by his smart female supporting cast. No thrills or surprises. Bad pacing makes it hard to even want to finish the book. Just bad writing.
June 3, 2024
Great Read
I thoroughly enjoyed it. I sincerely hope that the rest of you out there enjoy it as much as I did. TRS-80 or trash 80 was the First computer I wrote a program for. It was in basic but worked. Didn't even have a floppy but a cassette drive. Would love to see more of secret portal.
I thoroughly enjoyed it. I sincerely hope that the rest of you out there enjoy it as much as I did. TRS-80 or trash 80 was the First computer I wrote a program for. It was in basic but worked. Didn't even have a floppy but a cassette drive. Would love to see more of secret portal.
July 2, 2024
Fun read
I liked the action, characters and story in this book. The bad guys get their due justice while the heroes keep leveling and progressing to new areas. The best teaser in this book is that earth gets systemized. So the heroes must decide whether to help humanity or continue in the foriegn World.
I liked the action, characters and story in this book. The bad guys get their due justice while the heroes keep leveling and progressing to new areas. The best teaser in this book is that earth gets systemized. So the heroes must decide whether to help humanity or continue in the foriegn World.
Read
March 23, 2025A fun dungeon and dragon-type adventure book with an enjoyable main character, the third book in series. Detrimental in that the series is a harem-type dive series. Earth is populated with dungeons causing much chaos. Lots of time was spent describing food. Read Kindle book using Alexa audio asset. Borrowed with Kindle Unlimited.
May 28, 2024
Great series
The best praise I can give is, I hope you continue this series. I have loved it. The story has a fresh feel to, for the genre that was starting to get old for me. So thank you for that
The best praise I can give is, I hope you continue this series. I have loved it. The story has a fresh feel to, for the genre that was starting to get old for me. So thank you for that
June 10, 2024
I love this series!!!
Actually I have loved every series this author has published!!! The characters and their interactions between each other and the world they live in is always so well described! You feel as if you are there for the time your reading!!
Actually I have loved every series this author has published!!! The characters and their interactions between each other and the world they live in is always so well described! You feel as if you are there for the time your reading!!
November 23, 2024
Good ending of this story
Enjoyed the action. The fact of loving sex without the graphic details was refreshing. The references to dnd were appropriate. Basically I enjoyed the set of three books and am starting the series advertised at the end of these books. Good read.
Enjoyed the action. The fact of loving sex without the graphic details was refreshing. The references to dnd were appropriate. Basically I enjoyed the set of three books and am starting the series advertised at the end of these books. Good read.
May 28, 2024
Great book
Great book I can't wait to read the next book in the series I would recommend this author to anyone
Great book I can't wait to read the next book in the series I would recommend this author to anyone
June 1, 2024
Half there, half not
The idea behind the book is great, first 2 books where amazing but the more the author rites, the bigger the plot holes
The idea behind the book is great, first 2 books where amazing but the more the author rites, the bigger the plot holes
June 7, 2024
Great book
Great book and I can't wait to see what you write about next time. This is what I love about this author.
Great book and I can't wait to see what you write about next time. This is what I love about this author.
June 17, 2024
Very good writing
Levesque has true talent. The characters are solid and fun. The plot unfolds with the occasional very surprising twists. I am greatly enjoying this series.
Levesque has true talent. The characters are solid and fun. The plot unfolds with the occasional very surprising twists. I am greatly enjoying this series.
July 8, 2024
Great read
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who likes LitRPG and progression type of books with lots of action and apocalypse settings w
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who likes LitRPG and progression type of books with lots of action and apocalypse settings w
November 16, 2024
What would you do if earth joined the system, would you join
Displaying 1 - 16 of 16 reviews