Bloody Mary

by Drac Von Stoller

Halloween finally arrived and it was Mary's sixteenth birthday. Mary's parent's finally decided she was old enough to have a sleep over at their house. But she was only allowed to have two of her best friends spend the night after the party. Mary called Kathy and Kim to see if they would stay and have a sleep over at her house. Kathy and Kim both agreed and said that they would have a great time together being that they were all best of friends. Mary hung up the phone and said "This is the best day of my life. I'm going to turn sixteen today and I finally get to date boys." Mary's little sleep over and conjuring up an old Urban Legend called "Bloody Mary" would prove fatal for them all.

Genres: Horror, Short Stories, Supernatural, Fiction

3 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 1, 2012

Reviews

[Charles van Buren · Rating 1 out of 5]

Free and worth every penny

I had previously read some of Drac Von Stoller's stories but was not impressed. However this story is free and, according to the description, all of Von Stroller's stories have been newly edited.

Sorry Mr. or Ms Von Stroller, I am still unimpressed. Reviewer RRM said that this was like reading an article from Wikipedia. I concur.

[Christy · Rating 3 out of 5]

I have heard this legend countless times in various scenarios, each one completely different. I really liked this one. The more I read of Drac Von Stroller's stories, the more I like them.

This story is perfect for campouts, sleepovers, etc.

[Zain · Rating 2 out of 5]

Bloody Mary!

I’m too chicken to say it three times!

Well, as you can probably guess, teenagers are having a sleepover, on Halloween, no less, and they decide to do the Bloody Mary thing.

[Clarissa · Rating 1 out of 5]

It's just a normal scenario about Bloody Mary. It's not even scary at all.

[Paola · Rating 5 out of 5]

It scared the living carp out of me

I like the description of what happened to the girls and I'm never doing bloody Mary
God I hope I rest in peace

[Mark Rybka-Wachhaus · Rating 3 out of 5]

This has got to be one of the best short stories by Drac Von Stoller that I have read. Yes, I only gave it three stars. That should be enough to understand. If not, go ahead and read a few more. They're free. I do love urban legends, but I would expect more from a creative author than just putting names to the characters and repeating the same story we've heard before. In Bloody Mary, Von Stoller did use some creative license, though I can't say the same for some of the other urban legends he has "written".

[ashit · Rating 1 out of 5]

Typical.

Do not waste your time on this book its a typical story even a kid could have made it up in his mind. It just says if u try bloody Mary you die.
I would strongly not recommend this book to anyone

[ruby2shoes · Rating 3 out of 5]

The Urban Lives

Bloody Mary is a retelling of the urban legend with a slight twist.

While it was entertaining and brought up past memories of campfires and story telling it is just the tale of Bloody Mary in this book.

[Christy]

My review can be found at Amazon. I will copy and paste it here later Basically it's warning to not do something you shouldn't or meddle in something you know nothing about.

[Kayde · Rating 2 out of 5]

Why this like a 12 year olds edgy phase on wattpad

[marrion knight · Rating 5 out of 5]

Do not play this game

If you girls or boys that try to play this game just rember before you play the game tell your parents you love them a lot and plus if you play this game. you are the meanest kid in the world because your going to try and talk to the dead please DO NOT PLAY THIS GAME.

[Scott Roberts · Rating 5 out of 5]

Excellent classic horror urban legend. I give this book 5 stars.