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Zakolor
Zakolor thinks he’s the son of the village blacksmith, but when his nightmares start coming to life, he learns the harrowing truth—he is actually the heir to one of the most powerful magical bloodlines in Valecium—one that defeated the gods themselves. With his power now unleashed, two sides locked in a century-long war vie to control him.
When the Consortium accidentally kidnaps his best friend Kalbick, Zakolor is forced to join their sworn enemy—the League of Kingdoms—as his only hope of saving him.
But something dark is buried in his magic, and if Zakolor wants to save his abducted friend, he must untangle the mystery of his power before it consumes him.
When the Consortium accidentally kidnaps his best friend Kalbick, Zakolor is forced to join their sworn enemy—the League of Kingdoms—as his only hope of saving him.
But something dark is buried in his magic, and if Zakolor wants to save his abducted friend, he must untangle the mystery of his power before it consumes him.
- GenresFantasyYoung Adult
280 pages, Paperback
Published June 1, 2024
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J.R. Douglas
2 books26 followersJ. R. Douglas loves all things fantasy. Combine said love with two psychology degrees and a lifelong devotion to the written word, and the output is an indie author. When he isn't typing the adventures of Zakolor & friends, he works in adult education, stays healthy-ish with yoga, and lives in upstate New York with his husband and their dog Samson.
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April 26, 2024
thank you Netgalley & Firepost Press for providing an e-arc in exchange for an honest review ⸜(｡˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝♡
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okayy, this one definitely took me a while to get fully immersed and it's not because the story was lacking but more so the way it's written is different from what i'm used to! which isn't a bad thing but rather i actually really enjoyed it! (if you've ever read litrpg's - it has a similar writing prose/style - if that's not your cup of tea, you may not enjoy this one as much. i just recently got into the genre so i rlly enjoyed this one).
I loved Zakolor! his character was well developed and well written and I really enjoyed getting his internal monologues. He was also such a relatable character! he's literally living my dreams LOL!
to not get to spoilery- but this story goes by quick!! J. R. Douglas does not play around, only like 12-15 pages in and we get quite a massive turn of events and that's honestly what kept me hooked. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of the series (੭˃ᴗ˂)੭
also the names in this book? absolutely stunning. honestly takes me back to older fantasy books with those rlly unique names (like Clairise??? beautiful!! wouldn't know how to pronounce tho LOL)
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okayy, this one definitely took me a while to get fully immersed and it's not because the story was lacking but more so the way it's written is different from what i'm used to! which isn't a bad thing but rather i actually really enjoyed it! (if you've ever read litrpg's - it has a similar writing prose/style - if that's not your cup of tea, you may not enjoy this one as much. i just recently got into the genre so i rlly enjoyed this one).
I loved Zakolor! his character was well developed and well written and I really enjoyed getting his internal monologues. He was also such a relatable character! he's literally living my dreams LOL!
to not get to spoilery- but this story goes by quick!! J. R. Douglas does not play around, only like 12-15 pages in and we get quite a massive turn of events and that's honestly what kept me hooked. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of the series (੭˃ᴗ˂)੭
also the names in this book? absolutely stunning. honestly takes me back to older fantasy books with those rlly unique names (like Clairise??? beautiful!! wouldn't know how to pronounce tho LOL)
January 2, 2026
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Zakalor by J.R. Douglas is a thrilling, fast-paced fantasy that hooked me from the first page. Zakolor thinks he’s just the blacksmith’s son — until his nightmares start bleeding into reality and he discovers he’s heir to a powerful magical bloodline. What follows is a high-stakes journey through warring kingdoms, ancient gods, and a magic that might destroy him from the inside out.
I loved the emotional depth, the urgency of the plot, and the way the story balanced action with heart. The friendship between Zakolor and Kadick was especially compelling, and the twist involving the Consortium and the League of Kingdoms kept me turning pages late into the night.
I read this ahead of our September 2026 meeting of the Enchanted Books Society at SpellBound Books in Owego — and I’m so glad I did. I’ll happily re-read it later this year. The author is a friend from our monthly writing group, and I believe there are still copies available at SpellBound if you want to grab one and join us!
Zakalor by J.R. Douglas is a thrilling, fast-paced fantasy that hooked me from the first page. Zakolor thinks he’s just the blacksmith’s son — until his nightmares start bleeding into reality and he discovers he’s heir to a powerful magical bloodline. What follows is a high-stakes journey through warring kingdoms, ancient gods, and a magic that might destroy him from the inside out.
I loved the emotional depth, the urgency of the plot, and the way the story balanced action with heart. The friendship between Zakolor and Kadick was especially compelling, and the twist involving the Consortium and the League of Kingdoms kept me turning pages late into the night.
I read this ahead of our September 2026 meeting of the Enchanted Books Society at SpellBound Books in Owego — and I’m so glad I did. I’ll happily re-read it later this year. The author is a friend from our monthly writing group, and I believe there are still copies available at SpellBound if you want to grab one and join us!
August 28, 2024
I will say that this book did grab my imagination with the action between the characters and the magic that happens a lot. The characters are intriguing. Sorwin reads as a strong male god. Thank you to the writer for that. Zak, I have questions about. I know that he’s using this time to grow, but I don’t know at the end I’m not sure if his growing process hindered the closure of the book at the end. I couldn’t connect with the story or the characters.
September 25, 2023
Zakolor: Nacusti Chronicles Volume I by J.R. Douglas is an exciting and heartwarming fantasy adventure that will keep YA+ readers on the edge of their seats. The story follows Zakolor, a young man who discovers he has latent magical powers after his best friend Kal is accidentally kidnapped in Zak's place. Zak must journey across a magical world to rescue his friend and save the world from an evil sorcerer.
Douglas does a masterful job of creating a rich and immersive world, full of unique magic systems, exotic creatures, and unforgettable characters. Zakolor is a relatable and likable protagonist, and his journey is one that readers will root for from beginning to end. The supporting cast is also well-developed and engaging, and their relationships with Zakolor add depth and complexity to the story.
The plot of Zakolor is fast-paced and exciting, with plenty of twists and turns to keep readers guessing. Douglas also balances the action and adventure with moments of humor and heart, making for a well-rounded and satisfying read.
Overall, Zakolor: Nacusti Chronicles Volume I is a fantastic debut novel from J.R. Douglas. It is a must-read for fans of fantasy adventure, and I highly recommend it to readers of all ages.
Here are some specific things that I enjoyed about the book:
--The world-building (and naming) is so creative! Douglas creates a truly unique and believable world, with its own history, culture, and magic system. Examples: Summerfall and Autumnrise, Tegoperignis (a spell), “This law states that nothing can move between planes without an equal entity left behind to fill the void created by the displacement.” (a law), pemberry juice (a drink), Dormio (a spell).
--The characters are super well-developed and relatable (and again, the naming was inventive). I found myself really caring about Zakolor and his friends, and I wanted to see them succeed. Naming examples: Archmagus Tansil Windover, Sorwin, Karazul, Euphemius, Shadoweres (creature).
--The plot is fast-paced, positive (no bad language or excessive grossness in this book), and exciting. There are plenty of twists and turns to keep readers guessing.
--The writing is clear and engaging. Douglas has a knack for creating vivid descriptions and bringing his characters to life.
--The final line in the novel made me gasp so loudly, I woke my husband up.
Some examples of the descriptive writing:
"After a moment, Renna snapped her fingers and his clothes vibrated with magic. Kalbick looked down and gasped as the garments reworked their stitching, changing from the old linen into the finest silk. As the material moved it slowly faded from stained brown and white into a crimson shirt with black breeches and jacket that cut-off right below his shoulder blades. His new clothing matched Renna’s blood-red dress and black robe that was so thin it could have been made from a spider web."
"He parried the blade several times before shifting into the astral plane and disappearing in a wisp of smoke, dodging a diving Shadowere that would have bitten him in half. Sorwin reappeared several yards behind his attackers and leveled his sword towards them. A bolt of lightning came out of the blade and ripped through the air into the mercenary’s back, careening him into the Shadowere."
"With the third arrow he yelled “Relentesco!” The arrow slowed nearly to a halt in midair, giving Zak time to flip its direction and send it back the way it came with his telekinesis. It zipped back and straight into the archer’s right shoulder, sending him to the ground."
"The air shimmered and moved in front of him. What was that? A sound like a thunderclap erupted across the clearing as the air opened, almost like a door, except it was violent, ripping itself into existence. It was blue and twisted, like nothing Zak had ever seen before."
I am eagerly awaiting the release of Zakolor: Nacusti Chronicles Volume II. I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys fantasy adventure stories.
Douglas does a masterful job of creating a rich and immersive world, full of unique magic systems, exotic creatures, and unforgettable characters. Zakolor is a relatable and likable protagonist, and his journey is one that readers will root for from beginning to end. The supporting cast is also well-developed and engaging, and their relationships with Zakolor add depth and complexity to the story.
The plot of Zakolor is fast-paced and exciting, with plenty of twists and turns to keep readers guessing. Douglas also balances the action and adventure with moments of humor and heart, making for a well-rounded and satisfying read.
Overall, Zakolor: Nacusti Chronicles Volume I is a fantastic debut novel from J.R. Douglas. It is a must-read for fans of fantasy adventure, and I highly recommend it to readers of all ages.
Here are some specific things that I enjoyed about the book:
--The world-building (and naming) is so creative! Douglas creates a truly unique and believable world, with its own history, culture, and magic system. Examples: Summerfall and Autumnrise, Tegoperignis (a spell), “This law states that nothing can move between planes without an equal entity left behind to fill the void created by the displacement.” (a law), pemberry juice (a drink), Dormio (a spell).
--The characters are super well-developed and relatable (and again, the naming was inventive). I found myself really caring about Zakolor and his friends, and I wanted to see them succeed. Naming examples: Archmagus Tansil Windover, Sorwin, Karazul, Euphemius, Shadoweres (creature).
--The plot is fast-paced, positive (no bad language or excessive grossness in this book), and exciting. There are plenty of twists and turns to keep readers guessing.
--The writing is clear and engaging. Douglas has a knack for creating vivid descriptions and bringing his characters to life.
--The final line in the novel made me gasp so loudly, I woke my husband up.
Some examples of the descriptive writing:
"After a moment, Renna snapped her fingers and his clothes vibrated with magic. Kalbick looked down and gasped as the garments reworked their stitching, changing from the old linen into the finest silk. As the material moved it slowly faded from stained brown and white into a crimson shirt with black breeches and jacket that cut-off right below his shoulder blades. His new clothing matched Renna’s blood-red dress and black robe that was so thin it could have been made from a spider web."
"He parried the blade several times before shifting into the astral plane and disappearing in a wisp of smoke, dodging a diving Shadowere that would have bitten him in half. Sorwin reappeared several yards behind his attackers and leveled his sword towards them. A bolt of lightning came out of the blade and ripped through the air into the mercenary’s back, careening him into the Shadowere."
"With the third arrow he yelled “Relentesco!” The arrow slowed nearly to a halt in midair, giving Zak time to flip its direction and send it back the way it came with his telekinesis. It zipped back and straight into the archer’s right shoulder, sending him to the ground."
"The air shimmered and moved in front of him. What was that? A sound like a thunderclap erupted across the clearing as the air opened, almost like a door, except it was violent, ripping itself into existence. It was blue and twisted, like nothing Zak had ever seen before."
I am eagerly awaiting the release of Zakolor: Nacusti Chronicles Volume II. I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys fantasy adventure stories.
May 21, 2023
Amazing
You had me hooked at the beginning. I enjoyed every minute of the story and couldn't wait to see what would happen next. The characters were well developed and made me feel like I knew them. I am ready for the next adventure with Zak and friends.
You had me hooked at the beginning. I enjoyed every minute of the story and couldn't wait to see what would happen next. The characters were well developed and made me feel like I knew them. I am ready for the next adventure with Zak and friends.
May 12, 2024
Thank you to NetGalley for the free ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I am a big fan of 'show dont tell' in stories. It can really immerse a reader in a story but unfortunately Zakalor tells a lot without much showing.
The bones if the story have the potential for a great book, but a lot of small things threw me off of this book. Some descriptions like "dangerous custody" when Zak's best friend was just abducted by a former general turned dark side just seemed odd, and there were several weird phrases and illogical (to me) ones. After finding out he was adopted as a baby he started saying that his adoptive parents weren't his "natural parents", and that just rubbed me the wrong way, because then I read them as being unnatural. I can't possibly know what it's like, but later on saying he's an orphan makes him seem ungrateful for the life his parents, in all but blood, provided for him. Also, three different precious stones throughout the story are described with "an impossible array/variation of colours", and that is just annoying to my logical mind because theres a limited amount of colours on the colour spectrum. I have more examples, of small things that prevented me from truly getting into the story. I did have a few laughs at some of the descriptions, because constipation came to mind when Zak's teacher had a "severe but quizzical" expression on his face.
The magic system was interesting, but could have been more fleshed out, since I got confused, when I thought i had figured out the system, but then a situation would arise and I was left feeling I had misunderstood or overlooked something.
I liked the characters but they could have used some of that "show dont tell". It made them feel shallow that we got to know them through Zak's observations and conversations. Seeing their personalities through actions would've made them more well-rounded. At least we got some of that with the changing character POVs.
The book includes a map, which always a plus in my metaphorical book.
An editor with a thesaurus would have done wonders for this book and could have made it great.
I am a big fan of 'show dont tell' in stories. It can really immerse a reader in a story but unfortunately Zakalor tells a lot without much showing.
The bones if the story have the potential for a great book, but a lot of small things threw me off of this book. Some descriptions like "dangerous custody" when Zak's best friend was just abducted by a former general turned dark side just seemed odd, and there were several weird phrases and illogical (to me) ones. After finding out he was adopted as a baby he started saying that his adoptive parents weren't his "natural parents", and that just rubbed me the wrong way, because then I read them as being unnatural. I can't possibly know what it's like, but later on saying he's an orphan makes him seem ungrateful for the life his parents, in all but blood, provided for him. Also, three different precious stones throughout the story are described with "an impossible array/variation of colours", and that is just annoying to my logical mind because theres a limited amount of colours on the colour spectrum. I have more examples, of small things that prevented me from truly getting into the story. I did have a few laughs at some of the descriptions, because constipation came to mind when Zak's teacher had a "severe but quizzical" expression on his face.
The magic system was interesting, but could have been more fleshed out, since I got confused, when I thought i had figured out the system, but then a situation would arise and I was left feeling I had misunderstood or overlooked something.
I liked the characters but they could have used some of that "show dont tell". It made them feel shallow that we got to know them through Zak's observations and conversations. Seeing their personalities through actions would've made them more well-rounded. At least we got some of that with the changing character POVs.
The book includes a map, which always a plus in my metaphorical book.
An editor with a thesaurus would have done wonders for this book and could have made it great.
May 2, 2024
Hold onto your hats, folks, because J.R. Douglas has concocted a literary potion that's part magic, part heart, and all-around delightful! From the moment I cracked open "Zakolor: Nacusti Chronicles Volume I," I was smitten like a kid in a candy store.
Picture this: Zakolor, our plucky hero, discovers his inner Gandalf when his buddy Kal gets snatched instead of him. Cue a fantastical romp through a world teeming with spells, sorcerers, and creatures with names like they jumped straight out of a whimsy dictionary.
Douglas is a sorcerer of storytelling, weaving a tapestry of rich world-building that's so vibrant, you'll swear you can smell the pemberry juice. And oh, the characters! From the wise Archmagus Tansil Windover to the mischievous Shadoweres, each name rings like a note in a symphony of whimsy.
As Zakolor embarks on his quest to save his friend and maybe the world while he's at it, the plot gallops along like a runaway unicorn, filled with more twists and turns than a roller coaster made of spaghetti.
But fear not, dear reader, for amidst the action and adventure, Douglas sprinkles humor and heart like confetti. No foul language or gross-out moments here—just good, clean, fantastical fun!
And let's talk about Douglas's writing prowess! His descriptions are so vivid, you'll feel like you've stepped into the pages and joined Zakolor on his merry escapade. And that final line? Let's just say it hit me like a magical bolt and had me gasping loud enough to wake the neighborhood!
In conclusion, "Zakolor: Nacusti Chronicles Volume I" is a spellbinding debut that's sure to charm readers of all ages. So, if you're in need of an enchanting escape into a world where the fantastical meets the heartwarming, grab a copy and prepare for a journey you won't soon forget!
Picture this: Zakolor, our plucky hero, discovers his inner Gandalf when his buddy Kal gets snatched instead of him. Cue a fantastical romp through a world teeming with spells, sorcerers, and creatures with names like they jumped straight out of a whimsy dictionary.
Douglas is a sorcerer of storytelling, weaving a tapestry of rich world-building that's so vibrant, you'll swear you can smell the pemberry juice. And oh, the characters! From the wise Archmagus Tansil Windover to the mischievous Shadoweres, each name rings like a note in a symphony of whimsy.
As Zakolor embarks on his quest to save his friend and maybe the world while he's at it, the plot gallops along like a runaway unicorn, filled with more twists and turns than a roller coaster made of spaghetti.
But fear not, dear reader, for amidst the action and adventure, Douglas sprinkles humor and heart like confetti. No foul language or gross-out moments here—just good, clean, fantastical fun!
And let's talk about Douglas's writing prowess! His descriptions are so vivid, you'll feel like you've stepped into the pages and joined Zakolor on his merry escapade. And that final line? Let's just say it hit me like a magical bolt and had me gasping loud enough to wake the neighborhood!
In conclusion, "Zakolor: Nacusti Chronicles Volume I" is a spellbinding debut that's sure to charm readers of all ages. So, if you're in need of an enchanting escape into a world where the fantastical meets the heartwarming, grab a copy and prepare for a journey you won't soon forget!
November 1, 2024
Long ago, a war took place against the Gods. The gods were cruel and controlling and decided the fate of the world on a whim. The Gods had created the guardians, but quickly, their creation turned against them after realizing how cruel the Gods truly were. Offering their aid after the elf and man created an alliance to oppose the Gods. Through this alliance, the guardians, elves, and men created the Nacusti.
Zakolor a 17-year-old boy is as ordinary as they come. He is unathletic, has no magic to claim, and is destined to take over his father's smithy. Regardless of the areas he lacks every year he continues to go to the scout's "test" in the hope that he will be noticed and asked to join the war. This year a noble has taken the place of the usual scout. The noble is searching for someone lost long ago whose destiny is to fight back the darkness that is starting to take over and kill all life in its wake. He is looking for the last living Nacusti and he is not the only one. After a chaotic night, Zakolor is thrown into a world he could have only dreamed of. The only problem? Everyone wants him and the enemy will stop at nothing to have him.
J.R. Douglas did a fantastic job creating a beautiful, detailed world riddled with mystery and powerful magic. Zakolor may be young, but he has decided to take on a huge responsibility. He wants to become powerful and lead an adventurous life. His ancestors may have hidden from the war, but he chose to be different wanting to be on the front line, confronting evil and the darkness killing magic in its path.
I enjoyed reading Zakolor and diving into the world of magic, mystery, power, and secrets. I am excited to continue the story in J.R. Douglas's second book The Black Caladrius.
Zakolor a 17-year-old boy is as ordinary as they come. He is unathletic, has no magic to claim, and is destined to take over his father's smithy. Regardless of the areas he lacks every year he continues to go to the scout's "test" in the hope that he will be noticed and asked to join the war. This year a noble has taken the place of the usual scout. The noble is searching for someone lost long ago whose destiny is to fight back the darkness that is starting to take over and kill all life in its wake. He is looking for the last living Nacusti and he is not the only one. After a chaotic night, Zakolor is thrown into a world he could have only dreamed of. The only problem? Everyone wants him and the enemy will stop at nothing to have him.
J.R. Douglas did a fantastic job creating a beautiful, detailed world riddled with mystery and powerful magic. Zakolor may be young, but he has decided to take on a huge responsibility. He wants to become powerful and lead an adventurous life. His ancestors may have hidden from the war, but he chose to be different wanting to be on the front line, confronting evil and the darkness killing magic in its path.
I enjoyed reading Zakolor and diving into the world of magic, mystery, power, and secrets. I am excited to continue the story in J.R. Douglas's second book The Black Caladrius.
January 3, 2026
I received this as an ARC and I’m so glad I took the leap into this world.
Short version: Definitely give this one a go! It’s an absorbing story with excellent character development and world building. I’ll be looking for the sequel.
Protagonist Zakolor is led to believe he’s the son of a blacksmith, with no notable talents. He learns he’s something much more, wanted by powerful people and his world changes rapidly. His closest friend is abducted and Zak goes after him.
The writer put a lot into the world building and it was fantastic. The descriptions were vivid and it came together so easily. The impact of magic on the world was compelling and added a sense of dread and urgency. The pacing was mostly excellent.
The characters were tremendously well done. They all felt properly developed, layered, quite human and principled.
Zak’s friendship with Kalbick didn’t have a lot of time to be established before the abduction, but the writer has done enough to make you care about Kal. It’s not just “Zak going after his friend because he’s a friend”. Kal felt like someone I’d try to save myself.
My highlight of this story would possibly be a spoiler to potential readers so I’ll just say: the action sequences were brilliantly well done, completely immersive.
I promised an honest review so I will list a not so great point: the initial world building is a really clever setting, but there was a lot of info dropped very quickly and it was a little overwhelming. A second read of the opening pages fixed that.
Short version: Definitely give this one a go! It’s an absorbing story with excellent character development and world building. I’ll be looking for the sequel.
Protagonist Zakolor is led to believe he’s the son of a blacksmith, with no notable talents. He learns he’s something much more, wanted by powerful people and his world changes rapidly. His closest friend is abducted and Zak goes after him.
The writer put a lot into the world building and it was fantastic. The descriptions were vivid and it came together so easily. The impact of magic on the world was compelling and added a sense of dread and urgency. The pacing was mostly excellent.
The characters were tremendously well done. They all felt properly developed, layered, quite human and principled.
Zak’s friendship with Kalbick didn’t have a lot of time to be established before the abduction, but the writer has done enough to make you care about Kal. It’s not just “Zak going after his friend because he’s a friend”. Kal felt like someone I’d try to save myself.
My highlight of this story would possibly be a spoiler to potential readers so I’ll just say: the action sequences were brilliantly well done, completely immersive.
I promised an honest review so I will list a not so great point: the initial world building is a really clever setting, but there was a lot of info dropped very quickly and it was a little overwhelming. A second read of the opening pages fixed that.
June 27, 2024
I love it! I am a fan of J. R. R. Tolkien, so when I come across a book rich in descriptions and with a meticulously crafted world, I'm always ready to dive in. Douglas essentially does this: he weaves an immersive narrative around a few main characters and crafts a plot filled with action and adventure that can't be underestimated. He tells the story in the third person, creating a narrative that captivates the reader with sensitive characters, each with easily distinguishable traits. At the same time, he ensures there are always twists and surprising events to keep the reader's attention high.
One of the aspects I loved most about this novel is the writing style, which is so clear and crisp, with vivid descriptions of places, spells, and characters. Everything is summarized within specific behaviors, occupies a portion of the plot, and is fundamental to making the entire plot structure perfectly understandable.
I find that the amount of suspense, the worldbuilding that has been imagined and brought to life on paper, the ability to tell the story dynamically and engagingly, and the active, dynamic, and well-rounded characters make this first book of the saga a must-read. Thank you to Netgalley for the ARC.
One of the aspects I loved most about this novel is the writing style, which is so clear and crisp, with vivid descriptions of places, spells, and characters. Everything is summarized within specific behaviors, occupies a portion of the plot, and is fundamental to making the entire plot structure perfectly understandable.
I find that the amount of suspense, the worldbuilding that has been imagined and brought to life on paper, the ability to tell the story dynamically and engagingly, and the active, dynamic, and well-rounded characters make this first book of the saga a must-read. Thank you to Netgalley for the ARC.
February 6, 2025
Perfect for lovers of the Rangers Apprentice series, Dungeons and Dragons and Eragon, this book is a fascinating read full of magic, sinister enemies and found family.
A well written story about a powerful 17-18 year old who finds out his family have been keeping a big secret from him... A secret that could change the world as he knows it.
Meet Zakolor, his family, friends and his mentors as he finds his place in a world at war, where magic is commonplace but strong magic is a rarity. Follow his journey across a dying magical world to save those closest to him from the threat hiding in the shadows.
I can't wait for the second installment in this series. I loved the Rangers Apprentice series when I first read them a while ago and I was thrilled to read this book which had some similar themes. My only criticism is I found it a little confusing - there are a large number of named characters, almost all who have multi-syllable unique names and also go by nicknames.
I found it a little hard to keep track of who was who, particularly in the beginning where 13 characters are named in the first chapter along with 10 places and titles. Even so, as the book develops and more characters are introduced, the author does a fantastic job of reminding the reader who is who.
Tropes, themes and key words:
The chosen one
Magic
Mages
Apprentices
Elves
Druids/nature magic
Elemental magic
Gods
Demi-gods
Hidden powers
Telekinesis
Mind control
Assassins
Portals
Gem magic
Fae
Wyvern
A well written story about a powerful 17-18 year old who finds out his family have been keeping a big secret from him... A secret that could change the world as he knows it.
Meet Zakolor, his family, friends and his mentors as he finds his place in a world at war, where magic is commonplace but strong magic is a rarity. Follow his journey across a dying magical world to save those closest to him from the threat hiding in the shadows.
I can't wait for the second installment in this series. I loved the Rangers Apprentice series when I first read them a while ago and I was thrilled to read this book which had some similar themes. My only criticism is I found it a little confusing - there are a large number of named characters, almost all who have multi-syllable unique names and also go by nicknames.
I found it a little hard to keep track of who was who, particularly in the beginning where 13 characters are named in the first chapter along with 10 places and titles. Even so, as the book develops and more characters are introduced, the author does a fantastic job of reminding the reader who is who.
Tropes, themes and key words:
The chosen one
Magic
Mages
Apprentices
Elves
Druids/nature magic
Elemental magic
Gods
Demi-gods
Hidden powers
Telekinesis
Mind control
Assassins
Portals
Gem magic
Fae
Wyvern
September 9, 2025
I know a book was good when it ends and I say out loud “THAT CAN'T BE ALL OF IT!”
That said, this book ramps up to a STEEP cliff right at the end. Reader be warned.
It felt a little slow to start despite having a decent bit of movement early on, but that’s a common thing in fantasy settings with lots of world building to do. But once our characters hit the road, things stayed very interesting. There was a good deal of action for a fantasy novel, and the encounters stayed fresh with a new sort of power revealed or an interesting tactic at each turn. The characters' motivations all seem pretty well laid out and fairly straightforward. We have a friend to save, a bad guy to stop, and a newfound power to control. And yet the story doesn’t feel old or tired, it feels young and hopeful like our protagonist. I look forward to reading more from this debut author!
That said, this book ramps up to a STEEP cliff right at the end. Reader be warned.
It felt a little slow to start despite having a decent bit of movement early on, but that’s a common thing in fantasy settings with lots of world building to do. But once our characters hit the road, things stayed very interesting. There was a good deal of action for a fantasy novel, and the encounters stayed fresh with a new sort of power revealed or an interesting tactic at each turn. The characters' motivations all seem pretty well laid out and fairly straightforward. We have a friend to save, a bad guy to stop, and a newfound power to control. And yet the story doesn’t feel old or tired, it feels young and hopeful like our protagonist. I look forward to reading more from this debut author!
September 30, 2024
Review: This was a good short read. "So why you no give 5 stars!?" Zak. Plane and simple. As a MC, he reeked of hesitation laden with guilt throughout the story. His instances of action were always mired in anger which then flip-flopped back into guilt. Fuuug. Zak was not complex enough to carry the story line but thank goodness to the supporting cast for bailing him out.
It is intimated rather briefly that Sorwin has a hankering for some beef yet thankfully the author does not delve too deep into the gay. Zak has an immeadiate and lasting mage-boner for Olivia, which makes no sense as well.
Besides the YA bent (which is inescapable in Fantasy) this had grounded magic and interesting beings. A solid 4 stars.
I received this ARC for an honest review.
4.2/5
It is intimated rather briefly that Sorwin has a hankering for some beef yet thankfully the author does not delve too deep into the gay. Zak has an immeadiate and lasting mage-boner for Olivia, which makes no sense as well.
Besides the YA bent (which is inescapable in Fantasy) this had grounded magic and interesting beings. A solid 4 stars.
I received this ARC for an honest review.
4.2/5
July 2, 2025
so it's pretty obvious that this is a debut just by the writing, and while the plot and magic system itself kept my interest, i found fault with many things.
- the overuse of certain words and phrases: "apparently" "perhaps" "anger and confusion" etc etc. could easily turn this into a drinking game. take a shot for each instance of the word/phrase ....
- multiple povs: had they been separated by chapter it would flow easier, but instead many of the povs were jumbled into a single chapter and jumped around constantly
- the simplistic prose/lack of detail (though one could argue this is a book perfect for middle schoolers/young teens, but not anyone older)
- flat and shallow characters. you can't connect with any of them
- the overuse of certain words and phrases: "apparently" "perhaps" "anger and confusion" etc etc. could easily turn this into a drinking game. take a shot for each instance of the word/phrase ....
- multiple povs: had they been separated by chapter it would flow easier, but instead many of the povs were jumbled into a single chapter and jumped around constantly
- the simplistic prose/lack of detail (though one could argue this is a book perfect for middle schoolers/young teens, but not anyone older)
- flat and shallow characters. you can't connect with any of them
April 24, 2024
A fast paced adventure into a magical world of intrigue, quests and fun characters. The Author mentioned wanting to write for all ages, and I can see it. I enjoyed it greatly as an adult, I thought it was fun and imaginative and an easy pace for those lunchtime breaks. Yet I wouldn't hesitate to pass this to my thirteen year old cousin either. On one hand, it will serve as a great introduction to fantasy overall, and for those of us who love it already, a good throwback to a fantastical time. The only real issue I had was that it's very telly at times, but overall very enjoyable!.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
June 1, 2024
The description for the book was intriguing. I have never read anything from the author and gave it a shot. Glad that I did! The foundation of friendship and the lengths one would go to save someone we care for. Zack cares for his friend Kalbick and will do whatever he can to save him. I enjoyed reading about their friendship, though the bonds that create family were not as firmly formed after Zack discovered that he is not the son of a blacksmith. Still, there was growth of character. Looking forward to the next book!
July 3, 2024
it’s a pretty good book. at the first read of it, i was pretty immersed into it and didn’t really want to put it down until it got to the middle. it got boring for me, but due to the lack of world building. one of the biggest takeaways was the lack of description. i thought things were left too much to imagination. so the middle portion of the book had me set it down a couple times. but the end did pick it back up enough for me to power through to the end. it has me hooked enough to want to know what happens next
March 29, 2024
I LOVED this book! Zakolor is a suspenseful fantasy novel filled with dynamic characters, terrific world-building, themes of friendship, mankind's relationship to the environment, and of course magic! As someone who does not typically read fantasy, I was immediately captivated by this story and cared so much about these characters. One of my favorite quotes: "We don't get to choose who we're born as, Zak. But we can choose who we become." Can't wait for volume 2!
October 27, 2024
This book reads like the very best kind of Dungeons and Dragons adventure.
A likable but clueless hero, creative magic, ongoing world-building, unique pantheon, and forces of evil.
And action-packed! Several times, my brain thought, well, that was a nat20!
"I'm following a hunch. Thinking, like you said I should."
Zak is just such a great character. This is a true bildungsroman, and Zak's journey was such an immersive odyssey.
"I think I know how to save Kal, but I can't do it alone."
A likable but clueless hero, creative magic, ongoing world-building, unique pantheon, and forces of evil.
And action-packed! Several times, my brain thought, well, that was a nat20!
"I'm following a hunch. Thinking, like you said I should."
Zak is just such a great character. This is a true bildungsroman, and Zak's journey was such an immersive odyssey.
"I think I know how to save Kal, but I can't do it alone."
July 23, 2024
A creative fantasy with extensive world building and multi-dimensional, relatable characters. The plot is fast-paced and engaging. Douglas does an wonderful job immersing the reader in a world of unique magic. I was rooting for Zak from the first chapter and enjoyed the twists and turns the story took along the way. Can't wait for book #2.
April 25, 2024
A cool idea with a start similar to Attack on Titan. Unfortunately, it was the standard hero’s journey. The story lacked unique characters and the magic was underwhelming. I think MG or younger YA readers might enjoy it.
May 30, 2024
3.75 rounded up
This was a really fun debut. Characters were enjoyable enough, though the time spent with anyone besides Zak felt a little rushed. And sometimes the pacing was a bit off, but I’m still very excited to continue the series.
Thanks for the ARC, NetGalley
This was a really fun debut. Characters were enjoyable enough, though the time spent with anyone besides Zak felt a little rushed. And sometimes the pacing was a bit off, but I’m still very excited to continue the series.
Thanks for the ARC, NetGalley
July 9, 2024
I really enjoyed this book. The action was fast paced, while managing to weave a story that was interesting and captivating! Zakolor is filled with detailed characters and a world that you can really visualize. Looking forward to the second book!
July 9, 2025
Zakolor is great book!
Enjoyed this book, it was a fast read and kept me going all the way to the end! Love the mix of magic and gods together, check it out. Looking forward to reading the next one.
Enjoyed this book, it was a fast read and kept me going all the way to the end! Love the mix of magic and gods together, check it out. Looking forward to reading the next one.
May 22, 2024
DNF at 57% - starts off really interesting but not enough happens after 20% to keep my attention
October 16, 2023
I loved this book!! I can’t wait for the series to continue! Love the world that the author built and the characters are awesome! I hope there are more books to come!!!
September 2, 2024
The premise is fine, though not very original. Overall, I found the story to go by way too fast. For example, the revelation about Zakolor being adopted just had no emotional impact because it just went by so fast. Later on there's likewise moments that are supposed to be emotional, but they're over and done with so quickly that leaves no impact. Additionally, the first 2 or 3 chapters have some very clunky world-building, with Zakolor just suddenly dropping a paragraph of explanation about the political system. It stands out as world-building and thus ruins any immersion that might have been established previously.
What I liked about the book was the final fight and the friendship between Zakolor and Kalbick. The fight actually felt like it had immediate and emotional stakes, in a way that the rest of the story didn't.
What I liked about the book was the final fight and the friendship between Zakolor and Kalbick. The fight actually felt like it had immediate and emotional stakes, in a way that the rest of the story didn't.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 5, 2023
I'm here for more Olivia!
October 28, 2024
Pick up if you enjoy:
- the hero's journey
- travel books
- great prose and dialogue
I found this a good read, but felt a bit too predictable for me in a lot of ways. I didn't find the main character very interesting - wants to save his best friend, doesn't want to fail, wants to save the world - and Sorwin felt like a side character who we didn't learn much about other than he protects Zak. I was really hoping their relationship would develop into something, but they seemed to grow separately more than anything. I always looked forward to Kals chapters!
I think this book set up a good foundation for a series, where the magic and dynamics of old and new characters can be leaned into even more.
Thanks for the ARC in exchange for a review!
- the hero's journey
- travel books
- great prose and dialogue
I found this a good read, but felt a bit too predictable for me in a lot of ways. I didn't find the main character very interesting - wants to save his best friend, doesn't want to fail, wants to save the world - and Sorwin felt like a side character who we didn't learn much about other than he protects Zak. I was really hoping their relationship would develop into something, but they seemed to grow separately more than anything. I always looked forward to Kals chapters!
I think this book set up a good foundation for a series, where the magic and dynamics of old and new characters can be leaned into even more.
Thanks for the ARC in exchange for a review!
December 8, 2023
This is a fast-paced, exciting read. I was pulled in from the first page. Every scene was so well described. The dialogue was real. I found myself totally engrossed in watching Zak’s growth and development. I was on the edge of my seat with the build-up to the final scene. And I love the set up for the continuation of the series. Well done!
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