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The Croaking Raven draws DC Toby Marlowe and DS Fred Williams into the dark world of Hamlet, not on the stage but on the streets of Stratford-upon-Avon. Oliver Lawrence has returned and he’s looking for revenge.‘Dexter meets Shakespeare in this dark and twisted tale of revenge.’ Christie J. Newport

‘Shakespearian tragedy on the streets of Stratford Upon Avon. A dark, sassy, revengers tale, wicked and funny.’
Paul Burke (Crime Time FM)

288 pages, Hardcover

Published March 7, 2024

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3,174 reviews171 followers
July 14, 2024
I received a copy of this book to read in exchange for an honest review as part of the readalong hosted by Lovebookstours.

The Croaking Raven is the first book inna new and unique series by Guy Hale and did not disappoint.
Set during the 1970s, we follow DS Fred Williams and DC Tony Marlow AD they try to stop and capture a killer preying on the town. I loved the twist of this book in that you know who the killer is, and the police don't have a clue and have a birds eye view of their investigation and how they try to connect the dots. The story is set in Stratford Upon Avon (a beautiful town), which is home to Shakespeare, and the author included Shakespeares works within his killers murders which was cleverly done. I loved the twists and turns that keep you on your toes, and the POV into the killers mindset was fascinating to see play out. Guy has a gift at bringing characters to life and gaining sympathy for the villains of his stories and his books are definitely worth the read!
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1,271 reviews77 followers
July 14, 2024
Fantastic characters, methodical murders inspired by Shakespeare, brilliantly dark humour, and a plot that has you sympathising with the villain, what's not to love.

This kept me gripped throughout, I loved the back and forths between Toby and Fred, and their 70's Policing work ethics. They work so well together and have a natural rapport that was fun to see develop while they were investigating and unraveling the mystery.
It was also great seeing the POV from Oliver as he plans his murders with a helping hand from Felix. It was fascinating seeing the killer's state of mind and motivations, and the cleverly crafted gruesome deaths bringing Shakespeare's work to life in a twisted manner.

Brilliant writing, entertaining plot, and witty characters, very much looking forward to more of this series.
Also loved all the chapter titles!

🐦‍⬛ "Death was coming to Stratford, riding in a Morris Minor Van, and Hell would surely follow"

🐦‍⬛ "Listen to you giving me stage directions on committing mass murder. Have you no scruples?"

🐦‍⬛ "Your reputation has about as much value as a damp kebab"

🐦‍⬛ "Are you mad?" "Course I am, I just killed a man in cold blood"

🐦‍⬛ "How can the truth poison a mind? The truth sets you free"

🐦‍⬛ "They are all such horrible people, killing them would be in the public interest"
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66 reviews2 followers
December 12, 2025
4.25 ⭐️
okay so ive literally just realised i read the 2nd book in this series before the first, but they were both so amazing. the plot makes a whole lot more sense now because the 2nd book was more like a back story to the 2nd. i absolutely loved this book & im loving this series. i think guy hale might be a genius, because the writing in these books is so so good. like the first book, this one had a bit of everything, which made it very easy to enjoy. this book also lowkey got me out of my reading slump which is great. i cannot wait to read the 3rd book.
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343 reviews30 followers
December 10, 2024
4.5 stars! This is the first book in the Shakespeare Murders series. It is a darkly funny cosy crime read. I loved the characters of Fred and Toby. They had such a great dynamic and I loved the sharp wit and banter between them. Fred is certainly flying close to the wind in his policing techniques! They were certainly different times back then!

Set in the 1970s, this duo has to figure out what is going on in their sleepy part of England. They need to do it quickly before the body count rises. 

I loved the writing style which had me laughing out loud more than once. It is so well written. The cast of characters are entertaining and the plot had me hooked. I liked the themes of the book and references to Shakespeare and the theatre. It was also nice to see the killer's point of view and we got to see his rationale. I thought this was cleverly done and it was great to see the contrast between the police and the killer.

I really enjoyed this and will definitely keep up with what happens next! With thanks to the author and Love Books Tours for providing a copy of the book. This is my honest opinion which I'm leaving voluntarily.
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313 reviews56 followers
January 24, 2026
A killer uses Shakespeare's plays as inspiration. A lot of Hamlet references that will make the plot juicy and raise the bar of anticipation in the reader. If you know the basics of the Shakespeare plot you will have a better experience reading the book.

Some of the events are not very plausible but if you decide to not focus on that aspect, it will turn out to be an enjoyable read.
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756 reviews45 followers
June 30, 2024
This book is riveting and clever with plenty of twists and turns to keep you guessing until the very end. The characters are well-developed and you'll find yourself rooting for Marlowe and Williams as they try to unravel the mystery.

The writing is sharp and witty, with plenty of literary references that will delight fans of Shakespeare. Hale has a talent for bringing the streets of Stratford-upon-Avon to life, painting a vivid picture of a town steeped in history and intrigue.

I found this to be a thrilling and entertaining read and I am sure that it will keep readers on the edge of their seats. Whether you're a fan of crime fiction or Shakespeare, this book is sure to captivate and entertain. Don't miss out on this gem of a novel and keep your eyes peeled for more!
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85 reviews5 followers
November 25, 2024
It was a fantastic read. I enjoyed this book so much. It was thrilling, scary, gory, and funny at the times.
Definitely loved the idea of a murderer taking inspiration from Shakespeares plays. Such a clever idea!!!
This was a addictive, solid 5🌟 read. If you like Agatha Christie , as I do, you will definitely like this book.
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120 reviews11 followers
July 14, 2024
This book was hilarious, and I definitely wasn't expecting it to be at all, the perfect sense of humour that had me giggling like a schoolchild. Set in Stratford-upon-Avon with the most perfect imagery and setting. It was a joy to read about a place so local to me.

Crime, Shakespeare, dark humour, 1970's police banter...what more could you ask for in a book? After studying a level of English literature in college, I loved the hamlet retelling through a unique plot. It was definitely the icing on the cake for a perfect book 📖

It was a dual perspective with the disgraced ex Shakespeare actor, hell bent on revenge and starts planning his murders, and the DC Toby Marlowe is paired with an old school, Fred Williams, who literally does nothing by the book and manages to blag his way through his career. They have been sent to investigate the gruesome random murders that have started to occur when no other serious crimes have been committed as the town is so sleepy and cosy... until now. A very addictive read that was paved perfectly the whole way through.

This is the first book I've ever read of Guys, and I'm happy to say I'm looking forward to the next one in the series, and I'd gladly be buying the second.
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525 reviews7 followers
July 6, 2024
After reading a trilogy series by this author I was so excited to read this one. With a complete different twist taking you back in time and all about Shakespeare. I absolutely loved the character development with Toby and Fred and couldn’t help imagining what being a Police Officer was like back in the day. Especially with Fred’s way of working. I thought bringing to life the knowledge of Shakespeare plays was remarkable especially to the new generation that might not have a lot of knowledge.

There’s a lot of fun which is weird to say giving the amount of murders that take place. I feel like I now know the whole plot of Hamlet. If you’ve read this authors work before you really know and recognise he holds nothing back so be prepared for the gruesome murders. I loved how Felix gave Oliver the chance of carrying out revenge. I loved when I got towards the end of the book the title made so much sense. ‘The croaking raven doth bellow for revenge’. And especially if you know the authors books ‘all the world’s a stage’ reference to. I wasn’t living for the cliffhanger ending though. Can’t wait for the next read.
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75 reviews54 followers
July 17, 2024
3.75 ⭐️

this story follows a series of murders that take place in 1970s stratford-upon-avon, which are following the storyline of Macbeth. It’s told in a third-person POV, which normally I’m not a fan of but i think it really worked for this story as it gave more insight into a range of characters & added comedic relief.

I think that fans of the Thursday Murder Club series would enjoy this book as it was similar in terms of the storytelling & banter 📖

i also enjoyed the fact that this was set in stratford as this is local to me & i very rarely get to read about books that have a familiar setting!!

I think this is going to be potentially part of a series due to the cliffhanger ending…
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340 reviews20 followers
May 20, 2024
Well well well, Guy Hale has gone and done it again! 

I absolutely loved this storyline, the characters were written to perfection - as always with this author!

I did feel for Oliver and I unstand why his so angry and wants revenge so badly.

I like the duo - Toby and Fred make an excellent team, and take on eachothers theories seriously and makes them great detectives..

I enjoyed olivers 1st play so intrigued whos next in play 2!
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379 reviews22 followers
December 9, 2024
This book is an exciting mixture of crime fiction, Shakespeare and unique mystery.. full of twists and turns that keep you guessing throughout.. its exciting and captivating and leaves youfcheering on the villian throughout.. the characters and storyline were well written and has you hanging on to every word. Excellent book can't wait to read more.
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495 reviews28 followers
April 25, 2024
This is the 1st Book of The Shakespeare Murders!

We may have new characters and a new location, but Guy's signature storytelling ways and dark humour are ever present here.

In The Croaking Raven, we follow the Police in the 1970s as they try and piece together a group of very elaborate murders.

First up, can we just stop and appreciate Fred before we go on?
Fred is an absolutely cracking character and exactly how I'd imagine an officer in the 70s to talk and act.

Taking food as evidence and then 'destroying' them when done was absolutely hilarious. I didn't half chuckle!

As is a signature move with Guy, we know who the Killer is already, and we also know the motive behind the madness. The story that Guy tells gives us behind the scenes access to the murders and also the murderers state of mind.

Guy has kept his very unique 'swooping' storytelling in that his novel is made up of lots of POVs that you swoop in and out from, which as always makes you feel like you're watching a Crime Series on TV!!

It's brilliantly done, and from this way of storytelling, if I didn't know who wrote this book, then I'd still say Guy!

Guy has so much dark humour in this book and, coupled with Shakespearan puns, makes it hilarious at times. I kept unladylike snorting 🤣.

The new Shakespeare theme was a great idea and has obviously given Guy lots of material to play with in his story, and I love how he has managed to weave this into his new crime series.

Guy - please never change! As always, your books are fantastic! Roll on Book 2!
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2,018 reviews141 followers
July 21, 2025
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Review for 'The Croaking Raven' by Guy Hale

Wow!!!! Just flipping wow!!!! What an absolutely epic page turner!!! Well done Guy!!! How on Earth have I never read any of your books before? Absolutely smashed it!!!!!!! What an absolutely explosive and amazing start to what promises to be an absolutely addictive series!!! It is the first book in Guy's 'The Shakespeare Murders' series.

This book is extremely well written with vivid descriptions creating the perfect atmosphere for the storyline. The book cover and synopsis works perfectly with the book plot and I am most definitely looking forward to reading the next book, and the previous one in this series.

I have absolutely no idea how this is the first time I have read one of this incredible author's books but I am so glad I have rectified that problem and I cannot wait to get hooked into more books by the extremely talented Guy!!! This is the first book in Guy's 'The Shakespeare Murders' series and I cannot wait to see the next book come out so I hope you are typing the last words as I type this Guy as I just cannot wait!! I'm always a bit dubious with books based historically as I worry about not being able to 'deal' with the language used but I absolutely love how Guy has written this book. The language used is perfectly suited to the era whilst being easy to read and making it quite humorous on several occasions. In this brilliant book Guy takes us on a time travelling journey from 2024 back to the year 1972 and drops us into Stratford-upon-Avon. We meet DC Toby Maguire who has Birmingham to join the CID at Stratford where he is teamed up with DS Fred Williams to investigate a series of murders. We also meet our killer Oliver Lawrence who is getting his own revenge following the plot of Shakespeare's Hamlet. Can Toby and Fred stop Oliver before he gets to the end of his kill list? Well, grab your copy of this absolutely fantastic, refreshing and one of a kind explosive start to what is just guaranteed to be an addictive series!!! I can absolutely promise that you will not regret it!! You may even discover a new favourite author like I most definitely have!!!! With a one of a kind storyline ram packed with murder, Shakespeare, history, theatre, crime, humour, revenge, twists, entertainment, unorthodox police methods, laughter, drama and everything you could ask for plus much, much more what on Earth are you waiting for?? Honestly, I am the first to admit that I am not a fan of Shakespeare, or any classics really, and the most I have stepped in to the world of Shakespeare is when I watched Romeo & Juliet with Leonardo De Caprio!!! However, you do not need to enjoy or know anything about Shakespeare to absolutely LOVE this book just as I have!! I was in absolute stitches laughing with tears streaming down my face from how hard I was laughing so many times that I lost count!! the fact that this is predominately a historical crime thriller I absolutely LOVE the fact that it made me laugh so much with the behaviour, banter, sarcasm and attitude of the characters throughout as it lightens up the darker mood!!! Also, again, you do not have to be a fan of historical books, again something I am not really a huge fan of, to love this book either. regardless of your usual genre choice just grab this book and enjoy it!!! The setting of Stratford is perfect and really helped set the scene and thanks to Guy's brilliant evocative writing skills I really could see, feel and hear absolutely everything each of the characters were seeing, feeling and doing!! This is a book with a twist in the fact that we know who the killer is immediately and yet it still managed to shock me at times so a MASSIVE CONGRATULATIONS to Guy!! Not only have you included the killer's perspective which is rare but something I love but you also managed to surprise me which is getting harder and harder after reading hundreds of crime books!! We see what is going on through the perspectives of multiple protagonists and Guy does an absolutely brilliant job of weaving them all together in the perfect adore to ensure the reader gets the bigger pictures!! The chapters are short and sweet so perfect to pick up and read a few chapters in your break or on a journey, that is if you actually manage to put it down!! this is something I did not manage and ended up absolutely devouring it in one sitting of a few hours!! I just could not put it down as every time I even considered it something happened where I just HAD to know what happened next!! I was so lost in the storyline that on the very few occasions that I did look up I took a few minutes to realise I was actually in Wales in 2024 and not in Stratford in 1972. I also loved the brilliant chapter titles which gave a small hint to what that chapter covered. I absolutely loved meeting and learning all about the characters from our main protagonists DC Toby Marlowe, DS Fred Williams and Oliver Lawrence to meeting the rest of the team DS Tony Parsons, DS Ken White, DC Dave Dalton, DC Kinky Bernstein, Felix Richards and I could go on but seriously why haven't you stopped reading this and started reading this book by this absolutely epic author yet!!?? The fact that Guy has done his research or had experience with Shakespeare, history, police procedures in that era and more shines through the pages. It is a pet hate of mine when an author does little or no research into the topics they write about as it can lead to silly and unnecessary errors that can completely spoil a storyline but Guy avoids this so a huge WELL DONE to Guy! The pace of the storyline is perfect with a multi-layered storyline and short chapters I found myself hooked from the start to the end. each and every time I went to put the book down something happened meaning I just HAD to know what was going to happen next so I promised myself another chapter but the same kept happening again and again so in the end I devoured it in one sitting of several hours!! Every single one of the characters were extremely well developed and I was completely invested in each and every one of them. They all had their own individual and unique personalities, flaws, quirks, strengths and weaknesses and they all jumped out of the pages at the reader as they turn the pages. It genuinely felt like I was next to each and every one of them as they were talking throughout the storyline feeling as if I was on the hunt or investigating on the streets of Stratford. I am landed that this is just the explosive start of what promises to be an explosive series and I am looking forward to reading the next book in this series which I am hoping Guy is writing as I type this up!! This is definitely one of those books that can be read in front of a fire cuddled up under a blanket, on a beach sipping a cocktail or relaxing in the garden as it genuinely does not matter where or when you are reading this as Guy transports you to the past and into Stratford with every turn of the page. An absolutely perfect start to what promises to be a fantastic and addictive one of a kind, humorous historical mystery series and I cannot wait to get stuck into the next book!!

Before you start this make sure you clear your schedule because once you pick it up you are not going to want to put it down!!!!

The characters were very realistic, multi layered and well rounded and again their personalities reflected the storyline and how they would act, etc perfectly. The descriptions gave a really good in depth view of how the characters were feeling and what they were thinking. The characters all had their own unique personalities with individual flaws, quirks, secrets, strengths and weaknesses!! I loved getting to know each and every single one of them! I don't want to say too much about the characters though and I will leave you to read this amazing book and work it out yourself. Each of the characters were well developed, unique and thanks to Guy's fantastic evocative writing skills they all came to life before my eyes. That is all I will say as I don't want to run the risk of dropping any hints or spoilers. However, whether you love or hate these characters, they all have their own strong unique personalities and they all bring the story to life playing their roles perfectly.

Congratulations Guy on a fantastic, unique and gripping success and here's to the next explosive book in this absolutely epic series!!! This is exactly why I would like to welcome you to my favourite authors club!!!

Overall an absolute must read, unique, hilarious addictive page turning crime thriller that will keep you on edge and addicted.


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483 reviews9 followers
May 14, 2024
I was very intrigued with this book as soon as I had started reading the first chapter. I loved the premise of this book and how the author involved shakespeare within this novel. It made it very fascinating and something which I haven’t read a book like this before. I also enjoyed the fact that you got to see different Povs throughout this book, especially as we got to see it from the police’s point of view and then the view of the culprit. Being able to see from the culprits point of view, you get to know the reasoning behind why he does what he does, which gives you a strange understanding to the whole thing. But seeing how everything was being solved it was very interesting. Oliver was a very intriguing character to a point I didn’t want to put the story down, reading of what happened to him previously and now him taking his revenge it was very gripping. By the time I had read the the ending I was surprised by the ending as I didn’t expect that to be the ending. I definitely loved how the author had written this book as it was very gripping to a point I didn’t want to put it down.
Profile Image for Mel Mars.
149 reviews4 followers
August 4, 2024
What a fun read 😊
I love murder mysteries, and this one was definitely a good one.
I always love when a story is set somewhere I've been (granted, I've only been once to Stratford-upon-Avon) and the fact that for once it wasn't happening in a big city like London made it refreshing.

There were multiple POVs, but I had a marked preference for Oliver's chapters, as he become more and more unhinged - and violent. But DC Toby Marlowe and DS Fred Williams are investigating, and we are also privy to their progress and the police politics taking place at the same time.

Theatre (and Shakespeare, of course) is a prominent theme throughout the book. After all, the story is also about stage actors, critics, and the backstabbing taking place behind the scene.
And while I am not a fan of the theatre genre, I do enjoy literature and when it's included in a plot in a creative way, which was the case here.

To conclude, I found The Croaking Raven to be a very entertaining and enjoyable read, thanks to good characters, humour, and writing. Definitely recommending it 📚
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160 reviews20 followers
July 15, 2024
The Croaking Raven is a Hamlet retelling which gives you everything you could ever want from a murder mystery! Revenge, madness and humorous theatrics await within the pages of a tale that rings true of the comedic tragedy that is Hamlet.

The twists, killer’s POV, and theatrical nature of not only the murders, but the investigation, had me gripped and I couldn’t wait to see how the investigation closed in on its target. Having the killer’s POV allows us to see the “behind the scenes” of each murder, the motives and the hilarious thought processes of someone who, very much like Hamlet, in their eyes, has nothing left to lose.

I always know that anything Guy writes, I will enjoy. They are the perfect mix of dark humour, murder and a fantastic cast of lovable characters, whether they are bad or not!

As a Shakespeare lover, the quotes from his plays scattered throughout were just the icing on top of the cake!! Dark, twisted and comedic, this is a quirky murder mystery you do not want to miss!
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272 reviews52 followers
December 28, 2024
A Gripping, Clever Mystery with Heart and Humour

The Croaking Raven is a masterpiece of wit and intrigue, weaving the dark drama of Hamlet into a thrilling modern-day murder mystery. Guy Hale’s genius shines through on every page, from the razor-sharp writing to the intricately plotted twists that kept me guessing until the end.

The standout element for me was the camaraderie between DC Toby Marlowe and DS Fred Williams. Their dynamic is both heartwarming and hilarious, bringing much-needed levity to the dark undertones of the story. The way they work together—balancing determination, humour, and genuine friendship—adds a rich layer to the narrative that makes them incredibly likable.

Set against the evocative backdrop of Stratford-upon-Avon, the story brims with Shakespearean echoes while staying fresh and contemporary. With revenge, murder, and a touch of theatrical flair, this book is a must-read for anyone who loves a smart, character-driven mystery. I can’t wait to see where Marlowe and Williams go next!

12 reviews
August 23, 2024
This book should have been one of my favourites; I'm a sucker for a murder mystery thriller, and I've loved Shakespeare for my whole life.

But I couldn't even finish it.

For a 'murder-mystery-thriller', it takes 100 of the 288 pages to get to the first murder, there's no mystery as the antagonist describes his plan and his motives numerous times, both to himself and to a co-conspirator, none of which is particularly thrilling.

The interwoven Shakespearean elements are fine, and frankly the only the reason this is 2 stars instead of 1, but it's not enough to carry this book.

Rife with spelling mistakes, misused punctuation, and, unforgivably, the author confusing his antagonist and his protagonist, not once, but TWICE. During a scene in which DC Toby Marlowe is chatting with a lunch-lady, he is referred to as Oliver.
Then, in the very next chapter, a scene in which Oliver is (finally!!) about to commit his first murder, he is referred to as Toby.

Completely takes you out. A marvellous idea, terribly and tragically wasted.
1,175 reviews27 followers
April 25, 2024
Well, do you like Shakespeare, crime, dark humour, fast moving stories, villains you can't help like? Answer yes to any of the above and you should read this.
I worried that I wouldn't understand the Shakespeare, it being 20+ years since I studied any of the Bard's work, but I was completely swept up in the tales. I loved all of the references.
The characters are fantastic, characters are always something this author does well. I found myself eager to read more from the villains side, only this author has ever made me root for the killer.
The authors signature dark humour shone throughout and had me sniggering away on several occasions.
I cannot wait to revisit this setting, characters and storyline.
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67 reviews1 follower
July 14, 2024
This was book given to me for free via LoveBooksTours- all thoughts are my own.

1972 Stratford-Upon-Avon the home of Shakespeare’s about to suffer a reign of terror that is taken from the very plot of Hamlet and new DC Toby and his corrupt boss DS Fred have got to find the killer before all the actors at the Royal Shakespeare Company are no more.

Guy Hale is a writer I want to love- I really do.

His writing style is fun, easy to read, engaging, pulls me into the story and makes me like even some of the least likeable guys (sometimes). God I wanted to love this- I really did. The premise alone is such a good idea and falls into that fun campy territory the genre is known for (especially from the 90s)

He’s gone for a howcatchem story (think Colombo) and our killer is the best part- the set up for them is fantastic- being pulled back to the UK due to a letter from an old friend telling all. With the friend setting out who among the cast were the masterminds behind our killer's original downfall and how they went about it. Planting the deep anger and hatred that causes our killer to go down a deep disturbed rabbit hole.

To the point the friend is now terrified of the killer and wants to stop them- more on that later.

I did like our main hero DC Toby- except he seems to be outshone by DSC Fred who I honestly could not stand- I think Hale was going for a magnificent bastard archetype with how corrupt and self serving DSC Fred is, especially at the beginning (life on mars anyone?) but to me I thought he was just a asshole.

The kills are fairly imaginative especially the 2nd one- oh boy that one got fairly gory- but believable enough. There's also these really nice scenes with our killer that go into the unhinged and they are fantastic- had the book kept this up as well as getting the tension between the killer and the police it would have been a 4 star.

But that is not what we go.

So big spoilers here but the story does not end- it appears this is either going to a dup set or a trilogy. Meaning our Police haven't caught up and confronted our killer- heck they still don't know for a fact who is doing it with no evidence. This left the ending was limp and lack luster and felt like there had been such a huge build up with 4 deaths and a killer spiraling for nothing.

That's my biggest gripe- there’s so much fat in this book that did not need to be there and it makes the story and pacing suffer. The first kill happens a third of the way into the book and it felt like a slog to get to the one point, and that was continuous through out the book- that should not be happening with a killer escalating between kills.

This needed to be a stand alone story- or at least a much better payoff at the end.
Next is there as no real reason as to why it was set in the 1970s. Some fun little references here and there but really didn't impact the story. If anything this could have easily been set today- and honestly I think it would helped some more on the Police side of the story.

So in the middle of the book after our 2nd kill out of nowhere Toby starts bringing up the past of the actors and the two lives they destroyed- and this comes out of nowhere. We have no build up, nothing from Toby about how he came into this information, there was no looking into old news reports or anything like that- he just asks it out of the blue.

And this happen quite a bit on the Police investigation side of the story- information just comes out of nowhere.
That could have easily been avoided had we been set in the 2020s as Toby could has easily done some digging into the victims and come across an old article relating to the past. So very easily.

No instead we are focusing on DSC Fred and his equally corrupt boss plan to take down their higher and equally corrupt superior, and then there's also this informant Fred uses who "knows everything" and has two creepy sisters that appear at the very last moment with some cryptic psychic premonitions. According to the Fred the entire town thinks the twin sisters are witches.....and I just about nearly threw the book across the room as it wasted my time. I don't want some random mysterious guy to confirm to DC Toby that his theory about the killer is correct- I want Toby to do his job and find the evidence that his theory is correct.

One character in the book just somehow immediately knows it's our killer- just pops up out of nowhere and also so does our DC Toby.......like where did you get this from sir?

Hale has a problem as he seems to throw all his ideas for a story and doesn't seem to have learnt how to trim the fat. I would suggest a decent editor who understands crime fiction especially on "howcatchem's" work and this was not it.

If Hale so desperately wanted our killer to continue on into s second book there was a very easy way around it.

This is going into very very heavy spoilers so if you don't want to know stop now.

The killer only starts this as an old friend tells him what caused his downfall and wants him to kill those responsible. Except the killer is taking things to an unhinged level and the friend desperately tries to make him stay on track and even plans the last death in the book on his own boat. This could have been used as the friend could have ended up taking the fall meaning our killer could go on to book 2.

But no we just stop at the last kill as our Killer goes on about their plan for act 2 with the police no closer to catching them.

I’m so disappointed in this. Had it not been for feeling of that slog and other issues I would have easily rated this a 4



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1,738 reviews62 followers
June 23, 2024
The Croaking Raven by Guy Hale is a witty Shakespearean tragedy of a mystery that had me chuckling along even as the perpetrator went through with their dastardly deeds. To some degree, this played out, not just like the aforementioned tragedy, but also an episode of Columbo, as we, the readers, know exactly who is behind the nefarious plot against Sir Morris Oxford and his company of thesps, and why. It is therefore incumbent upon our two lead Detectives, DS Fred Williams and new to Stratford CID, DC Toby Marlowe, to uncover the killer's identity before they can complete their mission. Whether they succeed, or whether our antagonist manages to play out his plot in full, you'll need to read to find out. I'm not telling you.

Take note - the book is set in the seventies so this is anything but politically correct, so if you are offended by the thought of a mixed race character being over-looked for the role of Othello, for not being black enough, whilst pudgy, pasty, whiter than white Sir Morris 'blacks up' to take the lead ... Well, it is correct as of the time the story is set, and you'll have to put your rightful indignation aside if you want to read the book. That is just one of the many reasons why it was very hard to feel any sympathy for Sir Morris, or the fact that he may be on a killer's hit list. And yes, it was hard to find a lot of sympathy for many of the victims, although in some cases our killer does take rather too much delight in their task, one murder particularly gruesome, although thankfully the deed itself is left off the page.

Fred Williams and Toby Marlowe are two really brilliant characters to spend time with. Fred is very, how shall I put it, old school. He's happy to bend the odd rule in the course of his duties, and although his behaviour may not be tolerated today (or maybe it would - we've all read the headlines), he is man of his time and it would be hard not to like him. He is both a good and bad influence on his new mentee, Toby, who is his first role as a Detective has a lot to learn, starting with forgetting a few of his morals in pursuit of a killer. They are both very astute characters, switched on to the nuances of the murders in their own special way, and behind his blundering and direct way of policing, Fred is a very clever character. A man of hidden depths. Very hidden. As a lover of theatre, Toby is in exactly the right team, and his insight into the murders and instinct for the job prove very useful indeed. There was wit and banter between them which made me smile. In fact there was as strong vein of humour throughout the book - not one that takes itself too seriously, unlike some of the pompous asses who are part of the story.

For all the humour, there is a surprising amount of tension involved, wondering just how they killer might strike next. I liked the way that the story is framed, using the plot and characters of a very famous Shakespearean tragedy as the influence for the string of murders. I won't say which as this is just book one of a trilogy, and I can see that some of the others are going to be key to what comes next. It would also give too much away about our suspect in this case and, although their identity is never a secret to us, the fun is in the discovery of not just their motive, but also the task they set themselves. The book is paced well, some of the characters are a delight and it was just a fun foray into the world of the theatre and some truly damnable luvvies that kept me entertained from beginning to end. If you like a lighter murder mystery, and have an affinity for the Bard, you'll likely enjoy it too, it only for trying to second guess who the next victim might be and what method of dispatch might be employed.
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487 reviews6 followers
December 31, 2025
The premise is deadly revenge wrought cold by an actor and carried out with a theatrical flourish. The murders are done in bloody Shakespearean fashion, with book one loosely following the plot of Hamlet. Few authors will capture the quality of The Bard’s prose, but here the writing brims with confidence and conviction, making a silly story a great deal of fun, he’s had great fun writing it, so you’re going to enjoy it. Even the 1970s setting evokes (for the older reader) a time when comedy could be cheeky, at time even outrageous, without the constant fear of offence.

The author's love of the theatre shines through in his writing, here is an author having a whale of a time and I’m sure this will appeal to many readers, it certainly did to me. It may seem a tiny bit self-indulgent at times, like being in on a joke, but its wittily put together and very funny, with a touch of schadenfreude when it comes to the victims. A clever satire on the acting profession and those in any walk of life who cling on to positions of power rather than making way for those who follow.

When naming his characters the author clearly enjoyed himself and I found myself chuckling as I read along. It seems obligatory to have Marlowe and Bacon for obvious reasons, but then we have Oliver Lawrence and Dame Suzy Tench to name but two inspired by those who tread the boards. This adds to the general clever wordplay amusement, which I’m sure the great man would approve of.

I thought the dynamic between the police officers was perfectly judged and an alternative riff on the familiar good cop bad cop relationship. The good cop being rookie DC Toby Marlowe, who is mild mannered, educated and enthusiastic, with a love of the theatre. Initially keen to do things by the book, we realise that can’t last when he is paired with DS Fred Williams, our bad cop. Fred isn’t so much bad as someone who is worldly wise, experienced and astute observer of human nature. He’s not a huge fan of procedure to get results, when suspects can simply fall down the stairs, and he’s quick to seize evidence of minor crime, especially when it can miraculously appear on his plate. Their interactions were a delight.

The antagonist is a wronged man, just like is father was before him by the same group of people. Initially driven by revenge he is in the process of becoming gloriously deranged as he gets a taste for murder. Perfect if you like your villains a little bit over-the-top.

The victims are members of the acting profession and its wider circle. Absolute luvvies and their toadies, whom our author lovingly lampoons and then destroys. Their vanity, conceit and puffed-up self-importance alone might be enough to condemn them, but their role in destroying a man’s life is what makes them for death.

If you don’t like the plot then the man to complain to is long gone, but the author skilfully uses key elements from Hamlet and peppers the prose with timely quotes. If you are not familiar with the play, chances are you could bluff your way through after reading this, its clever and entertaining writing. The ending may frustrate some as it is inconclusive, it’s effectively the end of Act I and Hamlet, with more to follow and a new play to be referenced.

Shakespearian murder has never been so entertaining.
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1,409 reviews35 followers
July 18, 2024
" [...] The croaking raven doth bellow for revenge. [...]"

Wow! I am pleased with Guy Hale's latest novel titled "The Croaking Raven". This is the first part of the "The Shakespeare Murders" series. The author has created such an interesting crime story that I can't wait for the next part. The ending made me a little sad. It ended too soon and left me wondering what happens next? I secretly hope that we won't have to wait long for the second volume. A brilliant plot, fast-paced action and interesting characters make it impossible to stop reading. If you like Shakespeare's Hamlet, you will like this story. Here we have a serial killer who is hell-bent on revenge and puts his plan into action, straight from "Hamlet". Sounds scary? Will everyone on his mysterious list die? But will anyone survive? Will detectives discover who the serial killer is? Guy Hale created his novel in such a way that we, the readers, know who the murderer is from the very beginning. We watch as he strives to achieve his goal. On the other hand, we look at the work of police officers and detectives. We see their efforts to catch the perpetrator of the murder as quickly as possible and close the investigation. I'm glad I could see from the inside how detective inspectors work. Let me tell you, this is a very difficult thing. In this story, we are dealing with theatre actors and their critics. Who can sleep soundly and who should be afraid? Guy Hale combined art, crime and a very well-conducted investigation. It was a pleasure for me to read this book.
Here I met, among others:
Oliver - he was a promising actor, but his career was ruined due to his uncle's sabotage. Why did he do that? This hero really got on my nerves.
Sir Morris Oxford - Oliver's uncle, who largely contributed to the downfall of his father's career and life. Did this character deserve to die?
Felix Richards - A friend of Oliver's father. He fuels the vitriol against Oliver, and I really didn't like it. I was wondering what the difference was between Felix and Morrison. I came to the conclusion that nothing.
DC Toby Marlowe, his boss, is Fred. It's worth paying attention to.
DS Fred Williams. He is a very good detective.
Alf Butcher - the best pathologist in Warwickshire. The perfect hero for me. I also dreamed about this profession once.
Of course, while reading this novel, you will meet other characters worth your attention.
Guy Hale takes us back in time to 1972 with his latest story. I am delighted with the cover of "The Croaking Raven". On one hand it's beautiful, but on the other it gives me chills. I forgot to mention that the murderer in this book is not gentle. I can honestly say it's terrifying. I wouldn't like to meet him on my way. Thanks to this novel, I could see with my own eyes what hate, revenge and hatred can lead to. Are you ready for Guy Hale's new series of novels called "The Shakespeare Murders"? If, like me, you like crime stories and Shakespeare's works, you will like the novel "The Croaking Raven". Do you want to see a new version of Guy Hale's work? I will just add that this book is different from his previous ones. It is worth reading this author's stories.
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206 reviews27 followers
May 27, 2025
The Croaking Raven is the first in a new series from author Guy Hale set in the early seventies and I was instantly curious and hopeful about it once I read the synopsis and had a brief giggle at some of the names the author has used. Hale loves to play with his characters, and in this series has given a true nod not only to Shakespeare but that era of English history, the first example of that is the main character’s name; Toby Marlowe and there are many other incidents of surnames like that or characters who have taken on a resemblance to Shakespeare’s famous creations. But it’s not just that era but an acknowledgement of those who graced the RSC over the years, the most obvious being our main antagonist, Oliver Lawrence.

I loved this book and enjoyed curling up with it and having the soundtrack of the seventies playing in the background to draw me further into the grittiness of the early seventies, although I am certain the beauty that is Stratford-upon-Avon hasn’t experienced too much ‘grittiness’ in the centuries since it’s most famous resident departed on his birthday. My favourite character was the veteran police officer, DC Fred Williams who reminded me a little of DCI Gene Hunt in the 2006 TV series, Life on Mars. He’s already very much a dinosaur even in the early seventies and tends to get answers with his fists and a blind eye than anything else and whilst I know I shouldn’t like him? He is so well-written that he comes charging off the page and made me chuckle a few times at his less-than-legal and polite antics.

The storyline is engaging and holds the reader in its grasp easily with wonderfully written characters who have the perfect blend of wit and realism as the police work against time and under the gaze of a senior officer who is as useful as a chocolate teapot. Oliver is the perfect villain in the story with a backstory worthy of the stage, with loss and tragedy at every turn. I liked how the author would regularly draw in the element of the various tragedies Shakespeare wrote to show the parallels between the events of the seventies and the love many of the characters have for the theatre.

It’s a reminder that not only was Shakespeare a storyteller but he often wanted to have lessons in his plays and relatability for some of his theatre goers..

The suspense lingers throughout the book, and as the albeit short time goes past, we see how Marlowe as the new boy in the station becomes respected for his knowledge and intuition, and how he works so well with Fred Williams. Oliver Lawrence is unsettling and is really well written and whilst there’s initially sympathy for him, that was gone for me by the end. This was a brilliant read, and introduced the series perfectly with many answers still to be found, with characters who are evil without reason, and ones who you can’t but wish Oliver took retribution on because they’re vile. I am looking forward to reading more of this series, I have a feeling the curtain is far from closed on the events in seventies Stratford.
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1,008 reviews36 followers
July 14, 2024
Original Review
I want to start by saying that this book was something I did not know I needed. I am an English geek at heart. Shakespear and Marlowe are some of my favourites and what Guy Hale has done here is basically perfection! I knew I was going to be getting this book because I loved Hale’s Comeback Trail trilogy but when I knew there would be Shakespeare references I was sold.

Once again I adore Hale’s writing. Some how he manages to combine police procedurals and thriller with a sprinkle of humour and historical fiction to boot and it just works. I adore that our main character’s surname is Marlowe. I adore the references to the Bards works (what else would you expect when the murders seem to be following Hamlet?). I loved the twists and turns. I found myself giggling at little puns, or at least what I thought were puns or easter eggs throughout in the way of names but this is far from a comedy. There is a tightly woven plot that is delivered in the style I have come to expect (and love) from Hale. From the very first chapter I was hooked, by the second I needed to keep reading.

I won’t go into big spoilers of course but I can say if you enjoy a good thriller and mystery with enough wit to make William Shakespeare proud this one is for you and once you’ve finished this check out Hale’s Comeback Trail as well.

Second read

This was my second reading of The Croaking Raven and my fourth book by Guy Hale and it is safe to say he is now an instant buy author for me. Hale manages to mix gritty crime thrillers with a touch of humour and a few puns here and there that just make each novel a joy to read. I will say I was biased to this book before I even started because I am a Shakespeare and Marlowe nerd at heart. The face the main detective was called Marlowe had me laughing from the start.

As always with Hale you can feel the passion but more importantly the enjoyment he gets from writing. The plot is perfectly paced and while at times a little outlandish it ties perfectly with the idea of the murdering being connected to the acting world. Can I just take a moment to say that calling him Oliver Lawerence was a stroke of genius and I loved it.

Despite knowing what is happening, well at least knowing who is doing the murdering we are still kept engrossed in the how and why. I adored the references throughout and puns. That said I think even if you aren’t a self proclaimed Shakespeare and Marlowe nerd you will love this. It has so much going for it. Pacey and memorable writing, fantastic if not a little unstable characters, and plot you won’t easily forgot. I cannot wait for more!
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100 reviews3 followers
December 16, 2024
Croaking Raven is a humorous, interesting, and incredibly enjoyable read. It's a must-read for any crime or thriller fans, and I'd recommend it!

I'm all for reading retellings of Shakespeare’s plays or books that are based on his plays, so this was the perfect read! The killer/crime is inspired by Hamlet and kills people using other plays as references. I felt like such a nerd picking up on all the references and hints towards the play, but it was cool. I did think it was laid on quite thick, but at the same time, it is the whole point behind the book.

The characters are fleshed out, and the dialogue between them is quite funny at times. I love the way they can switch from light-hearted and joking around to being serious. It reminds you that these are professional detectives who are actually really good at their jobs.

Fred was a perfect example of this, and I liked his character (most of the time). He is unconventional at the best of times, and it was amusing, but sometimes he did come across as a bit of a dick.

Also, there's so much drama in their little police office. I love that for them. Toby is also a great character. You can really see him settling in and getting more and more comfortable in his role as the book progresses. He's outshined by Fred massively, though, for sure.

I couldn't take Oliver that seriously. His first conversation with Felix made him seem like he was a child and from then on I couldn't get the image of teenager throwing a fit out of my head 😭 The conversations between Felix and Oliver just felt so casual though, especially since they're planning the murders of multiple people. It was as though they were discussing the weather or something.

The dialogue did feel a little long-winded at times, but it's not too bad. It definitely served a purpose, but sometimes it felt a lot more telling than showing. I did like the fact that we were witnessing the crime in real time, from start to finish. It wasn't like usual crime novels I've read where the crimes already happened and the detectives are following trails. I thought that was cool and something I've never read before. Although it did take away a bit of the mystery, it's probably what I liked most about the book.

The ending was so abrupt, and I feel like I need the next book ASAP. I can't wait to see what happens next and how he eventually gets caught.

Thank you so much to the author and lovebookstours for sending me a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review :))

*3.5 rounded up*
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761 reviews34 followers
July 14, 2024
Surely, ‘The Croaking Raven’ doth bellow through the crime fiction genre with an amazing standard of writing filled with dark humour and characters that ripple with ‘foul and most unnatural murder’. I am a big fan of Guy Hale’s work and this lived up to his reputation and had me enthralled from the first chapter, right to the end! I’m guessing that this is going to be a trilogy and I can’t wait to pick up book two especially as things were left unresolved at the end.

Stratford in the 1970’s is the heart of Shakespearean culture and DC Toby Marlowe couldn’t be more excited for this first day in Stratford CID. He is teamed up with DS Fred Williams who fulfils the characteristics of a boor and brash man of the era. His suspects ‘fall’ down the stairs and a causal bribe is not out of the question. Toby seems to be the exact opposite but soon starts to adapt to Fred’s style of policing and they end up making a formidable team. Especially, when the bodies of Shakespearean actors start turning up!

I’m not really a fan of knowing who the bad guy is from the start of a book but the dual POVs do work in this instance. It's an intellectual battle between him and Toby, one shot through with Shakespeare and revenge. If you are a fan of the bard this is the book for you as it is peppered with references and a particular focus on Hamlet. However, it is presented in such a way that is it perfectly accessible to a reader who knows nothing about the plays as all relevant points are explained by the author and how they relate to this story. I can't say I warmed to the bad guy and his constant repetition of telling us how he was wrong started to grate a little but this was contrasted with the Toby/Fred duo as they lept off the page with their nuanced and developed characters. Fred turns out to be a good mentor and there is hidden depths of intelligence and emotions!

I do love Guy’s writing as it is packed full of dark and sometimes uncomfortable humour and this was no different. There were so many subtle nods to the life and controversies of Shakespeare as well as the overarching themes so be ready to do a lot of googling! I knew of Marlowe but I didn't know about Bacon. Also, I was reading Susie Dent’s book at the same time as this one and his sister is also seen as a potential alternative scribe! It's these in-jokes and references that help give this an air of authenticity

Let me know if you pick this one up!

4.5 stars
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131 reviews9 followers
July 15, 2024
(4.5)
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Guy Hale has swapped from strictly on the side of the murderer, to focussing on the detective with this mysterious read. DC Toby Marlowe gets his dream job in Shakespeare's birthplace, Stratford upon-Avon. Paired with no nonsense DS Fred Williams, assigned to show him the ropes, they find themselves in the thick of a Shakespearean killing spree.

This was an extremely easy read, and I loved being back amongst the writing style of Guy Hale. Whilst the style is familiar and comfortable for me after reading "The Comeback Trail" trilogy, the difference in storytelling and perspective adds even more brilliance. His comedy is once again throughout this book, which means though sometimes gruesome, it's never hard or heavy to read.

I loved the setting, as personally it's close to home and there are many mentions of places I know. This is just a little comforting personally, and even though set in the 70s I can still clearly see in my mind what scenes look like.

Throughout this book,Hale touches on important era based prejudice surrounding a mixed race character, and this was handled really well. It fits into the story and brings forward some of the many issues people may have faced, especially in the acting industry.

The storyline is interesting and flows throughout, I particularly enjoyed the cat and mouse perspective, where the reader is aware of who the murderer is from the beginning, but is given both perspectives of the murderer and detective. This just kept me on my toes a little and kept it interesting to read.

I would say there was a little too much repetition in terms of certain conversations, it just felt like some of the same things were being said, this didn't ruin anything for me but just grew a little irritating towards the end.

I loved both Fred and Toby, they make a great duo and I enjoyed learning more about them as the book went on. Although this does end in a cliff hanger, I think it's safe to say there will most definitely (hopefully) be another, to finish this story. Beyond this storyline, id love to see Toby and Fred solve other mysteries too.
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