Your Dad's Perfect

by Billiejo Priestley

"You were going to be my father-in-law." This is messed up.

Gripping my chin, he kisses me. "And now, I'm your plaything, someone you call daddy and get pleasure from. No one will know. Stop thinking about others, or should I stop?" he asks.

Ruby, finds her fiance cheating on her, he mocks her and tells her he used her to fool is father into giving him his inheritance early. Ruby's friends suggest she makes a s*x list, which she does, and one night, she is forced to go to her ex-fiance's fathers place to get some of her items she had left there.

Only, Alaric, her ex-fiances father has no idea they have split up, and is genuinely shocked when he sees the listed that Ruby created, and one moment of madness, turns into a secret affair between them.

248 pages, Kindle Edition

Published May 31, 2024

About the author

Indie author of Hot Fiction. Billiejo Priestley was born in 1987 in Leeds, she currently still lives in Leeds, UK and is a mum.

She focuses primarily on writing and publishing work than other career aspects. Billiejo writes books that are often taboo, dark and forbidden romance varieties.

Subjects that many steer away from through fear of others views. Her books are not for the faint of heart. Most feature aspects of BDSM, Polyamory, and often life issues, including mental health, addiction and abuse.

She writes things that can be seen as triggers, but her books also give lessons, teach people the signs of bad relationships. Reading is something that should broaden our horizons and open our minds.

Reading was never intended to easy, straightforward and reflect our own lives. Reading was intended to teach us things. Show us an insight into others lives, even if fictional, so when the day comes, we meet someone like the characters, we can relate. This is why many of Billiejo’s book features taboo subjects.

Reviews

[Alicia Z · Rating 3 out of 5]

Enjoyed but was repetitive throughout. I liked the storyline but was frequently distracted by the poor editing that had you rereading lines to get the right comprehension of what is trying to be expressed.

Overall a good, spicy, easy read.

[Tepuffe · Rating 2 out of 5]

I really liked this story. But I would’ve have liked if the MMC would have been a friend or the boss instead of the father to the ex. I felt morally wrong and betrayal to the son and ex. Even though what he did was wrong I still think as a father you shouldn’t betray your son and sleep with his ex-fiancé.

Something that I also didn’t like was how the FMC never could make a decision or know what she wanted / felt. It was really annoying.

I didn’t feel like it went anywhere. It had its ups and downs but it felt it was stuck on their commitment issues and not making sense or making any decisions

[Shahna · Rating 1 out of 5]

im sorry, but no

the verb tense changes mid sentence
the dialogue is awkward and unnatural, its hard to read
this needed just one read through by literally anyone
there are so many easily fixable mistakes
this had potential, just edit it

im also pretty sure all these 5star reviews are fake
the accounts seem a bit sus

'sorted'
everything is always being sorted = annoying

'on the side' is not a phrase. on the side of what? what is a 'side'?

[Ayeshah · Rating 3 out of 5]

good and bad

Good short read.. some grammar errors. I just don’t like the way the whole book flows nicely into the next chapter until the end… the last chapter is like 2 pages and feels like a lot of chapters were cut out and the last chapter was pasted in just for the sake of ending the book and not having to write anything else.

[Maria · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great Quick read

It has everything from romance, taboo, spicy,drama disfunctional families and the age gap. I think i saw it so much thru social mefia that decided to read it and did not disapoint recomend it 100% love it to the end im goint to get the next book thank you for the amazing read🥰.

[Jackie Vaughan · Rating 4 out of 5]

The book was a really good read. However, the only part that was not enjoyable was the amount of grammatical and spelling errors at times had me having to re-read lines but outside of that once she got used to it was absolutely fantastic.

[Halley Herman · Rating 2 out of 5]

just my opinion

This book was okay to me. Very rushed at the end and need more editing as words are missing or misspelled. I’m not into a you d lady calling the man Daddy/Sir and him calling her baby girl. Idk weirds me out. Over glad it was a HEA

[Rachel · Rating 5 out of 5]

Found by chance

I really enjoyed it. Quick paced, it doesn't drag through chapters of filler. It's a sweet bdsm type drama without being too much.

[Bianca Blair · Rating 4 out of 5]

Decent storyline

Wasn't the best but not the worst. I enjoyed the storyline, little repetitive the verbiage was a little weird in a lot of places but got the gist.

[Annika · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wonderfuö

[Stephanie Schofield · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good short story but the grammar mistakes are annoying. Definitely wish i didn’t pay for the book

[Donna ˚ʚ♡ɞ˚ · Rating 2 out of 5]

Look the story was ok. But it could have ended earlier than it did and be done with it.
Editing was not the best. I read as I saw it pop up on my fb feed lol

[Terri Norris · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good book

This book was awesome. I could not put it down. I'm so glad there was a happy ending, there for a minute didn't think there was going to be. 😁

[Nicole Y. · Rating 5 out of 5]

Very thrilling and exciting to read

[Michelle Carpenter · Rating 2 out of 5]

The plot line is pretty good but I can't forget the grammatical errors within the kindle version along with the unrecognisable change from one scene to another.

[Rosalie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Awesome book

Great book lots of romance love the characters. Will read other books by the author. Very sexy scenes. Loved reading it

[Jessica oliveira · Rating 5 out of 5]

It was a very dirty guilty pleasure and a quick read in between waiting for other books to come in.

[Karen Terzonie · Rating 4 out of 5]

a lot of typos

Really great book, hard to follow along with parts as there is lot of typos and a lot of words missing

[Hafswa Komuhendo]

I am actually not seeing what to read, where is the novel?

[Tasia · Rating 2 out of 5]

Ugh

I really wanted to like this story, but there really wasn't much substance to the people and the writing was eh.

[Sara Roberts · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fantastic easy read

Couldn't put the book down and read it in a day, easy to read and follow, good story with some surprises along the way

[Sian Thomas · Rating 5 out of 5]

Love this book, it’s only short book

[Mikayla Mcdonald · Rating 2 out of 5]

I typically love stories like this but the formatting, grammar, and some transitions between events were not at all edited properly. That alone made it hard to read