2 stars
In this very brief episode in the life of Uche - a Nigerian hitman - we are guided through his misadventures in the City of Gold (Johannesburg). After escaping Sao Paulo, Uche finds himself in Jozi where his day-job as a hired killer leads him to run-ins with loan sharks, organised Chinese crime syndicates in Bruma, and the general chaos of life in Yeoville. After a drug-deal gone wrong, Uche flees once again to Cape Town to find peace. While he is temporarily able to achieve this once he meets Kanya - a beautiful, wise young woman who he quickly falls for, the utopia is only fleeting as his life slowly begins to fall into disarray once again.
While the subject matter tackled in this novella is captivating and eye-opening, the story is lacking in focus, and proper character exploration. Uche is a man on the run, unable to settle because of his choice (arguable perhaps) to pursue a life of crime. We see, in him, the quest to settle down and lead a normal life but the underworld of the Nigerian Mafia seems to keep pulling him back whenever he attempts to. Aside from this, the reader is not offered anything deeper as far as understanding Uche's motives. This, to a strong degree, sterilises the story. This insufficient character development also makes the story appear rather rushed and incomplete.
Reading this as a written account of crime syndicates in South Africa will probably increase one's satisfaction with the book. As a novella, due to the superficial way in which the author handles the presentation of characters - including the MP - it falls drastically short of being the truly captivating short read it could be had the author spent more time on it.