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The Luminocity Seed #1
Grieving Gold
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In the light-drenched world of Luminocity, there are two types of power granted by the gods: the power to find and the power to lose.
Laxerion is adept at finding lies, a skill that grants him a unique advantage as he blends into high society, leading heists to steal from the rich. Although Lax is used to being a target, he doesn’t anticipate reconnecting with his estranged father and inheriting a failing family business drowning in debt. If he doesn’t find a way to pay back the crime lord they owe a fortune to, he may be the next to lose his life.
Meanwhile, war is brewing on the horizon, a war that even a city blessed by the gods may be unable to avoid. As five fates intertwine, the currents of destiny inundate the city, leviathans stir amid the roots of a primordial ocean, and monstrosities inhabit human skins.
Desperate, Lax conspires to lead the greatest heist of all—journeying underground to find a forbidden treasure. But eldritch beasts buried in the darkness are awakening once again, and long-lost secrets emerge from the depths of a subterranean abyss. Will they survive?
This brand-new epic fantasy, full of strange worlds, dark twists, and ancient Aztec inspiration, is perfect for fans of Brandon Sanderson, Fonda Lee, Patrick Rothfuss, and George R. R. Martin.
In the light-drenched world of Luminocity, there are two types of power granted by the gods: the power to find and the power to lose.
Laxerion is adept at finding lies, a skill that grants him a unique advantage as he blends into high society, leading heists to steal from the rich. Although Lax is used to being a target, he doesn’t anticipate reconnecting with his estranged father and inheriting a failing family business drowning in debt. If he doesn’t find a way to pay back the crime lord they owe a fortune to, he may be the next to lose his life.
Meanwhile, war is brewing on the horizon, a war that even a city blessed by the gods may be unable to avoid. As five fates intertwine, the currents of destiny inundate the city, leviathans stir amid the roots of a primordial ocean, and monstrosities inhabit human skins.
Desperate, Lax conspires to lead the greatest heist of all—journeying underground to find a forbidden treasure. But eldritch beasts buried in the darkness are awakening once again, and long-lost secrets emerge from the depths of a subterranean abyss. Will they survive?
This brand-new epic fantasy, full of strange worlds, dark twists, and ancient Aztec inspiration, is perfect for fans of Brandon Sanderson, Fonda Lee, Patrick Rothfuss, and George R. R. Martin.
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February 22, 2024
Hold on to your hats- this was terrific! This is and feels like the beginning of an epic new fantasy and I am already so impatient for the rest. There really is an enormous cast and each character is fascinating- I spent most of the book wondering how they would all fit together. The world is complex and detailed- how the author managed to avoid information dumps- and he did- is incredible. The world has a South American flavour to it. There wasn’t a boring character among them. The magic system has elements of Sanderson but is unique and compelling. This was a real treat! Many thanks to Netgalley for an arc of this book.
February 8, 2025
This book has promise, but the author’s overripe prose (way too many adjectives and adverbs) gets in the way. His main characters are typically good while the rest of the world is filled with either bad people, one-dimensional props to be killed by the good people, and lots of monsters and creatures that go bump in the night (only to be slaughtered by the good people). The good characters leave a long trail of blood and death behind as they butcher their way through page after page of battles and wars and life-or-death struggles with bad creatures, both man and beast. (An aside about his monsters: the author appears to be an arachnophobe.) The main characters (Val, Lax, Ponlu, and Aiana among others) possess certain powers, including an interesting definition of lies, that are triggered by spilling their own blood. Blood. Lots of blood in this book. Every other page filled with purple-prose descriptions of warring adversaries. The parade of violent deaths and buckets of blood has the feeling of a soulless video game. The author, Daniel McDaniel, has great promise if he can reign in his overblown narrative style and never-ending bloated metaphors. When the reader is not being pummeled with yet another bloody confrontation, his skill at character development is quite good. Perhaps toning down the gore would not be a good marketing gambit, but it might help the author gain credibility as a good writer. Grieving Gold (Luminocity) is a fun read for young adults who like wham-bang video games.
January 27, 2024
Thank you to NetGalley and Daniel McDaniel/Makk for providing a free ARC in exchange for a review!
Really enjoyed this book! Reminded me of a mix of Hailey Turner's Infernal War Saga and of Brandon Sanderson's Warbreaker novel. The author said he was heavily influenced by Sanderson, and I definitely see it in the unique magic system and multiple POVs.
This story takes place in a post (double post?) apocalyptic world. There is war brewing between the main city, Luminocity, and Texocan, a neighboring country. There are revolving POVs that show us different aspects of the city. Generally, Luminocity seems to be the sort of setting that is only good for certain characters. There's an obvious wealth gap between many of the citizens, as well as an imbalance of resources. I wouldn't say that this is grimdark by any means, but it's tonally not quite YA either. More new adult or adult.
Laxerion is a disgraced noble's son who has turned to a life of crime. Through him, we get to see more of the criminal underground. Val is a general of Luminocity's army. Ilumi is an up-and-coming scientist. Aiana is an underground (literally) huntress who is struggling to find her way. Finally, Dawb is a street urchin bent on revenge.
I think the characters were all very distinct from each other. With multiple POVs, it can be very easy for the different voices to start blending together. I often have trouble with multiple POV because of this- I'll be reading a chapter thinking it's a certain character, and then suddenly realize it's a whole other character. I did not run into this issue a single time!
The lore and magic system explanation is not all dumped onto the reader at once. There's a trickle of information throughout the story- and again, the character POVs are kept true to the respective characters. We never are given info from a character that is something they shouldn't reasonably know.
** Possible improvements **
It seems that some other reviewers have issues with the changing POVs, initially getting into the book, and keeping up with the plot / terminology. The beginning does have a "double prologue." Based on the rest of the book, I think one of these prologues could either be deleted or moved to a different point in the book as an interlude. Two prologues meant to add context to the events of the rest of the story have their uses, but is rather intimidating to have back-to-back at the beginning of a high fantasy book.
This is quite a lengthy book as well, which I don't mind at all. Usually with books of this length and genre, I see some authors break the book up into parts. This is just a stylistic suggestion, though. Another possible change is to add the sun cycle at the beginning of each chapter. There are three suns in this world- a red sun, a blue sun, and a yellow sun. They're often referenced throughout the story. Obviously light and dark also play a huge role in the story as well. So, it may help the reader to keep track of where the characters are at in time, especially their different POVs in relation to each other.
I'm torn between adding either the sun cycle at the chapter's beginning, or the main chapter character's name. Either would be good! I'm just not sure which would be best.
My final suggestion is admittedly nitpicky- occasionally the dialogue can come across as stilted and out-of-place. After highlighting many examples and considering why this may be, I noticed that it is due to lack of contractions in some of the dialogue. Again, this is VERY occasional. It's more often during Ilumi's chapters.
**Conclusion**
Overall, I was incredibly impressed with this novel. I always am interested in self-published and indie authors' books. I can tell that a ton of work and effort went into this. Didn't catch any spelling errors either. This is one of the best fantasy books I think I have read! Very excited to see where the rest of this series goes.
Really enjoyed this book! Reminded me of a mix of Hailey Turner's Infernal War Saga and of Brandon Sanderson's Warbreaker novel. The author said he was heavily influenced by Sanderson, and I definitely see it in the unique magic system and multiple POVs.
This story takes place in a post (double post?) apocalyptic world. There is war brewing between the main city, Luminocity, and Texocan, a neighboring country. There are revolving POVs that show us different aspects of the city. Generally, Luminocity seems to be the sort of setting that is only good for certain characters. There's an obvious wealth gap between many of the citizens, as well as an imbalance of resources. I wouldn't say that this is grimdark by any means, but it's tonally not quite YA either. More new adult or adult.
Laxerion is a disgraced noble's son who has turned to a life of crime. Through him, we get to see more of the criminal underground. Val is a general of Luminocity's army. Ilumi is an up-and-coming scientist. Aiana is an underground (literally) huntress who is struggling to find her way. Finally, Dawb is a street urchin bent on revenge.
I think the characters were all very distinct from each other. With multiple POVs, it can be very easy for the different voices to start blending together. I often have trouble with multiple POV because of this- I'll be reading a chapter thinking it's a certain character, and then suddenly realize it's a whole other character. I did not run into this issue a single time!
The lore and magic system explanation is not all dumped onto the reader at once. There's a trickle of information throughout the story- and again, the character POVs are kept true to the respective characters. We never are given info from a character that is something they shouldn't reasonably know.
** Possible improvements **
It seems that some other reviewers have issues with the changing POVs, initially getting into the book, and keeping up with the plot / terminology. The beginning does have a "double prologue." Based on the rest of the book, I think one of these prologues could either be deleted or moved to a different point in the book as an interlude. Two prologues meant to add context to the events of the rest of the story have their uses, but is rather intimidating to have back-to-back at the beginning of a high fantasy book.
This is quite a lengthy book as well, which I don't mind at all. Usually with books of this length and genre, I see some authors break the book up into parts. This is just a stylistic suggestion, though. Another possible change is to add the sun cycle at the beginning of each chapter. There are three suns in this world- a red sun, a blue sun, and a yellow sun. They're often referenced throughout the story. Obviously light and dark also play a huge role in the story as well. So, it may help the reader to keep track of where the characters are at in time, especially their different POVs in relation to each other.
I'm torn between adding either the sun cycle at the chapter's beginning, or the main chapter character's name. Either would be good! I'm just not sure which would be best.
My final suggestion is admittedly nitpicky- occasionally the dialogue can come across as stilted and out-of-place. After highlighting many examples and considering why this may be, I noticed that it is due to lack of contractions in some of the dialogue. Again, this is VERY occasional. It's more often during Ilumi's chapters.
**Conclusion**
Overall, I was incredibly impressed with this novel. I always am interested in self-published and indie authors' books. I can tell that a ton of work and effort went into this. Didn't catch any spelling errors either. This is one of the best fantasy books I think I have read! Very excited to see where the rest of this series goes.
February 1, 2024
Thank you NetGalley for providing an advanced readers copy in exchange for my honest review!
This was such an entertaining read and I can’t wait for the other books to come out I will be getting them immediately. Daniel Mcdainel did such an amazing job for this being his epic fantasy debut book and first book in English!
I don’t want to leave any spoilers I feel this book is best to go in blind but this story started off a little confusing with the first two chapters relating to different things and I felt like it never really got explained but I’m hoping the second books goes off of it a little more. There was multiple povs and each character had their own story and situation, some of them did end up connecting which was so fun and exciting. I’ve grown attached to most the characters storylines and always got excited when it switched, there were some random people thrown in at the end that confused me but I hope it has more meaning in the next book. The setting of this book was immersive and unique I like the concept of the light gods and it felt like a new and refreshing world, the world building was impressive and like nothing I’ve read before. The magic system was also the most unique I’ve ever read with the light/blood magic and being able to find there abilities in it. I will say it was a little slower pace of a book but it was a fun adventure regardless and I am so sad it ended on a cliffhanger I can not wait for the rest of this series. There were some horror elements which I devoured, my two favorite genres in one book. There was also great sci-fi aspects of it as well this book really had it all and was written so well I’ll be stalking his website for the next book.
This was such an entertaining read and I can’t wait for the other books to come out I will be getting them immediately. Daniel Mcdainel did such an amazing job for this being his epic fantasy debut book and first book in English!
I don’t want to leave any spoilers I feel this book is best to go in blind but this story started off a little confusing with the first two chapters relating to different things and I felt like it never really got explained but I’m hoping the second books goes off of it a little more. There was multiple povs and each character had their own story and situation, some of them did end up connecting which was so fun and exciting. I’ve grown attached to most the characters storylines and always got excited when it switched, there were some random people thrown in at the end that confused me but I hope it has more meaning in the next book. The setting of this book was immersive and unique I like the concept of the light gods and it felt like a new and refreshing world, the world building was impressive and like nothing I’ve read before. The magic system was also the most unique I’ve ever read with the light/blood magic and being able to find there abilities in it. I will say it was a little slower pace of a book but it was a fun adventure regardless and I am so sad it ended on a cliffhanger I can not wait for the rest of this series. There were some horror elements which I devoured, my two favorite genres in one book. There was also great sci-fi aspects of it as well this book really had it all and was written so well I’ll be stalking his website for the next book.
December 18, 2023
This is a thrilling and captivating novel that takes readers on a journey through the city of Luminocity, a place where the light of three sun gods shines down upon the decaying ruins of an ancient civilization. But beneath the surface, there is darkness and danger lurking, as a dark god seeks revenge and holds a grudge against the city and its inhabitants.
The story follows the intertwined fates of five characters as they navigate through the treacherous world of Luminocity. Laxerion Tama, a disowned noble son and leader of a heist group, suddenly finds his life turned upside down when his family and a past enemy come back into the picture. His brother, Val-Gustus Tama, a general and favored son, must take on the responsibility of protecting the city as war looms on the horizon. A young scientist, Ilumi, is faced with moral dilemmas as she discovers new and controversial technologies. Aiana, a huntress, struggles with her past and inner demons. And Dawb, a young boy overcome with grief, searches for monsters in the city's darkest corners.
The author has created a rich and vivid world in Luminocity, with detailed descriptions of the decaying city and its inhabitants. The characters are complex and well-developed, each with their own unique struggles and motivations. The plot is fast-paced and full of twists and turns, keeping readers on the edge of their seats until the very end.
One of the most intriguing aspects of this book is the exploration of morality and the consequences of advanced technology. The characters are faced with difficult choices and must grapple with the consequences of their actions. This adds depth to the story and makes it more than just a typical fantasy novel.
Overall, this is a must read for fans of fantasy and science fiction. The story is engaging and captivating from start to finish!
The story follows the intertwined fates of five characters as they navigate through the treacherous world of Luminocity. Laxerion Tama, a disowned noble son and leader of a heist group, suddenly finds his life turned upside down when his family and a past enemy come back into the picture. His brother, Val-Gustus Tama, a general and favored son, must take on the responsibility of protecting the city as war looms on the horizon. A young scientist, Ilumi, is faced with moral dilemmas as she discovers new and controversial technologies. Aiana, a huntress, struggles with her past and inner demons. And Dawb, a young boy overcome with grief, searches for monsters in the city's darkest corners.
The author has created a rich and vivid world in Luminocity, with detailed descriptions of the decaying city and its inhabitants. The characters are complex and well-developed, each with their own unique struggles and motivations. The plot is fast-paced and full of twists and turns, keeping readers on the edge of their seats until the very end.
One of the most intriguing aspects of this book is the exploration of morality and the consequences of advanced technology. The characters are faced with difficult choices and must grapple with the consequences of their actions. This adds depth to the story and makes it more than just a typical fantasy novel.
Overall, this is a must read for fans of fantasy and science fiction. The story is engaging and captivating from start to finish!
January 23, 2024
Wow! I really don’t know where to begin with this review. Author Makk Daniel, writing as Daniel McDaniel, has unleashed a smashing debut with “Grieving Gold.” The first in a series, this book introduces the reader to a sci-fi fantasy smash-up that is novel in its approach.
It is always a treat when a new magic system makes the scene. I won’t spoil it for you, but here Daniel has created a new system that will get your attention. The laws governing this system are internally consistent and not so much explained as experienced. The same goes for the science part of the fiction. Daniel’s imagination takes us along for a ride worth the fare.
No story worth telling lacks compelling characters and “Grieving Gold” has them. Each is unique and interesting with interwoven story lines that don’t all cross. The plot covers political intrigue, nefarious characters with an unclear agenda, elements of mystery, and plenty of adventure.
Five stars for Daniel’s debut. I can’t wait to get my hands on book two, “Crippling Crimson.” My sincere thanks to the author and publisher Endless Equinox via NetGalley for this ARC. All opinions are mine alone and offered freely.
#LuminocityGrievingGold #MakkDaniel #fivestars #kindlesallthewaydown #Netgalley #debutnovel
It is always a treat when a new magic system makes the scene. I won’t spoil it for you, but here Daniel has created a new system that will get your attention. The laws governing this system are internally consistent and not so much explained as experienced. The same goes for the science part of the fiction. Daniel’s imagination takes us along for a ride worth the fare.
No story worth telling lacks compelling characters and “Grieving Gold” has them. Each is unique and interesting with interwoven story lines that don’t all cross. The plot covers political intrigue, nefarious characters with an unclear agenda, elements of mystery, and plenty of adventure.
Five stars for Daniel’s debut. I can’t wait to get my hands on book two, “Crippling Crimson.” My sincere thanks to the author and publisher Endless Equinox via NetGalley for this ARC. All opinions are mine alone and offered freely.
#LuminocityGrievingGold #MakkDaniel #fivestars #kindlesallthewaydown #Netgalley #debutnovel
December 30, 2023
Thank you to Netgalley and Endless Equinox for the arc
Overall I enjoyed Grieving Gold. The book features interesting and distinctive POVs that at some points in the story intertwine. However, I do wish there were just a bit more interconnected elements within the book. One of the strongest points of the novel was the world-building, the author flawlessly crafted a vivid image of Luminocity within the readers mind. I must admit that sometimes the story does get a bit info-dumpy but this is to be expected considering it is the first book in a series. One of the weakest points in this book is the magic system, after 450 pages I still could not sit here and tell you the ends and outs of it, this is because the book fails to at least in my opinion appropriately elaborate on stuff like the origin of magic, or why people have such a wide variety of powers. Besides this I still had a good time with the book, and I think that with further additions to series most of my questions will be answered. I recommend this book to you if you are a fan of horror or fantasy, because in this book the genres mix beautifully.
Overall I enjoyed Grieving Gold. The book features interesting and distinctive POVs that at some points in the story intertwine. However, I do wish there were just a bit more interconnected elements within the book. One of the strongest points of the novel was the world-building, the author flawlessly crafted a vivid image of Luminocity within the readers mind. I must admit that sometimes the story does get a bit info-dumpy but this is to be expected considering it is the first book in a series. One of the weakest points in this book is the magic system, after 450 pages I still could not sit here and tell you the ends and outs of it, this is because the book fails to at least in my opinion appropriately elaborate on stuff like the origin of magic, or why people have such a wide variety of powers. Besides this I still had a good time with the book, and I think that with further additions to series most of my questions will be answered. I recommend this book to you if you are a fan of horror or fantasy, because in this book the genres mix beautifully.
January 30, 2024
Thank you to NetGalley and the author for the arc of this book!
I really, really wanted to like this book and I’m so sorry to have to give it such a rating. I ended up having to DNF at about 45%. I kept coming up with reasons to not read it and it was time to let go. So keep in mind, that my review is swayed based on the fact that I technically did not finish the book.
There were far too many POVs to pay attention to. Too many new characters with stories that took too long to align. The concept has so much potential! A futuristic sci fi story about South American culture sounds fantastic. But I found it too hard to connect to any of the characters, and too difficult to understand the magic system. Regular words were italicized but there was next to no explanation about how that fit into the magic system. That ended up bringing me out of the story too regularly, because I kept thinking I missed something.
As I mentioned above, I do think this is a story worth telling! I just think it needs some more work on formatting and flow. There was good humour and interesting aspects, but too many disconnections to make it as good as it could be. I never want to discourage anyone’s artistic endeavours, so I do apologize to anyone who reads this and liked the book. There is potential, but it just wasn’t for me sadly.
I really, really wanted to like this book and I’m so sorry to have to give it such a rating. I ended up having to DNF at about 45%. I kept coming up with reasons to not read it and it was time to let go. So keep in mind, that my review is swayed based on the fact that I technically did not finish the book.
There were far too many POVs to pay attention to. Too many new characters with stories that took too long to align. The concept has so much potential! A futuristic sci fi story about South American culture sounds fantastic. But I found it too hard to connect to any of the characters, and too difficult to understand the magic system. Regular words were italicized but there was next to no explanation about how that fit into the magic system. That ended up bringing me out of the story too regularly, because I kept thinking I missed something.
As I mentioned above, I do think this is a story worth telling! I just think it needs some more work on formatting and flow. There was good humour and interesting aspects, but too many disconnections to make it as good as it could be. I never want to discourage anyone’s artistic endeavours, so I do apologize to anyone who reads this and liked the book. There is potential, but it just wasn’t for me sadly.
January 13, 2024
Thank you to the publishers for providing an ARC of this book through NetGalley.
2024 52 Book Challenge - 31) Includes A Personal Phobia
DNF at 20%.
This is going to be a fantastic read for some people, and I am incredibly jealous of them. Unfortunately for me, the book was very hard to get into. There were so many people and so much going on that it feels like a jumbled mess, and I was struggling to maintain an understanding of anything.
2024 52 Book Challenge - 31) Includes A Personal Phobia
DNF at 20%.
This is going to be a fantastic read for some people, and I am incredibly jealous of them. Unfortunately for me, the book was very hard to get into. There were so many people and so much going on that it feels like a jumbled mess, and I was struggling to maintain an understanding of anything.
December 31, 2023
This book just jettisoned to the top of my favorite books list. I’m obsessed! Thank you NetGalley for providing an advanced reader’s copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Grieving Gold follows the lives of five separate yet interconnected characters living in a world ruled by three suns. Some have the ability to find special abilities in the light, while others can lose less desirable attributes in the dark. These findings and losings help our characters navigate a world rife with political mind games, nefarious street gangs, and things in the depths that have far too many legs. As each character strives for their own personal goals, a greater mystery unravels. What lurks deep below the city? And what does it want?
For those wondering if this is the book for them, it is reminiscent of Game of Thrones, The Lies of Locke Lamora, Legend of Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom, and The Road to Eldorado. All while still maintaining a fresh and unique identity.
Each character comes alive with depth and complexity.
The story shifts between the viewpoints of five characters much in the same style as Game of Thrones. This method of writing keeps the story moving at an exciting pace as readers discover how the lives of the characters are connected.
With influences drawn from South American culture, this dark fantasy does not read like the traditional medieval European story that most people have come to expect in fantasy. There are no knights in shining armor, no wizards in purple cloaks, no fairies with weird love triangles. Instead there are golden ziggurats, tropical verdant jungles, llamas and jaguars, and descriptions of delicious meals that center around corn.
This series is going to be big. It breaks out of the stale tropes that have infiltrated the genre in recent years, giving readers an unparalleled experience. For those looking for a fast-paced, fresh fantasy story, Grieving Gold leaves little room for competition. With vivid characters and a propulsive plot, readers will be dying to read the next book in the series.
5/5 stars. Read it!
Reader’s Advisory Notes:
This book is light on romance which makes it a comfortable read for Ace (Asexual) individuals.
There are some scary scenes, but nothing too distressing.
This book contains a lot of spiders. Arachnophobia individuals beware!
Adult fiction, but also suitable for Young Adult readers who love horror and fantasy.
Grieving Gold follows the lives of five separate yet interconnected characters living in a world ruled by three suns. Some have the ability to find special abilities in the light, while others can lose less desirable attributes in the dark. These findings and losings help our characters navigate a world rife with political mind games, nefarious street gangs, and things in the depths that have far too many legs. As each character strives for their own personal goals, a greater mystery unravels. What lurks deep below the city? And what does it want?
For those wondering if this is the book for them, it is reminiscent of Game of Thrones, The Lies of Locke Lamora, Legend of Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom, and The Road to Eldorado. All while still maintaining a fresh and unique identity.
Each character comes alive with depth and complexity.
The story shifts between the viewpoints of five characters much in the same style as Game of Thrones. This method of writing keeps the story moving at an exciting pace as readers discover how the lives of the characters are connected.
With influences drawn from South American culture, this dark fantasy does not read like the traditional medieval European story that most people have come to expect in fantasy. There are no knights in shining armor, no wizards in purple cloaks, no fairies with weird love triangles. Instead there are golden ziggurats, tropical verdant jungles, llamas and jaguars, and descriptions of delicious meals that center around corn.
This series is going to be big. It breaks out of the stale tropes that have infiltrated the genre in recent years, giving readers an unparalleled experience. For those looking for a fast-paced, fresh fantasy story, Grieving Gold leaves little room for competition. With vivid characters and a propulsive plot, readers will be dying to read the next book in the series.
5/5 stars. Read it!
Reader’s Advisory Notes:
This book is light on romance which makes it a comfortable read for Ace (Asexual) individuals.
There are some scary scenes, but nothing too distressing.
This book contains a lot of spiders. Arachnophobia individuals beware!
Adult fiction, but also suitable for Young Adult readers who love horror and fantasy.
August 11, 2024
4.5 stelle..
Questo romanzo è davvero originale e intelligente...
Su di un isola sorge una grande città, l'antica Lumi No Se, oggi Luminocity.. prendendo spunto dalle civiltà precolombiane, Daniel crea un originale commistione di antichità e modernità.. una civiltà antica che però si è sviluppata tecnologicamente in modo enorme, ha subito un misterioso cataclisma che l'ha fatta tornare indietro a livello civile e tecnologico di un bel po'... Quindi abbiamo rovine antiche, con ziggurat di pietra, altari sacrificali, e rovine moderne di enormi grattacieli in metallo e altri misteriosi manufatti.. la civiltà presente si basa su tradizioni antiche, ma ha comunque tecnologie moderne legate al sistema magico, con università e laboratori di ricerca.. un Worldbuilding ricco e davvero originale dal ricco sapore azteco, maya e inca..
Anche il sistema magico è davvero ben riuscito! L autore tributa il suo omaggio a Sanderson nelle note, e si vede.. nel cielo ci sono 4 soli/dèi, che fanno piovere luce letteralmente, tanto che la luce si comporta quasi come un liquido, che può essere raccolto, la pressione sfruttata tecnologicamente, o assorbita.. in più la connessione con i soli/dèi permette di accedere alla luce, e "trovare" cose nella luce.. Così come la connessione alla tenebra sottostante la città prendere di "perdere" cose nell oscurità.. si possono trovare forza, velocità, opportunità, bugie, ecc nella luce, e perdere peso, dubbi, paure, sostanza nell oscurità.. davvero geniale come via via questi aspetti vengono introdotti, impiegati e spiegati..
È un libro che non da molte risposte.. anzi, avvia le cose, introducendo molti concetti, personaggi, eventi strani e misteri.. ma molte delle spiegazioni arriveranno nei prossimi volumi..
La mezza stella per arrivare a 5 viene un po' a mancare qui per me, perché poteva essere spiegato qualcosa in più.. alla fine si resta con tanta attesa e dubbio.. e dato che la storia è davvero di portata ampissima ed epica, ci sono stati un paio di momenti un po' morti per avviare le cose.. ma davvero poca roba, che non toglie nulla alla grande capacità creativa dell'autore.. sono convinto che nei prossimi volumi si arriverà a una pienezza maggiore..
I personaggi sono davvero tanti, all' inizio si può un po' faticare a seguirli tutti, perché sono 5 i principali più altri pov che ogni tanto arricchiscono la narrazione e la veduta d insieme e servono anche ad infittire i misteri..
Ma sono tutti costruiti bene con la loro voce personale e ben caratterizzata..
Ilumi, che viene dalle tribù della jungla, e che finisce a fare la ricercatrice all'università tra tecnologie e strane forme di luce..
Val il generale, che deve radunare consensi nel Consiglio per muovere guerra alla vicina città che sta minacciando Luminocity con la sue armi oscure e strane minacce..
Lax suo fratello, che dall' essere ladro si ritrova ad ereditare l impresa fallimentare di famiglia.. ristabilirne le sorti lo porterà lontano, tra avventure e misteri..
Dawb ragazzino di strada che si troverà suo malgrado ad indagare strani efferati omicidi che coinvolgono la sfera religiosa della città..
E infine Aiana che lotta per diventare cacciatrice nell oscurità del sottosuolo, tra ragni giganti e altri mostri oscuri..
Questi e molti altri personaggi si sfiorano, si intrecciano, si incontrano e si scontrano tra le vie di Luminocity, in un arazzo di mistero e oscurità, intrighi e complotti, omicidi e rapine, mostri e sangue, combattimenti e meraviglie, che da il via a tantissime domande.. chi è il Duca? Dove portano le manovre criptiche e i sotterfugi in atto? Quali complotti e controcomplotti avranno ragione? Non resta che aspettare il secondo volume.. incredibile che un opera così matura, originale, ben scritta e congegnata sia un debutto!!!!
Questo romanzo è davvero originale e intelligente...
Su di un isola sorge una grande città, l'antica Lumi No Se, oggi Luminocity.. prendendo spunto dalle civiltà precolombiane, Daniel crea un originale commistione di antichità e modernità.. una civiltà antica che però si è sviluppata tecnologicamente in modo enorme, ha subito un misterioso cataclisma che l'ha fatta tornare indietro a livello civile e tecnologico di un bel po'... Quindi abbiamo rovine antiche, con ziggurat di pietra, altari sacrificali, e rovine moderne di enormi grattacieli in metallo e altri misteriosi manufatti.. la civiltà presente si basa su tradizioni antiche, ma ha comunque tecnologie moderne legate al sistema magico, con università e laboratori di ricerca.. un Worldbuilding ricco e davvero originale dal ricco sapore azteco, maya e inca..
Anche il sistema magico è davvero ben riuscito! L autore tributa il suo omaggio a Sanderson nelle note, e si vede.. nel cielo ci sono 4 soli/dèi, che fanno piovere luce letteralmente, tanto che la luce si comporta quasi come un liquido, che può essere raccolto, la pressione sfruttata tecnologicamente, o assorbita.. in più la connessione con i soli/dèi permette di accedere alla luce, e "trovare" cose nella luce.. Così come la connessione alla tenebra sottostante la città prendere di "perdere" cose nell oscurità.. si possono trovare forza, velocità, opportunità, bugie, ecc nella luce, e perdere peso, dubbi, paure, sostanza nell oscurità.. davvero geniale come via via questi aspetti vengono introdotti, impiegati e spiegati..
È un libro che non da molte risposte.. anzi, avvia le cose, introducendo molti concetti, personaggi, eventi strani e misteri.. ma molte delle spiegazioni arriveranno nei prossimi volumi..
La mezza stella per arrivare a 5 viene un po' a mancare qui per me, perché poteva essere spiegato qualcosa in più.. alla fine si resta con tanta attesa e dubbio.. e dato che la storia è davvero di portata ampissima ed epica, ci sono stati un paio di momenti un po' morti per avviare le cose.. ma davvero poca roba, che non toglie nulla alla grande capacità creativa dell'autore.. sono convinto che nei prossimi volumi si arriverà a una pienezza maggiore..
I personaggi sono davvero tanti, all' inizio si può un po' faticare a seguirli tutti, perché sono 5 i principali più altri pov che ogni tanto arricchiscono la narrazione e la veduta d insieme e servono anche ad infittire i misteri..
Ma sono tutti costruiti bene con la loro voce personale e ben caratterizzata..
Ilumi, che viene dalle tribù della jungla, e che finisce a fare la ricercatrice all'università tra tecnologie e strane forme di luce..
Val il generale, che deve radunare consensi nel Consiglio per muovere guerra alla vicina città che sta minacciando Luminocity con la sue armi oscure e strane minacce..
Lax suo fratello, che dall' essere ladro si ritrova ad ereditare l impresa fallimentare di famiglia.. ristabilirne le sorti lo porterà lontano, tra avventure e misteri..
Dawb ragazzino di strada che si troverà suo malgrado ad indagare strani efferati omicidi che coinvolgono la sfera religiosa della città..
E infine Aiana che lotta per diventare cacciatrice nell oscurità del sottosuolo, tra ragni giganti e altri mostri oscuri..
Questi e molti altri personaggi si sfiorano, si intrecciano, si incontrano e si scontrano tra le vie di Luminocity, in un arazzo di mistero e oscurità, intrighi e complotti, omicidi e rapine, mostri e sangue, combattimenti e meraviglie, che da il via a tantissime domande.. chi è il Duca? Dove portano le manovre criptiche e i sotterfugi in atto? Quali complotti e controcomplotti avranno ragione? Non resta che aspettare il secondo volume.. incredibile che un opera così matura, originale, ben scritta e congegnata sia un debutto!!!!
March 4, 2024
DNF at about 25%
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher, as well as the author, for an eARC of this book in exchange for an honest review!
I wanted to like this one. I really did. The premise was so interesting and it sounded exactly like a book I would devour. Unfortunately, it was not.
Normally I enjoy multiple POVs, but for some reason with this one I just couldn't get into it. In the 25% I read there were 5 of them. Seemed to be a new character each chapter when I don't think there was really a need for it. It didn't give me time to connect and it took me out of the story since you had to start a brand new one ever chapter. Just felt like I got no where in the story.
The world itself is very unique and interesting. Maybe the way it is written is for some (maybe most) people, but for me I just couldn't get into it.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher, as well as the author, for an eARC of this book in exchange for an honest review!
I wanted to like this one. I really did. The premise was so interesting and it sounded exactly like a book I would devour. Unfortunately, it was not.
Normally I enjoy multiple POVs, but for some reason with this one I just couldn't get into it. In the 25% I read there were 5 of them. Seemed to be a new character each chapter when I don't think there was really a need for it. It didn't give me time to connect and it took me out of the story since you had to start a brand new one ever chapter. Just felt like I got no where in the story.
The world itself is very unique and interesting. Maybe the way it is written is for some (maybe most) people, but for me I just couldn't get into it.
April 25, 2024
Arc provided by NetGalley
This is one of the books that gripped me and pulled me in right from the start and would not let go
The setting of the South America-esque world feels incredibly lush and vivid, the blend of old style with new technology in a post-apocalypse society. The way the suns work is just incredibly fascinating, especially with the magic system tied into it. I cannot say I fully understand it, but that complexity and importance of light is what made it real.
Character-wise I enjoyed Lax and Ilumi the most, but all of the characters felt very distinct and intriguing, easy to like and follow, and when the individual stories crossed or connected, it was always a joy to see. I am not so sold o the side characters tho
The story itself... I like the individual arcs of the characters, but I am not sure of the overarching story. It remains a bit too undefined? Could be just because this is the first book and setup, although I do feel like it set up a lot, without giving enough answers
Where it lacks for me is the ending, which felt... not rushed, but in certain parts not as well set up. And again, lacking answers. The other thing which stood out to me a bit negatively was the writing style, because there were parts that showed that this is a debut. Also the ways the chapters ended. In the beginning i liked the dramatic cuts, but since they kept repeating they lost their power and slid into a bit of... drama for the sake of drama. BUT I can easily look this over. This is excellent work for a debut, and as someone whose first language is not english, and too learned to write in english, I do have to appreciate the dedication. Writing is hard, and writing in your second language is even harder (i did not expect the author to be hungarian, that came as a massive surprise, hello neighbor)
This is one of the books that gripped me and pulled me in right from the start and would not let go
The setting of the South America-esque world feels incredibly lush and vivid, the blend of old style with new technology in a post-apocalypse society. The way the suns work is just incredibly fascinating, especially with the magic system tied into it. I cannot say I fully understand it, but that complexity and importance of light is what made it real.
Character-wise I enjoyed Lax and Ilumi the most, but all of the characters felt very distinct and intriguing, easy to like and follow, and when the individual stories crossed or connected, it was always a joy to see. I am not so sold o the side characters tho
The story itself... I like the individual arcs of the characters, but I am not sure of the overarching story. It remains a bit too undefined? Could be just because this is the first book and setup, although I do feel like it set up a lot, without giving enough answers
Where it lacks for me is the ending, which felt... not rushed, but in certain parts not as well set up. And again, lacking answers. The other thing which stood out to me a bit negatively was the writing style, because there were parts that showed that this is a debut. Also the ways the chapters ended. In the beginning i liked the dramatic cuts, but since they kept repeating they lost their power and slid into a bit of... drama for the sake of drama. BUT I can easily look this over. This is excellent work for a debut, and as someone whose first language is not english, and too learned to write in english, I do have to appreciate the dedication. Writing is hard, and writing in your second language is even harder (i did not expect the author to be hungarian, that came as a massive surprise, hello neighbor)
March 1, 2024
Grieving Gold is the author's debut novel and the first in the planned epic fantasy series of Luminocity.
There is a lot going on here with the complexity of the world building, unique magic system, introduction of so many interesting characters and five main points of view.
With so many POVs and having to learn about the world as well as be introduced to the plot it inevitably means a slow start but stay with it because you will be rewarded with one of the most intriguing and interesting fantasy novels that you're likely to come across.
The city of Lumo No Se is built on the ruins of an old civilization with forgotten technology.
Three suns give their light over the city and are thought to be gods.
For certain individuals, sacrificing a little blood to the light can trigger powers. Abilities can be found or lost to the darkness.
Cut yourself and find strength or speed, order or lies, chance or doubt, weight or any number of other attributes. It really gives the novel an incredibly different feel to other fantasies.
The main characters are all so different and as the stories progress and we find out more about them the pace picks up. I was very invested in what was happening with them and it was harsh for each storyline to end on cliffhangers waiting for the second book in the series.
The two brothers of House Tama are at the centre of events. Laxerion, the wayward son, pulling heists and being in debt to a very scary individual. Finding his lies in the light while his brother Val, a general tasked with preparing for war with nearby Texocan, needs strength and order.
There's Dawb, a street urchin who encounters great darkness and terror, Ilumi who travels to the city for scientific research which has a tinge of steampunk about it & she also has secrets and then from the tribes in the darkness is the huntress Aiana.
Monsters dwell in the dark, both in the city shadows and underground. The body stealing being is truly scary as are the spiders! And the voided eyes!
Thank you to Netgalley for the chance to read the ebook. This series is off to a great start.
There is a lot going on here with the complexity of the world building, unique magic system, introduction of so many interesting characters and five main points of view.
With so many POVs and having to learn about the world as well as be introduced to the plot it inevitably means a slow start but stay with it because you will be rewarded with one of the most intriguing and interesting fantasy novels that you're likely to come across.
The city of Lumo No Se is built on the ruins of an old civilization with forgotten technology.
Three suns give their light over the city and are thought to be gods.
For certain individuals, sacrificing a little blood to the light can trigger powers. Abilities can be found or lost to the darkness.
Cut yourself and find strength or speed, order or lies, chance or doubt, weight or any number of other attributes. It really gives the novel an incredibly different feel to other fantasies.
The main characters are all so different and as the stories progress and we find out more about them the pace picks up. I was very invested in what was happening with them and it was harsh for each storyline to end on cliffhangers waiting for the second book in the series.
The two brothers of House Tama are at the centre of events. Laxerion, the wayward son, pulling heists and being in debt to a very scary individual. Finding his lies in the light while his brother Val, a general tasked with preparing for war with nearby Texocan, needs strength and order.
There's Dawb, a street urchin who encounters great darkness and terror, Ilumi who travels to the city for scientific research which has a tinge of steampunk about it & she also has secrets and then from the tribes in the darkness is the huntress Aiana.
Monsters dwell in the dark, both in the city shadows and underground. The body stealing being is truly scary as are the spiders! And the voided eyes!
Thank you to Netgalley for the chance to read the ebook. This series is off to a great start.
February 2, 2024
Thank you to NetGalley and Endless Equinox for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
The author has created a deep and rich fantasy world with fully thought out characters who are all interesting in their own unique ways. It is a mixture of fantasy and horror, done very well in my opinion.
To be honest, I was kind of on the fence about whether I would like it or not but with how fast I read it, it's very fair to say I enjoyed it a lot. It was a major disappointment when I finished it.
The writing was good, it often flowed together nicely however there were some information dumps that had my eyes sliding shut a little bit. But I can overlook them as this is the first book in the series, the author truly did set the stage for the world he has created and I found his descriptions painted a vivid image in my head of his world.
Out of the many characters I was mostly drawn to Aiana and her story, I found it fascinating. Dawb stole my heart, I’ve enjoyed all of his chapters. Ilumi caught me by surprise, there's a little twist to her story I wasn't expecting so it only made me more excited for her story. The Duke is just dripping in mystery, I absolutely loved reading and learning more about him. Lax and Val, both great characters with good stories yet I probably enjoyed the other perspectives more than theirs. The side characters are great too, some honourable mentions, Ponlu, Lamara, Igi, Dr. Blaze, and Vatra.
While the magic system is intriguing, don't ask me to explain it because I don't fully understand how it works. It seems very unique though, I like it.
I will most definitely be reading the next book in this series to see where the story takes these characters.
The author has created a deep and rich fantasy world with fully thought out characters who are all interesting in their own unique ways. It is a mixture of fantasy and horror, done very well in my opinion.
To be honest, I was kind of on the fence about whether I would like it or not but with how fast I read it, it's very fair to say I enjoyed it a lot. It was a major disappointment when I finished it.
The writing was good, it often flowed together nicely however there were some information dumps that had my eyes sliding shut a little bit. But I can overlook them as this is the first book in the series, the author truly did set the stage for the world he has created and I found his descriptions painted a vivid image in my head of his world.
Out of the many characters I was mostly drawn to Aiana and her story, I found it fascinating. Dawb stole my heart, I’ve enjoyed all of his chapters. Ilumi caught me by surprise, there's a little twist to her story I wasn't expecting so it only made me more excited for her story. The Duke is just dripping in mystery, I absolutely loved reading and learning more about him. Lax and Val, both great characters with good stories yet I probably enjoyed the other perspectives more than theirs. The side characters are great too, some honourable mentions, Ponlu, Lamara, Igi, Dr. Blaze, and Vatra.
While the magic system is intriguing, don't ask me to explain it because I don't fully understand how it works. It seems very unique though, I like it.
I will most definitely be reading the next book in this series to see where the story takes these characters.
February 23, 2024
This one is going to be hard to review. I enjoyed reading this book so much, so I would definitely recommend it for fantasy and horror fans, but at the same time there was something missing.
Grieving Gold started very confusing with a lot of different characters and POVs that seemed completely disconnected. However, this was not a problem at all since the individual stories kept me glued to the pages and made me care for the characters, and their inspirations and struggles, individually. Most of the characters and their plot lines are very well developed, and we get introduced to new characters all through the book, all of them somehow relevant for the plot.
The different characters paths eventually intertwine in an amazing way, and somehow it all makes sense. Well, except some lose ends, but I assume that these will be relevant for rest of the series.
There are a lot of information dumps through the book, which makes sense since this is the first book of a series, but somehow, I felt like some important information was just not there. While the author paints a very vivid image of Luminosity, the magic system felt overly complex. There was no origin or explanation why there is such a wide variety of powers. It was hard to keep up and know what to expect as it is never properly explained.
Overall, I really enjoyed this reading experience, even though the magic system felt flat for me.
Thank you very much Endless Equinox and NetGallery for providing me this ARC.
Grieving Gold started very confusing with a lot of different characters and POVs that seemed completely disconnected. However, this was not a problem at all since the individual stories kept me glued to the pages and made me care for the characters, and their inspirations and struggles, individually. Most of the characters and their plot lines are very well developed, and we get introduced to new characters all through the book, all of them somehow relevant for the plot.
The different characters paths eventually intertwine in an amazing way, and somehow it all makes sense. Well, except some lose ends, but I assume that these will be relevant for rest of the series.
There are a lot of information dumps through the book, which makes sense since this is the first book of a series, but somehow, I felt like some important information was just not there. While the author paints a very vivid image of Luminosity, the magic system felt overly complex. There was no origin or explanation why there is such a wide variety of powers. It was hard to keep up and know what to expect as it is never properly explained.
Overall, I really enjoyed this reading experience, even though the magic system felt flat for me.
Thank you very much Endless Equinox and NetGallery for providing me this ARC.
March 9, 2024
4.5*
I haven't read something this unique in such a long time and I'm so excited to continue this series!
Normally with as many POV's as this book has it can be so hit or miss for me. The author has done such an amazing job of making each character distinct so there was never a point when it felt like they were all morphing together. it's rare that I enjoy every POV when there is this many but I wasn't bored by a single storyline.
The plot and the world this is set in was so intriguing and unique that I just loved seeing the story unfold. There was a few points when I was slightly confused by the abilities and the focus on light, but in all, there was no major info dumping which was nice. There's nothing that takes me out of a story more than masses of info dumping!
I will 100% be continuing with this series and can't wait to see where the story goes!
Thank you to Netgalley, the publisher and the author for providing me with an E-ARC of this book
I haven't read something this unique in such a long time and I'm so excited to continue this series!
Normally with as many POV's as this book has it can be so hit or miss for me. The author has done such an amazing job of making each character distinct so there was never a point when it felt like they were all morphing together. it's rare that I enjoy every POV when there is this many but I wasn't bored by a single storyline.
The plot and the world this is set in was so intriguing and unique that I just loved seeing the story unfold. There was a few points when I was slightly confused by the abilities and the focus on light, but in all, there was no major info dumping which was nice. There's nothing that takes me out of a story more than masses of info dumping!
I will 100% be continuing with this series and can't wait to see where the story goes!
Thank you to Netgalley, the publisher and the author for providing me with an E-ARC of this book
January 31, 2024
I found this book difficult to get into as multiple characters with diverse stories switch from very early on. The double prologue was also more confusing than helpful. The various alien concepts, strings, multiple suns, etc., are something you gain understanding of as you read through.
The above paragraph is not negative, just reflective. I found the book very clever indeed. Clever story line, clever character development. It'd be interesting to know where the author got his inspiration from (e.g. Rowling in Edinburgh, Tolkein in Namibia/RSA). I found myself reading it quickly as it was very immersive and a bit of a page turner!
Thanks to NetGalley for the advance copy. Thoroughly good read.
The above paragraph is not negative, just reflective. I found the book very clever indeed. Clever story line, clever character development. It'd be interesting to know where the author got his inspiration from (e.g. Rowling in Edinburgh, Tolkein in Namibia/RSA). I found myself reading it quickly as it was very immersive and a bit of a page turner!
Thanks to NetGalley for the advance copy. Thoroughly good read.
January 5, 2024
Thanks to NetGalley for allowing me to read this. I enjoyed the heavy world building, which I found extremely creative and wonderful. It took me a few chapters to really get into this. I do agree with other reviews that the origin of magic/powers could have been explained in more detail. However, the multiple points of view and individual characters ended up getting me hooked. I was interested to find out how all the characters connected. I especially like Lax and Ponlu. I enjoyed this very much and am looking forward to the second book.
January 29, 2024
This one was so hard to review, there is a lot that I really enjoyed. In particular I thought the characters were great and I wanted and still want to follow them and their stories. Many times when there are multiple povs a reader might feel a bit of disappointment when switching to another character but I never felt that with these characters. They each had their complexities and their backgrounds and storylines were so different. It was also interesting to see them intercross with each other during the course of the story. The world with its Mezoamerican influence and magic system incorporating light was not something I had seen before. It’s a really ambitious story and I do want to read the next book to see how it and these characters will progress.
Sounds great right? The problem is the scope might be a big too big. We start with so many questions that are never truly answered and in the end are left on a cliffhanger with no resolution. I understand that it’s the first book in a series but at least some resolution would feel give the reader some closure; it almost feels like the middle book in a trilogy. The other big issue for me was the pacing. We leave off at times in moments where something exciting or shocking happens and switch povs for it to pick up chapters and chapters later. Sometimes it picks off right where we left off and other times we see some time has passed. It could be incredibly frustrating at times. Then there was the introduction of completely new characters as late as a quarter into the novel. I actually feel this would make a great serialized show, graphic novel or animated series with the way it’s written.
That being said, overall I was intrigued and while it could be frustrating at times I did get attached to the characters and want to continue their story. I would recommend this to readers who are looking for something with intriguing characters and unique world building and have a bit of patience.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher. I received an advance review copy, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Sounds great right? The problem is the scope might be a big too big. We start with so many questions that are never truly answered and in the end are left on a cliffhanger with no resolution. I understand that it’s the first book in a series but at least some resolution would feel give the reader some closure; it almost feels like the middle book in a trilogy. The other big issue for me was the pacing. We leave off at times in moments where something exciting or shocking happens and switch povs for it to pick up chapters and chapters later. Sometimes it picks off right where we left off and other times we see some time has passed. It could be incredibly frustrating at times. Then there was the introduction of completely new characters as late as a quarter into the novel. I actually feel this would make a great serialized show, graphic novel or animated series with the way it’s written.
That being said, overall I was intrigued and while it could be frustrating at times I did get attached to the characters and want to continue their story. I would recommend this to readers who are looking for something with intriguing characters and unique world building and have a bit of patience.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher. I received an advance review copy, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
February 14, 2024
Find your strength in the light, or lose your chains in the darkness.
Luminocity is a city bathed in the light of three godly suns. It's on the brink of war, while something dark and eldritch is bubbling beneath its surface.
Five main characters have to navigate the city's complexities: Lax, a disowned nobleman who now makes a living through daring heists; his brother, Val, an officer who is desperate to please his dying father and protect the city from imminent invasion; Dawb, a street urchin who witness unspeakable horrors happening to his friends; Ilumi, a young and eager scientist with a secret mission; and Aiana, an underground warrior who wants to prove herself. In addition, there is the mysterious Duke, a dark and sinister force, who makes his way through the city.
My biggest issue with this book is trying to follow the multiple POVs. Aside from the five main characters, we're also given brief POVs from minor characters who experience something that may contribute to the overall plot. That made it hard to follow and at times I struggled to continue. The world-building is very complex and I had to keep my wits about me. That doesn't make the book bad – in fact, I found the world-building quite interesting, especially the South American twists.
My favourite character was Lax. I'm a sucker for heists, particularly in fantasies and I enjoyed his prowess. Ilumi is another great character – her secret or ultimate goal is never really explained to the reader and I'm intrigued.
The author has said he's influenced by Brandon Sanderson and that is quite clear. I'm quite sure I can see how he draws from books like 'Mistborn'. I think this book is worthwhile if you persevere but it is quite long. It's the first in what I believe is a series. I'm interested to find out what happens to the characters next, and I hope the next book comes quickly because with a storyline this intricate and with so many strands, I'll probably forget most of it before book two and I don't think I'm willing to read such a long book again! A valiant first effort.
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January 26, 2024I received this ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Unfortunately I did not make it even a quarter into this book. I was struggling to connect or even care about the characters. The constant switching of POVs in every chapter made it difficult to keep up. There was a lot of world building going on, which I usually love, but felt here it was just too much information to process at once. found myself skimming more than actually reading. Noticed myself skimming more than actually reading, so I won’t be finishing this one. I do believe others will enjoy and love this though!
Unfortunately I did not make it even a quarter into this book. I was struggling to connect or even care about the characters. The constant switching of POVs in every chapter made it difficult to keep up. There was a lot of world building going on, which I usually love, but felt here it was just too much information to process at once. found myself skimming more than actually reading. Noticed myself skimming more than actually reading, so I won’t be finishing this one. I do believe others will enjoy and love this though!
January 8, 2025
An epic fantasy
The story is a masterful blend of epic fantasy and raw emotional depth. With a richly woven world and dynamic characters, it explores themes of loss, resilience, and the enduring power of hope. The story’s gripping pace and evocative prose keep readers immersed from the first page to the last. A must-read for fans of epic adventures that strike a profound emotional chord.
The story is a masterful blend of epic fantasy and raw emotional depth. With a richly woven world and dynamic characters, it explores themes of loss, resilience, and the enduring power of hope. The story’s gripping pace and evocative prose keep readers immersed from the first page to the last. A must-read for fans of epic adventures that strike a profound emotional chord.
January 8, 2024
1.5 Stars.
So sadly I did not finish this book, I left it at about 20%.
I did really try to keep it going, but I could not find myself intrigued enough in the story to keep up with the heavy world building of Luminocity.
The beginning of this book felt very rushed, I did struggle to keep up with it and retain the information given, but for my taste there just wasn’t enough information given for how high fantasy it is. I would have loved a more vivid picture of this world that McDaniel is building, but it felt like I was drifting away and constantly grasping at threads.
This was a very interesting book, I’ve never seen anything like it, extra .5 for creativity!
Thank you NetGalley and Endless Equinox for the ARC.
So sadly I did not finish this book, I left it at about 20%.
I did really try to keep it going, but I could not find myself intrigued enough in the story to keep up with the heavy world building of Luminocity.
The beginning of this book felt very rushed, I did struggle to keep up with it and retain the information given, but for my taste there just wasn’t enough information given for how high fantasy it is. I would have loved a more vivid picture of this world that McDaniel is building, but it felt like I was drifting away and constantly grasping at threads.
This was a very interesting book, I’ve never seen anything like it, extra .5 for creativity!
Thank you NetGalley and Endless Equinox for the ARC.
May 18, 2025
This unique, immersive world populated with fascinating characters really grabbed my attention. It manages to juggle an impressively large cast without leaving me lost or confused about which character is which. And it left me intrigued for where the story goes next.
November 11, 2024
This is a wonderfully plotted and well detailed epic fantasy and I think the author did a great job connecting the stories of the different characters and setting the scenes. Gripping and suspenseful!
October 20, 2024
I wish I could give this book more than 5 stars
The entire first chapter is a hook that draws you in making you want to read more. You’ll need to know what happens next. This book would be great for audio too because McDaniel’s writing is so descriptive, he shows you what is happening.
The entire first chapter is a hook that draws you in making you want to read more. You’ll need to know what happens next. This book would be great for audio too because McDaniel’s writing is so descriptive, he shows you what is happening.
August 6, 2024
Grieving Gold is an epic fantasy full of fantastical elements full of gods and magic. As a mexican-american, Grieving Gold is particularly significant to me. I enjoyed the Aztec mythology in a fantasy setting because it is something you never see anywhere. McDaniel prose is brilliant.
I loved Laxerion and his wily ways, his use of his magic always astounded me. With witty banter and a heist it made this book memorable.
I would recommend this book for anyone who enjoys an interesting magic system and supernatural elements.
Thank you netgalley for the ARC.
I loved Laxerion and his wily ways, his use of his magic always astounded me. With witty banter and a heist it made this book memorable.
I would recommend this book for anyone who enjoys an interesting magic system and supernatural elements.
Thank you netgalley for the ARC.
June 20, 2024
A Journey Through Loss and Magic
This epic fantasy adventure takes readers on an emotional and magical journey. Following the protagonist through a world filled with wonder and peril, the story masterfully weaves themes of loss and healing. Richly developed characters and a captivating plot draw readers into a realm where grief is transformed into strength. With its blend of heartache and heroism, this book is a must-read for fans of fantasy seeking a tale that resonates deeply with the human experience.
This epic fantasy adventure takes readers on an emotional and magical journey. Following the protagonist through a world filled with wonder and peril, the story masterfully weaves themes of loss and healing. Richly developed characters and a captivating plot draw readers into a realm where grief is transformed into strength. With its blend of heartache and heroism, this book is a must-read for fans of fantasy seeking a tale that resonates deeply with the human experience.
January 9, 2024
Sadly I just could not get into this and had to give up.
I feel for some people, this is going to be a really great fantasy book, as it has a lot going for it that some will love.
But for me... I found myself not paying attention and started skimming, which is never a good sign. Too many main characters and points of view for my liking. And a lot of the time I was getting lost in the descriptions of every item in the world and losing out completely on the story and characters.
So sadly not for me, but I really do think it'll be perfect for some.
I feel for some people, this is going to be a really great fantasy book, as it has a lot going for it that some will love.
But for me... I found myself not paying attention and started skimming, which is never a good sign. Too many main characters and points of view for my liking. And a lot of the time I was getting lost in the descriptions of every item in the world and losing out completely on the story and characters.
So sadly not for me, but I really do think it'll be perfect for some.
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