The Penalty: A Bi-Awakening MMMM Hockey Harem Short

by Jimmy Robbie

3 hockey forwards. 1 curious team assistant. When these four hot-as-hell hockey players take to the ice; limits are pushed, penalties are given, and first-time goals are scored.

Hoping to learn a thing or two, college hockey player, Rand, takes a job as the assistant for a major league hockey team. Having recently broken up with his high school sweetheart, Rand could have any girl he wants on campus but when he meets the captain of the team, he experiences a bi-awakening he can’t ignore, even though he isn’t into guys.

Team captain, Tommy, can’t deny his ice-melting attraction to the college hockey star player, but if he’s going explore things with the new team assistant, he’s got two boyfriends he needs to consider. Is it even worth it? Is Rand even into guys? Tommy doesn’t know the answers, but he’s got ways of finding out.

The Penalty is a MMMM seriously spicy hockey harem short with enough heat to melt an entire rink of ice.

Genres: M M Romance, Sports Romance, Queer, M M M, LGBT, Gay

53 pages, Kindle Edition

Published May 15, 2024

Reviews

[Ash’s reading corner ✨🌈 · Rating 3 out of 5]

⭐⭐⭐
🌶️🌶️🌶️

Tropes:
✨MMMM
✨Hockey players
✨Bi-awakening
✨Insta lust


My review:

Ok so, this review is going to be for all 3 novellas. Each is about 50 pages long so I can't say much without spoiling things.

This is basically just smut. There's no plot, no character-growth or depth, and nothing realistic. Just 4 guys banging each other for the entirety of the novellas. Out of 50 pages, there are at least 30-40 pages of nothing but sex.

If you're looking for some short reads to reach your reading goal or you just want to turn your brain off and read about 4 hockey players banging, I guess you'll enjoy this.

I'm pretty sure this quote from the 1st novella sums up the whole thing perfectly

“You’d be our boyfriend,” Danny coolly replies, as if my having three boyfriends is a totally normal thing. “You can do whatever you want, with whoever you want, whenever you want. As long as it’s with one of us.” ​“Or,” Tommy adds. “You can do us all together.”

[Leo · Rating 3 out of 5]

3☆

ᔑᑭᏆᑕᗴ: 🔥🔥🔥
しᗩᑌᏀᕼᔑ: 🤣🤣🤣
Ꭲᗴᗩᖇᔑ: 🥲
ᗰᑕᔑ: Rand, Tommy, Danny, "Nicky"(Solo mencionado)
ᑭᝪᐯ: 1st,
Ꭲᖇᝪᑭᗴᔑ: MMMM, HOCKEY ROMANCE.

[M's ☆~HEA~☆ · Rating 4 out of 5]

“Exactly how does this work?” ​“You’d be our boyfriend,” Danny coolly replies, as if me having three boyfriends is a totally normal thing. “You can do whatever you want, with whoever you want, whenever you want. As long as it’s with one of us.” ​“Or,” Tommy adds. “You can do us all together.”

😅Men are so simple. I didn't know what to expect when I picked up this new release today but now I'm invested. For anyone who avoids RH because of the FMC's and the lengthy 600 pages of drama this little series may be for you. Definitely steamy but paced well; not an all out smut fest. In book 1 we meet Rand, Danny, & Tommy and they don't go beyond oral. We'll have to wait until book 2 to meet the fourth guy Nicky.

[Leanne]

No. Just no. I’m not reading another word. It’s that bad. This is coming from a person that doesn’t have high standards when it comes to smutty reads. If you don’t care about the writing and are only looking for smut, no matter how outlandish, this might work for you.

[J. Taylor · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5

I don't feel like I know a single character. Maybe in further volumes but I'm not drawn in.

[thekatz_meoww · Rating 3 out of 5]

good intro

It’s a good introductory book to Rand and the some of the guys with some steamy scenes in and out of the locker room

[LL · Rating 5 out of 5]

Holly fuck,