So, hockey college romance with Devin as the hero when?
(This review will contain spoilers.)
I liked the concept for the story, but the execution was really lacking. It's not a bad book for a debut, but it's not good either. This book could've used better editing, to avoid repetitions and work on the descriptions (mainly of the characters' emotions and actions while interacting). I lost count of the amount of times the hero and heroine "locked" eyes with each other, in a multitude of different situations (some of them very awkward to picture, it didn't feel organic at all). Something else that didn't feel organic was the dialogue, especially between Arden and Henry. Dialogue is tricky, and the way the teens talked in this was okay enough, but when the hero and heroine interacted, they lacked flavor. I didn't feel like I was reading about two people with this deep connection, it felt like I was reading about two people who are nice and cordial to one another. Their banter wasn't rich in personality, it wasn't unexpected and specific to them, it simply was. Nothing they said ever surprised me (despite the fact that, apparently, Arden was constantly surprised by Henry's actions--I saw them from a mile away). This might also stem from the fact that Henry was very vanilla. Listen, I love cinnamon roll heroes, I do. They need to be more than that, though. The truth is, while Arden had an arc to go through, he didn't, really. Henry is at a point in his life where he is pretty okay. He is doing what he loves, and he's worked through his issues with his dad and sister. All that's left for him in this novel is to figure out what to do regarding his relationship to Arden and to decide (or not) to tell her about his involvement in her accident. So while Arden's forgiveness of him is important to his character, that's something that only happens at the very end and doesn't fundamentally change the character at all. So, essentially, Henry is a nice guy. That's all there is to it, but it shouldn't. It can't. He really needed more depth. Oh, and his backstory and struggles? Couldn't have been more obvious and boring.
Arden, on the other hand, does have more layers to her. Especially since she is an idiot who slept with a guy who already had a girlfriend and also used a perfectly nice guy (who had feelings for her, btw) to get back on our lovely hero. So, not exactly the best of people, I'd say. We're supposed to sympathize with her, however, thanks to the horrible things she's been through. I don't, though. There's no excuse for what she did, none whatsoever. But! She isn't all bad. I like that she fights for Henry (although she should have a bit more dignity, tbh), and she is truly a strong person. I understand her struggle, too, and she read like a real 19-year-old girl, which I appreciated. Also, once she gets together with Henry, they did feel like equals, instead of a weird dynamic where he is some type of protector for her.
That said, I didn't buy the actions of these characters for one second, however. I think this book needed some better plotting. Many of the things that happened felt contrived and unrealistic, mechanic. Henry seemed to be in the right place at the right time way too often for me to be able to suspend my disbelief, he was constantly walking back and forth between putting a distance between them or making advances, and for the love of all that is holy, it's absolutely ridiculous that he wouldn't wanna text Arden but would constantly pull her into empty classrooms in the middle of the school day to talk privatly. That's way worse and way more obvious than texting, dude. Also! Arden was going to graduate in a few months! Anyway, moving on. Point is, there were a lot of forced scenes in this story. Collins finding out at her bday party that her bf cheated on her with Arden (bc the guy very conviniently left his phone with the only person who wants revenge on our heroine, all this off-screen); Arden deciding to overhear Henry and Tara talking, so that she found everything out instead of being told and they could have their third act break-up; Arden coming back home right when Luke decides to go back and hurt Arden's mom. The characters simply did what the author needed them to. I also didn't enjoy how there's this established idea that Henry uses writing to work through his feelings, only so that we could get his backstory because his first book was a self-insert about him and his relationship with his dad, and then his second book is (surprise, surprise) about Arden's accident and Henry's envolvement in it--this so that Arden can process her feelings and decide to forgive him because, well, she forgave his character in the book, didn't she? Then there's the parallelism between what she hid from Collins and what Henry hid from her... While I know that every book is just a puzzle that the author put together, these pieces didn't fit seemlessly enough for me. I could see the author's thought process behind a lot of the decisions made here, I could see the strings being pulled behind the scenes, because the characters weren't real enough for me to believe that they chose to do all these things. Essentially, this book needed better plotting and sublety, so that every plot and character threads could be woven together in an organic way.
Whew. Okay. I've talked enough. Despite all my complaints, at least I was entertained. This got me through my final week of exams, and I'm thankful for this book for that reason.
Also, Devin is best boy.