DNF at 40%
I'm surprised I made it that far. Mainly because of a TSTL heroine right out of the box of cliches. The plot, the characterisation, etc. Awful! Not to mention the conflict between the H/h.
Right, with one day to cool off, I can now explain a little further why I DNF'ed this book.
Katherine Benton's father caused a DUI, killing our hero's, Edward Westover, brother and his wife, which sets Edward on a course of revenge. It becomes clear from the beginning that Kate's father is a waste of space, the evil man of this book. He's a gambling problem. So Edward buys all of his debts and finally ruins him at a card game. In the process, he also becomes the guardian of Benton's 20-year-old daughter Kate. All that's left is the family estate, which is entailed on her and it means everything to her. And that's how Kate and Edward meet.
If I have to sum up the weaknesses of this book, it would be inconsistencies, which ultimately lead to a TSTL heroine. The story and the characters are a mess.
This is how the first 3-4 chapters go:
- The estate is all but stripped bare by Benton's need for money to feed his gambling problem. Kate is shocked that her father would give his guardianship over to a stranger. Edward offers help right from the start. Considering how much Kate cares for the estate, the servants and the villagers, one would assume that Kate should be over the moon. No, she isn't. One page, she's all 'No, no, no, no, I'll never let any man dictate my life and how I run my estate', the next, however, she admits to herself that Edward's offer would be a great relief. This back and forth goes on, over and over.
- Edward...Why Edward takes such an interest in the improvement of the estate, apart from the insta-lust he feels for Kate, remained a mystery. At least to me. He isn't sure if Kate is in on some sort of scheme with her father to defraud him. He doesn't trust her one moment, but one look at her sweet, little face, and he's certain that cannot be so. Again, back and forth.
- Although, it is being made clear that her father never was a father to her, nor a husband to her mother - scratch that - he was never anything but a downright bastard, Kate clings to a sense of loyalty, which made no sense. As mentioned above, first he's a ruthless, selfish father, but - oh, no - he is also the only living relative left. This leads to some really, really stupid decisions from Kate.
- One moment, Kate is all stubborn and feisty, the next she melts away when Edward shares his war memories with her, and back to stubborn and feisty again.
This is how it goes, at least up until 40% of the book, where I finally gave up. The writing style was mediocre at best, the characterisation rubbish, the plot full of holes. Another example? Kate runs the estate since her mother's death. Her mother died when Kate was 12 (!). Really? Kate is some sort of village doctor. All villagers go to her when they have health problems. How and where she got to know so much about medical care, we don't know? Books or some other person who taught her? Why should I care, right? I am just the silly reader who has to accept it.
There was so much wrong with this book, that I didn't care about Kate and Edward anymore. Was there anything remotely romantic? I truly can't say, because everything else was such a mess.