“𝘓𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘢𝘵 𝘩𝘰𝘸 𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘮𝘺 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘣𝘪𝘨 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘵𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦, 𝘕𝘢��𝘮𝘪. 𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘦𝘳 𝘶𝘯𝘪𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘮 𝘥𝘰𝘦𝘴𝘯’𝘵 𝘥𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘮 𝘫𝘶𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘤𝘦.”
terrible book does not even BEGIN to describe the atrocity that this is 😭 i listened to the audiobook of this, and i remember cackling over how fucking unserious the entire thing is. i have actually found rina kents worst work ever
the plot itself was so dumb. it was the plot where the mmc has a bet that he wont be able to sleep with the fmc, and……… thats it. he sleeps with her. for the entire book 😕 until she finds our and breaks up with him
𝒏𝒂𝒐𝒎𝒊 𝒄𝒉𝒆𝒔𝒕𝒆𝒓
going into a rina kent book, i usually never expect anything from the mmcs, but i DO always somewhat like the fmcs that she writes. however, this is the first time where an fmc has been insuufferable to the point i could not stand it. this is the first page of her pov, mind you:
𝘖𝘳 𝘮𝘢𝘺𝘣𝘦 𝘐’𝘥 𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘳𝘦𝘤𝘪𝘢𝘵𝘦 𝘪𝘵 𝘣𝘦𝘵𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘪𝘧 𝘐 𝘥𝘪𝘥𝘯’𝘵 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘸𝘦𝘢𝘳 𝘵𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵, 𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘺 𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘳𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘢𝘭 𝘮𝘺 𝘣𝘦𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘪𝘯 𝘢𝘨𝘢𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘵 𝘮𝘺 𝘴𝘱𝘰𝘳𝘵𝘴 𝘣𝘳𝘢 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘐 𝘸𝘦𝘢𝘳 𝘪𝘯 𝘢 𝘧𝘳𝘶𝘪𝘵𝘭𝘦𝘴𝘴 𝘢𝘵𝘵𝘦𝘮𝘱𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘧𝘭𝘢𝘵𝘵𝘦𝘯 𝘮𝘺 𝘩𝘶𝘨𝘦 𝘣𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘵𝘴. ‘𝘏𝘶𝘨𝘦’ 𝘱𝘦𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘦𝘳 𝘤𝘢𝘱𝘵𝘢𝘪𝘯’𝘴 𝘸𝘰𝘳𝘥𝘴.
(as you can tell by the first quote, her big breasts is something that gets brought up quite frequently. its also worth noting that she is still skinny and just has these absolutely unreal proportions. its as if rina kent watched one of those animes that are written by men to constantly oversexualize women and thought that those girls are what the average japanese girl looks like)
speaking of, rina kent you should NEVER write diversity again, im begging. stick to your russians and white people, because the representation was horrible. naomis asian ethnicity was only brought up when it needed to be sexualized by the men around her
“𝘠𝘦𝘴!” 𝘑𝘰𝘴𝘩 𝘫𝘶𝘮𝘱𝘴 𝘶𝘱. “𝘔𝘺 𝘑𝘢𝘱𝘢𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘦 𝘱𝘰𝘳𝘯 𝘧𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘴𝘺 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘧𝘪𝘯𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘵𝘳𝘶𝘦.”
putting all that aside, she is one of the most pick me characters i have ever encountered 😭 she is constantly acting better than the other girls because they openly adore the football team even though she is a big creep about them as well
“𝘈𝘵 𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘵 𝘐’𝘮 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘥𝘪𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘺 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘩𝘢𝘭𝘧-𝘯𝘢𝘬𝘦𝘥 𝘧𝘰𝘰𝘵𝘣𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘺𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘤𝘢𝘳𝘳𝘺𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘤𝘰𝘢𝘤𝘩 𝘨𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘳𝘶𝘯𝘯𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘧𝘪𝘦𝘭𝘥. 𝘐 𝘮𝘦𝘢𝘯, 𝘺𝘦𝘴, 𝘐 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘸𝘢𝘵𝘤𝘩 𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘦 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘧𝘦𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯, 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘐’𝘥 𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘥𝘰 𝘪𝘵 𝘪𝘯 𝘴𝘦𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘵 𝘣𝘦𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘮𝘺 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘱𝘶𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘴𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘦𝘯 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘪𝘯 𝘢𝘯 𝘰𝘨𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨, 𝘣𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘨-𝘢𝘵𝘵𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯-𝘵𝘰- 𝘮𝘦 𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘰𝘧 𝘸𝘢𝘺, 𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘦𝘳𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳𝘴. 𝘐𝘧 𝘐 𝘥𝘰, 𝘪𝘵’𝘭𝘭 𝘴𝘦𝘦𝘮 𝘢𝘴 𝘪𝘧 𝘐’𝘮 𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘧𝘰𝘰𝘵𝘣𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘺𝘦𝘳𝘴, 𝘺𝘦𝘵 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘐 𝘤𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘪𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘨𝘭𝘪𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘯𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘰𝘧 𝘴𝘸𝘦𝘢𝘵 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘢𝘣𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘷𝘦𝘭𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳…𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘤𝘦𝘴.”
in general, shes a big weirdo about the male anatomy. lily calloway (a diagnosed sex addict) talks about sex and dicks less than naomi
𝘑𝘦𝘴𝘶𝘴. 𝘏𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘣𝘥𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘯 𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘴 𝘧𝘪𝘳𝘮 𝘢𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘨𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘨𝘢𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘵 𝘮𝘺 𝘣𝘢𝘤𝘬, 𝘰𝘯𝘭𝘺 𝘪𝘵’𝘴 𝘴𝘰𝘧𝘵 𝘦𝘯𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘭𝘦𝘦𝘱 𝘰𝘯. 𝘖𝘳 𝘳𝘶𝘣 𝘮𝘺 𝘧𝘢𝘤𝘦 𝘢𝘨𝘢𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘵 𝘪𝘵. 𝘖𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘺 𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘷𝘪𝘵𝘺 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘪𝘯𝘤𝘭𝘶𝘥𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘶𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘪𝘵. 𝘏𝘦 𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘴 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘱𝘢𝘭𝘮𝘴 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘨𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥 𝘰𝘯 𝘦𝘪𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘴𝘪𝘥𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘮𝘺 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘱𝘶𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘴 𝘶𝘱 𝘢 𝘭𝘪𝘵𝘵𝘭𝘦. 𝘏𝘪𝘴 𝘴𝘵𝘰𝘮𝘢𝘤𝘩, 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘴, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘶𝘮𝘮, 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯, 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘱𝘳𝘦𝘴𝘴𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘨𝘢𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘵 𝘮𝘦.
by the time i finished this book, i was so done with naomis holier-than-thou antics because i know damn well that any girl that says that they have a 𝘴𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘭 ‘𝘸𝘰𝘳𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘱 𝘢𝘵 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘭𝘵𝘢𝘳 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘭𝘦 𝘰𝘨𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘩𝘪𝘮’ 𝘱𝘩𝘢𝘴𝘦 when they first meet the mmc is not passing the bechdel test
𝒔𝒆𝒃𝒂𝒔𝒕𝒊𝒂𝒏 𝒘𝒆𝒂𝒗𝒆𝒓
im just going to say that they first time they did their little cnc thing, they had no prior conversation and he had no indication that she enjoyed what he did to her. and if i remember correctly, there was also no safe word 🤡
there is also nothing remotely dreamy about a man that says: “𝘞𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘥𝘰 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘬 𝘺𝘰𝘶’𝘳𝘦 𝘨𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘨, 𝘮𝘺 𝘧𝘪𝘭𝘵𝘩𝘺 𝘭𝘪𝘵𝘵𝘭𝘦 𝘴𝘭𝘶𝘵?”
theres so much quotes i want to add but i’ll leave off on this one:
“𝘋𝘰 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘮𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘦𝘢𝘳 𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘵𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘩𝘰𝘭𝘦 𝘢𝘴 𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘭, 𝘮𝘺 𝘥𝘪𝘳𝘵𝘺 𝘸𝘩𝘰𝘳𝘦? 𝘞𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘮𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘦𝘵𝘤𝘩 𝘪𝘵 𝘴𝘰 𝘐’𝘮 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘧𝘪𝘳𝘴𝘵 𝘰𝘯𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦?”
ps fuck you rina for making sebastian have an ARABIC tattoo my arab dad did not die for his language to be tarnished like that the fuck 😔
𝘏𝘦 𝘩𝘢𝘴 𝘵𝘸𝘰 𝘴𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘵𝘢𝘵𝘵𝘰𝘰𝘴—𝘵𝘸𝘰 𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘴𝘤𝘳𝘪𝘱𝘵 𝘢𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘵𝘰𝘱 𝘰𝘧 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘳𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘱𝘦𝘤𝘵𝘰𝘳𝘢𝘭 𝘮𝘶𝘴𝘤𝘭𝘦. 𝘖𝘯𝘦 𝘪𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘈𝘳𝘢𝘣𝘪𝘤 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘪𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘑𝘢𝘱𝘢𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘦.
pps i just want to add that the most unrealistic part of this book was that naomi was getting turned on by a dick pic…… no need to lie babe those things are gross 😔
“𝘏𝘪𝘴 𝘦𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵-𝘪𝘯𝘤𝘩 𝘤𝘰𝘤𝘬 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘤𝘵 𝘣𝘦𝘵𝘸𝘦𝘦𝘯 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘭𝘦𝘨𝘴. 𝘐𝘵’𝘴 𝘣𝘪𝘨 𝘸𝘩𝘦𝘯 𝘪𝘵’𝘴 𝘧𝘭𝘢𝘤𝘤𝘪𝘥, 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘪𝘵’𝘴 𝘩𝘶𝘨𝘦 𝘸𝘩𝘦𝘯 𝘩𝘢𝘳𝘥 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘺. 𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘷𝘦𝘪𝘯𝘴 𝘱𝘰𝘱 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘪𝘥𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘳𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘪𝘴 𝘱𝘶𝘳𝘱𝘭𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨, 𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘱𝘳𝘦𝘤𝘶𝘮. 𝘍𝘶𝘤𝘬. 𝘛𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘪𝘴 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘪𝘮𝘢𝘨𝘦 𝘐 𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘦𝘦 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘺 𝘴𝘦𝘹𝘶𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺-𝘧𝘳𝘶𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘵𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘮𝘪𝘯𝘥.”
ppps tsundere is the worst nickname of all time
“𝘐’𝘭𝘭 𝘥𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘮 𝘰𝘧 𝘮𝘺 𝘤𝘶𝘮 𝘰𝘯 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘧𝘢𝘤𝘦, 𝘛𝘴𝘶𝘯𝘥𝘦𝘳𝘦.”