Things Don't Break On Their Own by Sarah Easter Collins
I had really high hopes for this book, as I usually really enjoy thriller/mystery books centered around one night and was looking forward to seeing how the dinner party setting would play into the story. Although I did find this an overall enjoyable read, there were a few issues that I felt I couldn't overlook and led to me only rating this a somewhat average 3 out of 5 stars.
Firstly, I did really enjoy the characters and how they were portrayed. I loved getting to know Willa and Robyn especially, and felt immense joy at the inclusion of queer characters, which is not very common in thriller novels. I liked learning about their past and watching them grow from teenagers into the adult women we meet at the dinner party. However, I did find that some of the flashbacks which showed us past events were confusing and I found myself getting lost at certain parts wondering what was happening and why we'd suddenly switched to the past, or vice versa. The scenes set in the past sometimes comes across as long streams of memory/backstory/consciousness which is sometimes pertinent to the plot and sometimes just feels like random added detail. These scenes then abruptly switch back into showing us the scene of the dinner party, and it almost felt like two separate stories that someone was trying to mesh together but that didn't really fit.
Furthermore, we are told different parts of the story through different POV's (mainly Robyn and Willa, but also Claudette towards the end). This is usually something I really enjoy in thriller books as it offers a wider perspective on events and allows us to get an insight into each characters personal thoughts/feelings. The multi POV in this book, however, meant that we saw the dinner party conversations/events through multiple different perspectives and this led to certain scenes feeling repetitive. For example, the argument between Claudette and Jamie is shown to us through Willa's eyes, Robyn's eyes and Claudette's eyes, which means the conversation gets repeated multiple times with very little difference other than offering us the different character's reactions to these events. I think the multi POV worked very well in scenes set in the past, but did not work as well during the dinner party scenes. The multi POV would have been better utilised if the story was set over more than one evening, as this would have lessened the repetitive feel to the dinner party conversations.
I did really enjoy the authors almost lyrical writing. She is brilliant at descriptive writing and manages to paint a picture in your mind that is so vivid you feel like you are experiencing it with your own eyes. My favourite example of this is when the author describes Robyn's house in such a detailed way that I could almost imagine myself walking through the house alongside Willa. The author also does an amazing job at sensitively touching on issues such as domestic abuse and showing the awful effects this has on the victims, showing how the abuse Willa's family experienced has haunted them their whole life. This also gave the reminder, to me at least, that you never know what goes on behind closed doors, and I think that idea became more and more important to the plot as we went on. I also liked how the author explored complex human emotions (such as grief, love, guilt, hate and many more) and also explored human interaction/relationships in a really interesting way. I really liked the way Willa and Jamie's relationship was explored and picked apart by the author as she slowly revealed the issues and lies surrounding them. I felt terribly sorry for Willa during this point, and feel like the author did a great job at showing the subtle control, abuse and fear that both Willa's Dad and Jamie subjected her to. I also liked how Willa's relationship with her family was explored and how she, as the "golden child" held a lot of shame and guilt for being the only one to escape the abuse. The conversation Liv starts about memory, and the memories both Willa and Claudette tell, was also very interesting and a fun addition to the otherwise dry dinner party scene.
I rated this 3 out of 5 stars. Although I enjoyed reading this book and loved the author's choice of underlying topics and themes throughout, there were just a few too many issues that meant I couldn't rate this any higher.. It is a real shame that the flashbacks and multi POV ruined this for me, as otherwise I think this plot (surrounding Laika's disappearance) was really gripping and would have made for a great story! I loved the scenes set in the past but felt that those set in the future, in particular during the dinner party, were disappointing and not as enjoyable compared to the rest of the book. Thank you to Netgalley and Sarah Easter Collins for the ARC.