1.5 stars
This book was headed to a 4 star rating until the last 9 percent. I enjoyed the premise, the characters, the romantic tension, the sexual chemistry between the characters and the pacing of the story. This story was enjoyable and kept me engaged throughout, needing to know what happens next.
Spoilers ahead:
The romance is ruined at 91 percent. I could not get past the FMC accusing the MMC of falling for her cousin's manipulative ways. I understand the FMC has had a lifetime of her cousin "stealing" her boyfriends and I would have accepted this kneejerk reaction in lots of circumstances.
In this book, however, not only did the MMC text her AND his business partner to come see him immediately, but the FMC also arrived on scene to cops, security and a scene described as being like "from a movie." The FMC is worried something awful has happened because there is so much law enforcement on the premises and all employees have been ordered to stay where they are at. She enters the MMC's office and sees her cousin handcuffed and, again, there are officers in the office. And, with her brilliant mind, she tells the MMC she doesn't need to hear anything and he can have her cousin if he wants. What?!?? And she says this because her cousin is barely dressed and he said something about getting to know her cousin and she's a heck of a woman. For someone so smart, you are telling me she couldn't pick up on all the context clues that point to her cousin trying something and the MMC calling the police? Why would he have sex with her cousin and then summon her AND his business partner to his office? Why would he call the police? Why would he have police/security stationed throughout the building (as she noted on her way to the office?) She really thought he had sex with her cousin and called her, his business partner, his security team, the police, EMTs and firefighters to all witness him telling her he wants to breakup and be with her cousin? This is too stupid to forgive. And insulting. After all the MMC and FMC had experienced together, she didn't even take one second to think that maybe he DIDN'T have sex with her cousin? ESPECIALLY given the fact she was in cuffs and surrounded by police in the MMC's office, with hordes of police and security throughout the building?
Unfortunately, for me, this ruined the romance, as I did not believe the FMC deserved the MMC at that point. What she accused him of, given the information she had, was unforgivable. It would be like if my house was being ransacked, the cops showed up and arrested the criminal, I contacted my husband and told him to hurry home, he shows up, he sees all the cops, he sees the criminal in cuffs, he sees the house is a mess and then he turns to me and asks me what I was thinking since it is obvious I destroyed the house. THAT'S what the FMC does to the MMC. This is a great book except for this major misstep, so if you can get past the FMC being an idiot (when she's supposed to be brilliant), I recommend it. Otherwise, skip it.