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Discerning God's Best #5
Written on My Heart
It’s hard to hear God’s voice when you’ve already decided what you want him to say.
In the wilds of the rugged West, Betsy Smith discovers beauty in every corner—from the blazing sunsets to the wind murmuring secrets through the mountains. Yet, it's the magnetism of Gabe Manning, with his dark complexion and dashing demeanor, that draws her gaze. Having known him since childhood, Betsy sees in Gabe the embodiment of the heroes she admires from her a stalwart protector of the innocent, a champion of justice, a man of unshakable integrity, and a paragon of honor, guided by principles as steadfast as the mountains themselves— all while reconciling with his Arapaho Indian heritage. Yet, amid her admiration, Betsy longs for God’s reassurance that Gabe is the one for her.
As deputy of Shumard Oak Bend, Missouri, in 1875, Gabe “Little Sun” Manning sees the allure and harshness of frontier life. Amidst the chaos, he finds solace in the presence of Miss Betsy Smith, a compassionate schoolteacher whose independence and intellect captivate him as profoundly as her beauty. Yet, as their bond deepens, Gabe wrestles with doubts about his ability to fulfill the desires of her heart. He knows she's willing to forsake her career for a future with him, but can he offer her the family she seeks? Haunted by the secrets of his past and desperate for redemption, Gabe faces his most formidable challenge yet.
Written on My Heart is a powerful Christian Historical Romance full of resilience, redemption, and the enduring power of the human spirit. In award-winning author Heidi Gray McGill’s fifth installment in the Discerning God’s Best series, you’ll be transported to a world of wild-west adventure and heartwarming romance.
For Misty M. Beller, Lacy Williams, and Linda Ford fans, this standalone novel in the Discerning God’s Best series will capture your heart and leave you breathless. You’ll love this book if you enjoy gripping historical drama and compelling characters. Binge-read the entire series on Kindle Unlimited.
• Full-length Christian historical fiction
• A standalone novel in the Discerning God’s Best series
• Includes discussion questions for book clubs
• 1875–1876
• For fans of Misty M. Beller, Lacy Williams, and Linda Ford
Book Desire of My Heart
Book With All My Heart
Book Matters of the Heart
Book Healing of the Heart
Book Written on My Heart
Deep in My Heart – available for free with newsletter signup. Search Heidi Gray McGill to locate her website.
In the wilds of the rugged West, Betsy Smith discovers beauty in every corner—from the blazing sunsets to the wind murmuring secrets through the mountains. Yet, it's the magnetism of Gabe Manning, with his dark complexion and dashing demeanor, that draws her gaze. Having known him since childhood, Betsy sees in Gabe the embodiment of the heroes she admires from her a stalwart protector of the innocent, a champion of justice, a man of unshakable integrity, and a paragon of honor, guided by principles as steadfast as the mountains themselves— all while reconciling with his Arapaho Indian heritage. Yet, amid her admiration, Betsy longs for God’s reassurance that Gabe is the one for her.
As deputy of Shumard Oak Bend, Missouri, in 1875, Gabe “Little Sun” Manning sees the allure and harshness of frontier life. Amidst the chaos, he finds solace in the presence of Miss Betsy Smith, a compassionate schoolteacher whose independence and intellect captivate him as profoundly as her beauty. Yet, as their bond deepens, Gabe wrestles with doubts about his ability to fulfill the desires of her heart. He knows she's willing to forsake her career for a future with him, but can he offer her the family she seeks? Haunted by the secrets of his past and desperate for redemption, Gabe faces his most formidable challenge yet.
Written on My Heart is a powerful Christian Historical Romance full of resilience, redemption, and the enduring power of the human spirit. In award-winning author Heidi Gray McGill’s fifth installment in the Discerning God’s Best series, you’ll be transported to a world of wild-west adventure and heartwarming romance.
For Misty M. Beller, Lacy Williams, and Linda Ford fans, this standalone novel in the Discerning God’s Best series will capture your heart and leave you breathless. You’ll love this book if you enjoy gripping historical drama and compelling characters. Binge-read the entire series on Kindle Unlimited.
• Full-length Christian historical fiction
• A standalone novel in the Discerning God’s Best series
• Includes discussion questions for book clubs
• 1875–1876
• For fans of Misty M. Beller, Lacy Williams, and Linda Ford
Book Desire of My Heart
Book With All My Heart
Book Matters of the Heart
Book Healing of the Heart
Book Written on My Heart
Deep in My Heart – available for free with newsletter signup. Search Heidi Gray McGill to locate her website.
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Published April 24, 2025
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Heidi Gray McGill
21 books942 followersSelah Award finalist Heidi Gray McGill writes award-winning Christian fiction that draws readers into stories of hope, grace, and redemption. Her Discerning God’s Best series brings the American frontier to life with historical richness and biblical truth, while her contemporary novels explore modern struggles with the same heartfelt honesty. Blindness has not limited Heidi’s vision but refined her focus, shaping the way she writes about resilience and faith. She lives near Charlotte, North Carolina, with her husband of more than thirty years and treasures her role as Grammie to three energetic grandsons. Connect with Heidi and receive a free prequel at HeidiGrayMcGill.com.
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April 22, 2025
Some stories wrap around your soul not to entertain—but to testify. Written on My Heart doesn’t skim the surface. It sinks into the places we try to hide—the questions we don’t always know how to ask out loud. Am I worth loving? Can my past be forgiven? Does God really see all of me… and still choose me?
This is not a love story with faith sprinkled in. It’s the Gospel etched in fiction form—layered with truth, soaked in grace, and anchored in the character of a God who doesn’t write in pencil. His love isn’t passing. It’s permanent. And when He writes something on your heart, it stays.
This book didn’t comfort me with soft words. It confronted lies I didn’t realize I’d agreed with. And then it replaced them—with Scripture, with hope, with the kind of clarity only God’s truth can bring. This story doesn’t rely on drama alone—it compels because redemption is real, and it reaches places fiction alone never could.
“I’ve been angry with God. I’ve wondered why He’d let me carry so much when it felt like I didn’t have the strength to take one more step. But I’ve also seen Him show up in ways I can’t explain. A hand when I thought I’d drown… People who reminded me He hadn’t left. Not once.” That right there? That’s the heartbeat of this book. Not polished answers. Not predictable outcomes. But real, raw faith—the kind that aches and prays and still chooses to trust.
The characters’ journeys didn’t feel scripted. They felt lived-in. Betsy and Gabe each carry wounds that whisper lies: that they’re too much, not enough, out of place. But instead of giving those lies the final word, this story lifts them up to the light of Christ—and lets His truth do the talking.
“Worry about nothing. Pray about everything… and the peace of God… will guard your hearts and minds.”
“… remember – keep praying. God’s listening, even if it doesn’t feel like it.”
This book reminded me that the world may try to assign worth by the past, the pain, or the bloodline—but God has already declared it. And what He writes on the hearts of those who are His is a seal of belonging no one can erase.
“God will provide. He always does.”
Heidi Gray McGill gives voice to the Gospel through characters who bleed, break, heal, and believe. Written on My Heart is bold, tender, unflinching—and filled with the kind of truth that moves you and changes you.
If you’ve ever needed to remember that your worth isn’t negotiable, that forgiveness is real, and that God’s love is forever—this story is already written for you.
I received a digital copy of Written on My Heart from the author. I am not required to write a positive review in any way or for any reason. My honest and unbiased opinions expressed in this book review are my own. My review focuses on the excellent writing style, the perfect pacing, and the story’s Christ-centered content, ensuring transparency and reliability.
This is not a love story with faith sprinkled in. It’s the Gospel etched in fiction form—layered with truth, soaked in grace, and anchored in the character of a God who doesn’t write in pencil. His love isn’t passing. It’s permanent. And when He writes something on your heart, it stays.
This book didn’t comfort me with soft words. It confronted lies I didn’t realize I’d agreed with. And then it replaced them—with Scripture, with hope, with the kind of clarity only God’s truth can bring. This story doesn’t rely on drama alone—it compels because redemption is real, and it reaches places fiction alone never could.
“I’ve been angry with God. I’ve wondered why He’d let me carry so much when it felt like I didn’t have the strength to take one more step. But I’ve also seen Him show up in ways I can’t explain. A hand when I thought I’d drown… People who reminded me He hadn’t left. Not once.” That right there? That’s the heartbeat of this book. Not polished answers. Not predictable outcomes. But real, raw faith—the kind that aches and prays and still chooses to trust.
The characters’ journeys didn’t feel scripted. They felt lived-in. Betsy and Gabe each carry wounds that whisper lies: that they’re too much, not enough, out of place. But instead of giving those lies the final word, this story lifts them up to the light of Christ—and lets His truth do the talking.
“Worry about nothing. Pray about everything… and the peace of God… will guard your hearts and minds.”
“… remember – keep praying. God’s listening, even if it doesn’t feel like it.”
This book reminded me that the world may try to assign worth by the past, the pain, or the bloodline—but God has already declared it. And what He writes on the hearts of those who are His is a seal of belonging no one can erase.
“God will provide. He always does.”
Heidi Gray McGill gives voice to the Gospel through characters who bleed, break, heal, and believe. Written on My Heart is bold, tender, unflinching—and filled with the kind of truth that moves you and changes you.
If you’ve ever needed to remember that your worth isn’t negotiable, that forgiveness is real, and that God’s love is forever—this story is already written for you.
I received a digital copy of Written on My Heart from the author. I am not required to write a positive review in any way or for any reason. My honest and unbiased opinions expressed in this book review are my own. My review focuses on the excellent writing style, the perfect pacing, and the story’s Christ-centered content, ensuring transparency and reliability.
April 25, 2025
Every one of the “Discerning God’s Best” books have been gems. Truthfully, I’m absolutely not being extravagantly effusive here, they are gifts for the soul that encourage, inspire, edify, and even constrain the reader, while also delightfully entertaining them with a side-serving of mystery. So, as I began my ARC reading of “Written on My Heart,” I expected what Heidi describes as a Fusion of Faith and Fiction and that’s what I found, a God-honoring reading journey.
The fictional Shumard Oak Bend community is featured in book five. For me, a riveting plot pulls me in, and then the cherry on top is warm, engaging characters, which McGill excels at. In this series, we return to some early favorites, such as the hero and heroine Deputy Gabe Manning and spinster school teacher Betsy Smith. Of course, along the way we share the fellowship of Pete and Robin Manning, Clint Shankle, newly minted Doc Thomas and his wife Teddy. We are invited to Grammie’s boarding house for the fine food, fellowship, and wisdom from Aiden O’Sullivan, Katie Korhonen, & Pastor Hans Korhonen. The reader enjoys the super appealing Tucker, who struggles with reading, but begins to improve under the patient tutelage of Betsy. Her ministrations win her a loyal defender. Lastly, we have the willy villain Luther Conrad, the manager of the Rolla Mines. Every time he surfaced with his slippery, sneaky shenanigans, trouble would follow. His character made me think of the description of Zoltan Karpathy given by Professor Higgins, “blackmail and swindle…devilish business.” Each character adds a special quality to this book, layer upon layer.
Some Select Serendipitous Vignettes:
• The opening with Gabe tracking the Iron Horse Bandits showed his maturity and skill and was very suspenseful. This opening pulled me into the book. I like a fast tug into a book that grips and doesn’t let go.
• The scene in the general store with Mr. Taylor was so telling. Things aren’t easy and peaceful in the Smith home. Mother and daughter are there to buy food. Betsy adds three licorice sticks to their order, her mother says no. Then her mother wants to add a bottle of whiskey-for “medicinal purposes” and Mr. Taylor says, “No.” “I can’t do that, Mrs. Smith.” Betsy feels fear, shame, and frustration with this all too familiar scene—her family doesn’t have the money to meet their needs let alone their wants. Fact is her father’s drinking and gambling habits have drained their little means into nothing and it is only her meager salary from teaching that sustains. There are other shadows that threaten this family that are entwined with some unanswered questions.
• I love the faith and practice and Godly wisdom dispensed by characters Clint Shenkle, Aiden O’Sullivan, Pastor Hans, and particularly Pete & Robin Manning.
Pete asks Gabe, “Son, are you happy in your heart?” Great question, the very idea expressed in Proverbs 17:22. Pete continues, “You can carry all the badges and titles you want, but if you’re not right with Him, you’re carrying a burden you can’t shoulder alone.”
Pete expresses truth, if you’re not taking time to hear what God says, you’ll only hear the lies the world wants you to believe. Robin stresses, “You can’t outrun LIES. Replace them with truth. God’s truth.”
Once again, this series was a blessing, encapsulating the truth of discerning, Romans 12:2 “…but be transformed by the renewing of your mind, that you may Discern what is the will of God, what is good & acceptable & perfect.” Our lead characters were on a journey to Discern God’s Best. Grab this book, Read this book & Be Blessed.
I received an ARC eCopy from the author; a positive review was not required. All the opinions expressed in this review are my own.
The fictional Shumard Oak Bend community is featured in book five. For me, a riveting plot pulls me in, and then the cherry on top is warm, engaging characters, which McGill excels at. In this series, we return to some early favorites, such as the hero and heroine Deputy Gabe Manning and spinster school teacher Betsy Smith. Of course, along the way we share the fellowship of Pete and Robin Manning, Clint Shankle, newly minted Doc Thomas and his wife Teddy. We are invited to Grammie’s boarding house for the fine food, fellowship, and wisdom from Aiden O’Sullivan, Katie Korhonen, & Pastor Hans Korhonen. The reader enjoys the super appealing Tucker, who struggles with reading, but begins to improve under the patient tutelage of Betsy. Her ministrations win her a loyal defender. Lastly, we have the willy villain Luther Conrad, the manager of the Rolla Mines. Every time he surfaced with his slippery, sneaky shenanigans, trouble would follow. His character made me think of the description of Zoltan Karpathy given by Professor Higgins, “blackmail and swindle…devilish business.” Each character adds a special quality to this book, layer upon layer.
Some Select Serendipitous Vignettes:
• The opening with Gabe tracking the Iron Horse Bandits showed his maturity and skill and was very suspenseful. This opening pulled me into the book. I like a fast tug into a book that grips and doesn’t let go.
• The scene in the general store with Mr. Taylor was so telling. Things aren’t easy and peaceful in the Smith home. Mother and daughter are there to buy food. Betsy adds three licorice sticks to their order, her mother says no. Then her mother wants to add a bottle of whiskey-for “medicinal purposes” and Mr. Taylor says, “No.” “I can’t do that, Mrs. Smith.” Betsy feels fear, shame, and frustration with this all too familiar scene—her family doesn’t have the money to meet their needs let alone their wants. Fact is her father’s drinking and gambling habits have drained their little means into nothing and it is only her meager salary from teaching that sustains. There are other shadows that threaten this family that are entwined with some unanswered questions.
• I love the faith and practice and Godly wisdom dispensed by characters Clint Shenkle, Aiden O’Sullivan, Pastor Hans, and particularly Pete & Robin Manning.
Pete asks Gabe, “Son, are you happy in your heart?” Great question, the very idea expressed in Proverbs 17:22. Pete continues, “You can carry all the badges and titles you want, but if you’re not right with Him, you’re carrying a burden you can’t shoulder alone.”
Pete expresses truth, if you’re not taking time to hear what God says, you’ll only hear the lies the world wants you to believe. Robin stresses, “You can’t outrun LIES. Replace them with truth. God’s truth.”
Once again, this series was a blessing, encapsulating the truth of discerning, Romans 12:2 “…but be transformed by the renewing of your mind, that you may Discern what is the will of God, what is good & acceptable & perfect.” Our lead characters were on a journey to Discern God’s Best. Grab this book, Read this book & Be Blessed.
I received an ARC eCopy from the author; a positive review was not required. All the opinions expressed in this review are my own.
May 2, 2025
Gabe has overcome a lot to become a deputy, but many in the town still view him with suspicion, however much he proves himself. When Luther Conrad, the mine boss who's caused him trouble in the past hangs around town for no apparent reason, and particularly ingratiates himself with Betsy, the local schoolmistress, he and the sheriff start wondering what's going on. Betsy doesn't trust Luther, but he's good at putting on a show and does have the money and position to help her struggling family - unlike Gabe, who intrigues her but has a troubled past. Will she learn to discern the truth of each man's character and to trust God to show her his plan for her? And can Gabe come to accept his worth in God's eyes rather than seeing only man's judgement?
An enjoyable read with a good mix of action, romance and character growth, with a touch of mystery behind the scenes. Luther's a real piece of work and I'd love to get rid of him, but it wouldn't be the story it is without him providing some villainy to show Betsy an alternative life, keep Gabe on his toes and generally mix everything up. I loved the insightful and inspirational comments scattered throughout that both Gabe and Betsy had to learn from, and enjoyed watching them find their way to each other, albeit over quite a thorny path. Note that while this can be read as a standalone story, I found picking it up without having read previous books slightly more difficult because it assumed knowledge of Gabe's past (in particular) that I didn't have. So I wouldn't say it has to be read as part of a series, but you should be aware that you're missing details of his back-story and only get the broad outline of most things. Otherwise, a good read and I'm interested in reading more by the author. 4.5 stars.
Note that I received a complimentary copy of the book from the author. I was not required to write a positive review and this is my considered opinion of the book.
An enjoyable read with a good mix of action, romance and character growth, with a touch of mystery behind the scenes. Luther's a real piece of work and I'd love to get rid of him, but it wouldn't be the story it is without him providing some villainy to show Betsy an alternative life, keep Gabe on his toes and generally mix everything up. I loved the insightful and inspirational comments scattered throughout that both Gabe and Betsy had to learn from, and enjoyed watching them find their way to each other, albeit over quite a thorny path. Note that while this can be read as a standalone story, I found picking it up without having read previous books slightly more difficult because it assumed knowledge of Gabe's past (in particular) that I didn't have. So I wouldn't say it has to be read as part of a series, but you should be aware that you're missing details of his back-story and only get the broad outline of most things. Otherwise, a good read and I'm interested in reading more by the author. 4.5 stars.
Note that I received a complimentary copy of the book from the author. I was not required to write a positive review and this is my considered opinion of the book.
May 5, 2025
This beautiful, faith-filled novel introduces readers to Shumard Oak Bend's deputy Gabe Manning, a unique, honorable man who's respected in town (except by those who are prejudiced against him because his parentage of both Arapaho and white). However, he's determined to do right by his town and its settlers (many of whom readers of Heidi's other books will recognize, as they play supporting roles in this book). But he's particularly interested in (yet thus far, hasn't made his interests known) in schoolteacher Betsy Smith. But all of that is about to change, since the untrustworthy mine owner Luther Conrad has begun to sidle up to Betsy, in town and at school.
Betsy is in a difficult situation of her own, as she lives with her parents and nearly supports them completely, as her father drinks away most of his own salary. And while she doesn't *truly* welcome Luther's interest, she is at her wits' end to know how to continue to care for her family. But Luther's attentions may not really be true or truthful...
Written on My Heart is fascinating in both its characters, setting, and adventures. Will Betsy and Gabe be able to turn to God in their struggles, and perhaps in a new relationship? Highly recommend this read!
I received a copy of this book from the author. All thoughts and opinions shared here are my own.
Betsy is in a difficult situation of her own, as she lives with her parents and nearly supports them completely, as her father drinks away most of his own salary. And while she doesn't *truly* welcome Luther's interest, she is at her wits' end to know how to continue to care for her family. But Luther's attentions may not really be true or truthful...
Written on My Heart is fascinating in both its characters, setting, and adventures. Will Betsy and Gabe be able to turn to God in their struggles, and perhaps in a new relationship? Highly recommend this read!
I received a copy of this book from the author. All thoughts and opinions shared here are my own.
May 2, 2025
Heidi McGill writes with such depth and poise, it is easy to fall in love with her books. I enjoyed the 5th book in this sweet historical fiction about Gabe and Betsy’s life. You can see the struggles and realities they faced back in the late 1800’s which are present even in today’s time. Neither of their lives was easy, but as they lean upon each other for strength, you see their faith and relationship develop even deeper. I look forward to the next book in this series.
I was given a complimentary copy of this book from the author. All words are my own.
I was given a complimentary copy of this book from the author. All words are my own.
April 26, 2025
It's hard to change, even harder for other people to accept the change. Self-doubt, bullies, people who let us down, make for very good faith lessons. Both Betsy and Gabe have quite a personal journey in this story. Tenderly and faithfully written, a very good read that will keep you engaged.
I received this book free from the author. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own.
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March 10, 2026
Thinking less of oneself.
So many gems! I really want to quote them but its best that they are read as part of this thought provoking story about being humble enough to let God be our strength and to trust Him for what is best for us.
So many gems! I really want to quote them but its best that they are read as part of this thought provoking story about being humble enough to let God be our strength and to trust Him for what is best for us.
April 29, 2025
I haven't had the pleasure of reading the previous books in this series, something that I will have to remedy now that I enjoyed Written on My Heart! I loved getting to know Gabe and Becky better as the story progressed. Both of them have struggled with hard things, Gabe with prejudice and Becky with having grown up with an abusive father. The author tackles some difficult subjects, but I love how she does it through the lens of the Gospel message. This story has so many solid truths in it! I really appreciated the deeper messages in the story. This isn't a fluffy read that you will easily forget about once you finish the last page, but a wonderful story that will stick with you for years to come.
I received this book from Just Read. This is my honest review.
I received this book from Just Read. This is my honest review.
April 14, 2025
I loved the story about Gabe and Betsy. Betsy's life was not easy. She was a schoolteacher trying to support the family after her father got fired. Her pay never seemed to be enough. And it only got more difficult as time went on. My heart was touched by Betsy's determination to go on despite the agony of everyday living. The villain of the story, Luther Conrad, was a constant worry to her.
The storyline is filled with lessons learned from God's word and was constantly shaping Gabe and Betsy's character. I loved the ending. Everything was wrapped up nicely. There were times when I felt compassion for both Gabe and Betsy. I can't wait for the next one in the series. It's been a joy to read so far.
I received an ARC from the author; a positive review is not required. All opinions are my own.
The storyline is filled with lessons learned from God's word and was constantly shaping Gabe and Betsy's character. I loved the ending. Everything was wrapped up nicely. There were times when I felt compassion for both Gabe and Betsy. I can't wait for the next one in the series. It's been a joy to read so far.
I received an ARC from the author; a positive review is not required. All opinions are my own.
September 29, 2025
“Wisdom is trusting in God’s sovereignty even when it doesn’t align with your understanding.”
If you love Western frontier historical romance… if you love sweet friends-to-more stories… if you love deep threads of faith… then you absolutely need to read Written on My Heart. This is my first read in Heidi Gray McGill’s Discerning God’s Best series, but it works perfectly as a standalone. The first thing that struck me was how warmly written the story is, giving me all the more reason to catch up on the series as soon as possible. And then I became invested in the protagonists as well – Betsy, the ‘spinster’ schoolteacher with a difficult home life, and Gabe, the part-Arapaho deputy with a unique illness. A collection of supporting characters quickly captured my heart too, from endearing Tucker to wise Pete and a range of ages and personalities in between.
Quotes like, “This town was his home, but it was a place where trust was hard-earned and grudges lasted a lifetime,” drew me in and kept me moving through the story, drinking in each word and letting its gentle themes settle around me like a quilt. Now, don’t get me wrong – ‘gentle themes’ doesn’t equate to ‘boring’. Not at all. There’s danger, there’s abuse, there’s racial tension, there’s addiction, there’s hardship, there’s a smarmy guy I wanted to purse whomp. But through it all, the author weaves Scripture and solid truth that’s spoken with quiet-but-steadfast sincerity by characters who live out what they believe. It’s not preachy or heavy-handed and doesn’t feel forced into the story to prove a point; rather, it comes as a natural overflow of the characters and their journeys. There’s less dialogue and more introspection/narrative than I typically prefer and some repetition of phrases or things we’d already covered, but it didn’t distract me as much as it usually does and I think that’s in large part to the overall warmth of the writing.
Bottom Line: Novels like Written on My Heart by Heidi Gray McGill remind me why I love Christian fiction. McGill sketches her characters with tenderness and depth, allowing Betsy, Gabe, and the supporting cast to feel like real people you’d want to know in your own life. The balance of hardship and hope… gentle grit and grace… keeps you invested, while the steady undercurrent of faith offers both encouragement and conviction without ever becoming heavy-handed. This, plus the sweet friendship that gradually grows into more between Betsy and Gabe, ensures the story will touch your heart. If you’re a fan of Misty M. Beller, Janette Oke, and Tracie Peterson, Written on My Heart belongs on your TBR list too!
(I voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book)
first reviewed at Reading Is My SuperPower
If you love Western frontier historical romance… if you love sweet friends-to-more stories… if you love deep threads of faith… then you absolutely need to read Written on My Heart. This is my first read in Heidi Gray McGill’s Discerning God’s Best series, but it works perfectly as a standalone. The first thing that struck me was how warmly written the story is, giving me all the more reason to catch up on the series as soon as possible. And then I became invested in the protagonists as well – Betsy, the ‘spinster’ schoolteacher with a difficult home life, and Gabe, the part-Arapaho deputy with a unique illness. A collection of supporting characters quickly captured my heart too, from endearing Tucker to wise Pete and a range of ages and personalities in between.
Quotes like, “This town was his home, but it was a place where trust was hard-earned and grudges lasted a lifetime,” drew me in and kept me moving through the story, drinking in each word and letting its gentle themes settle around me like a quilt. Now, don’t get me wrong – ‘gentle themes’ doesn’t equate to ‘boring’. Not at all. There’s danger, there’s abuse, there’s racial tension, there’s addiction, there’s hardship, there’s a smarmy guy I wanted to purse whomp. But through it all, the author weaves Scripture and solid truth that’s spoken with quiet-but-steadfast sincerity by characters who live out what they believe. It’s not preachy or heavy-handed and doesn’t feel forced into the story to prove a point; rather, it comes as a natural overflow of the characters and their journeys. There’s less dialogue and more introspection/narrative than I typically prefer and some repetition of phrases or things we’d already covered, but it didn’t distract me as much as it usually does and I think that’s in large part to the overall warmth of the writing.
Bottom Line: Novels like Written on My Heart by Heidi Gray McGill remind me why I love Christian fiction. McGill sketches her characters with tenderness and depth, allowing Betsy, Gabe, and the supporting cast to feel like real people you’d want to know in your own life. The balance of hardship and hope… gentle grit and grace… keeps you invested, while the steady undercurrent of faith offers both encouragement and conviction without ever becoming heavy-handed. This, plus the sweet friendship that gradually grows into more between Betsy and Gabe, ensures the story will touch your heart. If you’re a fan of Misty M. Beller, Janette Oke, and Tracie Peterson, Written on My Heart belongs on your TBR list too!
(I voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book)
first reviewed at Reading Is My SuperPower
May 5, 2025
I loved reading Heidi Gray McGill’s novel Written on My Heart. This was the fifth installment in her Discerning God’s Best series and continues the inspirational historical adventures of life in the small western town of Shumard Oak Bend.
It felt good to dive into the lives of Betsy Smith and Gabe Tanner, although their lives were not always happy and easy. We see them both face challenges and life struggles that require them to remember how important (and sometimes hard) it is to lean into our faith in God. McGill continues to inspire her readers to focus on truth from God’s Word and to seek wise counsel when life throws them into difficult situations. One such wise counsel is the shopkeeper’s wife who is always kind and encouraging to Betsy, constantly pointing her to the Father. Like in chapter 13 she makes sure Betsy knows Who she should lean on when she says, “…Just remember to let Him carry the burden. You’re not meant to bear it all alone. “ and also, when she says, “And remember – keep praying. God’s always listening, even if it doesn’t feel like it.”
The villain of this book is Luther Conrad, and he is selfish, conniving and manipulative, but also smooth-talking, handsome and sneaky. He uses people to reach his own greedy goals and specifically tries to entrap Betsy’s father with his weakness for gambling and drinking. Betsy struggles with the dire situation her father puts the family in, but I really appreciate that the author still has Betsy respect and love him as her father. She remembers who he was before drinking and gambling controlled his life and the love her father and mother once shared is still valued.
Although this story can be enjoyed as a stand-alone novel, I hope the references to characters and events in the past encourage you to read all the titles in this series. They, like this novel, are wonderful historical stories of beautiful inspiring Christian faith. You will not be disappointed!
As an ARC reader, I received a complimentary digital copy of this book from the author/publisher. I was encouraged to leave an honest review but was in no way required to leave a positive review. All thoughts are my own.
It felt good to dive into the lives of Betsy Smith and Gabe Tanner, although their lives were not always happy and easy. We see them both face challenges and life struggles that require them to remember how important (and sometimes hard) it is to lean into our faith in God. McGill continues to inspire her readers to focus on truth from God’s Word and to seek wise counsel when life throws them into difficult situations. One such wise counsel is the shopkeeper’s wife who is always kind and encouraging to Betsy, constantly pointing her to the Father. Like in chapter 13 she makes sure Betsy knows Who she should lean on when she says, “…Just remember to let Him carry the burden. You’re not meant to bear it all alone. “ and also, when she says, “And remember – keep praying. God’s always listening, even if it doesn’t feel like it.”
The villain of this book is Luther Conrad, and he is selfish, conniving and manipulative, but also smooth-talking, handsome and sneaky. He uses people to reach his own greedy goals and specifically tries to entrap Betsy’s father with his weakness for gambling and drinking. Betsy struggles with the dire situation her father puts the family in, but I really appreciate that the author still has Betsy respect and love him as her father. She remembers who he was before drinking and gambling controlled his life and the love her father and mother once shared is still valued.
Although this story can be enjoyed as a stand-alone novel, I hope the references to characters and events in the past encourage you to read all the titles in this series. They, like this novel, are wonderful historical stories of beautiful inspiring Christian faith. You will not be disappointed!
As an ARC reader, I received a complimentary digital copy of this book from the author/publisher. I was encouraged to leave an honest review but was in no way required to leave a positive review. All thoughts are my own.
April 20, 2025
Another beautiful addition to the Discerning God‘s Best series. The story is Gabe and Betsy story. Betsy is the local school teacher in this small western town. She lives with her mother and father, barely making ends meet. Her father is an alcoholic and a gambler, leaving them little to live on. When he gets let go from his job, Betsy and her mother try to find ways to keep him away from the saloon in town. Betsy, by some standards is considered a spinster, but the towns people think she has two suitors. The good and the evil, but she is having a hard time deciding which is which.
Gabe and Betsy grew up together running through the meadows, attending school, going to church. Gabe sees more than just that childhood girl, but not sure he’s worthy enough. Gabe is a local deputy sheriff. He was judged because of his Arapaho mother. His white father abandoned them when he was young.
I thought this was a great addition to the series. I like the growth in the characters, there was just a right amount of drama and mystery. The romance was a slow developing realization. There was a lot of small stories that take place, Gabe and his parents, Betsy and her parents, Luther Conrad, and of course, the rounding up of outlaws. For me, the book could have been shortened just a little bit. I thought there were some slow points that lost my interest through the middle. But overall I definitely recommend the book. It is a good historical clean Christian western Romance. There are many references to faith, prayer, seeking God for help and answers. Beautiful and uplifting.
Gabe and Betsy grew up together running through the meadows, attending school, going to church. Gabe sees more than just that childhood girl, but not sure he’s worthy enough. Gabe is a local deputy sheriff. He was judged because of his Arapaho mother. His white father abandoned them when he was young.
I thought this was a great addition to the series. I like the growth in the characters, there was just a right amount of drama and mystery. The romance was a slow developing realization. There was a lot of small stories that take place, Gabe and his parents, Betsy and her parents, Luther Conrad, and of course, the rounding up of outlaws. For me, the book could have been shortened just a little bit. I thought there were some slow points that lost my interest through the middle. But overall I definitely recommend the book. It is a good historical clean Christian western Romance. There are many references to faith, prayer, seeking God for help and answers. Beautiful and uplifting.
May 9, 2025
A poignant story, with challenges beyond frontier hardships...
Old wounds rise to the surface in this continuing saga of a maturing community in the Midwest. Deputy Gabe Manning fights against unseen demons that haunt him...the prejudices of townspeople concerning his Native American heritage, as well as his own angry responses in the past. Betsy Smith, the town schoolteacher, battles her own issues with family addiction. Yet they both face a dangerous greed that threatens to destroy their friendship and future together. Do Gabe and Betsy have the strength and courage to face their doubts and fears, or will an evil presence devour all hope for them? Although this is the fifth installment in the Shumard Oak Bend series by Heidi Gray McGill, it’s the first one I’ve read, and I’m eager to work my way through her other books now. McGill paints a timeless landscape of human nature, with the same struggles of faith, loss, suspicion, encouragement, friendship, fear, and challenges to integrity that Christians have always encountered. Her realistic characters will capture your heart with their faith and desire to be servant neighbors in their community. Hope you’ll join me in “backtracking” through this series and moving forward as McGill creates a homestead place of tender hearts for us!
Old wounds rise to the surface in this continuing saga of a maturing community in the Midwest. Deputy Gabe Manning fights against unseen demons that haunt him...the prejudices of townspeople concerning his Native American heritage, as well as his own angry responses in the past. Betsy Smith, the town schoolteacher, battles her own issues with family addiction. Yet they both face a dangerous greed that threatens to destroy their friendship and future together. Do Gabe and Betsy have the strength and courage to face their doubts and fears, or will an evil presence devour all hope for them? Although this is the fifth installment in the Shumard Oak Bend series by Heidi Gray McGill, it’s the first one I’ve read, and I’m eager to work my way through her other books now. McGill paints a timeless landscape of human nature, with the same struggles of faith, loss, suspicion, encouragement, friendship, fear, and challenges to integrity that Christians have always encountered. Her realistic characters will capture your heart with their faith and desire to be servant neighbors in their community. Hope you’ll join me in “backtracking” through this series and moving forward as McGill creates a homestead place of tender hearts for us!
April 4, 2025
This fifth addition to the Discerning God's Best series is another outstanding achievement from master storyteller Heidi Gray McGill. I was drawn in from the very beginning and kept solidly immersed in the story for the duration. The adventurous, well-crafted plot flows at a fitting pace twisting its way to a satisfying conclusion. The author's use of figurative language enriches the story and engages all the senses enabling me to connect more richly with the story and setting. The wonderful cast of characters is headed by Deputy Gabe Tanner, a rugged hero burdened by his past and facing prejudice in the present and an unpredictable future, and heroine Betsy Smith, a schoolteacher who shows resolute determination in the face of adversity. Gabe and Betsy's friends-to-more romance is sweet although enveloped in doubt and uncertainty. I especially appreciate that the story is chocked full of valuable, relevant faith lessons. I totally enjoyed this great return to Shumard Oak Bend, Missouri, affording me the opportunity to reconnect with some of my favorite characters from previous books as well as experience Gabe and Betsy's poignant story. I highly recommend this book (which can easily be read as a standalone) and the series! I look forward to reading Keeper of My Heart, the next book in the series.
I received a copy of this book from the author/publisher with no obligation to write a positive review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
I received a copy of this book from the author/publisher with no obligation to write a positive review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
April 10, 2025
Oh, my goodness, this book is so good!! Book 5 in the Discerning God’s Best/Shumard Oak Bend series. McGill dives into Gabe’s story, along with Betsy. They face an oily, rotten foe who is only interested in himself and he really gets under my skin! In today’s world, we face dishonest people who don’t do work they say they will do, are not honest in their lives, and who bully others. We try so much to trust God and let Him fight our battles, but it can get discouraging; will we choose to continue to trust? Will Gabe (Little Sun) and Betsy submit to the Lord and fully trust Him? You’ve got to read this book and find out. I received a complimentary copy of this book and a positive review was not required.
April 12, 2025
Loved Gabe and Betsy's story!! Gabe and Betsy have known each other since childhood. Gabe has loved her that long, though he's just come to realize and put a name to his feelings. Betsy's not sure what she believes about love. She's not sure if it's like the books she reads or if it's something else. When trouble comes, Betsy is still torn, until something happens to Gabe. Then, she finally realizes she loves him, but is it too late now?? Gabe has to learn that he can't do everything, that he has to let go and trust God to work things out, in His time, and His way. Soooo good!!!!!
I received a complimentary copy of this book, was not required to leave a review, and the opinion expressed is my own.
I received a complimentary copy of this book, was not required to leave a review, and the opinion expressed is my own.
May 14, 2025
A Delight to Read
I have thoroughly enjoyed every book in the Discerning God’s Best Series. I think this may be my favorite and Gabe my favorite character. Strong, stead and true but willing to allow God to lead. Deputy Gabe Manning has sworn to protect the citizens of Shumard Oak Bend. He has a special place in his heart for Betsy Smith, who he has known since they were children in school. Betsy is going through some trials with her father’s health and with trying to make ends meet on a teacher’s salary. The largest concern however are the continual attentions of Luther Conrad. Is he truly helping out of the goodness of his heart or something else? As Betsy struggles with this, Gabe remains a true friend to her. In the end Gabe has to allow God to be in control. This would be hard for most people but for Gabe who never flinches at trouble, it is even more so. I truly enjoyed seeing how both Betsy and Gabe leaned into God and allowed him to work. Looking forward to the next book in the series!
I have thoroughly enjoyed every book in the Discerning God’s Best Series. I think this may be my favorite and Gabe my favorite character. Strong, stead and true but willing to allow God to lead. Deputy Gabe Manning has sworn to protect the citizens of Shumard Oak Bend. He has a special place in his heart for Betsy Smith, who he has known since they were children in school. Betsy is going through some trials with her father’s health and with trying to make ends meet on a teacher’s salary. The largest concern however are the continual attentions of Luther Conrad. Is he truly helping out of the goodness of his heart or something else? As Betsy struggles with this, Gabe remains a true friend to her. In the end Gabe has to allow God to be in control. This would be hard for most people but for Gabe who never flinches at trouble, it is even more so. I truly enjoyed seeing how both Betsy and Gabe leaned into God and allowed him to work. Looking forward to the next book in the series!
April 14, 2025
Loved the book! The story is a bit different from the other books in the series. Gabe and Betsy have known each other since they were children. Both are hindered by shame and feelings of inadequacy in the face of difficult circumstances. It is a good story watching them grow in their individual lives and learn to trust God and each other. Sweet romance with a good message.
I was privileged to be an ARC reader and received a copy of the book free of charge.
I was privileged to be an ARC reader and received a copy of the book free of charge.
May 2, 2025
Wonderful faith filled story
I won this book and could not be happier. This is a book I found myself highlighting because it touched my heart.
Set in the Ozarks and filled with many twists and turns, you have to love the story.
The characters were well developed and Interesting to get to know.
Thank you Goodreads for giving me a chance to read this book.
I won this book and could not be happier. This is a book I found myself highlighting because it touched my heart.
Set in the Ozarks and filled with many twists and turns, you have to love the story.
The characters were well developed and Interesting to get to know.
Thank you Goodreads for giving me a chance to read this book.
April 25, 2025
I really enjoyed this story of Gabe and Betsy. Each were searching for their identity. It was very inspiring. This is a perfect book for those who enjoy Christian historical romance stories. I received a copy of this book and all opinions are my own.
June 8, 2025
My first Heidi McGill book, filled with lots of vivid descriptions, an interesting cast, and several thought-provoking discussions that will make the reader reconsider their faith while the characters do.
This book is everything I expect and enjoy about Christian historical romance. If you enjoy books by Jodie Wolfe and Carrie Fancett Pagels, you might enjoy this book.
Rated G.
This book is everything I expect and enjoy about Christian historical romance. If you enjoy books by Jodie Wolfe and Carrie Fancett Pagels, you might enjoy this book.
Rated G.
May 13, 2025
Absolutely Worth Reading!
Wow! I have enjoyed this story so much! Gabe had gone through so much in his lifetime being treated badly because of his Indian heritage. Betsy had to deal with a drunken father who wasted all their money on alcohol. Gabe always was fond of Betsy but never believed he was good enough for her. Luther was a terrible man with bad intentions including trying to falsely pursue Betsy. Facing all troubles, I am glad Gabe and Betsy finally got together and that the town finally realized that Gabe was a good man.
Wow! I have enjoyed this story so much! Gabe had gone through so much in his lifetime being treated badly because of his Indian heritage. Betsy had to deal with a drunken father who wasted all their money on alcohol. Gabe always was fond of Betsy but never believed he was good enough for her. Luther was a terrible man with bad intentions including trying to falsely pursue Betsy. Facing all troubles, I am glad Gabe and Betsy finally got together and that the town finally realized that Gabe was a good man.
July 26, 2025
Loved it!
Heidi Grey McGill never fails to provide excitement, adventure and scriptural truths. Every book is a treasure. She never disappoints.
Heidi Grey McGill never fails to provide excitement, adventure and scriptural truths. Every book is a treasure. She never disappoints.
May 17, 2025
There is nothing more swoony than a hero who wants to protect his lady. Gabe is that protector. You could see every time a certain pushy man was around Betsy, Gabe's heart started to flutter and his protectiveness began to take over. And he just did it so gracefully, not in a bully like way. That's what made him even swoonier!
But protectiveness aside, McGill has written a wonderful historical romance here. There are beautiful character arcs in both Betsy and Gabe, and I loved seeing both of their journeys on the page. McGill weaves in so much history as well, and it was just lovely. So many great points throughout the story - following God, respecting others, protecting others, the importance of family, and so much more.
McGill is an author to add to your auto read list. Her stories are full of romance, faith, life lessons, and so much more. Highly recommend! I received a complimentary copy of this book. I was not required to write a favorable review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
But protectiveness aside, McGill has written a wonderful historical romance here. There are beautiful character arcs in both Betsy and Gabe, and I loved seeing both of their journeys on the page. McGill weaves in so much history as well, and it was just lovely. So many great points throughout the story - following God, respecting others, protecting others, the importance of family, and so much more.
McGill is an author to add to your auto read list. Her stories are full of romance, faith, life lessons, and so much more. Highly recommend! I received a complimentary copy of this book. I was not required to write a favorable review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
November 20, 2025
Gabe Manning’s Story
Gabe is now the deputy and Betsy is the school teacher. Gabe has always viewed himself as a protector and takes responsibility for Betsy and the family. Rich story and fully developed characters.
Gabe is now the deputy and Betsy is the school teacher. Gabe has always viewed himself as a protector and takes responsibility for Betsy and the family. Rich story and fully developed characters.
April 14, 2025
Scripture Connection
The LORD is my strength and my shield; my heart trusts in Him, and He helps me.
Psalm 28:7a
Spiritual Themes
The novel, I’m happy to report, is rich in spiritual content — with a strong emphasis on trusting God, even when His plans do not make sense to us. I highlighted quite a few passages that conveyed this message in sweet, meaningful ways.
There’s also a discussion of Jotham, the Jewish king in 2 Chronicles 27. I thought it was neat that the author chose to allude to him, because he’s not one of the most famous kings. She cites verse six of the chapter: “Jotham grew powerful because he walked steadfastly before the Lord his God” (2 Chron. 27:6), a brief verse that is easy to overlook.
A Note:
Several years ago, I received a review copy of the first book in the series. Ultimately, I did not end up recommending the title because of my concerns about the Indigenous representation. I also felt that the book was packing in too many story lines.
Gray McGill offered me a review copy of her latest title, and I am happy to report that I had a much more positive experience with Written on My Heart— not only in comparison to the title that I had read, but also as a story in its own right. Written on My Heart follows just two characters, which I appreciated, and it conveys a sweet message and romance.
What I Liked
Although “Old West” stories are generally not my favorite, I enjoyed reading about the town and community of Shumard Oak Bend. Reading the story felt a bit like watching an episode of Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman, not only because of the similar historical settings, but also because of the extent to which Gray McGill fleshes out the town. Because I jumped from book one to book five, I didn’t have all of the details of their backstories, but there are clear nods to the characters’ connections with one another, as well as references to individual backstories. For example, Gabe pays a visit to his mom, Singing Bird, and her husband, Pete. From what I can tell, their romance is the basis of the second book in the series.
Stylistically, Gray McGill employs some neat juxtapositions that contribute to the narrative commentary. References to “half truths and whole lies” caught my eye, and I also highlighted a line about “truths he wasn’t ready to face but couldn’t ignore.”
Wise Elders
One of the things I look for and appreciate, in Christian fiction is the inclusion of elder characters who speak wisdom. It is so refreshing to see younger characters honoring the experience and knowledge of those who are further along on the path of life.
Gabe’s mom and his stepfather provide wise counsel about trusting the Lord, even when we cannot understand what He is doing. I ended up highlighting multiple instances of Gabe’s discussions with these characters! I also marked an especially meaningful word of advice from Mrs. Taylor, the shopkeeper, to Betsy.
“‘You do what God says, not man,’ she says. ‘Don’t live up to society’s expectations.'” And I love how she completes the thought with a much-needed encouragement for Betsy: “You are strong enough to listen to Him and follow His path, not matter what others think” (p. 212). These lines are not only a powerful reminder of who we are to please, as followers of Jesus. They are also a beautiful statement of confidence. This was a timely message for me, and one that I believe would be of benefit to many readers.
Suspense
While I wouldn’t classify the novel as “suspense,” by any means, there is a solid element of intrigue as Betsy catches the eye of a newcomer. Inclusion of Gabe’s alternating perspective, as well as Betsy’s personal feelings, shed light on the newcomer’s intentions.
Romance
I so appreciate romances that are founded on a history of rich friendship. Gabe and Betsy have known each other since childhood, which I believe may be referenced in earlier books. It was interesting to read about how shared experiences shaped (and failed to shape) interpretations of their more recent history. Betsy feels comfortable with Gabe, to some extent, because of their shared past. On the other hand, she is aware of the struggles he has had in recent years, which contribute to moments of unease with a man who is at once familiar– and something of a stranger.
Literary Allusion
As the schoolteacher, Betsy is reading The Count of Monte Cristo with her students. The novel becomes a springboard for class discussions, as well as a backdrop for Betsy’s evaluation of her own life and potential suitors. While I have not read The Count of Monte Cristo, I did enjoy the literary allusions.
Content Notes / Respectful Discussion
There are a few uses of the word “savage,” which the author includes due to their historicity (as explained in a brief note at the end of the book). While I could have done without this term, I will note that the speakers using the word are portrayed very negatively.
There’s a perilous scene of attempted assault, but it is not graphic and doesn’t go far.
There’s one reference to the terrible treatment that Gabe and his mother experienced at the hands of their own Arapaho family. Without reading the intervening books, I cannot comment on the Indigenous representation with said incident– but we are also seeing that Gabe is treated poorly by his white neighbors, as well. I’m glad that I’m not seeing an imbalance. I believe the mistreatment stems from Gabe being half Arapaho.
There are a few typos in the text, but not a distracting amount.
Recommendation Status
Recommended for readers who enjoy stories reminiscent of the Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman series, with a strong helping of spiritual truth. Reader discretion recommended due to the depiction of racism.
Disclosure: I received a complimentary copy of the book from the publisher. Opinions expressed are my own.
The LORD is my strength and my shield; my heart trusts in Him, and He helps me.
Psalm 28:7a
Spiritual Themes
The novel, I’m happy to report, is rich in spiritual content — with a strong emphasis on trusting God, even when His plans do not make sense to us. I highlighted quite a few passages that conveyed this message in sweet, meaningful ways.
There’s also a discussion of Jotham, the Jewish king in 2 Chronicles 27. I thought it was neat that the author chose to allude to him, because he’s not one of the most famous kings. She cites verse six of the chapter: “Jotham grew powerful because he walked steadfastly before the Lord his God” (2 Chron. 27:6), a brief verse that is easy to overlook.
A Note:
Several years ago, I received a review copy of the first book in the series. Ultimately, I did not end up recommending the title because of my concerns about the Indigenous representation. I also felt that the book was packing in too many story lines.
Gray McGill offered me a review copy of her latest title, and I am happy to report that I had a much more positive experience with Written on My Heart— not only in comparison to the title that I had read, but also as a story in its own right. Written on My Heart follows just two characters, which I appreciated, and it conveys a sweet message and romance.
What I Liked
Although “Old West” stories are generally not my favorite, I enjoyed reading about the town and community of Shumard Oak Bend. Reading the story felt a bit like watching an episode of Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman, not only because of the similar historical settings, but also because of the extent to which Gray McGill fleshes out the town. Because I jumped from book one to book five, I didn’t have all of the details of their backstories, but there are clear nods to the characters’ connections with one another, as well as references to individual backstories. For example, Gabe pays a visit to his mom, Singing Bird, and her husband, Pete. From what I can tell, their romance is the basis of the second book in the series.
Stylistically, Gray McGill employs some neat juxtapositions that contribute to the narrative commentary. References to “half truths and whole lies” caught my eye, and I also highlighted a line about “truths he wasn’t ready to face but couldn’t ignore.”
Wise Elders
One of the things I look for and appreciate, in Christian fiction is the inclusion of elder characters who speak wisdom. It is so refreshing to see younger characters honoring the experience and knowledge of those who are further along on the path of life.
Gabe’s mom and his stepfather provide wise counsel about trusting the Lord, even when we cannot understand what He is doing. I ended up highlighting multiple instances of Gabe’s discussions with these characters! I also marked an especially meaningful word of advice from Mrs. Taylor, the shopkeeper, to Betsy.
“‘You do what God says, not man,’ she says. ‘Don’t live up to society’s expectations.'” And I love how she completes the thought with a much-needed encouragement for Betsy: “You are strong enough to listen to Him and follow His path, not matter what others think” (p. 212). These lines are not only a powerful reminder of who we are to please, as followers of Jesus. They are also a beautiful statement of confidence. This was a timely message for me, and one that I believe would be of benefit to many readers.
Suspense
While I wouldn’t classify the novel as “suspense,” by any means, there is a solid element of intrigue as Betsy catches the eye of a newcomer. Inclusion of Gabe’s alternating perspective, as well as Betsy’s personal feelings, shed light on the newcomer’s intentions.
Romance
I so appreciate romances that are founded on a history of rich friendship. Gabe and Betsy have known each other since childhood, which I believe may be referenced in earlier books. It was interesting to read about how shared experiences shaped (and failed to shape) interpretations of their more recent history. Betsy feels comfortable with Gabe, to some extent, because of their shared past. On the other hand, she is aware of the struggles he has had in recent years, which contribute to moments of unease with a man who is at once familiar– and something of a stranger.
Literary Allusion
As the schoolteacher, Betsy is reading The Count of Monte Cristo with her students. The novel becomes a springboard for class discussions, as well as a backdrop for Betsy’s evaluation of her own life and potential suitors. While I have not read The Count of Monte Cristo, I did enjoy the literary allusions.
Content Notes / Respectful Discussion
There are a few uses of the word “savage,” which the author includes due to their historicity (as explained in a brief note at the end of the book). While I could have done without this term, I will note that the speakers using the word are portrayed very negatively.
There’s a perilous scene of attempted assault, but it is not graphic and doesn’t go far.
There’s one reference to the terrible treatment that Gabe and his mother experienced at the hands of their own Arapaho family. Without reading the intervening books, I cannot comment on the Indigenous representation with said incident– but we are also seeing that Gabe is treated poorly by his white neighbors, as well. I’m glad that I’m not seeing an imbalance. I believe the mistreatment stems from Gabe being half Arapaho.
There are a few typos in the text, but not a distracting amount.
Recommendation Status
Recommended for readers who enjoy stories reminiscent of the Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman series, with a strong helping of spiritual truth. Reader discretion recommended due to the depiction of racism.
Disclosure: I received a complimentary copy of the book from the publisher. Opinions expressed are my own.
April 28, 2025
Written on My Heart: A Shumard Oak Bend Novel is a stand-alone book in Heidi Gray McGill’s Discerning God’s Best Series—and what an excellent book it is! From the first page to the last, this story is a delight to read, full of lyrical descriptions and thought-provoking themes.
The book follows Betsy Smith, a schoolteacher with a challenging family situation, and Gabe “Little Sun” Manning, a deputy of Shumard Oak Bend who is trying to find his place in their community. The two, who have known each other since childhood, both struggle to discover God’s will for their lives.
Though described by the author as a “wild-west adventure and heartwarming romance,” romance definitely takes a “back seat” in Written on My Heart. Personally, I would describe this novel more as a discovering-my-identity-in-Christ story. Neither Betsy nor Gabe seek out or pursue a relationship, and the novel seems to be centered around their learning to walk in full surrender to the Lord.
Major themes include: humility, respect, love, faith, wisdom, and truth. Each of these themes are explored in great depth, and there are plenty of opportunities for the reader to consider how they might apply to their own lives. Written on My Heart provides readers with a poignant look at what it means to live a life surrendered to the Lord’s leading and in light of who He says they are.
This novel is full of truths worth remembering, as the following sampling of quotes can attest:
“Just because you feel distant doesn’t mean God’s not near. And just because you feel burdened doesn’t mean He hasn’t already made a way. Your peace isn’t about how you feel—it’s about trusting the One who’s working, even when you can’t see it. Take it to Him…All of it. He’s big enough to carry it for you.”
“If you’re not taking time to hear what God says about you, you’ll only hear the lies the world wants you to believe. And those lies will chain you up faster than anything else.”
“God uses everything—our past, our pain, our heritage—for His purposes. He wastes nothing.”
“Wisdom is trusting in God’s sovereignty even when it doesn’t align with your understanding.”
“Comfort often comes at the cost of perspective. Sometimes, the unfamiliar has more to teach us than we realize.”
“Our ‘enoughness’ doesn’t come from our abilities but from God’s grace and power working through us. None of us are ‘enough’ in our own strength, but that’s the beauty of God’s grace. He uses our weaknesses to show His strength.”
“Humility isn’t thinking less of yourself, son. It’s thinking of yourself less. And that means thinking about Him more.”
FTC Disclaimer: I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book, which I received from the author. All views expressed are solely my honest opinion.
The book follows Betsy Smith, a schoolteacher with a challenging family situation, and Gabe “Little Sun” Manning, a deputy of Shumard Oak Bend who is trying to find his place in their community. The two, who have known each other since childhood, both struggle to discover God’s will for their lives.
Though described by the author as a “wild-west adventure and heartwarming romance,” romance definitely takes a “back seat” in Written on My Heart. Personally, I would describe this novel more as a discovering-my-identity-in-Christ story. Neither Betsy nor Gabe seek out or pursue a relationship, and the novel seems to be centered around their learning to walk in full surrender to the Lord.
Major themes include: humility, respect, love, faith, wisdom, and truth. Each of these themes are explored in great depth, and there are plenty of opportunities for the reader to consider how they might apply to their own lives. Written on My Heart provides readers with a poignant look at what it means to live a life surrendered to the Lord’s leading and in light of who He says they are.
This novel is full of truths worth remembering, as the following sampling of quotes can attest:
“Just because you feel distant doesn’t mean God’s not near. And just because you feel burdened doesn’t mean He hasn’t already made a way. Your peace isn’t about how you feel—it’s about trusting the One who’s working, even when you can’t see it. Take it to Him…All of it. He’s big enough to carry it for you.”
“If you’re not taking time to hear what God says about you, you’ll only hear the lies the world wants you to believe. And those lies will chain you up faster than anything else.”
“God uses everything—our past, our pain, our heritage—for His purposes. He wastes nothing.”
“Wisdom is trusting in God’s sovereignty even when it doesn’t align with your understanding.”
“Comfort often comes at the cost of perspective. Sometimes, the unfamiliar has more to teach us than we realize.”
“Our ‘enoughness’ doesn’t come from our abilities but from God’s grace and power working through us. None of us are ‘enough’ in our own strength, but that’s the beauty of God’s grace. He uses our weaknesses to show His strength.”
“Humility isn’t thinking less of yourself, son. It’s thinking of yourself less. And that means thinking about Him more.”
FTC Disclaimer: I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book, which I received from the author. All views expressed are solely my honest opinion.
December 1, 2025
I loved this one so much!!
This is Gabe's story! Considering how the last book left off, in the glimpse of Gabe's struggles and hardships that we learned about, it was nice to see how his story continued from there. I enjoyed seeing how his faith was able to grow more deeply, even though at times he struggled to give himself more credit or the ability to receive more than he felt he should.
Gabe wants to protect Shumard Oak Bend as deputy of the town. He puts himself on the line to show the people that he cares. One of the people he wants to protect the most is Betsy, the schoolteacher in town, and one whom he grew up with.
Betsy is having troubles with her financial situation due to her father squandering the money on gambling and drinking. It has been very hard for her mother and for herself. They are behind in payments and having a difficult time trying to help her father.
There is a man named Luther Conrad, who is slithering his way around town manipulating situations, including trying to gain the trust of Betsy so he can marry her. Gabe doesn't trust him. The man also doesn't want to give Gabe any credit for the work he does around town, simply because of his Arapaho blood.
What I loved about this book is that you could feel the emotions of each character and really understand where they were coming from. You could feel the connections or the hatred and tension between some of them too. It was nice to have some of the old characters from other books show up from time to time too (though I must say, not seeing the adopted children of Thomas in this one was odd, as if it were just Teddy, Thomas, and the baby on the way).
The elements of faith brought up throughout this one was nice too. It was refreshing and touching. Being able to trust in God through our hardships and in times when you don't know what to do, where to turn to, and how to overcome. God is there the whole time and is helping us, but we need to be willing to depend on Him.
Definitely one of the best historical Christian fiction series I have read. I am glad I have been able to get into this story. This one in particular was one of the best of the books!
This is Gabe's story! Considering how the last book left off, in the glimpse of Gabe's struggles and hardships that we learned about, it was nice to see how his story continued from there. I enjoyed seeing how his faith was able to grow more deeply, even though at times he struggled to give himself more credit or the ability to receive more than he felt he should.
Gabe wants to protect Shumard Oak Bend as deputy of the town. He puts himself on the line to show the people that he cares. One of the people he wants to protect the most is Betsy, the schoolteacher in town, and one whom he grew up with.
Betsy is having troubles with her financial situation due to her father squandering the money on gambling and drinking. It has been very hard for her mother and for herself. They are behind in payments and having a difficult time trying to help her father.
There is a man named Luther Conrad, who is slithering his way around town manipulating situations, including trying to gain the trust of Betsy so he can marry her. Gabe doesn't trust him. The man also doesn't want to give Gabe any credit for the work he does around town, simply because of his Arapaho blood.
What I loved about this book is that you could feel the emotions of each character and really understand where they were coming from. You could feel the connections or the hatred and tension between some of them too. It was nice to have some of the old characters from other books show up from time to time too (though I must say, not seeing the adopted children of Thomas in this one was odd, as if it were just Teddy, Thomas, and the baby on the way).
The elements of faith brought up throughout this one was nice too. It was refreshing and touching. Being able to trust in God through our hardships and in times when you don't know what to do, where to turn to, and how to overcome. God is there the whole time and is helping us, but we need to be willing to depend on Him.
Definitely one of the best historical Christian fiction series I have read. I am glad I have been able to get into this story. This one in particular was one of the best of the books!
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April 12, 2025A NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR
When I first began Written on My Heart, I didn’t set out to write a love story in the traditional sense. I wanted to write about someone caught between two worlds—someone who didn’t fully belong in either and yet was essential to both. Gabe Manning’s story was born from that desire. He’s half Arapaho, half white, and though he’s earned respect as a deputy, he still faces prejudice from both sides. His quiet strength and deep longing to belong stirred something in me. His journey reflects the ache we all feel at times—to be seen, to be known, and to be accepted, not in spite of who we are, but because of it.
Betsy Smith, the town’s schoolteacher, is no stranger to feeling out of place herself. She’s strong-willed, fiercely independent, and more comfortable with books than people. But beneath her composed exterior is a heart that yearns for truth, for connection, and for something real. Her romantic notions of life and love are challenged by a harsh reality, but it’s in that crucible that she finds her faith refined and her purpose clarified.
This book became deeply personal to me as I wrote it. Not just because of the characters, but because of the reminder it gave me: that God sees us—every messy, complicated part—and still calls us worthy. Gabe and Betsy both wrestle with feelings of not being enough. They each carry wounds that whisper lies, and they have to choose whether to believe those lies or lean into God’s truth.
My hope is that as you read their story, you’ll see glimpses of your own. That you’ll be reminded that your worth isn’t determined by your past, your heritage, or your mistakes. It’s found in the One who calls you His own. His love is never halfway. It’s whole, redeeming, and written—permanently—on your heart.
When I first began Written on My Heart, I didn’t set out to write a love story in the traditional sense. I wanted to write about someone caught between two worlds—someone who didn’t fully belong in either and yet was essential to both. Gabe Manning’s story was born from that desire. He’s half Arapaho, half white, and though he’s earned respect as a deputy, he still faces prejudice from both sides. His quiet strength and deep longing to belong stirred something in me. His journey reflects the ache we all feel at times—to be seen, to be known, and to be accepted, not in spite of who we are, but because of it.
Betsy Smith, the town’s schoolteacher, is no stranger to feeling out of place herself. She’s strong-willed, fiercely independent, and more comfortable with books than people. But beneath her composed exterior is a heart that yearns for truth, for connection, and for something real. Her romantic notions of life and love are challenged by a harsh reality, but it’s in that crucible that she finds her faith refined and her purpose clarified.
This book became deeply personal to me as I wrote it. Not just because of the characters, but because of the reminder it gave me: that God sees us—every messy, complicated part—and still calls us worthy. Gabe and Betsy both wrestle with feelings of not being enough. They each carry wounds that whisper lies, and they have to choose whether to believe those lies or lean into God’s truth.
My hope is that as you read their story, you’ll see glimpses of your own. That you’ll be reminded that your worth isn’t determined by your past, your heritage, or your mistakes. It’s found in the One who calls you His own. His love is never halfway. It’s whole, redeeming, and written—permanently—on your heart.
April 28, 2025
Written on My Heart is the continuation of a beautifully powerful historical fiction series that continues to touch my heart and inspire me.
Instantly engaging, these characters feel familiar and are easy to rally behind. This novel was so easy to slip in and out of, the flow was perfection. I appreciated all the inner dialogue that shows the core struggles of both Gabe and Betsy, which boils down to the fear of feeling inferior and knowing God’s will, something that’s easy to identify with.
There is a ton of inner dialogue and self-reflection from both of the main characters, clearly making this a character-driven novel. Gabe’s constant wrestling with his faith mirrors my own personal struggles lately, so the wisdom and guidance that was bestowed on him feels like it was also being spoken to me. I love when God uses a fictional situation to pierce your own soul.
This was such a calming and sweet read that was a joy to pick up. I felt a calmness come over me as I settled into this world, with the exceptions of the scenes with Luther, who gave me the absolute ick. This series is so wonderful and every novel seems to get better and better!
*I have voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book which I received from the author/publisher. All views and opinions expressed are completely honest, and my own.
Instantly engaging, these characters feel familiar and are easy to rally behind. This novel was so easy to slip in and out of, the flow was perfection. I appreciated all the inner dialogue that shows the core struggles of both Gabe and Betsy, which boils down to the fear of feeling inferior and knowing God’s will, something that’s easy to identify with.
There is a ton of inner dialogue and self-reflection from both of the main characters, clearly making this a character-driven novel. Gabe’s constant wrestling with his faith mirrors my own personal struggles lately, so the wisdom and guidance that was bestowed on him feels like it was also being spoken to me. I love when God uses a fictional situation to pierce your own soul.
This was such a calming and sweet read that was a joy to pick up. I felt a calmness come over me as I settled into this world, with the exceptions of the scenes with Luther, who gave me the absolute ick. This series is so wonderful and every novel seems to get better and better!
*I have voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book which I received from the author/publisher. All views and opinions expressed are completely honest, and my own.
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