An indentured healer. A doomed prince. A nightmarish curse.
When Persis Ophne travels to Gelaira to heal the dark elf prince, the young dune elf stumbles into a kingdom brimming with prejudice and treachery. Her oath—and heart—are further tested when her mistress orders her to kill Prince Haryk.
When she discovers the blind prince is under a malignant curse, she taps the deepest reserves of her sand magic to confront the sentient affliction devouring his body and soul. But trying to break Haryk's curse unearths long-buried secrets and an ancient evil that threatens to consume the Shadewood Forest. Persis will have to choose how far she will go for the one who stole her heart.
Will Persis and Haryk's forbidden love survive a powerful blight and bloody betrayals?
If you like enchanting romance, stolen brides, and characters with disabilities, you'll adore Peaceweaver, the first book in the Between Shade and Flame series. This captivating adventure is perfect for fans of Maggie Stiefvater, Cassandra Clare, and Stephanie Garber.
Everly Haywood imagines herself to be a shieldmaiden of great prowess…but you’re more likely to find her in a dusty library than on the battlefield slaying monsters from the underworld. She seeks to combine dark fantasy worlds with clean, sweet romance. She loves strong but sweet leading ladies and smoldering, tragic heroes, and if a dragon is thrown into the mix? That’s nearly perfection.
When she isn’t writing, Everly creates lovelies for her cover design business, homeschools her prissy Princess-in-the-Pea, and advocates for her special-needs Warrior Princess. She and her Knight in Shining Armor live in the country with their two daughters and their protective dog nanny.
I wanted to take a few moments to tell you MY thoughts on this story. I obviously won't leave an official starred review, but this is a great place to tell you a bit about my story in a more informal setting.
Earlier this year, I sat down to write a trilogy...instead, this story idea bloomed in my mind and would not let go. I had this vivid picture in my mind: a dark, sickly forest. A blind prince. A sand elf healer. Hades and Persephone with hints of Norse mythology mixed in. It was dying to be written. So I set aside the trilogy and, in just under two months, penned this stand alone novel (that is a record for me). The characters came to life and begged me to give them free reign. The story completely morphed as I wrote it, coming into its own and refusing to stick to the outline.
A few fun things you can expect to find in Peaceweaver:
A curse
A sweet but strong heroine
A blind prince (yes, he is appropriately brooding and darling)
A world on the brink of war
Magic. LOTS of magic (sand magic, fire magic, dark magic)
A very subtle love triangle (the blind prince is betrothed to someone else)
Dreams (a joint nightmare plays a huge part in the story)
Dragons and myrk hounds
A mother with a secret
Smooching (yes, there is definitely some kissing, but no sex scenes)
Peaceweaver releases on November 12 and will be available from most digital stores, as well as in paperback and hardcover!
If you're looking for swoony elf romances, then look no farther!
Persis is a healer sand elf sent into the land of the dark elves to heal their prince, who is betrothed to the human princess to whom Persis is indentured. However, things aren't as straightforward as they appear, and there are plots upon plots! On top of that, Persis finds herself falling in love with the dark elf prince...even though he is betrothed to someone else!
The ending twists and turns had me flying through pages!
This book was super good! I loved the nuances to Persephone and Hades. Even though I guessed most of the plot twists, the story was sweet and I loved the message of seeing people for who they are inside. • A couple parts were a bit laggy, but over all it was sweet arranged marriage story that I couldn’t put down!
This was an interesting, unique, and unexpected read with fascinating magic. I stayed up late reading because I kept going "just finish this chapter...oops, started the next one. Okay, this chapter only..." 😆 and I liked Persis. I liked Haryk overall in the first half and mostly again by the end. So much of the story and conflict taking place in dreamscapes and with magic was different than things I've read recently in an engaging way.
Admittedly it didn't completely click for me personally--but that doesn't mean it won't for you! 😊
I picked it up because I'm on an elf kick, but somehow, this didn't feel particularly elven. I don't know that I can explain why. 🤷♀️ The use of glamours felt fae (which is maybe splitting hairs, but I have different expectations from the two) and for some reason it just didn't feel as much like elves. Definitely high fantasy and interesting, just not quite what I expected for some reason.
I'm not entirely sure how this is Hades and Persephone, but admittedly it's been a while since I've reviewed the myth. That said, that wasn't a detractor, because I didn't go into this wanting H&P. Not a positive or negative for me.
The world felt slightly unbalanced, in that parts were very well developed and parts were hardly explained at all. I barely understood the peaceweavers (how often? How many? Since when?) and the (only female?) infertility issue (which did not seem to have as big of effects on Gelaira as I would have expected and I had many questions about) and the curse/monster was so vague as to be somewhat frustrating at the end. What level of technology and earth-relative time period we were in was also kind of vague. There's a couple mentions of swords. 🤷♀️ There's also some anachronisms--most glaringly, "halfcocked" in a world without mention of firearms. Also "slacks" which is an 1800s word for pants and just felt odd.
Also in part in anachronisms, I am unsure how I feel about the treatment of Haryk's illness and blindness and the use of the word handicap. It stuck out to me and slightly broke my immersion every time it was used, and while I know there is debate and many do not find it offensive, I also know many people prefer disabled/disability. Disabled is also, according to Merriam-Webster, slightly older, and feels somehow less modern. I am, admittedly, not disabled or blind myself, so I can't truly speak to the handling, but, it struck me as odd that people rarely tried to describe or explain anything that is happening to Haryk, and even in one instance when he specifically asks, Persis gives the world's most vague answer. ("How big is (thing)?" "It's very big." Thank you, Persis, for that illuminating response.) But I'm especially unsure how I feel about SPOILER:
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All of that said, though, this still was an interesting and unique romantic fantasy read that kept me entertained and did have some lovely and poignant moments, and I am curious about the next books in the series and enjoyed the world enough that I'd like to see if my questions about the world get explained more as the series continues, so I would say that overall, I recommend it as a diverting read with cool magic.
I received an ARC of this book, and I am voluntarily leaving a review.
I absolutely loved this book! I picked it up because I saw that it was a clean Hades & Persephone re-telling, but I didn't know much about the book itself. I wasn't expecting an intriguing world full of political tensions, dangerous magic, and gorgeous settings along with the romance!
Both of the main characters were very likeable! Persis is a devoted healer and I love how seriously she takes her responsibilities, even when it gets her in trouble. Haryk truly wants the best for his people, but he has a hard time loving himself. I loved how their characters were similar enough to Hades & Persephone while still being completely unique!
The magical elements to this story were fascinating, and I loved how it interacted with and affected the world itself. Persis's sand magic was particularly amazing, and I loved how it was also an extension of herself!
Another thing I really appreciated about this book were the themes of love, loss, sacrifice, betrayal, and forgiveness. These were beautifully woven into the story, and they made the story even more powerful. I was reminded of a quote from the show Once Upon A Time: "All magic comes with a price."
When I'm looking for a fantasy romance, THIS is the kind of book I want to read. The author did an excellent job blending together a stunning, magical world with a romance that made my heart happy! This story is a stand-alone with a satisfying conclusion, but I believe the author isn't done with this world yet (though I'm not 100% positive.) This was the first book I read by Everly Haywood, but it will not be the last! I cannot recommend this enough to fans of the fantasy romance genre or readers who love a Hades & Persephone re-telling!
Content: clean, though it does contain some death and violence
I love Hades and Persephone and the premise of the story was really cool. I was very much prepared to love this story. The world was awesome but I really feel like it could have been developed a lot more... The peoples and cultures were amazing too and I wish they'd been more developed!! But unfortunately that's where the fun stuff ended for me.
So about the content... This book is advertised as "clean" so I was expecting nothing bad at all. Unfortunately, there was quite a lot of innuendo, our female MC was often gawking at the handsome Prince, a lot of physical attraction on her part and the last scene had me disturbed because her straightforward asking "why not go to the bedroom rn" felt way too bold for me. In the book's defence, nothing was explicit though (no fade to blacks and no sex implied), and that's exceptional considering our characters marry in the middle of the book, but the innuendo of the end really killed it for me. The ending of a book is, after all, the idea you keep of it...
Finally, the style. It was not so much that Mrs Haywood doesn't write well, it's more that the editor didn't do their job very well. There were a lot of instances where I thought some sentences should have been rewritten in a more compelling way. There were not much typos but a some wrongly conjugated verbs and missing words. Finally, there was a point in the story where a character asked a question that had already been asked before.
Overall, this is a wonderful beta copy but it still needs to be polished, and I would not reread it because of the content. I also think it was not my style of book because I almost dnfed and had to force finish.
Thank you Everley Haywood for the ARC copy you provided. All opinions expressed in this review are my own.
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One of my more recent reads, I couldn’t even put together a mini-review for it when I finished because I just wanted to hug it close for a while. There is political intrigue, magic, an assassin (or perhaps more than one?) hiding in the shadows, an inexplicable blight on the land, and in the middle of it all, a blind prince and a young healer who find romance in spite of all the darkness around them both.
I love, love, loved this story. Persis is such a sweet, strong heroine caught between powerful countries that teeter in an unsteady and begrudging peace. Caught up in the intrigue of court machinations, all she wants to do is the job she is good at: healing the prince from his mysterious malady. Falling for him along the way is neither part of her plan or an actual option.
But Prince Haryk is not what she expected, and when he mistakes her in their first meeting for his betrothed rather than his healer, she catches a glimpse deeper into his heart than he might have meant for her to see.
The love story in this book is both beautiful and powerful. It suffers a few setbacks along the way, and I was very very worried that it wouldn’t all work out. And I’m not going to tell you whether or not it does. But I will tell you that I loved this book.
The way this book blends mystery, danger, and a fantasy adventure into a love story is… breathtaking.
I received an ARC of this book, and this is my honest review.
I went into this story expecting the expected and got something very different in return. Although the beginning was sort of standard fantasy, I quickly realized we had a far different plot on our hands than I was anticipating. A blind male MC, sick and laid up. Horrific nightmares that puzzle and mystify. The sand magic and the female MC's use of it both to heal and to visit dreams. The terrifying dreamscapes. The setting with the sickly forest. I mean, I could go on and on, but suffice it to say this book probably won't be exactly what you're expecting in a romantic fantasy novel. But in a good way! That's what I loved about this story. It took me to unexpected places, it had unexpected twists and turns, and the two main characters had so much to figure out and survive. I would highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys romantic fantasy, fantasy in general, the Hades and Persephone myth, elves, and unique uses of magic in a story. I am hoping for a sequel!
This was really really good. Wow. Felt a little like Elven Alliance but with higher stakes and more action; the plot didn't drag, Persis was a strong MC, and the twists worked nicely. The world was also interesting. If you're looking for a really tight Hades-and-Persephone retelling, this might not scratch that itch, but the influence is visible and it's a lovely story in its own merit too.
I very much liked the characters and the organic way Persis and Haryk’s love developed and grew. However, the nature, laws, origins, and effects of magic in this world were confusing at times, especially concerning Haryk and the other dark elves. There were also some editing issues. Overall though, I’m looking forward to the next book.
I very much enjoyed this book. The romance was a slow burn and the politics were intriguing and well thought out. The character arcs were well done. I highly recommend it!
I don't see Hades and Persephone in this story unless the whole light elf living in the dark elf world is the tie-in. It is more of a Beauty and the Beast tale. There is a curse, and Persis is forced to go serve as a healer for the cursed dark elf prince. Persis is the daughter of a merchant who lost his fortune when his merchant ships were lost at sea.
The FMC was annoying. She was so strong in her magic and healing, but she was annoying. It seemed the author tried to write Persis as talented and stubborn, but she constantly misused/overextended her magic, and caved at the slightest pressure when she should have and could have stood her ground.
Also, what the heck was she doing during the week before the wedding? There was a root that was supposed to help enhance her magic to help her break the curse on Prince Haryk, but instead of looking for it, it wasn't even brought up again until after the wedding, when it was discovered to be in the apothecary, but of course, something happens and it is stolen. Perhaps the introduction of the root's ability to help should have been saved for maybe right before the wedding.
Final thoughts: The story dragged on longer than necessary. It had terrible plot holes, too many spots of new information being randomly dumped on the reader, and the curse's origin was never really explained. It feels like the reader is dropped into a world they should already know about, so there were holes in the world-building.
I originally planned to read the next book, the Grimkeeper, but the FMC Dagmar was introduced in this first book, and she did not strike me as an interesting enough character.
Likes: -The hero learns to be kind. -The heroine learns that she deserves respect - The adventure ends well
Dislikes: -The hero is a hypocrite who condemns the heroine as a liar for an omission and then takes vows to love and honor her while he intends to withhold respect from her, making him an intentional liar worse than she ever thought about being. She never calls him out on his hypocrisy. -The HEA is instantly ruined in the epilogue, which doesn’t even allow them to have a full and happy life.
Minus two stars for each dislike.
If you stop before reading the epilogue, it’s a good story with a HEA. I can recommend the book as 4 stars if you skip the epilogue.
Peaceweaver is one of those little unexpected gems I just happened to stumble upon in the Kindle Unlimited Library. And although I had never heard of or read anything by Everly Haywood the story sounded too intriguing to pass by. And I am unbelievably thankful I decided to give this EXTREMELY FABULOUS and SUPERBLY SWEET fantasy romance a read!
Persis is an elven healer from the Dunewatch. When her father’s merchant ships, along with her mother, sink en route she finds herself as an indentured servant to the Kingdom of Haldor and its royal family. But her life is about to change once more. Princess Brenna is being sent as a Peaceweaver to the dark elven kingdom of Galanodel to marry it’s blind elven Prince, Haryk…but…before that can happen Persis must use her sand magic to somehow heal the strange illness that has suddenly befallen him. An unknown and devastating illness that worsens at an exponential rate and his own healers have been left baffled and unable to cure. Once Persis and Princess Brenna arrive in Haldor, Persis is let in on a secret assassination plan. Now she must not only discover the true nature of Prince Haryk’s strange illness, but figure out how to thwart this assassination plan, all the while, findering herself quickly falling for this blind elven prince. And what follows is a wondeful but intriguing story filled with unique and creative magic, interesting world building, betrayal, attraction, true love, compassion, sacrifice, dark and devastating curses, and following your heart and soul in the attempts to do what’s right.
I absolutely adored this story! It was completely different than anything I’ve ever read. The magic was really interesting and unique and I loved learning about it. I also found Haryk’s illness extremely intriguing and uniquely written. There we’re definitely some twists I didn’t see coming, which I really enjoyed. Both Persis and Haryk were written completely endearingly and their romance was so sweet and honest.
Overall, this was a fabulous story that I found rather cozy and captivating. There was plenty of intrigue and twists but they were done in a way that didn’t cause me a lot of angst, which I greatly appreciated. Plus the romance was just so sweet and endearing and I couldn’t help but cheer and feel jubilant in the ending.
So if you enjoy a sweet clean romance, lots of great characters, unique magic, enough twist and turns to keep you invested and intrigued, but not too much to cause a ton of anxiety, betrayal, handicaps that enhance and deepen the story, and happiest if HEAs then you just NEED to read Peaceweaver.
The pacing of this book dragged a bit, but it was worth it because Persis and Haryk are adorable. It felt more like it was inspired by the Hades/Persephone story, though, rather than being a retelling - there was so many more "new" things unrelated to the Greek myth that it can stand on its own without the retelling title. (However, I definitely first read this book because it was marketed as a clean Hades/Persephone retelling...go figure.) The plot in this book is twisty and political while still being easy to understand. There are enemies in the palace walls, and some have no qualms about letting others know just how much they dislike the prince. There's also the threat of war hanging over the two countries, one that could be devastating for the dark elves even more than the humans. The author did a great job at building tension and making the threat feel real. Magic was also a huge factor, and I loved hearing discussions of the different kinds of magic. Speaking of magic, Persis' sand magic was awesome to see, and it made me want to live in the desert. Just like all magic, it has its limits, though, and it was a bit annoying to see Persis stretch her abilities the max nearly every time she tried to heal the prince. (And then she hardly ever slept, so that didn't help things.) Along with the magic, the worldbuilding was done well. I wanted to explore more of Gelaira and travel back to the Persis' desert home. As for the characters, they were adorable together, especially because Haryk deals with the world differently because of his blindness. It was great to see a MC with a disability, although I wish it was handled a little differently (can't say any more or I'll delve into spoilers). Haryk was a bit annoying at first since he was so persnickety, but seeing how hurt he was by everything made him more relatable. And bless her heart, Persis is a darling who does not deserve all the flack she's gotten for years. I love that she grew into a leadership role even when it seemed impossible. That being said, their romance felt a bit contrived, but that's to be expected. I still think they are a believable couple. All in all, this was a great high fantasy story with a great, slow-burn romance that's clean (save some kisses and some references to bearing heirs). Definitely a new fave!
There is a lot going on in this story both politically and romantically. So we have our h, Persis, who is an elfin healer indentured to a human kingdom. Her powers are interesting- basically she uses her "sands" as a form of healing and can pretty much enter someone's being/mind in order to diagnose them.
Her unique healing ability is why she was forced to travel to another country by demand. It seems that the human Princess she serves is going to be wed (by treaty) to the dark elven Prince Haryk. However things are not what they seem. Not with the marriage alliance, not with the dark elves, and most importantly not with the ailing Prince's sickness.
What begins as a simple diagnostic attempt at healing the Prince unravels into a serious plot, and Persis realizes that she will need to do everything in her limited power to help them both survive.
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So liked the overall story but the connection between the two was a little insta love and quick. Also the Prince was real pissed at Persis for not telling him about the Princess' plot...but hello? You just met, she's an indentured servant, she was being threaten with her/her fathers deaths, aaand she was doing everything in her power to save your ass! Plus she didn't even lie- she just didn't tell him the truth yet until she had solid evidence because she basically has no power and was worried no one would believe her without proof (which they did)
Yeah the Prince was ill and going through it, but he never really stopped to consider Persis' situation and just threw hissy fits all the time.
Also the end? Um I don't know if I quite like that she had ["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>
– this is part of a series, but can be read as a stand-alone
– this is told from Persis’s point of view
– there are nightmares (think of what you’d expect of to see of the underworld/Hades – creepy, blood, corpses, etc – but with minimal description; more like just enough to understand what they are experiencing without really creeping out the reader)
– a character is blind
Review:
I enjoyed this fae romance with elements of the Hades/Persephone story! I loved Persis’s heart for healing. I loved that we didn’t get to know the full scope of her powers right away, but instead got introduced to a new bit every couple steps of the way. I grew to like Prince Haryk through Persis’s eyes as time went on & I was hurt like Persis when he didn’t see eye to eye with her after an incident. I loved the sweet dream moments Persis had that we got to see. I also really liked Haryk’s mother & his nurses that worked closely with Persis.
Summary:
When a healer is demanded for Prince Haryk, also known as the dark prince, Persis and her mistress are quick to respond. With the tension between her mistress’s kingdom and the dark prince’s, anything less would cause further issues between them. But when they arrive, Persis’s mistress tells Persis to kill the prince instead of healing him. As a healer, Persis made an oath to only use her magic for healing. Going against it could leave her with dire consequences on it’s own, besides the ones that would come down on her if she went through with it and was caught. Caught in an internal battle over obeying her mistress and betraying her oath or disobeying her mistress and helping the enemy, Persis has to make decisions she never thought she’d have to as a healer. And as Persis discovers new things about the prince as she cares for him, she is thrown even deeper. Because the man she’s getting to know? He’s someone she could never fall for…
Peaceweaver by Everly Haywood What I loved about this book: 🕊 Forbidden love 🕊 Peace at a price 🕊 A healer sent to kill a prince 🕊 Sacrifice 🕊 Sweet and swoony romance, just kisses! I have read one of Everly's books before (Dark Affliction) and based on that one I had high hopes for this series. Which were in every way fulfilled! Exactly what I look for in romantasy, a beautifually detailed fantasy world and swoony moments with a great plot! This is a beautiful story of darkness and hope and how much you could sacrifice for one you love. I enjoyed every moment and am off to read book 2! While not strictly a retelling this does have some Hades and Persephone vibes! Favorite quote: For the first time, Persis felt a little sorry for the princess. She wondered what it must be like to know from birth you were betrothed to some dark prince you’d never met. With no voice of your own. No say at all in the course of your own destiny. Perhaps princesses were not all that different from indentured healers. In that regard at least. But to commit murder? To contemplate assassination? Surely there was a better way for the princess to make her own way in the world. “I cannot do as you ask,” Persis repeated, her voice hoarse. Favorite scene: When Persis volunteers as tribute Favorite character: Persis, our main female character (although I am curious if Brenna will get her own story.. .)
I read this one because I stumbled on Grimkeeper but wanted to read the book before it first. I have no idea how this ties into Hades and Persephone as well as Norse mythology, I had a hard time finding any connections. There were a number of errors in the story and a general feeling of clunkiness. There were a ton of different "twists" thrown in towards the end too which ended up feeling like "oh, but what if!" instead of a thought out plot. Maybe this is just a much more young adult novel than I thought it was, I thought it was being presented as an upper YA or a NA novel with what the other books the blurb compares it to but it felt very young.
Not particularly fond of any of the characters either. Persis was annoying, she was presented as a strong healer but the minute anyone said anything negative she was immediately cowed. She was constantly apologizing to Hardyk because she "loved" him and felt so guilty over what was happening. Hardyk was a dramatic jerk who said he could never trust her again because she didn't immediately tell him that his cousin was trying to kill him with zero proof other than her interactions with him. He takes zero responsibility for being rude and gruff with her and she is supposed to just be understanding he is so moody because she shattered his trust in his opinion.
Also - you're telling me his family he lived with has been trying to kill him since he was a small child and never figured out how to do it???
a very interesting world and a beautiful love story!
I’m very impressed with the world-building by Ms. Haywood. This is first foray into her fantasy romance, but it’s very well-done, gripping, and wonderfully worded. The feelings, relationships, suspense, and plot have so much intensity and depth, you keep turning those pages. The romance is clean (only kisses but very emotion-filled), but there is some language (in line with the character but still). However, it’s very well written. Things that stood out: Choosing joy over grief Doing right when difficult Healing involves more than physical Love triumphs all Compassion is beautiful Differences can be reconciled Forgiveness!
Elves, Human Brides, & Treachery. Persis Ophne traveled to Gelaira as part of the bridal party of an arranged marriage in a treaty between nations. She never dreamed that her life would change so much. Prince Haryk has been ill for many years and is losing his will to survive, since whenever he falls asleep, he has severe nightmares. Persis is given conflicting orders, some of which she couldn’t obey, even if she wanted to. There is treachery and betrayal in the Kingdom of Gelaira, and the people, as well as the land itself, are slowly withering. Persis and Prince Haryk have several adventures together as they try to find a cure and the origin of his curse. I thoroughly enjoyed the characters and world building, and wish there was an epilogue.
Persis, a dune elf with healing magic, is an indentured servant to a human princess—and when that princess is sent to marry a sick dark elf, Persis must go along to heal him. But more than one person wants him dead, and Persis gets caught in the middle. This was an enjoyable read, with a dark curse, dragon riders, and a lovely happily ever after.
I really liked Persis, and the relationships with the side characters were great! I didn’t fall in love with the male MC—he was a bit too cynical for me, and the romance felt rushed. Overall, though, a good action-packed story with themes of sacrifice and healing.
Persis is an elf from the dunes- bound as a maidservant to the Princess of Haldor. She is forced to travel to Galeara, the kingdom of the dark elves, for her mistress’s wedding to the dark elf prince. Not only does the princess NOT want to marry the prince, she wants Persis to use her sand powers- not to heal the sickly prince, but to kill him. Peace weaver is a lovely, sweet romance with lots of adventure, peril and even dragon riding. Highly recommend
An interesting storyline featuring magic, fae, healers, humans, brief dragon appearance, and love. This is my first Haywood read, but I'm curious to see where the following books lead in their storylines.
Strong character development. Detailed world building. Intriguing plotline and balanced pacing.
"Let me help you." "There were some things worth fighting for, and some evils that had to be stopped at all costs."
DNF at 26%. I pushed through a few more chapters than I wanted to because I like the author who recommended the story and a few reviews mentioned this would be good for anyone who liked Elven Alliance by Tara Grayce. I *love* Elven Alliance.
This was not Elven Alliance. So if this book wasn’t your thing, go check out that series!
This story was confusing. I agree with other reviewers that it seems like the reader is dropped in a world you’re meant to already understand. Combine that with I didn’t really like either main character very much and it’s just not a story I’ll finish right now.
No profanity, no spice just kissing, one mention of alcohol (if I remember correctly).
I felt like the end fell flat and I didn’t want to keep reading I thought for sure she was going to get her gifts back or something. There is quite a few times the story was switching from point of view that I got confused and then it was sometimes third person and then not. The end climax war scene was actually confusing.
I had a hard time falling in love with the characters a little bit, but mostly because I couldn’t even figure out how to say the make MC name :)
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Wow, this book gripped me from start to finish! Everly has a great way of writing that immediately drew me in and made it hard for me to put the book down! I loved the worldbuilding and I’m really excited to continue the series!
The only thing I didn’t like is that Persis carried the whole romance. I liked Haryk, but it felt like he never gave anything to be deserving of Persis’ love, so it was hard for me to root for them as a couple. Still, I liked the way the story ended and look forward to reading more!