This book gave me a weird vibe, and not just the cult storyline. It felt sloppy and rushed as well as disjointed and filler-heavy.
Greg's behavior towards Jill is gross. He invalidates her opinions, acts patronizingly towards her, and is terrible at expressing his feelings in a healthy way. Honestly, I really hope they don't get married. At one point, Jill decides to put off an important discussion until after their wedding. HELLO?! I really dislike Greg. So much. Typically, there is always a little friction between the main character and the cop love interest, but this is too much, and no amount of Greg saying "That's my girl" (ugh) makes up for it. Seriously, at one point he calls her a brat and says that he's cursed to love strong women. It was definitely not just Sherrie's (his ex-wife) fault that they divorced, despite the characters constantly bringing up how awful she is. Every time she's mentioned, they have to reiterate how terrible she was. I hate the misogyny of pitting his "perfect ex-wife who was actually superficial and evil and only concerned with her image" against "down-home girl-next-door Jill." With the bonus of "mother-in-law prefers the ex-wife."
The writing is not good. It's stilted and unnatural and makes Jill seem almost childlike at certain points. Here's a partial quote: "My tummy was full of yummy food." She used to be a lawyer!! Why does she talk like this?! At one point she refers to herself as an "alumnus." Because Jill is a woman, the correct term is "alumna." I could be wrong, but I don't think that a lawyer, who has experience with Latin terminology, would have gotten that wrong. She also uses "inferred" instead of "implied."
Here's a sentence that I thought was absolutely off-the-wall:
"I guess he thought [being a] bookstore owner meant I would be a pushover. A Mary Milquetoast."
WHAT DOES THAT MEAN?! WHO TALKS LIKE THAT?! HOW DOES THAT EVEN CORRELATE?!
Here's another bizarre sentence from Jill, this one about a counselor's credentials:
"Was it someone in the brain business, like a medical counselor? Or someone in the heart business, like a minister?"
Why do you talk like this, Jill?
I can't stand the misogyny of this book. Multiple references to "ball and chain" and also "buying the cow." Please stop.
The clue to the mystery is way too obvious. The pacing of the book is also really bad. It takes almost 20% of the book to get to the murder, and the subplot of Jill's wedding planning really gets in the way throughout the book. It is SO slow. The missing woman subplot is too much and is just shoehorned in to give Jill a reason to investigate. It's not like that's really needed; we all know that she's going to investigate anyway. Also, didn't the last installment feature a missing woman? Is every installment from now on going to have an extraneous "missing woman" subplot?
Continuity of the book is off. Greg and Jill refer to Pastor Bill as Sadie's boyfriend, but they've been engaged for a couple of books now. Like, it literally was a minor plot point.
And we still have the "I can't eat baked treats or 'unhealthy food' or else I'll gain weight and I won't be able to fit into my dress!" One, the wedding is less than two weeks away. If you gain enough weight to not fit in your clothes in two weeks, postpone the wedding because you have an emergent medical issue. Two, this constant food policing and fatphobia that's rampant in cozies is completely intolerable. It's okay to have baked treats. It's okay to have weight fluctuations. Being fat doesn't make you ugly. Having these attitudes about food and weight does.
I wish authors would do more research. One of the characters complains about her treatment at a teaching hospital, how she always had students observing her medical procedures. You can ask them to leave, you know.
The cult leader is saying the most mild, reasonable opinions. "It's important to keep your word." "The children didn't choose this life like us adults, so we keep them out of the limelight as much as possible." "My favorite Bible version is the one comparing the original Greek to the KJV because it is important to know the original context." The bit about knowing the Bible's original context is probably the least controversial thing about religion that anyone's said in this series. (Side note, the Old Testament was written in Hebrew and Aramaic, and the New Testament was written in koine Greek.) WHAT is happening?! I feel like I'm in the Twilight Zone. They made the cult seem more like Dharma, the commune from Kate Carlisle's Bookbinder Mystery series, at first. The author should have led with the more sinister aspects of the cult first.
Another nitpicky point, it's very odd that Jill would have never heard of the NIV version of the Bible. That's probably one of the most common translations of the Bible. And you own a bookstore, and you've never seen a kid's Bible?! You can walk into a Barnes and Noble and find many of the Bibles that were in the cult bookstore. It is totally bizarre that Jill is acting like she's never seen such a wide array of Bibles.
Content warning: mention of physical and sexual abuse
The cult storyline is VERY odd. New Hope is a church in real life, and it would have been better to make up an outlandish name. It's just weird overall that the book is focusing so heavily on a Christian extremist cult. It's not very cozy, for one, and it's a very odd creative decision. Extremist Christian cults are often known for physical abuse (To Train Up a Child by Michael and Debbie Pearl has resulted in the death of children due to corporal punishment), sexual abuse (rape and incest are common in Amish communities, and marital rape and coercion are common in the fundamentalist Baptist and evangelic communities), and many survivors experience severe trauma. The author would have been much better served making this any garden-variety "weird cult with strange rules." I wonder if the author was trying to get in on the success of ex-Christian-cult memoirs and documentaries, particularly the Shiny Happy People documentary featuring Bill Gothard and the Institute of Basic Life Principles, The Way Down documentary featuring Gwen Shamblin Lara, as well as Counting the Cost, a memoir by Jill Duggar Dillard, former IBLP member.