The name Tahegin deserves a place on the “Tragedeigh” subreddit.
This started great and I was really invested in the first half. After that it just became long and too drawn out. So much of the story was happening off page, Rix wins the Super Bowl, they buy a house, they’re going on dates, Tahegins family’s reaction to their relationship, so much is just being told to us and we’re not able to actually read about these events. The first half had long descriptions of plays and games and then it was like “yep we played and lost, yep we played and won”.
Also there were too many unanswered topics that get brought up and left open; Micah’s career, Lawsons punishment as a ref who was blatantly cheating, was Tahegins staff fired because of his pay cut or because he wasn’t spending time at his house, Tahegins addiction/depression that sort of tapers off at the end, Tahegins agent firing him because he got a smaller contract but she would’ve still been making so much money off him for endorsements that firing him would’ve been so stupid. A few other things that just are brought up and fade away without a conclusion.
Ultimately this was a promising book that lost its way somewhere after 50%. It should’ve been marked as a “slow burn”. There were also a number of grammatical errors that I felt should’ve been caught by an editor, and the flow of a lot of the sentences didn’t work right sometimes. I’m disappointed because the beginning was so good and strong and it petered out to a sad ending, where it just kind of ended. No real wrap up, no epilogue, just we’re publicly dating and bam last page.
Also just looking through the reviews, it’s a bit weird there are no reviews for all the 4 and 5 star ratings.