This was...something; it's not bad per se; it just didn't hold my interest. The insta-love didn't work for me, and I feel like the plot was rushed.
Kelly's fake engagement with Paul fell through after his father found out he had been stealing from his company. It was a fake engagement because Kelly's was basically sold to Paul. Her father and her ex-fiance were in cahoots, doing shady stuff.
Anyway, Luke's investigation led to Paul getting caught and being sent to rehab. The day everything was revealed was the first time Luke saw Kelly, and cue insta-love. He told her he's going to drive her home, Kelly agreed reluctantly, but then she got out of the car when they stopped at the red light. And a week had passed, and Luke had been looking for her ever since until he finally found her in her brother's school waiting area.
Luke didn't give her a choice again, and he took them home. This is where he found out that her father is a big-time criminal and involved in drug dealing. He made a fake business proposition, and once they agreed to discuss it at a later point, Kelly's father handed her to Luke like cattle. 😒
He took them home. They get frisky, but the next day her brother sprained his arm, and she had no choice but to leave the apartment to go to the hospital. Her father's men caught them and brought them back home when this POS realized that Luke had double-crossed him. There is some violence and gun shooting, but in the end, everything works out for the best.
Anyhoo, I didn't get invested in the story; there's no chemistry between the MCs. The romance and attraction felt like they came out of nowhere. And I'm still trying to understand how they end up together. While this didn't work for me, other readers might feel differently.
Book info:
- Novella
- Virgin FMC, no info with MMC, but I think he's experienced🙄
- Physical assault
- Mention of drug dealing and flesh trade
- Death of parent (on page)
- No cheating, OPD, breakup
- Insta-love
- HEA (six yrs later, married with children)