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366 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 8, 2022







* The plot is as loosey-goosey as a bowlful of cubed Jello.
* If this book were a film, I’d say it needed a continuity editor. Big gaps or inconsistencies occur several times, especially in the section where Harland & Huxley interact with characters belonging to the Reynolds group that they encounter in a shared campsite.
* Editing, people!! Example: early in the book, the woman that Hux is currently dating is referrred to as an archaeologist, then many chapters later she’s referred to as an anthropologist, and at the end of the book again she is an archaeologist. Did anybody but the author review this book for consistency before it was published?
* Logic (reality?) walks right out of several scenes along the narrative’s journey: e.g., Reynolds quickly disappears from the wilderness camp, taking all of his stuff with him. We know he has a duffle containing six rifles; a duffle with group cooking gear, food, supplies; and his own tent & wilderness gear. What human (let alone a middle-aged one) can walk away with all this heavy gear alone and leave no trace behind?