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The Spy Prince of Basadesh
The world is at war, and Arjun’s country is falling. As the prince of Bashadesh he must risk everything to protect his people-no matter how dangerous. The plan is simple, if perilous; go undercover, infiltrate the enemy’s castle, and bring them down from within. If he’s caught, death is certain, both for himself and for his countrymen.
He soon meets the high wizard responsible for his country's rapid decline, and everything changes. Taken into the man’s service and working undercover as his servant, Arjun is determined to do whatever it takes to win the war. But hatred battles with admiration as he slowly begins to see a different side of his enemy.
Eldrin ‘Frostfire’ Glaser is capable, driven and devilishly handsome. He’s undoubtedly at the pinnacle of his power and prestige. But he’s never met anyone like Arjun. Even in disguise, the spy prince is dazzling, an irresistible spark of light in the frigid castle he calls home. When the two meet, sparks fly and both must question everything they thought they knew. As their worlds collide and passions ignite, Arjun and Eldrin must navigate a treacherous path where love and duty intertwine.
Join them on their journey of discovery, where loyalties are tested, and the fate of nations hangs in the balance. Dive into the "The Spy Prince of Basadesh" today, and experience how love can shape the world.
He soon meets the high wizard responsible for his country's rapid decline, and everything changes. Taken into the man’s service and working undercover as his servant, Arjun is determined to do whatever it takes to win the war. But hatred battles with admiration as he slowly begins to see a different side of his enemy.
Eldrin ‘Frostfire’ Glaser is capable, driven and devilishly handsome. He’s undoubtedly at the pinnacle of his power and prestige. But he’s never met anyone like Arjun. Even in disguise, the spy prince is dazzling, an irresistible spark of light in the frigid castle he calls home. When the two meet, sparks fly and both must question everything they thought they knew. As their worlds collide and passions ignite, Arjun and Eldrin must navigate a treacherous path where love and duty intertwine.
Join them on their journey of discovery, where loyalties are tested, and the fate of nations hangs in the balance. Dive into the "The Spy Prince of Basadesh" today, and experience how love can shape the world.
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286 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 28, 2024
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June 11, 2024
~2.5~
This appears to be the author's first published novel, and it's not a bad debut. I struggled with how to rate this book, and this is why: The storytelling is good; the writing is not.
Arjun, the prince of a kingdom at war, dons a magical disguise to spy on the invader. Arjun is brave and puts his life on the line for his country and people.
Eldrin is a powerful mage and the right-hand man of the conquering leader. He loves magic, but he's not cruel and doesn't like that his magic is being used for nefarious purposes.
Eldrin becomes smitten with Arjun, and Arjun uses their connection to gather insider information. However, Arjun soon realizes that Eldrin isn't a bad guy. Eldrin does as he's told because he has no choice.
That's what I mean by good storytelling. The character development is well done. The story is told from a dual POV, and I had no trouble distinguishing between the voices of the MCs.
There's very real tension as Eldrin prepares to make the invading leader (an evil, power-hungry man) a True King, a title that would make him invincible.
I was into the story until it ended in the middle of a scene. The last chapter is billed as an "epilogue," but it's decidedly not one. I wouldn't have read this book had I known the ending isn't even a HFN. The MCs are together, but they don't trust each other, and nothing is resolved with the plot as a whole.
The main issue I had with this book, however, was the writing or, more accurately, the editing or lack thereof. The author thanks Dustin, her "ever faithful editor," in the author's note, but I don't think Dustin deserves the accolades because this book is an editing disaster.
There are multiple typos and grammatical errors:
inconsistent punctuation (sometimes the comma is inside the quotation mark, sometimes outside, with no rhyme or reason),
missing apostrophes (cant instead of can't),
wrong words (taught instead of taut),
egregious use of the semi-colon (a semi-colon is not used to introduce lists ffs!),
sentence fragments (utilized well beyond what could be considered "artistic license"),
and myriad other random mistakes.
The editing issues pulled me out of the story time and again, to the point I couldn't focus on the plot because I was fuming that the author allowed this book to be published in such a disgraceful state.
This appears to be the author's first published novel, and it's not a bad debut. I struggled with how to rate this book, and this is why: The storytelling is good; the writing is not.
Arjun, the prince of a kingdom at war, dons a magical disguise to spy on the invader. Arjun is brave and puts his life on the line for his country and people.
Eldrin is a powerful mage and the right-hand man of the conquering leader. He loves magic, but he's not cruel and doesn't like that his magic is being used for nefarious purposes.
Eldrin becomes smitten with Arjun, and Arjun uses their connection to gather insider information. However, Arjun soon realizes that Eldrin isn't a bad guy. Eldrin does as he's told because he has no choice.
That's what I mean by good storytelling. The character development is well done. The story is told from a dual POV, and I had no trouble distinguishing between the voices of the MCs.
There's very real tension as Eldrin prepares to make the invading leader (an evil, power-hungry man) a True King, a title that would make him invincible.
I was into the story until it ended in the middle of a scene. The last chapter is billed as an "epilogue," but it's decidedly not one. I wouldn't have read this book had I known the ending isn't even a HFN. The MCs are together, but they don't trust each other, and nothing is resolved with the plot as a whole.
The main issue I had with this book, however, was the writing or, more accurately, the editing or lack thereof. The author thanks Dustin, her "ever faithful editor," in the author's note, but I don't think Dustin deserves the accolades because this book is an editing disaster.
There are multiple typos and grammatical errors:
inconsistent punctuation (sometimes the comma is inside the quotation mark, sometimes outside, with no rhyme or reason),
missing apostrophes (cant instead of can't),
wrong words (taught instead of taut),
egregious use of the semi-colon (a semi-colon is not used to introduce lists ffs!),
sentence fragments (utilized well beyond what could be considered "artistic license"),
and myriad other random mistakes.
The editing issues pulled me out of the story time and again, to the point I couldn't focus on the plot because I was fuming that the author allowed this book to be published in such a disgraceful state.
May 22, 2024
I am always in search of new queer Fantasy books to read, so I was very happy to have stumbled upon The Spy Prince of Basadesh!
In an act of desperation, the country of Bashadesh sends their prince Arjun in disguise to infiltrate the castle of the invading nation Zorvyaka, where he ends up as a servant under one of the key people pivotal for Zorvyaka's success in war: the high wizard Eldrin. Sparks fly.
As someone who loves intrigue and infiltration and spy stuff, it was frankly a bit disappointing how bad all these characters were at spying and sussing out spies. I was also lukewarm about the romance, as it seems that despite the adverse situation, they fell rather hard and rather quickly for each other, but it does contribute to the generally light atmosphere. I'm not sure on the exact ages of the protagonists, but I would definitely classify it as YA/NA, and I think the general 'simplicity' is due to that.
Despite my criticism, The Spy Prince of Basadesh was an entertaining and surprisingly light read. I am looking forward to the sequel, which I'm definitely picking up!
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
In an act of desperation, the country of Bashadesh sends their prince Arjun in disguise to infiltrate the castle of the invading nation Zorvyaka, where he ends up as a servant under one of the key people pivotal for Zorvyaka's success in war: the high wizard Eldrin. Sparks fly.
As someone who loves intrigue and infiltration and spy stuff, it was frankly a bit disappointing how bad all these characters were at spying and sussing out spies. I was also lukewarm about the romance, as it seems that despite the adverse situation, they fell rather hard and rather quickly for each other, but it does contribute to the generally light atmosphere. I'm not sure on the exact ages of the protagonists, but I would definitely classify it as YA/NA, and I think the general 'simplicity' is due to that.
Despite my criticism, The Spy Prince of Basadesh was an entertaining and surprisingly light read. I am looking forward to the sequel, which I'm definitely picking up!
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
June 11, 2024
This is an engrossing read, and the setting is full of tension, perfect for a true enemies-to-lovers story. We get a book that turns this setting into an adventure book and just an overall fun ride!
Eldrin only wants to do understand magic but his inventions end up being used for war, elevating him to the highest rungs of the royal court. To everyone, he's a powerful man, but Eldrin himself realizes that with all his magic, he has very little political power and he'll always be "the wizard you summon to get things done."
It doesn't seem like that in the kingdom of Basadesh, a place conquered with Eldrin's magic. Arjun, prince of the impoverished realm, sees no choice but to infiltrate the conquerors' court as pretty much a slave, and act as a spy for his people's counter-movement. Thanks to him standing up for another slave, Eldrin scoops him up so that he gets assigned to Eldrin's household. Arjun feels this will serve him and his goals all the better. Little does Arjun know Eldrin isn't the kind of man he thought.
The way this book is written has me just turning the page. There's a little bit of a bombastic feeling throughout the prose that I figure is just a part of the overall atmosphere of the book. That's why I'm not really mad at how physically perfect both our main characters are. It's part of the vibe, just go with it.
I could read for ages about Arjun's clever ways of sabotaging Eldrin's work, and Eldrin trying to navigate a court he deeply disagrees with. They have so much chemistry! I really enjoyed this book and want to see where the story goes in the next book!
It's also worth noting that this isn't an ownvoices book and the author is very open about that in their notes. I, not being of Desi culture myself, can't judge the representation in the book.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Eldrin only wants to do understand magic but his inventions end up being used for war, elevating him to the highest rungs of the royal court. To everyone, he's a powerful man, but Eldrin himself realizes that with all his magic, he has very little political power and he'll always be "the wizard you summon to get things done."
It doesn't seem like that in the kingdom of Basadesh, a place conquered with Eldrin's magic. Arjun, prince of the impoverished realm, sees no choice but to infiltrate the conquerors' court as pretty much a slave, and act as a spy for his people's counter-movement. Thanks to him standing up for another slave, Eldrin scoops him up so that he gets assigned to Eldrin's household. Arjun feels this will serve him and his goals all the better. Little does Arjun know Eldrin isn't the kind of man he thought.
The way this book is written has me just turning the page. There's a little bit of a bombastic feeling throughout the prose that I figure is just a part of the overall atmosphere of the book. That's why I'm not really mad at how physically perfect both our main characters are. It's part of the vibe, just go with it.
I could read for ages about Arjun's clever ways of sabotaging Eldrin's work, and Eldrin trying to navigate a court he deeply disagrees with. They have so much chemistry! I really enjoyed this book and want to see where the story goes in the next book!
It's also worth noting that this isn't an ownvoices book and the author is very open about that in their notes. I, not being of Desi culture myself, can't judge the representation in the book.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
July 17, 2024
Thank you so much to H.M. Heath for providing me with a copy in exchange for a review.
Would you go as far as to become a slave for a different country to save your own? Arjun, the prince of Basadesh, risks his life to go undercover and infiltrate the enemy's castle.
Despite being on a mission to ensure his country's victory in the war against Zorvyaka, Arjun forms a close bond with the high wizard, Eldrin—the very man responsible for his country's demise. While getting close to the wizard could be a strategy to win the war, Arjun is torn between his duty to his country and his growing feelings for Eldrin.
A new gay fantasy book has hit the market, and as a queer person, I love bringing these books into the spotlight. They're often written by queer authors, and this one is no exception.
"The Spy Prince of Basadesh" is H.M. Heath's debut novel and the first in The Jali Throne series. I am honored to have read it, as it is a strong start to the series. The author knows how to build up characters and make them fit within the world. But the world itself felt not as developed as the characters. I, however, do really appreciate the amount of research she has done to keep the book culturally appropriate.
While the book does include sexual scenes, they are not the main focus. I feel like it established a build up for Arjun and Eldrin's relationship. A good enemies-to-lovers book, which I musn't lie has become one of my favourite tropes.
The book is a straightforward read, with a primary focus on the romance rather than the extensive background storytelling. The war's details are somewhat sparse, with the king of Zorvyaka being depictted as greedy and ruthless in my eyes.
The ending for the book felt for me short, till I realised it is becoming a series. So maybe that the second book will make me feel better about the ending of book one.
Would you go as far as to become a slave for a different country to save your own? Arjun, the prince of Basadesh, risks his life to go undercover and infiltrate the enemy's castle.
Despite being on a mission to ensure his country's victory in the war against Zorvyaka, Arjun forms a close bond with the high wizard, Eldrin—the very man responsible for his country's demise. While getting close to the wizard could be a strategy to win the war, Arjun is torn between his duty to his country and his growing feelings for Eldrin.
A new gay fantasy book has hit the market, and as a queer person, I love bringing these books into the spotlight. They're often written by queer authors, and this one is no exception.
"The Spy Prince of Basadesh" is H.M. Heath's debut novel and the first in The Jali Throne series. I am honored to have read it, as it is a strong start to the series. The author knows how to build up characters and make them fit within the world. But the world itself felt not as developed as the characters. I, however, do really appreciate the amount of research she has done to keep the book culturally appropriate.
While the book does include sexual scenes, they are not the main focus. I feel like it established a build up for Arjun and Eldrin's relationship. A good enemies-to-lovers book, which I musn't lie has become one of my favourite tropes.
The book is a straightforward read, with a primary focus on the romance rather than the extensive background storytelling. The war's details are somewhat sparse, with the king of Zorvyaka being depictted as greedy and ruthless in my eyes.
The ending for the book felt for me short, till I realised it is becoming a series. So maybe that the second book will make me feel better about the ending of book one.
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June 11, 2024I don't even know how to rate this book.
It all started so well, the first couple of chapters really got me invested in the story and the MC (the spy Prince, that is). But then enter the second POV and enter the following chapters and everything went downhill from there. For me, as a reader, this novel was extremely puerile, both in terms of writing style ('it was as if', 'it felt like', 'it was like' - far too much telling, never any ashowing) and in terms of plot. It was weak, needing a bit more thought put into it, especially where it came to the love connection between MCs. Chemistry between the couple was inexistent and the 'enemies to lovers' was more like a 'let me hump him now' from both sides. The author never took the time to actually explore deeply the emotional aspect of falling for someone who's responsible for the downfall of your own nation, it all happened way too fast, and Arjun was far too easily reconciled with his feelings and emotions, hardly taking a couple of seconds to REALLY question himself and feel the weight of the consequences. Plus, instalove in all its glory - and although I am a firm believer that one can develop intense and deep feelings for another in a very short space of time, feelings that last for a lifetime - this was a question of blink and you're in love. As for the 'wicked sorcerer' I never came across a character that felt so vacant and oblivious and actually, extremely stupid. For a man who prided himself on being guarded at all times, damn, he really was an idiot in Arjun's presence, failing to notice what was obvious and right in front of his face. I know love's supposed to make you blind, but this was a little too much, especially given the manner in which he comes into the realisation AT SUCH AN APPROPRIATE MOMENT IN THE NARRATIVE...
But the worst part wasn't even this. The immense amount of typos, misspellings, grammatical mistakes peppered all through the novel made it very, very hard to really dive into the story. I mean, there were typos even in the chapter headings, ffs! The entire thing read so much like a first draft, the novel obviously NOT READY for publication, I came close to giving up several times. What shocked me more was that the author took the time to thank their editor - if an editor lets this HUGE amount of problems pass by on their edits, honey, you've been scammed. This novel was definitely not edited, it even lacked a read-through, because there is no way anyone reading it would miss at least one occasion where the MCs names where misspelled... let alone all the other blatant issues and typos. I'm not giving it any ratings because if I would, I would give it one star, but this is the author's first book, I gather, and I believe it will serve them to gain experience.
I enjoyed the foray into Desi cultures and sceneries, but there wasn't enough of it, though I suppose more will be presented in the upcoming sequels.
It all started so well, the first couple of chapters really got me invested in the story and the MC (the spy Prince, that is). But then enter the second POV and enter the following chapters and everything went downhill from there. For me, as a reader, this novel was extremely puerile, both in terms of writing style ('it was as if', 'it felt like', 'it was like' - far too much telling, never any ashowing) and in terms of plot. It was weak, needing a bit more thought put into it, especially where it came to the love connection between MCs. Chemistry between the couple was inexistent and the 'enemies to lovers' was more like a 'let me hump him now' from both sides. The author never took the time to actually explore deeply the emotional aspect of falling for someone who's responsible for the downfall of your own nation, it all happened way too fast, and Arjun was far too easily reconciled with his feelings and emotions, hardly taking a couple of seconds to REALLY question himself and feel the weight of the consequences. Plus, instalove in all its glory - and although I am a firm believer that one can develop intense and deep feelings for another in a very short space of time, feelings that last for a lifetime - this was a question of blink and you're in love. As for the 'wicked sorcerer' I never came across a character that felt so vacant and oblivious and actually, extremely stupid. For a man who prided himself on being guarded at all times, damn, he really was an idiot in Arjun's presence, failing to notice what was obvious and right in front of his face. I know love's supposed to make you blind, but this was a little too much, especially given the manner in which he comes into the realisation AT SUCH AN APPROPRIATE MOMENT IN THE NARRATIVE...
But the worst part wasn't even this. The immense amount of typos, misspellings, grammatical mistakes peppered all through the novel made it very, very hard to really dive into the story. I mean, there were typos even in the chapter headings, ffs! The entire thing read so much like a first draft, the novel obviously NOT READY for publication, I came close to giving up several times. What shocked me more was that the author took the time to thank their editor - if an editor lets this HUGE amount of problems pass by on their edits, honey, you've been scammed. This novel was definitely not edited, it even lacked a read-through, because there is no way anyone reading it would miss at least one occasion where the MCs names where misspelled... let alone all the other blatant issues and typos. I'm not giving it any ratings because if I would, I would give it one star, but this is the author's first book, I gather, and I believe it will serve them to gain experience.
I enjoyed the foray into Desi cultures and sceneries, but there wasn't enough of it, though I suppose more will be presented in the upcoming sequels.
September 9, 2024
Another one for the "I wanted to like this more than I did" shelf, I'm afraid.
Gorgeous, enticing cover. A premise that sounded right up my alley. A world that should have been fascinating given the inspiration that went into it. There was so much promise here, and yet... nothing about this book really worked for me, as attested to by the fact that it took me forever to get through it because I kept putting it down and had to grudgingly force myself to pick it back up time and again.
The writing is all telling, no showing. The worldbuilding lacks depth and feels like mere façade. (Why are these two countries even at war? I don't think we ever found out.) The plot had so many interesting elements going for it, but felt underdeveloped. I was not invested in the characters or the romance. At all. I couldn't connect to either of the protagonists - and truth be told, I found neither the slightest bit likable or at the very least interesting enough to care about their fates or their lovestory (such as it was, as it's mainly instalust followed by being told they're now oh-so-in-love, with no believable foundation or palpable emotional connection).
For me, this story just didn't live up to its potential - which is a shame, because potential there was aplenty.
*** I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. ***
Gorgeous, enticing cover. A premise that sounded right up my alley. A world that should have been fascinating given the inspiration that went into it. There was so much promise here, and yet... nothing about this book really worked for me, as attested to by the fact that it took me forever to get through it because I kept putting it down and had to grudgingly force myself to pick it back up time and again.
The writing is all telling, no showing. The worldbuilding lacks depth and feels like mere façade. (Why are these two countries even at war? I don't think we ever found out.) The plot had so many interesting elements going for it, but felt underdeveloped. I was not invested in the characters or the romance. At all. I couldn't connect to either of the protagonists - and truth be told, I found neither the slightest bit likable or at the very least interesting enough to care about their fates or their lovestory (such as it was, as it's mainly instalust followed by being told they're now oh-so-in-love, with no believable foundation or palpable emotional connection).
For me, this story just didn't live up to its potential - which is a shame, because potential there was aplenty.
*** I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. ***
July 9, 2024
I don’t want to make it seem like the 2.5 star rating makes this look like a bad book, which it really wasn’t. It just needs a little… shaping.
As per usual, I’d love to start with the highlights. It’s clear this author did her research for the kingdom of Zorvyaka. Despite the world building being mildly confusing and eyebrow raising at times, the inspirations of Russia and the Romanov days were not lost on me. From the snowy landscape to the hierarchy of power, it was, more or less, executed well. I can’t really say anything about Basadesh as, well, it simply wasn’t the focus of this book! I would’ve loved it if there *was* more focus but I understand why, since it’s to come in later editions.
A few things I appreciate greatly that surprised me was how easy it was to slip into this book, Arjun and Eldrin were in their late 20s (as far as I’m concerned are their actual ages) which is more of a rarity in LGBTQ books! and how mildly invested I found myself in their relationship. I couldn’t explain it to you but those gay men had a slight pull on me idk man.
Now onto the critiques. Where is Chekhov and why did his gun not go off? I’m talking about the incident at the beginning of the book where Eldrin crafted that potion of sorts with the goats hair. It would’ve been so interesting to see how something as “simple” as a this be used later on at the climax of the story.
The world building was my biggest gripe in The Spy Prince of Basadesh.
- The fundamental question of “Why are we at war?” wasn’t fully answered/alluded to. Why are Basadesh and Zorvyaka at war? What are the political motives apart from the obvious of “they’ve invaded us/we invaded them”? If these were answered in some regard, they were completely lost on me. Also, why does it seem like only the people of Basadesh are called discriminatory terms (like dogs)? I’m sure Basadesh would’ve come up with equally discriminatory terms for the people of Zorvyaka… since they’re at war…
- When bringing up mythology such as Griffins and Unicorns, they need to make some sort of sense as to how they fit in to the overall world, seeing as those two examples have folk tales, fables, and myths from many different cultures. It doesn’t leave a good taste in my mouth when the world building doesn’t take into account how these types of things fit into itself. Also the casual mentions of God, heaven, and hell made me questioning if this was *our* world or a fantasy world.
Next thing on the chopping block isn’t a full critique, it’s mainly just grammar and spelling errors. Aldrin got a good chuckle out of me.
(Also not a full critique but why were the sex scenes some of the most memorable scenes of the whole book LOL)
Looping back to Arjun and Eldrin, I almost wish we got less of them. There was a great opportunity to deal with how it feels to fall in love with the enemy, falling for a “servant”, and similar internal discussions. The enemy dynamic should’ve lasted a lot longer than 30% into the book.
Final rambling! The general flow and plot was a little wonky, but I got the main jist. It felt very touch and go— a quick important scene followed by a longer, more drawn out, and ultimately less important scene.
Passed the aphantasia test! At some points it was hard to know what was going on/where the characters were but overall it was relatively easy to understand where we were, the scenery, what the characters looked like, and other visual components.
I kinda got lazy writing this towards the end idk if you can tell loll
2.5/5 rounded up to three.
As per usual, I’d love to start with the highlights. It’s clear this author did her research for the kingdom of Zorvyaka. Despite the world building being mildly confusing and eyebrow raising at times, the inspirations of Russia and the Romanov days were not lost on me. From the snowy landscape to the hierarchy of power, it was, more or less, executed well. I can’t really say anything about Basadesh as, well, it simply wasn’t the focus of this book! I would’ve loved it if there *was* more focus but I understand why, since it’s to come in later editions.
A few things I appreciate greatly that surprised me was how easy it was to slip into this book, Arjun and Eldrin were in their late 20s (as far as I’m concerned are their actual ages) which is more of a rarity in LGBTQ books! and how mildly invested I found myself in their relationship. I couldn’t explain it to you but those gay men had a slight pull on me idk man.
Now onto the critiques. Where is Chekhov and why did his gun not go off? I’m talking about the incident at the beginning of the book where Eldrin crafted that potion of sorts with the goats hair. It would’ve been so interesting to see how something as “simple” as a this be used later on at the climax of the story.
The world building was my biggest gripe in The Spy Prince of Basadesh.
- The fundamental question of “Why are we at war?” wasn’t fully answered/alluded to. Why are Basadesh and Zorvyaka at war? What are the political motives apart from the obvious of “they’ve invaded us/we invaded them”? If these were answered in some regard, they were completely lost on me. Also, why does it seem like only the people of Basadesh are called discriminatory terms (like dogs)? I’m sure Basadesh would’ve come up with equally discriminatory terms for the people of Zorvyaka… since they’re at war…
- When bringing up mythology such as Griffins and Unicorns, they need to make some sort of sense as to how they fit in to the overall world, seeing as those two examples have folk tales, fables, and myths from many different cultures. It doesn’t leave a good taste in my mouth when the world building doesn’t take into account how these types of things fit into itself. Also the casual mentions of God, heaven, and hell made me questioning if this was *our* world or a fantasy world.
Next thing on the chopping block isn’t a full critique, it’s mainly just grammar and spelling errors. Aldrin got a good chuckle out of me.
(Also not a full critique but why were the sex scenes some of the most memorable scenes of the whole book LOL)
Looping back to Arjun and Eldrin, I almost wish we got less of them. There was a great opportunity to deal with how it feels to fall in love with the enemy, falling for a “servant”, and similar internal discussions. The enemy dynamic should’ve lasted a lot longer than 30% into the book.
Final rambling! The general flow and plot was a little wonky, but I got the main jist. It felt very touch and go— a quick important scene followed by a longer, more drawn out, and ultimately less important scene.
Passed the aphantasia test! At some points it was hard to know what was going on/where the characters were but overall it was relatively easy to understand where we were, the scenery, what the characters looked like, and other visual components.
I kinda got lazy writing this towards the end idk if you can tell loll
2.5/5 rounded up to three.
June 14, 2024
An intriguing love story that pulls you in
Wow! This book captivated me from start to finish. I was lost in the love, the drama, and the spying. I couldn't put it down and when I did I just wanted to come back to it.
The story is so well done with magic, far off lands, and desperate kingdoms who will do anything. The love story really draws you in and you feel as if you are there experiencing the first fledglings of love together with them. I wasn't sure how I was going to feel about 2 men in bed together but the author did such a good job with it. It wasn't overly done but added to the story and spiciness of it all.
You really felt the turmoil of all the emotions the characters were going through.
There is a bit of a cliff hanger but nothing too extreme. I was a little concerned with the other reviews but it felt like it wrapped up a big part of the story which was nice. I am excited for book two!
Wow! This book captivated me from start to finish. I was lost in the love, the drama, and the spying. I couldn't put it down and when I did I just wanted to come back to it.
The story is so well done with magic, far off lands, and desperate kingdoms who will do anything. The love story really draws you in and you feel as if you are there experiencing the first fledglings of love together with them. I wasn't sure how I was going to feel about 2 men in bed together but the author did such a good job with it. It wasn't overly done but added to the story and spiciness of it all.
You really felt the turmoil of all the emotions the characters were going through.
There is a bit of a cliff hanger but nothing too extreme. I was a little concerned with the other reviews but it felt like it wrapped up a big part of the story which was nice. I am excited for book two!
May 29, 2024
He will do anything to saves his country and he will go undercover with the enemy. He will be their servant and things are going to get complicated when feelings become involved. How will he deal with this twist? Will they find out he is the enemy? Follow them to find out
I received an advance copy from hidden gems and I want to review
I received an advance copy from hidden gems and I want to review
June 5, 2024
I thoroughly enjoyed this book from start to finish! I love reading stories with political intrigue like this, and the characters were fun to get to know. As for the romance, I was a little on the fence about it at first, but once Arjun and Eldrin started setting boundaries with each other (and showed their protective sides), I was sold. I can’t wait to read book two when that comes out. I received a free eARC of this, and am choosing to leave an honest review.
July 24, 2024
I had high hopes for this book and was sorely disappointed.
The first few chapters were really good. I was super excited to get into the plot of this book, and then the POV change happened, and it just... it got so bad.
Arjun's and Eldrin's relationship is so highly unrealistic. There was no build-up to it. They just went from having like two conversations to all of a sudden being in love with each other. It delivered nothing to me in the emotional aspect.
The story was poorly written in general. It felt very call-and-response, sort of? Like, oh, Arjun is going to do this thing, and then obviously Eldrin has to counteract it without really having a reason to? Also, Eldrin is likely one of the most one-dimensional characters I've read in such a long time.
It really felt like there was no true enemy in the book. Yes, there's the king, but it didn't feel that way. Every important plot point fell so flat, and nothing seemed as dire as it was being made out to be.
I really wanted to like this book; the summary was so promising, but it just wasn't for me.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The first few chapters were really good. I was super excited to get into the plot of this book, and then the POV change happened, and it just... it got so bad.
Arjun's and Eldrin's relationship is so highly unrealistic. There was no build-up to it. They just went from having like two conversations to all of a sudden being in love with each other. It delivered nothing to me in the emotional aspect.
The story was poorly written in general. It felt very call-and-response, sort of? Like, oh, Arjun is going to do this thing, and then obviously Eldrin has to counteract it without really having a reason to? Also, Eldrin is likely one of the most one-dimensional characters I've read in such a long time.
It really felt like there was no true enemy in the book. Yes, there's the king, but it didn't feel that way. Every important plot point fell so flat, and nothing seemed as dire as it was being made out to be.
I really wanted to like this book; the summary was so promising, but it just wasn't for me.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
December 18, 2024
“The Spy Prince of Basadesh,” by H. M. Heath
I really liked this book. It had political intrigue, magic, spies, and M/M romance. The world building was good and detailed and kept me wanting more. The romance aspect kept me on the edge of my seat whether when he was found out that he would be turned in or be sided with because of love. The book was at a slower pace, but it still was really good. 4 out of 5 stars.
-M/M
-Magic
Thank you for the ARC, Hiddengems.
I really liked this book. It had political intrigue, magic, spies, and M/M romance. The world building was good and detailed and kept me wanting more. The romance aspect kept me on the edge of my seat whether when he was found out that he would be turned in or be sided with because of love. The book was at a slower pace, but it still was really good. 4 out of 5 stars.
-M/M
-Magic
Thank you for the ARC, Hiddengems.
June 20, 2024
This was mostly a pleasant read from beginning to end. I liked the premise, but there were some things that lacked in the overall execution of it.
The chemistry between the main characters felt rushed. I liked their relationship, and there were a lot of cute moments between them, but I wish there was more build up to them coming together. I know that there are people out there that can fall head over heels for someone in a moment and lose all sense of rationality, but it was a bit surprising to see Eldrin, a person in such a powerful position in the enemy’s forces, cave in so easily.
As for Arjun, it irked me how playful and childish he seemed to treat the situation. His entire country is on the line, but he so easily let his personal feelings take priority? And I was scratching my head that he used his real name during the whole operation?!
Though I had issues with the build up of the romance and chemistry between the main characters, the story still peaked my interest. In the last third of the story, the pacing really picks up as you know what is coming. Arjun begins to spiral as he comes to terms with fulfilling his mission and breaking Eldrin’s heart in the process. While I did feel for the both of them dealing with the situation, I also think that the build up and the writing could have been tighter to really make more of an impact. Perhaps if the build up to their romance was stronger, the reader would feel like there’s a lot more to lose.
I do like how Arjun eventually came to terms with his mission and was prepared to sacrifice himself for his family and country. If written a bit stronger then this would have been an excellent story.
What stood out was some of the world building. I thought the author’s description of the types of magic, creatures, and technology that existed were unique and creative, and I found myself trying to visualize these concepts in my mind. I look forward to how this is developed in future books.
What ultimately brought this down a star was the numerous grammatical errors. There were so many such as repeated words (ex.: had had, that that), typos and misspellings, and lots of commas in places that didn’t need them. Many times I found myself revising and rewriting sentences in my head which lead to many interruptions in my reading experience. I had to check a few times to see if this was an advanced reader’s copy and not the actual published book itself. I was shocked to see that the author thanked their editor at the end note which left me wondering: how did all of these errors get by in the final product?
Overall, I still enjoyed this story. The cliffhanger ending (I suppose?) did not bother me at all, and left me wanting to know the next part of the story. I am pleased with the way it left off on a bittersweet note rather than a depressing one.
Though there were many issues mentioned earlier, I do believe with another round of edits and rewrites to tighten up the story, it will be fine. I am looking forward to the next installments in this series and hope the author continues to grow and develop their writing.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Overall rating: 4/5
The chemistry between the main characters felt rushed. I liked their relationship, and there were a lot of cute moments between them, but I wish there was more build up to them coming together. I know that there are people out there that can fall head over heels for someone in a moment and lose all sense of rationality, but it was a bit surprising to see Eldrin, a person in such a powerful position in the enemy’s forces, cave in so easily.
As for Arjun, it irked me how playful and childish he seemed to treat the situation. His entire country is on the line, but he so easily let his personal feelings take priority? And I was scratching my head that he used his real name during the whole operation?!
Though I had issues with the build up of the romance and chemistry between the main characters, the story still peaked my interest. In the last third of the story, the pacing really picks up as you know what is coming. Arjun begins to spiral as he comes to terms with fulfilling his mission and breaking Eldrin’s heart in the process. While I did feel for the both of them dealing with the situation, I also think that the build up and the writing could have been tighter to really make more of an impact. Perhaps if the build up to their romance was stronger, the reader would feel like there’s a lot more to lose.
I do like how Arjun eventually came to terms with his mission and was prepared to sacrifice himself for his family and country. If written a bit stronger then this would have been an excellent story.
What stood out was some of the world building. I thought the author’s description of the types of magic, creatures, and technology that existed were unique and creative, and I found myself trying to visualize these concepts in my mind. I look forward to how this is developed in future books.
What ultimately brought this down a star was the numerous grammatical errors. There were so many such as repeated words (ex.: had had, that that), typos and misspellings, and lots of commas in places that didn’t need them. Many times I found myself revising and rewriting sentences in my head which lead to many interruptions in my reading experience. I had to check a few times to see if this was an advanced reader’s copy and not the actual published book itself. I was shocked to see that the author thanked their editor at the end note which left me wondering: how did all of these errors get by in the final product?
Overall, I still enjoyed this story. The cliffhanger ending (I suppose?) did not bother me at all, and left me wanting to know the next part of the story. I am pleased with the way it left off on a bittersweet note rather than a depressing one.
Though there were many issues mentioned earlier, I do believe with another round of edits and rewrites to tighten up the story, it will be fine. I am looking forward to the next installments in this series and hope the author continues to grow and develop their writing.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Overall rating: 4/5
September 14, 2024
The Spy Prince of Bashadesh, by H.M. Heath, is a captivating fantasy romance that follows Arjun, a prince on a covert mission to save his homeland from the ruthless forces of Zorvyaka. As his country faces the brink of destruction, Arjun infiltrates the enemy's stronghold, assuming the guise of a servant with the intention of crippling Zorvyaka from within. His mission takes an unexpected twist when he is assigned to serve the high wizard, Eldrin Glaser, the very man responsible for his nation’s suffering. As Arjun navigates the perilous world of espionage, he finds himself wrestling with conflicting loyalties. On the one hand, his duty to Bashadesh drives him forward, but on the other, he’s drawn to Eldrin, a man far more complicated than he initially believed. Their undeniable chemistry slowly shifts the dynamic between them, with Eldrin, too, feeling the pull of attraction despite their opposing roles in the brutal war. Secrets begin to unravel, and as passions ignite, both men are forced to confront the delicate balance between loyalty and the powerful connection growing between them.
What immediately hooked me about The Spy Prince of Bashadesh is its intriguing blend of spy thriller and romance. Arjun’s undercover mission creates an ongoing tension that propels the plot forward, and his evolving relationship with Eldrin keeps you eagerly turning pages. The enemies-to-lovers arc is compelling, though I did wish for a bit more sophistication in the espionage aspects. Nonetheless, the undeniable chemistry between Arjun and Eldrin stands out as one of the novel’s strengths. Their romance develops quickly but given the book’s lighter tone I think it works well within the narrative’s framework.
At its core, I think this is a YA/NA fantasy, and while the stakes are high, the prose remains accessible and easy to digest, making the book an enjoyable and brisk read. A standout element of the story is the depth of Eldrin’s character. As a wizard thrust into a position of authority because of his magical abilities, Eldrin finds himself politically sidelined. This adds a nuanced layer to the story. He and Arjun grapple with the limitations imposed on them by the war and the complex power dynamics they’re entangled in, which enriches their individual arcs.
The Spy Prince of Bashadesh excels in delivering a gripping, tension-filled romance set against a backdrop of political intrigue. Fans of LGBT fantasy will find much to enjoy, especially with the well-crafted emotional depth and the evolving relationship at the heart of the story. It's a promising start to what could become a great series, and I’ll definitely be eager to pick up the next installment.
What immediately hooked me about The Spy Prince of Bashadesh is its intriguing blend of spy thriller and romance. Arjun’s undercover mission creates an ongoing tension that propels the plot forward, and his evolving relationship with Eldrin keeps you eagerly turning pages. The enemies-to-lovers arc is compelling, though I did wish for a bit more sophistication in the espionage aspects. Nonetheless, the undeniable chemistry between Arjun and Eldrin stands out as one of the novel’s strengths. Their romance develops quickly but given the book’s lighter tone I think it works well within the narrative’s framework.
At its core, I think this is a YA/NA fantasy, and while the stakes are high, the prose remains accessible and easy to digest, making the book an enjoyable and brisk read. A standout element of the story is the depth of Eldrin’s character. As a wizard thrust into a position of authority because of his magical abilities, Eldrin finds himself politically sidelined. This adds a nuanced layer to the story. He and Arjun grapple with the limitations imposed on them by the war and the complex power dynamics they’re entangled in, which enriches their individual arcs.
The Spy Prince of Bashadesh excels in delivering a gripping, tension-filled romance set against a backdrop of political intrigue. Fans of LGBT fantasy will find much to enjoy, especially with the well-crafted emotional depth and the evolving relationship at the heart of the story. It's a promising start to what could become a great series, and I’ll definitely be eager to pick up the next installment.
June 5, 2024
Reviewed for Love Bytes – 4 Hearts
With the enemy effectively knocking on the door, Arjun uses the tools at his disposal to infiltrate the enemy camp. He didn’t expect to find a particular pre-conceived idea turned on its head.
The Spy Prince of Basadesh is a book that I was both entertained and annoyed with. Despite what is in the Amazon titles, when you look at the book cover closely, this is book one of a series – a factor that was not provided by the author when presented for review and my bad that I didn’t look closer at the cover. I like a good series when each book has its arc and characters crossover. When (as in this case), the storyline continues to the next book, I prefer to read the series in one go. Nevertheless, there are readers that thrive on the thrill of a cliffhanger who will eat up every word. Me – not so much, hence the annoyance.
The story is told in the third person from the viewpoints of Arjun and Eldrin. Technically there are a couple of typos. On one occasion Eldrin is misspelled and on another ‘arousing suspension’ should have been ‘arousing suspicion’, although arousing suspension could have been amusing. It is possible that I received an uncorrected proof, so there is some leeway. On a positive note, there are some beautiful illustrations, and worldbuilding provides some clear images of people, places, and lifestyle. The author has a talent for creating atmosphere and building tension which made the lack of a completed storyline more frustrating because the build-up was almost faultless.
Arjun is a brave soul with a good heart willing to do anything for his country and family. Eldrin is a more complicated person. A man from humble beginnings, he loves the thrill of everything that magic can do, which has almost made him blind to its applications. He is also extremely patriotic. He too, will do anything to defeat the enemy. But love has a magic of its own.
The tale is well-written with plenty of heart-thumping moments and a gradual build to a nail-biting end. But there are huge secrets to be revealed that are carried over to the next book. I’m sure they will provide more angst and a super story, but all it made me do was want to throw my K,indle up the wall. Again – my bad for not doing the research.
So, if you are a reader who has hangups over cliffhangers, then wait till the series has been finished. And I have no doubt it will be a good series, worth reading. If you thrive on the adrenaline of waiting for the next installment – this is a must-read.
This book was provided free in exchange for a fair and honest review for
Love Bytes.
With the enemy effectively knocking on the door, Arjun uses the tools at his disposal to infiltrate the enemy camp. He didn’t expect to find a particular pre-conceived idea turned on its head.
The Spy Prince of Basadesh is a book that I was both entertained and annoyed with. Despite what is in the Amazon titles, when you look at the book cover closely, this is book one of a series – a factor that was not provided by the author when presented for review and my bad that I didn’t look closer at the cover. I like a good series when each book has its arc and characters crossover. When (as in this case), the storyline continues to the next book, I prefer to read the series in one go. Nevertheless, there are readers that thrive on the thrill of a cliffhanger who will eat up every word. Me – not so much, hence the annoyance.
The story is told in the third person from the viewpoints of Arjun and Eldrin. Technically there are a couple of typos. On one occasion Eldrin is misspelled and on another ‘arousing suspension’ should have been ‘arousing suspicion’, although arousing suspension could have been amusing. It is possible that I received an uncorrected proof, so there is some leeway. On a positive note, there are some beautiful illustrations, and worldbuilding provides some clear images of people, places, and lifestyle. The author has a talent for creating atmosphere and building tension which made the lack of a completed storyline more frustrating because the build-up was almost faultless.
Arjun is a brave soul with a good heart willing to do anything for his country and family. Eldrin is a more complicated person. A man from humble beginnings, he loves the thrill of everything that magic can do, which has almost made him blind to its applications. He is also extremely patriotic. He too, will do anything to defeat the enemy. But love has a magic of its own.
The tale is well-written with plenty of heart-thumping moments and a gradual build to a nail-biting end. But there are huge secrets to be revealed that are carried over to the next book. I’m sure they will provide more angst and a super story, but all it made me do was want to throw my K,indle up the wall. Again – my bad for not doing the research.
So, if you are a reader who has hangups over cliffhangers, then wait till the series has been finished. And I have no doubt it will be a good series, worth reading. If you thrive on the adrenaline of waiting for the next installment – this is a must-read.
This book was provided free in exchange for a fair and honest review for
Love Bytes.
August 31, 2024
In theory, The Spy Prince of Basadesh is the perfect book for me. Enemies to lovers? Check. Espionage? Check. Clashing cultural norms and concepts of morality? Double check. The gorgeous cover doesn’t hurt. Not one teensy bit.
No, the problem is not in concept, it’s in the execution.
While the concept itself isn’t the most original, it’s tried and true and seriously one of my favorites. But I needed to see more from the characters, their growth and romance, and the plot. One never quite gets the sense that these characters are clashing, and the things they SHOULD clash over just sort of…go away. There is no immediate sense of danger, either. Our hero is in the process of saving his people from literal cultural genocide, but risks himself–and thus his people–frequently, and with little thought.
This might have worked had he suffered in making those decisions, but he doesn’t, not really. This is so frustrating! So much could have been done with this: how his need to protect those around him clashes with his need to protect his entire country; how he is tormented by the desire that threatens to undermine his faith in his ability to do what needs to be done. If we could just see him torn, or tormented, or… something. He almost does this in the beginning, when he sets out to steal information from the love interest. But this is so fleeting as to be useless. It got my hopes up and then just let them fall–and keep falling.
In addition, I kept waiting for something bad to happen. Here he is, sneaking around and using magic to help him spy and undermine the enemy, and I would be on edge waiting, and then things would just work out. This could have played out so much better. That tension could have been tempered by the growing affection between the two mains. Instead, it all just sort of happened. If these high stakes got much higher, they’d maybe hit my knee.
Some of this might be due to the author’s writing style and inexperience. The Spy Prince of Basadesh is her first book, and experience grows with time. The fact that she finished it and published it commendable, as is the fact that the second book is already out. Given the overall concepts and relationships she presents, (and how much I tend to devour them), I’m sure I’ll try her again in a few years to check out how she’s improved. She’s already better than many new authors. But, unfortunately, I’m just not interested in continuing this series. Nevertheless, I highly recommend this book to fans of Megan Derr and similar authors. Like them, she may be one to watch for.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
No, the problem is not in concept, it’s in the execution.
While the concept itself isn’t the most original, it’s tried and true and seriously one of my favorites. But I needed to see more from the characters, their growth and romance, and the plot. One never quite gets the sense that these characters are clashing, and the things they SHOULD clash over just sort of…go away. There is no immediate sense of danger, either. Our hero is in the process of saving his people from literal cultural genocide, but risks himself–and thus his people–frequently, and with little thought.
This might have worked had he suffered in making those decisions, but he doesn’t, not really. This is so frustrating! So much could have been done with this: how his need to protect those around him clashes with his need to protect his entire country; how he is tormented by the desire that threatens to undermine his faith in his ability to do what needs to be done. If we could just see him torn, or tormented, or… something. He almost does this in the beginning, when he sets out to steal information from the love interest. But this is so fleeting as to be useless. It got my hopes up and then just let them fall–and keep falling.
In addition, I kept waiting for something bad to happen. Here he is, sneaking around and using magic to help him spy and undermine the enemy, and I would be on edge waiting, and then things would just work out. This could have played out so much better. That tension could have been tempered by the growing affection between the two mains. Instead, it all just sort of happened. If these high stakes got much higher, they’d maybe hit my knee.
Some of this might be due to the author’s writing style and inexperience. The Spy Prince of Basadesh is her first book, and experience grows with time. The fact that she finished it and published it commendable, as is the fact that the second book is already out. Given the overall concepts and relationships she presents, (and how much I tend to devour them), I’m sure I’ll try her again in a few years to check out how she’s improved. She’s already better than many new authors. But, unfortunately, I’m just not interested in continuing this series. Nevertheless, I highly recommend this book to fans of Megan Derr and similar authors. Like them, she may be one to watch for.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
June 27, 2024
This book is an engaging, well-written, and exciting fantasy novel, full of magic, wars, intrigues, passion, love, and emotions. While it is an enjoyable and page-turning read, it has a single but significant fault for me: it ends abruptly, in the middle of a scene.
The multi-linear and dynamic plot depicts the ruthless war between two kingdoms, making Arjun and Eldrin, the main characters, arch enemies. The fantasy world is described in detailed and vivid ways, providing enough context to the magic and the characters to allow readers to effortlessly follow the story. The combination of eloquent writing, a vibrant narrative, a magical world, likable characters, and an imaginative and intriguing plot takes you on an exciting, compelling journey of hate, magic, passion, betrayal, and love.
The plot revolves around a major war between two magical empires, with a parallel story of seemingly impossible love between two arch-enemies fighting on opposite sides of the war line.
While Arjun is a prince, mage Eldrin is a gifted commoner who achieves his position as the empire’s chief mage through his talent and determination. Arjun’s kingdom is losing the war due to Eldrin’s magical capabilities. Arjun decides to infiltrate the enemy as a spy to change the war’s outcome and punish Eldrin, whom he blames for the ruthless war and hates vigorously. Against all odds, the attraction between them is undeniable, strong, and irresistible. Arjun’s feelings gradually shift from hate to admiration, tenderness, guilt, and love.
What to expect: an exciting and adventurous story, eloquent and vibrant writing, lovable and charismatic characters, action, magic, love, betrayal, and passion.
What not to expect: an easy-to-read, simple romance, or a satisfying ending.
Disclaimer: I firmly believe that every book has a reader who will appreciate and enjoy it. This review reflects my personal and subjective opinion and should be read as such. I received an ARC of this book with no obligation to provide a positive review. It is an independent and genuine reflection of my thoughts.
The multi-linear and dynamic plot depicts the ruthless war between two kingdoms, making Arjun and Eldrin, the main characters, arch enemies. The fantasy world is described in detailed and vivid ways, providing enough context to the magic and the characters to allow readers to effortlessly follow the story. The combination of eloquent writing, a vibrant narrative, a magical world, likable characters, and an imaginative and intriguing plot takes you on an exciting, compelling journey of hate, magic, passion, betrayal, and love.
The plot revolves around a major war between two magical empires, with a parallel story of seemingly impossible love between two arch-enemies fighting on opposite sides of the war line.
While Arjun is a prince, mage Eldrin is a gifted commoner who achieves his position as the empire’s chief mage through his talent and determination. Arjun’s kingdom is losing the war due to Eldrin’s magical capabilities. Arjun decides to infiltrate the enemy as a spy to change the war’s outcome and punish Eldrin, whom he blames for the ruthless war and hates vigorously. Against all odds, the attraction between them is undeniable, strong, and irresistible. Arjun’s feelings gradually shift from hate to admiration, tenderness, guilt, and love.
What to expect: an exciting and adventurous story, eloquent and vibrant writing, lovable and charismatic characters, action, magic, love, betrayal, and passion.
What not to expect: an easy-to-read, simple romance, or a satisfying ending.
Disclaimer: I firmly believe that every book has a reader who will appreciate and enjoy it. This review reflects my personal and subjective opinion and should be read as such. I received an ARC of this book with no obligation to provide a positive review. It is an independent and genuine reflection of my thoughts.
August 14, 2024
Thank you to booksirens for providing an e-copy of this novel!
I have very mixed feelings about this book. I was completely invested in the story at the start, I was loving going back and forth between Arjun's spying in one chapter and then Eldrin's growing infatuation in the next. Then Arjun developed feelings for Eldrin and I started to struggle reading. Arjun was just constantly talking about how kind Eldrin was and how good of a person he was. But Eldrin was not a good person. In fact, that is why I found him such an interesting character. He is kind to those he cares about (Arjun) but regularly yells at servants, doesn't care that his inventions are being used for mass slaughter, and believes the people of Arjun's home country are less than dogs. He was, frankly, quite pathetic. And I know it sounds like I'm being mean, but I loved his character. He really embodied the "nice guy" stereotype and it was so interesting to read about. But then both Arjun and the narrative itself just kept insisting that Eldrin was a good guy and it was so odd. Arjun was such an interesting character at the beginning, but then he falls in love with a man who refers to Basadesh citizens as dogs? I just didn't feel like Eldrin did enough to gain Arjun's complete devotion. I really liked Arjun at the start of the story, but I just think his character was sacrificed in exchange for the romance.
That all said though, some events occurred at the end that raised my opinion of the book, but I can't just overlook Arjun's character assassination during the middle of the story.
This book is part of a series and I intend to read the next installment to see if my opinion of Arjun improves. As of now, I'm hesitant to recommend this book. I'll come back after reading the sequel and update my recommendation accordingly.
I have very mixed feelings about this book. I was completely invested in the story at the start, I was loving going back and forth between Arjun's spying in one chapter and then Eldrin's growing infatuation in the next. Then Arjun developed feelings for Eldrin and I started to struggle reading. Arjun was just constantly talking about how kind Eldrin was and how good of a person he was. But Eldrin was not a good person. In fact, that is why I found him such an interesting character. He is kind to those he cares about (Arjun) but regularly yells at servants, doesn't care that his inventions are being used for mass slaughter, and believes the people of Arjun's home country are less than dogs. He was, frankly, quite pathetic. And I know it sounds like I'm being mean, but I loved his character. He really embodied the "nice guy" stereotype and it was so interesting to read about. But then both Arjun and the narrative itself just kept insisting that Eldrin was a good guy and it was so odd. Arjun was such an interesting character at the beginning, but then he falls in love with a man who refers to Basadesh citizens as dogs? I just didn't feel like Eldrin did enough to gain Arjun's complete devotion. I really liked Arjun at the start of the story, but I just think his character was sacrificed in exchange for the romance.
That all said though, some events occurred at the end that raised my opinion of the book, but I can't just overlook Arjun's character assassination during the middle of the story.
This book is part of a series and I intend to read the next installment to see if my opinion of Arjun improves. As of now, I'm hesitant to recommend this book. I'll come back after reading the sequel and update my recommendation accordingly.
June 25, 2024
H.M. Heath's The Spy Prince of Basadesh is a thrilling tale of espionage, intrigue, and adventure that is both emotionally evocative and introspective. Heath masterfully blends political intrigue with action-packed sequences, creating a fast-paced narrative that keeps readers entertained and engaged throughout. The character development in this novel is exceptional. Arjun is a complex protagonist, torn between his loyalty to his country and his feelings towards the powerful man who is his enemy. His internal struggles and evolving relationships with other characters add depth and authenticity to the story. The supporting cast, from his allies to formidable adversaries, are equally well-drawn, enhancing the richness of the plot. From early on, the complexity of Eldrin’s actions versus his words evokes deep philosophical dilemmas. Heath's writing is both descriptive and engaging, effectively bringing the world of Zorvyaka to life. The intricate plot twists and turns are expertly crafted, ensuring that readers are constantly guessing and eagerly turning the pages. The novel's themes of loyalty, honor, and sacrifice resonate throughout, adding emotional weight to the high-stakes drama. The Spy Prince of Basadesh is a must-read for fans of fantasy and espionage. Heath's storytelling prowess and ability to create a captivating and immersive world make this novel an unforgettable adventure.
June 17, 2024
This starts out with an interesting premise. The second son of a kingdom on the edge of disaster is sent straight into the enemy fold. His goal? Spy and subterfuge by any means necessary. Arjun is the last hope for his family and kingdom.
With powerful spells to hide his true identify, he uses his skills to get close to one of the most powerful wizards on the continent, Eldrin. But their relationship is more complicated that what appears on the surface. I really enjoyed the back and forth, switching between Eldrin's and Arjun's perspectives.
This story is not just about desperate attempts at survival, it is about budding love, and the power of doing the right thing wrapped in a M/M enemies to lovers trope that turns out to be quite delicious.
This is a M/M LBGTQ romance with open door scenes. The heat level is very spicy. Also contains a very well done miscommunication trope. You really start rooting for these two silly heads to end up together.
There is a cliffhanger ending, but I thought it was well done and leads nicely into book two, which I have already preordered and am waiting for anxiously!
Note: I do not personally know this author, nor have we ever met in person at the time of this review. I was not paid to write this review, this is my own personal opinion. These words are my own, and are not generated by AI.
With powerful spells to hide his true identify, he uses his skills to get close to one of the most powerful wizards on the continent, Eldrin. But their relationship is more complicated that what appears on the surface. I really enjoyed the back and forth, switching between Eldrin's and Arjun's perspectives.
This story is not just about desperate attempts at survival, it is about budding love, and the power of doing the right thing wrapped in a M/M enemies to lovers trope that turns out to be quite delicious.
This is a M/M LBGTQ romance with open door scenes. The heat level is very spicy. Also contains a very well done miscommunication trope. You really start rooting for these two silly heads to end up together.
There is a cliffhanger ending, but I thought it was well done and leads nicely into book two, which I have already preordered and am waiting for anxiously!
Note: I do not personally know this author, nor have we ever met in person at the time of this review. I was not paid to write this review, this is my own personal opinion. These words are my own, and are not generated by AI.
September 21, 2024
"The Spy Prince of Basadesh" is an intriguing start to the "Jali Throne" series, promising a blend of enemies-to-lovers romance, high-stakes espionage, and clashing cultural values. The premise is captivating – Arjun, a prince from a kingdom on the brink of collapse, is thrust into enemy territory as a spy, tasked with using his cunning and charm to save his family and nation.
While the concept is strong, the execution falls short. The story, while promising a whirlwind of adventure, doesn't quite live up to the expectations. The characters are well-developed, with Arjun's struggles and determination drawing the reader in. The world-building, with its unique magic system and distinct cultures, offers a compelling setting. However, the story feels a bit bogged down by a lack of tension and pacing. It could benefit from a more dynamic narrative, allowing the plot twists and cultural conflicts to fully unfold.
Despite its shortcomings, "The Spy Prince of Basadesh" offers a promising beginning, with potential for a more captivating and immersive experience in future books. The world and the characters are engaging, and the blend of romance, intrigue, and cultural exploration makes it a potentially satisfying read for those seeking an adventure with a touch of magic and romance.
While the concept is strong, the execution falls short. The story, while promising a whirlwind of adventure, doesn't quite live up to the expectations. The characters are well-developed, with Arjun's struggles and determination drawing the reader in. The world-building, with its unique magic system and distinct cultures, offers a compelling setting. However, the story feels a bit bogged down by a lack of tension and pacing. It could benefit from a more dynamic narrative, allowing the plot twists and cultural conflicts to fully unfold.
Despite its shortcomings, "The Spy Prince of Basadesh" offers a promising beginning, with potential for a more captivating and immersive experience in future books. The world and the characters are engaging, and the blend of romance, intrigue, and cultural exploration makes it a potentially satisfying read for those seeking an adventure with a touch of magic and romance.
June 5, 2024
I enjoyed this! Interesting world with good characters, love, betrayal, politics and tension! The premise was solid and enjoyable and the moral dilemmas set me on edge. I really liked how the plot developed, the political dynamics of the court and the development of their relationship. The ending felt very abrupt though, I wish it was longer! There are still secrets to be revealed and a war to be won!
I really liked the characters, and how their relationship grew. Though it felt fast, in a short work it was well done and executed, the spicy scenes were very spicy, the romance very sweet, the betrayal hard-hitting. There is still a lot of development needed, in both of their personalities, for them to grow together and be in a healthy union but I'm glad the ending was somewhat happy, if a little elusive.
The plot was great, and was never pushed to the background for the romance. The constant tensions of spying and court intrigues, the ongoing war behind them, the alliances and enemies, the information gathered and passing hands, the little clues, the confrontations. All well executed and exciting to read.
Really liked this one! I want more of this world, this relationship and this war.
I really liked the characters, and how their relationship grew. Though it felt fast, in a short work it was well done and executed, the spicy scenes were very spicy, the romance very sweet, the betrayal hard-hitting. There is still a lot of development needed, in both of their personalities, for them to grow together and be in a healthy union but I'm glad the ending was somewhat happy, if a little elusive.
The plot was great, and was never pushed to the background for the romance. The constant tensions of spying and court intrigues, the ongoing war behind them, the alliances and enemies, the information gathered and passing hands, the little clues, the confrontations. All well executed and exciting to read.
Really liked this one! I want more of this world, this relationship and this war.
August 2, 2024
This compelling story revolves around Arjun, the second son of a kingdom in peril. Entrusted with a daunting mission to infiltrate the enemy ranks, Arjun employs all means of espionage to serve as his family and kingdom's last hope. Using potent spells to conceal his true identity, he maneuvers into the inner circle of Eldrin, one of the most formidable wizards on the continent. The interplay between Eldrin's and Arjun's perspectives provides a captivating narrative as their complex relationship unfolds. Beyond the theme of survival, the story explores themes of burgeoning love and the strength in doing the right thing, presented in a captivating M/M enemies-to-lovers narrative. This LGBTQ romance with explicit content delves into passionate encounters and skillfully incorporates the miscommunication trope, making it an engaging read that will have readers wholeheartedly rooting for these two characters to find their way to each other.
May 30, 2024
Warning - this ends on a cliffhanger, and you'll be dying for book two! Heath has a great story-telling style, and really draws you in with vivid descriptions. This story is very character driven, with two MCs caught on opposite sides of a war. Arjun’s dedication to his people, and determination to protect them, is admirable. Eldrin is on the opposite side of the war, but he’s only following orders - he doesn’t necessarily believe in what his ruler is attempting to do. We get to know both quite well, as the story is told from dual POV. The cliffhanger is rough, it stops the story in a spot that makes you want to jump right into the next chapter as quickly as possible. There isn’t really a clean ending to this, but I enjoyed the book so much I’m not going to dock a star when it’ll be continued in book two.
September 16, 2024
thanks to booksirens for providing me a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review!
this was fun! the premise is really interesting, but i think what drags it down for me is i can't tell if these characters are smart? i often expect characters that have been entrusted with preventing a war against their country and are sent into enemy territory as spies to not fall into instalove with the man who has enough magic to level a city. i found the parts where eldrin and arjun were having disagreements about how this war was going to go as the most interesting parts of the book. i hope in the sequel the author can expand on the politics of both of the mc's countries, as well as keeping the romance.
this was fun! the premise is really interesting, but i think what drags it down for me is i can't tell if these characters are smart? i often expect characters that have been entrusted with preventing a war against their country and are sent into enemy territory as spies to not fall into instalove with the man who has enough magic to level a city. i found the parts where eldrin and arjun were having disagreements about how this war was going to go as the most interesting parts of the book. i hope in the sequel the author can expand on the politics of both of the mc's countries, as well as keeping the romance.
August 4, 2024
"The Spy Prince of Basadesh" by H. M. Heath is a fairly well written adventure that tries to combine elements of espionage, intrigue and culture, making it a pretty good read. The story is about a young prince who finds himself caught up in the world of international espionage, along with twists and turns that may keep you guessing through out the story. Heathdoes a pretty good job of crafting characters that seem real with a bit of complexity, each with their own motivation and struggle. The setting of Basadesh is fairly well described, allowing readers to some what experience the culture and landscape while exploring the history that under lies the narrative. The book does a fair job of attempting to balance action with some emotional depth. The story is not just about gripping escapades but also about self-discovery and the importance of friendship and loyalty. The plot moves at a nice pace, filled with some suspenseful moments that would try to draw me in a little further, and just when I thought I knew what would happen next, Evans threw in a twist that added a little excitement. Whether you're a fan of spy novels or just looking for a decent story this one might appeal to you.
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I've only got into 3% of this but this feels like a feverdream.
This book is Captive prince without the joy of reading Captive prince.
I've only got into 3% of this but this feels like a feverdream.
This book is Captive prince without the joy of reading Captive prince.
April 18, 2025
DNF at 15%. Juvenile writing did not agree with me 🥱
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