Lucifer

Sons of Old Trilogy #1

by Annabell Cadiz

Have you ever wondered what could be hiding in the shadows?

Well, for eighteen-year-old Zahara Faraday, she doesn’t have to wonder. You see she comes from a lineage of Light Witches, those who have chosen to help protect and serve between the supernatural world and the human world. The only problem is Zahara, like her father Solomon, is as human as a human being can be whereas her mother, Mia, and her Aunt Catalina, were born as Light Witches. As a family they hunt down rogue supernaturals—creatures who harm humans or who have committed an act against their kingdom.

Zahara’s hunting skills are usually kept dormant since her parents would prefer she live life as a normal human girl without knowledge of the supernatural world. She plans on doing just that—except when she finds a couple being attacked by fairies, she has no choice but to step in. Before she can return to pretending to be blissfully ignorant, Zahara encounters a problem she isn’t the least equip to Bryan Hamilton, the good looking new co-worker she has to help train. In a heartbeat, her best friend, Becca King, has set her up on a double date with herself and her new crush, Rekesh Saint-Louis, who happens to be the most powerful leader of the biggest Imago Coven in South Florida –supernatural creatures with the ability to control water . . . and suck out human souls.

Zahara has no time to focus on how she’s going to explain her double date with her best friend and the enemy they have a tentative truce with to her parents because soon one of the members of Mia and Catalina’s coven is found murdered with a strange tattoo of a snake with wings carved into his arm.

Zahara is then thrown into a whirlwind battle with an angel determined to have revenge against God, an Imago coven she doesn’t think they should trust, and slew of dream-eating fairies and powerful Nephilims, hybrid children of angels and humans, more than happy to rip her to shreds.

Normal just got a deadlier definition.

Genres: Paranormal, Fantasy, Witches, Romance, Angels, Paranormal Romance, Mythology

263 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 1, 2013

Reviews

[Katy · Rating 4 out of 5]

Disclosure: I edited this book. I receive no remuneration based upon sales. All opinions are my own.

Book Info: Genre: Urban Fantasy
Reading Level: Young Adult
Recommended for: Fans of YA urban fantasy, magical reality
Trigger Warnings: Violence
Book Available: February or March 2013

Synopsis: Have you ever wondered what could be hiding in the shadows?

Well, for eighteen-year-old Zahara Faraday, she doesn’t have to wonder. You see she comes from a lineage of Light Witches, those who have chosen to help protect and serve between the supernatural world and the human world. The only problem is Zahara, like her father Solomon, is as human as a human being can be whereas her mother, Mia, and her Aunt Catalina, were born as Light Witches. As a family they hunt down rogue supernaturals—creatures who harm humans or who have committed an act against their kingdom.

Zahara’s hunting skills are usually kept dormant since her parents would prefer she live life as a normal human girl without knowledge of the supernatural world. She plans on doing just that—except when she finds a couple being attacked by fairies, she has no choice but to step in. Before she can return to pretending to be blissfully ignorant, Zahara encounters a problem she isn’t the least equip to handle: Bryan Hamilton, the good looking new co-worker she has to help train. In a heartbeat, her best friend, Becca King, has set her up on a double date with herself and her new crush, Rekesh Saint-Louis, who happens to be the most powerful leader of the biggest Imago Coven in South Florida –supernatural creatures with the ability to control water . . . and suck out human souls.

Zahara has no time to focus on how she’s going to explain her double date with her best friend and the enemy they have a tentative truce with to her parents because soon one of the members of Mia and Catalina’s coven is found murdered with a strange tattoo of a snake with wings carved into his arm.

Zahara is then thrown into a whirlwind battle with an angel determined to have revenge against God, an Imago coven she doesn’t think they should trust, and slew of dream-eating fairies and powerful Nephilims, hybrid children of angels and humans, more than happy to rip her to shreds.

Normal just got a deadlier definition.

My Thoughts: You should realize, when considering my rating, that this is not the sort of book I normally read and enjoy. However, this one I actually did! Also consider that I saw it raw, unfinished, and unedited. For a book of this type, and for its target audience, I don't doubt it will be very well-liked. It is the first book in a trilogy, so there is a bit of a cliffhanger aspect to the ending; however, the first chapter is wrapped up nicely.

I quite liked Zahara and Becca, for the most part, although I found the degree to which they had been sheltered at time to be a bit unrealistic. They are 18 and have never dated? This felt a little weird to me; although I was sheltered, I went on my first date when I was 15, and had boyfriends as early as 7th grade. Becca's enthusiasm could be a bit grating at times--I think if she were my friend I'd probably bop her over the head a great deal. Zahara is very prickly at times, to the point of occasional irritation on my part as well, but maybe I'm just growing old and out of touch with the hip young things.

Anyway, if you enjoy YA fantasy, with a wide variety of supernatural creatures (albeit given fairly unique names), then you should definitely watch for this upcoming debut novel from Annabell Cadiz. I'm sure you'll love it!

[Carrie (Book Fairy) Fort · Rating 4 out of 5]

Favorite Lines “If you could be either God’s worst enemy or nothing, which would you choose?”

“I’m starting to think we were being a lot smarter when we doubted he was more than just another hot bad boy,”

“I know you’re strong, I know you can handle what we are and what we do; you’re so much like your mother.” He smiled lovingly. “But no matter how old you get, I still see that little kid who wrapped her arms around my leg and vowed she would never let go. The idea of losing you rips my heart apart; if it ever actually happened, I don’t think I could survive it.”

“How crazy is this! Catalina and your parents go all dictator-like on our romantic lives with supernaturals but your aunt has been dating a fallen angel!”

“We both know we can’t be together, and I’m not desperate enough to have some kind of fling with a supernatural, or any guy for that matter, when I know in the end it won’t work out.”

Holy Fairies!! That last chapter BLEW MY MIND!!! This author did amazing! I had no clue!
Zahara is by all accounts your everyday teenage girl. Has a job, best friend, over protective dad, and she's a light witch on her moms side. There whole family fight the bad supernatural and protect the humans.
Bryan is the cute new co-worker who did I mention is an angel!
Becca is her best friend who is has a crush on Rekesh who is an Imago. Normal everyday stuff right! In walks Lucifer who we all know wants revenge on the big man. Zahara's family did him wrong a long time ago and he will make her pay for what her ancestor did to him and get the war he wants all in one shot!

This is an amazing family the author created, great story line that keeps you turning those pages, and some OMG yummy characters that make a girl sigh.... She also threw in a paranormal creature I have never heard of I LOVE surprises like those!
I still can't get over how this other did a complete turn around in the last chapter! OMG I need more! NOW NOW NOW!!
Phenomenal story that I know will continue on in Michael. I for one am dying to find out!
I RECOMMEND THIS TO ANY AND ALL WHO LOVE A GREAT ACTION PARANORMAL BOOK WITH A LIL ROMANCE THROWN IN.

I was given this book in exchange for an honest review.


FOUR HUNTING FAIRIES

[Dale Ibitz · Rating 4 out of 5]

This could have been rated 3+ or 4-...I went with 4- because the overall concept is a good one, and I liked the exposure to supernatural beings that I've not met before (a.k.a Imagos). Also, I was curious what would happen in the end, and there was a little twist I wasn't expecting. You all know how I love me some twists!

I have to tell you, the prologue (written in a different time period than the present-time main story) and Lucer's POV had a great voice and flavor that was lost in the present-time writing style. I wished the whole story could have been written in this same tone.

Okay, so the characters. Zahara and Becca are good characters; not the perfect children by any means, which I find realistic and endearing. They don't do everything they're told, and they act like typical teen-agers do, especially when there are hotties involved and houses to sneak out of. :)

I was beginning to think Becca lived with Zahara...and then suddenly her parents popped into the action near the middle. That transition was a little abrupt for me.

I liked Bryan immensely. And I also liked Rekesh. I think he's a bad-ass that's often misunderstood, but he's clearly like-able and I don't think he's as bad as he pretends to be! I could see a whole story around this guy, and it's one I would read (hint, hint).

The writing style stalled for me on occasion. What I didn't like was the over-use of exclamation points, the detailed description of clothes every time a character walked into the room (or so it seemed)...I think every character had at least 6 pairs of shoes (or so it seemed). The dialogue didn't always sound realistic (what teenager refers to teenagers as 'youths'??), and peppered with banal conversation a few times.

I'm not sure the omniscient POV worked for this story...I think I would have liked to learn things as Zahara learned them. The twists in the story would have been twistier, because as a reader you wouldn't see things coming...but being privy to other characters' thoughts and actions, the surprises weren't surprising. The only time this worked was the end twist. I'm sure glad I was privy to the action there at the end! It's a great set-up to the next book...perfect cliff-hanger.

[Pam · Rating 4 out of 5]

Zahara knows all about the supernatural world. She has grown up in a family that hunts down rogue supernaturals. While her mom and aunt are members of the Light Witches, Zahara and her dad are human. She along with her best friend Becca have some defense training from her dad. The family would like to keep her away from that life but she has a habit of going after rogues or jumping in when she thinks someone is in trouble. Soon Zahara finds she has a different reason for staying out of the supernatural things. Lucifer has come back and wants her for a reason. She has to stay safe but that is hard to do when she has a crush on an angel named Brian and her best friend is falling for an enemy of the good supernaturals. She will have to face down all kinds of beings after her but she never knows who to trust.

Zahara is a strong girl from a great family. They are loving, funny and always there for her. She is a bit headstrong and runs into trouble quite often because she always wants to help people. Becca is very similar to Zahara and you can see why they get along so well. Brian is an angel sent to do good. He always knows when Zahara is in trouble. It would be very hard not to fall for him. Rekesh is the one on the side of the bad but is willing to help them all keep Zahara and Becca safe. You can never tell about him whether he is doing things for his self or others. I have to say I really like him.

I really enjoyed this book. There is several different paranormal beings you get to see from Fairies, Angels, Witches and more. There is plenty of action going on. You never know when danger is going to appear in this book. I liked all of the characters even some of the bad ones. I will say there is lots of twist and turns and you never know what will happen. The ending I was surprised hugely by and it makes me crave the next book even more. I need to know what will happen next. I won't give any spoilers but I will say expect the unexpected.

[Sapir · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book was very enjoyable! It reminded me a little of City of Bones - one of my favorite books ever.
The idea was very original and kept me interested during the book. I really liked the fighting scenes - they were actually my favorite part! I like action in books, and this one was packed with it (:
I also liked Zahara, the book's main character. I really like reading books about characters I can relate to, and the fact the Zahara was a bookworm, just like me, really made me like her! What I loved about Zahara was that she she wasn't flawless - sometimes she acted without thinking and was too impulsive , but she always proved how brave she is by finding her way out of deadly situations.
The only thing that annoyed me about the book was the descriptions, which were unnecessary at times. For example - every time a character switched clothes, there were 10 lines describing everything she/he wore to the smallest detail. It made me a little tired...

Overall, this book was very nice and readable. I'm sure many people would love it, and especially Urban Fantasy fans.

*This review was posted on my blog as a part of a book tour. eARC was provided by the author. Thank you very much!! :D*

[Lex · Rating 4 out of 5]

I knew it. I really really knew it. Sigh.

Full review on Thursday for the Blog Tour. :)

[Anncleire · Rating 3 out of 5]

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“Lucifer” è entrato nella mia immensa lista perché volevo aiutare Dianne del blog Oops! I read a book again che è sempre stata gentile e disponibile nei miei riguardi e che ci tenevo davvero a dare una mano. In fondo sono fatta così, male, ma non sono riuscita a tirarmi indietro. Un paranormale come non me lo sarei mai aspettata pieno di azione, iniziativa e romanticismo.

Vi siete mai chiesti cosa potrebbe nascondersi tra le ombre?
Beh, la diciottenne Zahara Faraday non deve certo domandarselo. Vedete lei viene direttamene da una discendenza di Light Witches, quelle che hanno scelto di aiutare a proteggere e servire tra il mondo soprannaturale e quello umano. Il solo problema è che Zahara, come suo padre Solomon, è umana come solo gli esseri umani possono esserlo mentre sua madre, Mia, e sua Zia Catalina, sono nate come Light Witches. Come una famiglia cacciano i membri soprannaturali diventati cattivi – creature che fanno del male agli umani o hanno deciso di agire contro il loro regno.
Le capacità di Zahara sono solitamente tenute dormienti dal momento che i suoi genitori preferiscono farle vivere la sua vita come una ragazza normale senza nessuna conoscenza del mondo soprannaturale. E lei vuol fare così – ma quando trova una coppia attaccata da delle fate non ha altra scelta che intervenire. Prima che possa tornare a fingersi completamente all’oscuro dei fatti, Zahara incontra un problema per cui non è assolutamente equipaggiata: Bryan Hamilton, il suo nuovo collega, molto carino, che deve aiutare ad addestrare. In un battibaleno, la sua migliore amica, Becca King, ha organizzato un doppio appuntamento con lei e la sua nuova cotta, Rekesh Saint-Louis, che è uno dei più potenti leader della più grande Imago Coven nel sud della Florida – una creatura sovrannaturale con la capacità di controllare l’acqua… e succhiare l’anima umana. Zahara non ha tempo di concentrarsi su come spiegare questo doppio apppuntamento con la sua migliore amica e il nemico, perché ha una tregua con i genitori perché uno dei membri del gruppo di Mia e Catalina è stato trovato assassinato con uno strano tatuaggio di un serpente con le ali sul braccio.
Zahara viene gettata in una battaglia con un angelo determinate ad aver vendetta contro Dio, una Imago coven di cui non pensa ci si possa fidare, un gruppo di fate mangia sogni e potenti Nephilims, figli ibridi tra angeli e umani, molto felici di distruggerla.
La normalità ha assunto una definizione molto più che mortale.


Solitamente non vado a cercare libri con una componente così forte di creature strane e paranormali, anzi non è proprio il mio genere, un pizzico di paranormale mi piace, ma in maniera così profonda no. Sono più un tipo da scienza che da fantasia, apprezzo più uno sci-fi che una possessione demoniaca. Detto questo non posso però non notare quanto la storia sia ben congeniata, anche se la narrazione di in terza persona, con un punto di vista onnisciente che vede tutto e cambia angolazione a seconda di come si svolge l’azione fa perdere decisamente tono alla vicenda, che appiattisce molto la caratterizzazione dei personaggi. E se si perde molto nella descrizione particolareggiata di qualsiasi cosa, anche degli indumenti che indossano i protagonisti, pure rimane molto freddo. Avrei preferito seguire le vicende dal punto di vista di Zar e perdermi nella sua testa con pensieri ed emozioni. Questi pure vengono descritti, ma spesso si perdono nell’azione che decisamente la fa da padrone in questa storia. Un libro in cui ben presto le forze sovrannaturali entrano in azione e Zahara le deve fronteggiare, cercando di mantenere una parvenza di normalità. Zahara ha un grosso senso del bene del male, è estremamente coraggiosa e intenzionata a fare la cosa giusta, anche se le costa moltissimo, anche se deve affrontare delle sfide più grosse di lei. Passionale, forte, con un arco per tirare le frecce, Zahara è una ragazza moderna, catapultata in un mondo dal fascino antico e pieno di misteri, dove forze oscure lottano per avere il sopravvento e lasciare nel dimenticatoio la razza umana, che fa di impiccio al male, a quelle creature che si sono ribellate all’ordine e alle leggi per essere indipendenti e fare quello che vogliono. E Zahara insieme alla sua famiglia deve cercare di fare del suo meglio per impedire al male di dominare. In tutto questo, Zahara lavora in una libreria, al cui interno c’è anche un coffee shop, un luogo dove io passerei tutte le mia giornate fissa, senza muovermi, a camminare tra i libri e inghiottire golosi cupcaks, brownies e cinnamon rolls (i tipi dolci americani da mangiare con un loro caffè beverone, una cioccolata calda o uno smootie). E poi vogliamo mettere quando fa il suo ingresso Bryan? Il sexy collega di Zahara che compare all’improvviso e avrà un ruolo molto importante, che in un qualche modo imprevisto fa immediatamente colpo sulla ragazza nonostante la sua aria indifferente e il suo essere un po’ sulle sue. Ma un ragazzo che legge non può non entrare nel cuore di una ragazza appassionata di libri, anche con la giacca di pelle, la postura dritta e imponente, la mascella da fissare e i modi galanti che lo inducono ad offrirti la merenda. Un ragazzo da tenersi stretto. Ma la vera star della situazione che aggiunge un tocco di calore alla situazione è sicuramente Becca, la pazza migliore amica di Zahara ( perché le migliori amiche devono essere impulsive, espansive e quasi sull’orlo della schizofrenia non l’ho ancora capito) ma che aggiunge un tocco di allegria e strappa una risata anche nei momenti più critici, una ragazza che apprezza i vestiti alla moda e ha una vera e propria ossessione per le scarpe, che compra in quantità industriali. Insomma un vero e proprio salva vita. Ho molto apprezzato anche il padre di Zahara Solomon, un uomo tutto d’un pezzo che fa di tutto pur di proteggere la sua famiglia.

Il particolare da non dimenticare? Una anello…

Uno ya fantasy con tocchi romantici e tutta l’azione che deriva da una lotta intestina e ancestrale, quella tra bene e male, forze che continuano a mettercela tutta per salvarsi e salvare l’umanità e crudelismi inimmaginabili. Per gli amanti di creature sovrannaturali, che non rinunciano a quel tocco di romance, questo è il libro giusto. Tra l’altro fino al 24 ottobre lo trovate in offerta a soli .99 dollari  .89 euro, per il compleanno della Cadiz.
Buona lettura guys!


Ringrazio immensamente Annabell Cadiz e Dianne di Oops! I read a book again per avermi dato la possibilità di partecipare a questo blog tour. Grazie!

[Once Was Editor · Rating 1 out of 5]

So many ... things ... out of control: planting a character into a scene, and then tons of exposition (zzzzzz) to arm the reader with what they need to know; the ads ('whispered fiercely' -- hahaha); and the stage managing, particularly in relation to uses of eyes and gazes and now I feel (<-- another favorite) like screaming.

YA like this makes me very concerned for YA of this genre.

[Anna Kay · Rating 4 out of 5]

The book opened up with almost immediate action, so I started out intrigued and wanted to know more. As I kept reading, I really did enjoy myself for the most part. Zahara is an interesting girl, with a smart mouth and some kick-ass loyalty to her friends and family. Even if that does lead to her jumping into dangerous situations without always thinking it through. Her friend Becca is loud, sassy and unafraid to say it straight (even if what she's saying might be somewhat embarrassing). But she also has a huge heart and jumps right in beside Zahara to fight against the supernatural creatures she has to stop from hurting ordinary people. It was truly nice to see a new adult novel that wasn't all sex and angst as well. Zahara and Becca are 18, which places them in between NA and YA technically but I would classify this as a New Adult book myself. I was impressed by the in-depth creation of new supernatural mythologies and the Imago (which I had never heard of before) was definitely an interesting creature to encounter for the first time. Especially with the contrast of the Imagoes attacking people and Becca's love interest/leader Imago, Rekesh.

Speaking of the romance, both the relationships between Bryan and Zahara & Rekesh and Becca were interesting to read about. I personally preferred the 'opposites attract' phenomenon of Rekesh and Becca over the 'bad boy syndrome' phenomenon of Bryan and Zahara. It kind of left me rolling my eyes, even if he ultimately was a really nice guy. Solomon (Zahara's Dad) was actually one of the better parents I've read in YA or NA in quite some time. He was actually there, trying to protect his daughter from everything and be her parent. He didn't let her walk all over him and actually punished her when she broke the rules. Plus, Solomon was just plain funny as well. His first interaction with Bryan absolutely cracked me up.

I have to say though (and I'm not the only one from other reviews that I've seen) that the gratuitous and constant descriptions of what everyone was wearing almost completely ruined this for me as a reader. They got extremely annoying, interrupted scenes where they didn't belong and overall made me irritated. Yes, they were good descriptions. But did they move along the plot or make the book better? No, they did not. If anything they made it worse. Also, the book needs to be re-edited. There were some sentences missing words and it could have compromised the reading had it been worse. I understand that this is self-published. So if you can't afford an editor, have a really English-minded friend do it please! I can get over the predictable nature of the villain and the ending that I saw coming. But no more clothing descriptions please! Overall it was a pretty good first novel and I did enjoy the supernatural aspects of it. I don't know if I'll be reading the next one though. It reminded me of The Mortal Instruments a little bit, and I'm not really a fan of that series either.

VERDICT: 3/5 Stars

*I received an E-book Copy from the author. No money or favors were exchanged for this review. This book was published January 31st, 2013.*

[Darian Carter-Pace · Rating 3 out of 5]

(This review and more at My blog)
Rating: 3.5 out of 5
Series book: Yes
Will I read the next book: Uh probably not, but a definite maybe

This book was okay. When I got to chapter three, I was all for abandoning it right then and there. There were so many problems with this book, including the editing and the constant updated on what everyone was wearing. There were some redeeming qualities, but very few.
The writing was...okay. The editing...not even okay. There was a missing word here and there, so the sentences didn't make sense. Which really, really annoyed me, but not enough for me to give up on the book. But what almost did make me give up on the book was how Cadiz basically stopped the story to tell you what everyone was wearing. In the middle of a fight scene she would stop and tell you that the person they were fighting was wearing dark, tight, jeans and a red polo shirt. It had nothing to do with the story and I found it really irritating.

The plot was, in one word, predictable. I knew who the bad guy was from chapter three, but there were some plot twist in the middle and end to convince you otherwise. That was the redeeming quality of this book. The *Plot Twist*. I love plot twists. They can make me completely change my opinion for a book. Sadly this wasn't the case for Lucifer, but I can truthfully say that the plot was slightly better than okay.

The characters were the main redeeming quality of Lucifer. Becca, Zahara's best friend, was lovable, if a little annoying. Bryan was sweet and funny, almost earning the award of being my favorite character. But Solomon, Zahara's dad, was really funny and no doubt my favorite character. The other characters had some personality, but none that really stuck out.

There were two forbidden romances in this book. Bryan and Zahara and Becca and Rekesh. I have to say Becca's and Reshesh's romance was the best. Rekesh is an Imogen(basically a vampire) and basically the cool and silent type. He made a few jokes, but was mostly really serious. He's the complete opposite of Becca which made for the perfect relationship. Zahara's and Bryan's was okay..but Becca's and Rekesh's was just more fun.

Favorite Quotes:
“Nice to meet His Creepiness,” Zahara said with a sneer. “In case your douchebag of a boss has never told you, sneaking up on a girl with a blade is never a nice way of saying hello.”

“All those night long phone calls! All those secret visits to my house! All those secret walks! And you’re fond of me! You think I’m being over dramatic! How about I break your face open for over dramatics!”

“Time is endless for a being such as I. Power is the only master I trust.”

SUMMARY OF REVIEW:
Plot: 3.5 out of 5 Predictable
Characters: 3.5 out of 5 More personality, please
Romance: 4 out of 5 Rekesh....*swoon* Bryan....Not so much
Writing: 2.5 out of 5 Please..stop telling me what everyone's wearing. I don't care.
Overall Rating: 3.5 out of 5
Rated PG-13 sexual comments

[Brandee (un)Conventional Bookworms · Rating 3 out of 5]

Annabell Cadiz has woven an entertaining yarn in Lucifer, the first in her Sons of Old trilogy. It weaves together religious mythology with other supernatural elements to create a pretty good story.

Lucifer takes on the biblical story of Lucifer and puts a new spin on it. In this tale, Lucifer was wronged by a Light Witch, a powerful member of her coven, and has been seeking revenge against her and her family. The search has taken quite some time, but at long last he's found her. The one he'll use to exact his revenge - both against her family and God himself.

Zahara is quite familiar with the supernatural world. She's the daughter of a powerful Light Witch and her parents serve The Watchers, who police the supernaturals. Although she has no powers, her parents have taught her well about the supernatural world and how to protect herself in it. Zahara's best friend, Becca, has also been made aware of all things supernatural and she's trained in defending herself as well. But it takes a lot more than self-defense to protect yourself against Lucifer.

I like Zahara, for the most part. She's a strong young woman with a soft heart. She'll do whatever she is capable of to keep her loved ones safe and happy. Unfortunately, this means making some questionable decisions, that put her in danger. But she is only 18.

There is a large cast of supporting characters. Becca felt one-dimensional as a character, to me. I hope she's more developed in the future because she's a feisty young woman and I'd like to see more of that. Zahara's parents, Solomon and Mia, were better fleshed out. I liked their protectiveness of their daughter. Bryan and Rekesh, an angel and an Imago, are really getting interesting - I'm anxious to see what roles they end up playing.

The blending of the religious mythology with other supernatural mythologies is what I most enjoyed about Lucifer. Learning about the different beings that inhabit this world was interesting. There are witches, angels, fallen angels, nephilim, werewolves and fairies, all present in Lucifer. And the way Ms. Cadiz used the story of Lucifer was unique. Ms. Cadiz also did a nice job of creating mystery and and a decent amount suspense. I will admit to figuring out one main element in the story, but I'm still curious about whether or not it means what I think it means. Lucifer became more exciting as Zahara learned more about her family history and as she and her family and friends determined Lucifer's plan and tried to figure out ways to prevent him being successful.

My only complaints are that the dialog sometimes seemed less sophisticated than the prose, there were instances of the wrong word being used, and some of the details given were superfluous to the story, in my opinion. I love details but I found myself skipping over these parts because I didn't feel they had any bearing on the story. However, I think Lucifer is a compelling paranormal read and a great debut. I'm eagerly anticipating the next part of this story.

**I received an ecopy of the book, as part of a blog tour, in exchange for an honest review.

[Anne Tilney · Rating 3 out of 5]

New Adult fiction has been inaccurately described as “smut” fiction by some due to the fact that many NA books have more adult subject matters such as sex scenes. This newly formed genre has faced a lot of criticism. Yet Lucifer by Annabell Cadiz shows that New Adult isn’t “smut” fiction. It is incredible to see how this story has transformed and changed so much as time progressed. I remember reading an old draft of Lucifer and the changes are night and day.

Even though I know the author, this review will not be biased in anyway. Any comments and critiques will not be OMG! U rock girl!! It doesn’t help the author to improve as a writer, instead there will be constructive criticism. Zahara Faraday, our main character, isn’t a Mary Sue at all. She is a daughter of a Light Witch and normal human father.

At the same time, she isn’t the cold and heartless killer who ends up losing all over her butt kicking abilities and instead cries in a corner. Zahara is a perfect combination of strength and vulnerability as she is able to take care of herself in battle. There were moments where Zahara was a little too uptight and could have removed the stick out of her ass but overall the character wasn’t annoying. Her best friend on the other hand, was another story. She was the typical bubbly boy crazy type which kind of got under my skin.

Let’s talk about the parents. Are they…
a) Absent parent syndrome?
b) Utterly clueless and couldn’t be trusted upon to take care of a guppie? Even if their life depended on it?
c) Dead and left their child an orphan?
d) Active in their child’s life and act like a parent instead of another child? They aren’t vilified because they don’t allow their kid to run all over God’s green earth and even though they can be quite overprotective at times, they do this because they love their kid(s)?

If you picked D you are correct! I was quite pleasantly surprised to find that the parents played a huge part in Zahara’s life. Her parents punished her when she disobeyed them but they were loving and supporting. That is hard to find in NA and YA fiction. It is either the parents are either dead or alive but suffer from either absent parent syndrome or are totally cluelessness.

Another thing that I found interesting was the supernatural creatures such as the Imagos, faeries, and the Nephilim. They had their own powers and abilities, never being generic. The ending was good and it left me wanting more. But there was something that I found lacking or in need of improvement. For instance, during a fight scene there is a massive clothing description of what the characters were wearing. It felt out of place and could have been cut out. The slut slamming might leave a bad taste into people’s mouth.

Overall, I thought Lucifer was good. It had action and a decent plot along with characters with distinct personalities. Even though it had things I didn’t care much for, it can be easily removed. I would recommend this to others though. I’m looking forward to when Michael comes out.

[Cyle · Rating 4 out of 5]

GENRE: YA Paranormal
THEME: Romance, Demons, Angels
RECEIVED: Blog Tour
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REVIEW:
I love discovering new authors and cant wait for more books by Annabell Cadiz, the writing was well crafted, and characters developed nicely with the plots twist and turns that just kept me hooked. This is a paranormal trilogy to look out for and get your hands on it asap!

Lucifer follows Zahara a young girl who comes from a family of powerful Light Witches. Zahara is human unlike her mother and aunt, who carry the power. But an incident awakens a hidden power within her making her the perfect target for the very powerful Lucifer. Lucifer has a plan and Zahara is the key and he will stop at nothing to have her. Luckily for her, she has her powerful friends and family to protect her but at what cost and who can she trust?

Zahara is not your average type of girl she can handle her own in a fight. But her family is very insistent on her acting like she’s a normal girl even when she gets her powers. She’s the type of girl who never runs from a fight and will do anything and everything to stop the bad guy aka supernatural. She along with her best friend Becca are both very stubborn and get themselves in lots of sticky and dangerous situations. Becca was my favorite with her crush being a somewhat enemy, but a girl like her can change a guy? Right?

Bryan is a co-worker of Zaharas and someone who is hiding plenty of secrets. He is also the love interest and thank goodness for a well paced romance. It didn’t feel rushed and I enjoyed his character twist, along with working along side Zahara and her family.

Lucifer, I liked that as the reader we get both sides of the story from Zahara and him. I loved watching Lucifer pull together his plan and in the end the major shocker that connected everything. I didn’t see it coming at all! He’s the perfect villain. The readers are first introduced to him in the very beginning, which brings out why he wants vengeance years later. Cadiz did a great job with his side of the story and bringing to life a powerful man determined to get what he wants.

Overall this was an excellent debut novel and I’m definitely hooked! I can’t wait to see what Zahara and her family will do and what Lucifer’s next step is. A lot happens, the action and magic just keeps on going, I was pleasantly surprised with where this story went. Readers looking for an action packed, suspenseful, well written paranormal novel don’t need to look any farther, this is the book for you.

RECOMMENDATION:
This is a Young Adult books with a mix of Urban Fantasy and Paranormal magic. Fans of the Angelfire series by Courtney Allison Moulton and Brodi Ashtons Everbound series will love Lucifer by Annabell Cadiz.

[Lou · Rating 4 out of 5]

Zahara is your average 18 year old girl. She goes to school, has a best friend and lives with her family. The only difference is that her mother and aunt are light witches, and as a family they hunt rogue supernaturals.

Zahara's parents have tried to keep Zahara away from hunting as much as possible. But when Zahara sees a human couple being attacked by fairies, and decides that she can't stand back and do nothing.

At work Zahara is given the task of training the new boy Bryan. Zahara's best friend Becca decides they should go on a double date; Zahara and Bryan with Becca and Rakesh. Becca has a crush on Rakesh. Rakesh is the leader of the biggest Imago coven in South Florida.

Zahara is unsure of how to break the news of this double date to her parents, as she knows that they will freak over Rakesh. But Zahara isn't given the opportunity to tell them as a member of her mother and aunt's coven is found murdered and a strange tattoo carved into his arm.

Zahara is launched into a battle against an angel who wants revenge against God. Can Zahara and her family defeat the angel?

Let me start by saying that this is the first book by Annabell Cadiz that I have read, and I enjoyed every single page.

The book held my attention and captured my imagination completely. I felt as though I was there alongside Zahara, Becca, Bryan and Rakesh. I liked Zahara and Becca. Although Becca occasionally came across a little too enthusiastic and it made me feel like slapping her every now and then to calm her down.

Zahara has been written realisticly as she isn't perfect. She sometimes makes implusive decisions; just as we all have; without considering the consequences. She is a strong character with a sense of loyalty to those she loves and cares about.

Bryan is an angel sent to help beat Lucifer. Bryan is also well thought out and his personality seems to grow and develope as the book progresses. He's intent on keeping Zahara safe and shows up with some immpeccable timing to get her out of some sticky situations.

Rakesh is the all powerful Imago! Imago's are supernaturals that can control water and suck out a human's soul. He's also a hot bad/good guy, I use bad/good because I'm not too sure if he is a bad guy or a good guy yet.

Annabell has written a very fluent and easy to follow start to this trilogy. The plot moves at a good pace, and is packed with action. Annabell has created a world that is very easy to become immersed in and feel a part of there were times when I just wanted to jump in and help. The end was something that I didn't see coming, and it has left me wanting more.

Lucifer was a really great way to start this trilogy and I'm really looking forward to getting my hands on book #2.

[Mariela · Rating 5 out of 5]

Lucifer Review: Genre: YA/NA urban fantasy/supernatural

In this book you will find demons, Nephelims, Angels, witches, faeries .
It was a great read, very entertaining. Zahara and Becca are great female characters. I loved them because they are not the whiny type . They did not let anything or anyone bring them down .
Zahara comes from a line of witches , her mom and her aunt are witches but Zahara is just a human with not powers, just like her dad. But they always trained her to fight the supernatural.
Becca is Zahara's human friend who found herself involved in all this supernatural world and is also trained by Zahara's dad to fight the supernatural creatures.
This duo get themselves into a lot of trouble all the time, they always have to end up being rescued by Rekesh ( half merman half human) and Bryan, who becomes they love interest.
Zahara's parents are super protective. I love her dad . I want more of him in the next books please!

The Good: I think almost everything was good in this book! It got my attention since page one ! It is very funny , Zahara and Becca are hilarious together and they can kick some supernatural ass , even humans , they are not afraid of anything, especially Zahara if she feels that something is not right she just go and and finds out what's going on. There is a lot of action in this book, by my surprise the action scenes were very well written, I really enjoyed them , and I say this because I am the kind of person that doesn't really like the action scenes.
The author did not focus so much on the romance, which it was great!
Towards the end of the book I did not know who to trust anymore so do not get attached to any male character , that's all I'm saying :)

The Bad: There was only two things that I did not like :
One was the descriptions of the clothes that characters were wearing. I felt that this was unnecessary.
The other one was the relationships of Zahara and Becca with Bryan and Rekesh.I felt that it was to quick the way they started dating, it would have been nicer if their relationship were developed a little more. Especially Rekesh and Becca. I just could not understand why he was interested on her because he was over 100 years old and very serious and mature and she was just a very silly teenager girl . I just could not feel the connection between them. And I say this because I really think he cared about her based on his whisper to Becca when she was unconscious.

Overall I think this book was great! I would recommend it to anyone who liked The Mortal Instruments . If you liked TMI books then you will totally enjoy Sons of Old Trilogy series!

[Christy · Rating 4 out of 5]

Lucifer by Annabell Cadiz is the first book in what promises to be an exciting new series. In a world where angels and demons walk among us, someone must keep the balance. And that includes Zahara's family and their very good friends.

I was a little apprehensive about the book since I've read first novels by younger authors before and have been disappointed by the lack of continuity in their stories. This was not the case when reading Lucifer though. Ms. Cadiz really knows how to keep the reader engaged throughout the novel.

The characters in Lucifer are very believable and real. Their dialog sounds like the way normal people talk :) I know that sounds strange...like shouldn't all book characters sound like normal people? Sadly, I've read novels that make me cringe at the dialog. With Lucifer, I feel like I could totally pick up the phone and talk to Zahara's mom, and my 18 year old daughter would be Becca and Zahara's third BFF.

The descriptive scenes in the novel are great. Though I must add here that I pretty much skimmed the descriptions of the clothes :) My daughter, who is writing a novel as well, puts clothes descriptions in hers too. It's just kind of not necessary and if it is going to stand the test of time, people in twenty years really won't get it. Ok, back to the point :) The actual descriptions of the settings themselves are awesome. You really feel immersed in the scenes. And the action is totally kick butt!

Being totally honest again, there were a couple of things that made me uncomfortable. I realize that young adult books contain language, and I read those novels. But when I read that Ms. Cadiz is a proud Jesus Freak (and so am I!), I was a little surprised that her book contained it. It shocked me when the girls were at a churchy thing and someone used the word whore. Not something I'd expect to hear in youth group :)Ok, not that it doesn't happen, but I know people who will not read this book because of the language (that wasn't the only word used). I don't want the author to lose out on readers because of something like that.

The ending of this book blew me away! I cannot wait to read the next book and see how this cliffhanger plays out! I give the book 4/5 stars.

[Tee loves Kyle Jacobson · Rating 5 out of 5]

Okay first I have to say CONGRATS to Annabell on her debut release! She has done a great job at writing a paranormal world where things are not always as they seem. Things go bump in the night and if your not careful they will bump into you. I have to say that I was thoroughly immersed in this story and I could not put it down. For all you paranormal lovers out there this is a must read to add to your list!

Zahara comes from a long line of Light Witches that protects humans from the supernatural that lurks in the shadows. Zahara and her father are different from from her mother and her aunt. Her father and herself are humans but her mother and her aunt were born witches. Zahara is very protective of the people she loves and she will do whatever it takes to protect them. She has had training in weapons and is not afraid to use them. I love that about Zahara because she is not afraid to throw herself in a fight to protect those she loves.

To make matters worse after her powers are activated she still has to act human and try and fit in with her friends. Her best friend is a riot because she has a crush on Zahara's worse enemy that is watching Zahara because they realize something is different about her. Once the supernatural find out she is no longer human all bets are off and they come for her. She will have to fight to stay alive.

Can she do it? Can she defeat all that evil that is determined to hunt her down and kill her? Will she be able to wield her magic and destroy the evil? I have to say that I need book two like ASAP! I need to see what happens and see how some of the characters will continue to grow!

Annabelle you did an excellent job writing this story and capturing my attention. All paranormal lovers out there this is a must read!

[Lisa · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this book from the moment I opened the first page on my kindle. Actually no, I loved this book from the moment I saw the cover, I mean how stunning are her eyes.

Zahara is a typical eighteen year old, enjoying the summer before college starts with her best friend Becca, well I say typical, perhaps being the daughter of a light witch isn't typical for most teenage girls but its the norm for Zahara.

I loved how in this book Zahara's parents had a big role in the book, in so many YA books parents seem to be massively missing, which always comes off unrealistic to me, so I was pleased to read a book that the parents.. if a little okay a lot over protective.. were featured and described pretty much how my parents were with me .

This book also as its fair share of hotties I will hold my hand up and admit I have a huge boy book crush on Rekesh the leader of the Imago coven Zahara's parents have an uneasy truce with, I totally understood why Becca would risk so much just to try be with him, even if it did throw Zahara and Becca into unimaginable danger.
Then there is Bryan, Zahara's sort of boyfriend who is hiding a few secrets of his own

after a member of her parents coven is found dead with a strange tattoo on his arm things take a drastic turn. Lucifer is back and he as sworn revenge on God and needs Zahara to put his plans in motion

Lucifer as everything a good book should have a Kick ass heroine with an awesome best friend, hot guys that are seriously full of hotness epic fight scenes and an ending that made me want to demand the author release the the second instalment now. all in all a firm Favourite for me

[Sandie · Rating 3 out of 5]

Zahara Faraday is your average teenager. She spends her time hanging out with her best friend, Becca, working out at the gym, giggling over boys and working at the local bookstore. Just a normal life except for one thing. Zahara comes from a family of Light Witches, who use their magic powers to combat evil and hunt down rouge supernaturals such as fairies, goblins and Imagoes. Imagoes can control water and steal human souls.

While any day can bring a battle with one of the supernaturals, a crisis is brewing. Lucifer has returned, determined to create a Nephilim, a child from the union of an angel and a human, to help in his fight against God. He has chosen Zahara as the human to create this Nephilim child, and has started a new coven dedicated to kidnapping her and destroying anyone who gets in their way. Suddenly, every day is fraught with danger as the coven becomes ever more determined to fulfill Lucifer's plan, Luckily, Zahara has allies also. There is her parents coven of Light Witches. Rakesh is a powerful Imago who is working on the side of good. Then there is Bryan, who Zahara thought was the cute new boy at work. It turns out that he is an angel sent to battle Lucifer. Will good or evil prevail in this struggle?

Annabell Cadiz has written a lively supernatural romance sure to appeal to the young adult audience. The plot and pacing move quickly, and the numerous fight scenes are compelling. The conflict between good and evil draws the reader on to determine which side will be triumphant. This book is recommended for the YA audience as well as readers who enjoy the paranormal romance genre.

[Saptarshi · Rating 4 out of 5]

*** I was given a review copy of this book from the author in return for my honest review***

Whew! I honestly don't know how to properly describe this book. It was one of the most intense books I have read, with pretty much non stop action. This book grabbed me from the second I started reading and I wasn't able to stop until I finished it. It had a little of everything I love to read, all rolled into one big incredible story!

This story had so many twists and turns! Like I said before, there were lots of action. Zahara and her friends are all such feisty kick ass characters that you just can't help but love them. There was a slight romance in this book between some of the characters, and it was very light, but with everything else it was nice blend in the story.

However, this book isn't as serious as it might sound though. There's plenty of comical situations, sarcasm, and scenes that will make you laugh until your stomach hurts. It's one of the things that I loved the most about this book. It wasn't always a super suspense and serious mood, there were plenty of relaxed and just plain happy, joyful mood. Despite what situations Zahara and her crew found themselves in, they were always able to get out of it and get back on their feet.

I'll admit, there were some things that had me a little confused, but overall, this was one of the most enjoyable books I have ever read! It was well written, with great characters, and various plot twists that will keep you at the edge of you seat! If you are looking for a fun, enjoyable, and interesting read, I recommend taking a look at this book.

[Emma Star Crossed Reviews · Rating 4 out of 5]

This review was originally posted on Star Crossed Reviews I received this book for free for a Blog Tour in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.Firstly I would like to thank Diane at Oops! I Read A Book Again for letting me take part in this blog tour and for Annabell Cadiz the review copy I was sent.  This is the first of many blog tours that are coming up before the end of this year and I hope you are all very excited about them. Anyway back to the book.

I loved it. It was exactly what I look for in a Fantasy book and is perfect for this blog. I instantly loved Zahara and her best friend Becca. They are your typical teenage girls. They want to date the boys their parents don't approve of, sneak out to see said boys when they should be at home and spend lots of time at the Marshmallow Cafe. I seriously need one of those, preferably between my home and work. In between all of this they are kicking some serious butt.

I loved Zarah's parents Mia and Solomon. They were so in love it made me smile and hope that when I have been with my partner for as long as they have been together I am as happy as them.

Now Rekesh and Bryan. To be honest I never trusted either for them. Throughout the entire book I was waiting for them to turn on the girls. There was just something off about them. I thought this was a great read and I cannot wait to sink my teeth into Micheal when it is released, which I believe is very soon.

[✨✨ Claire✨✨ · Rating 4 out of 5]

I didn't read the synopsis for this, so had no idea what to expect. And truthfully...i'm glad i didn't.

A strange story, but oddly compelling to read.
Our main characters are Zahara and Becca. Zahara is a daughter of 2 powerful witches, but has no powers herself. becca is her best friend, who just happened to find out about the supernatural world and is trained along Zahara just in case.

They work in a book store and a new person starts to work there, Bryan, who shows interest in Zahara straight away.

We also view from Lucifer's side. And his followers, and his plans.

Bryan is an angel sent to help prevent Lucifer carrying out his plans, which include Zahara carrying his child....

There are quite a few holding breath moments, and some who you think are trustworthy and vice versa turn out to be the other way round....

This ended on one hell of a cliffhanger which i was NOT expecting and actually enjoyed it - its left it wide open for the next book, which im gonna have to pick up to see what happens!!

enjoyed this. I think this is the build up to the real action, but its still a good read!

Read on behalf of OOPS! I READ A BOOK AGAIN for an honest review

[Dawn · Rating 3 out of 5]

Lucifer is full of action and romance from the very beginning.

The main character, Zahara, belongs to a family of witches and, although she doesn’t have the powers her mom and aunt have, she’s determined to fight evil. She and her best friend, Becca, are typical teens in that they tend to get into difficult situations because they don’t think things through.

The other characters in Zahara’s life are likeable. Her parents are great and are understandably overprotective. Both Bryan and Rekesh are the girls’ heroes, both loving and caring where the girls are concerned.

I skipped over the descriptions of the clothes everyone was wearing every day. They really don’t do anything for the story. I also found myself skipping over a lot of the fighting about halfway through the book…there are a lot of detailed fight scenes.

The ending is a surprise and makes you want to read the next book in the series to find out what happens next.

[Kristy Palau · Rating 4 out of 5]

First and for most I have to congratulate Annabell Cadiz on an outstanding job in Lucifer. As a friend of hers I know how hard she worked and I recommend this book for those who enjoy reading YA books. I love her characters especially Becca( I guess I can relate to her personality). If a book can make me laugh it has my vote absolutely. This book had it all and I enjoyed the action. It did remind me a bit of City of Bones which I just started reading the Series but she did add her own unique twist. I love the fact she used a lot of her own personality traits in her book (Zahara was a bookworm and loved Jesus!) and I like she used our home town Miami. Well I can’t wait to read her sequel novel Michael. Till then enjoy everyone and don’t forget to rate her book!

[Bella]

Review to come. :)

[Shera (Book Whispers)]

Coming soon.

[Tonyalee · Rating 1 out of 5]

Didn't finish. Mini review to come

[Kathryn · Rating 4 out of 5]

Review to come...