Every night, Zoe keeps having strange dreams. Dreams about a game called Mortal Online. Thinking the dreams are only due to her excitement about the game's release she tosses them in the back of her mind.
But once the game releases, it turns out her dreams seem to be real? Knowing the future that is ahead of her, Zoe focuses on what she needs to do. Level up and gather every resource she can, in game and in the real world.
Will Zoe be able to escape the calamity that had killed her in her dreams, or will she still end up with the same fate?
The grammar needs some work, but its a cute story.
I like the ideas u have here for the world and mc, but her "disability" feels a bit too forced at times to me. Maybe I just haven't met anyone r like this to compare to but I had a tough time imagining it and relating to mc because of this. The gag with the pink-haired friend is very funny, and I hope it stays. The ending also feels too soon, felt like another chapter or maybe two would've rounded things off nicely. Cautiously optimistic about the future books.