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A Veil of Twilight
She was their savior. Now, she might be their ruin.
Seraphina Celestara has spent centuries as the Luminary—an immortal healer, protector, and the last line of defense between three warring realms. But when a venomous plague threatens to enslave her people, mercy is no longer an option.
In a world where magic collides with modernity, Seraphina hunts a ruthless king whose greed and tyranny could unravel reality itself. As dark forces close in and betrayals cut deep, she must decide: will she fight to restore balance, or become the very monster she swore to destroy?
Perfect for fans of Crescent City by Sarah J. Maas and Daughter of No Worlds by Carissa Broadbent, A Veil of Twilight is a gritty, action-packed urban fantasy where loyalty is a lie, power demands sacrifice, and the ending is never what you expect.
Seraphina Celestara has spent centuries as the Luminary—an immortal healer, protector, and the last line of defense between three warring realms. But when a venomous plague threatens to enslave her people, mercy is no longer an option.
In a world where magic collides with modernity, Seraphina hunts a ruthless king whose greed and tyranny could unravel reality itself. As dark forces close in and betrayals cut deep, she must decide: will she fight to restore balance, or become the very monster she swore to destroy?
Perfect for fans of Crescent City by Sarah J. Maas and Daughter of No Worlds by Carissa Broadbent, A Veil of Twilight is a gritty, action-packed urban fantasy where loyalty is a lie, power demands sacrifice, and the ending is never what you expect.
- GenresFantasy
368 pages, Paperback
First published October 1, 2024
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About the author
Ryen Santana
8 books44 followersRyen Santana is an author who has spent her life weaving stories—first in the world of fanfiction and now in dark, emotionally charged novels. A mother of two, she balances the chaos of parenthood with the equally chaotic process of crafting narratives filled with morally grey characters, deep betrayals, and enough trauma to keep her readers up at night.
Her love for storytelling began in her early teens, where she honed her skills writing sprawling, 500k+ word fanfics inspired by Twilight, The Hunger Games, Divergent, and, of course, One Direction. If a fandom existed, she either wrote for it or devoured every story it had to offer.
When she’s not writing, she can be found indulging in her other passions—reading (obviously), rock climbing, spending all of the money she earns from books on commissioning art of her characters, and consuming unhealthy amounts of caffeine. She also enjoys rotting in bed whenever life allows, though with two small children, those moments are rare and precious.
Now, with her original works, she continues to explore the themes that first captivated her: love, power, revenge, and the darker sides of human nature. But this time, the stakes are higher, the characters more twisted, and the endings never quite what you expect.
Her love for storytelling began in her early teens, where she honed her skills writing sprawling, 500k+ word fanfics inspired by Twilight, The Hunger Games, Divergent, and, of course, One Direction. If a fandom existed, she either wrote for it or devoured every story it had to offer.
When she’s not writing, she can be found indulging in her other passions—reading (obviously), rock climbing, spending all of the money she earns from books on commissioning art of her characters, and consuming unhealthy amounts of caffeine. She also enjoys rotting in bed whenever life allows, though with two small children, those moments are rare and precious.
Now, with her original works, she continues to explore the themes that first captivated her: love, power, revenge, and the darker sides of human nature. But this time, the stakes are higher, the characters more twisted, and the endings never quite what you expect.
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May 3, 2025
I'm totally not the author or anything but ENJOY!
September 4, 2024
Thank you so much for this ARC and opportunity to read and review this book! I adored the characters and world building. This book honestly was so beautiful and had a lot of references from pop culture that made me laugh but didn’t make the book too “realistic” as I don’t really like fantasy books that have stuff like TikTok, instagram etc. I cannot wait to get a hardcover copy of this later on. I felt like I have not read any other fantasy book that was similar so this one really does stand out.
August 3, 2024
A book where “one more chapter” turns into finishing the whole thing in one sitting. Throne of Glass meets CC and FBAA joins in just for a little bit, and they have a baby… THIS is what we get! This book keeps you at the edge of your seat as you try to figure out who you can trust in this story. And just when you think you found someone to rely on, think again!
The author excels in captivating your heart with this story, as the FMC’s, Seraphina, inner monologue is both touching and relatable. As a woman reading this story, I felt so seen and I walked away feeling empowered to face the real world away from the City of Hemera.
Ryen left us with an ending that has you impatiently waiting for the next one! I highly recommend this read, it has become one of my favorite stories!
The author excels in captivating your heart with this story, as the FMC’s, Seraphina, inner monologue is both touching and relatable. As a woman reading this story, I felt so seen and I walked away feeling empowered to face the real world away from the City of Hemera.
Ryen left us with an ending that has you impatiently waiting for the next one! I highly recommend this read, it has become one of my favorite stories!
September 1, 2024
I received an ARC of this book, and I think overall the storyline was good but it could have been built upon.
It was very fast paced which keeps the reader on their toes but I think that due to that, it took away from the depth of the story and created some plot holes. For instance, I feel like this first book could have been split into two and there could have been more elaborations on back stories and things that were occurring.
As example, it seems a majority of the book is Seraphina (MFC) meeting with her friends, then going into a risky mission, a fight, sleep, then repeat. But throughout the discoveries there was little to no elaboration on what this news meant for them or what actually occurs during their recon.
Aside from minor things like that I did enjoy the world building, characters, and the plot twists. 😉 I did appreciate the inner dialogues of the characters because it expressed their joy, sorrow, and inner battles. I also need to mention the banter between characters- I’m a sucker for it and it did not disappoint.
With this being said, I think as an introductory book, Ryen did a wonderful job creating a storyline to captivate readers. I just personally feel that it could have used some more depth.
It was very fast paced which keeps the reader on their toes but I think that due to that, it took away from the depth of the story and created some plot holes. For instance, I feel like this first book could have been split into two and there could have been more elaborations on back stories and things that were occurring.
As example, it seems a majority of the book is Seraphina (MFC) meeting with her friends, then going into a risky mission, a fight, sleep, then repeat. But throughout the discoveries there was little to no elaboration on what this news meant for them or what actually occurs during their recon.
Aside from minor things like that I did enjoy the world building, characters, and the plot twists. 😉 I did appreciate the inner dialogues of the characters because it expressed their joy, sorrow, and inner battles. I also need to mention the banter between characters- I’m a sucker for it and it did not disappoint.
With this being said, I think as an introductory book, Ryen did a wonderful job creating a storyline to captivate readers. I just personally feel that it could have used some more depth.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 15, 2024
I really hate to say this, but unfortunately, this one was a no go for me. I don't DNF books, but the temptation to do so definitely hit a few times. I was hoping to at least come out in the middle of my ratings, but there were a few things that made it more 😕 than 🤷🏼♀️
I received this as an ARC in September and damn, I was excited to get into it. The synopsis sounded right up my alley and I really wanted to love this, I swear... It took over a month and a half to just read the first 14 chapters. I thought it was just my ADHD, and I was still looking forward to the story picking up. Then I found out there was an audiobook and thought I could finally get me some shadow boys and a badass fighter in this cool fantasy realm. The narrator made it worse for me as she made everyone sound so much younger.
I just couldn't get into it or bring myself to connect to or care about any of the characters. There's this rush to get to the next plot point without anything really happening to show the importance of the stakes of each element. They bounce from planning missions, to messing up those missions, to going back home to plan more missions. All of which involve a 'seedy dive bar' of some kind including one that plays 'Party in the USA', which is extremely weird to add to this fantasy universe that doesn't include a USA.
The base is there, it is just a little underdeveloped with characters that need a little more depth, a world that needs a few more boundaries to separate from our real world, and a plot that could take more time to explain the stakes and implications of what these events are doing to the character's personal lives and the greater story at large. The ending post-battle was interesting and proved potential, but it felt like it came out of nowhere, again, because the characters and stakes were a little underdeveloped.
Basically, to sum up, I was bored and disconnected. I know this will be a perfect fit for someone out there, but that someone is unfortunately not me.
I received this as an ARC in September and damn, I was excited to get into it. The synopsis sounded right up my alley and I really wanted to love this, I swear... It took over a month and a half to just read the first 14 chapters. I thought it was just my ADHD, and I was still looking forward to the story picking up. Then I found out there was an audiobook and thought I could finally get me some shadow boys and a badass fighter in this cool fantasy realm. The narrator made it worse for me as she made everyone sound so much younger.
I just couldn't get into it or bring myself to connect to or care about any of the characters. There's this rush to get to the next plot point without anything really happening to show the importance of the stakes of each element. They bounce from planning missions, to messing up those missions, to going back home to plan more missions. All of which involve a 'seedy dive bar' of some kind including one that plays 'Party in the USA', which is extremely weird to add to this fantasy universe that doesn't include a USA.
The base is there, it is just a little underdeveloped with characters that need a little more depth, a world that needs a few more boundaries to separate from our real world, and a plot that could take more time to explain the stakes and implications of what these events are doing to the character's personal lives and the greater story at large. The ending post-battle was interesting and proved potential, but it felt like it came out of nowhere, again, because the characters and stakes were a little underdeveloped.
Basically, to sum up, I was bored and disconnected. I know this will be a perfect fit for someone out there, but that someone is unfortunately not me.
October 1, 2024
This was a very exciting read that was very unique in the sense that I havnt read anything like this. Seraphina is the FMC and I really feel like she is a character that will stick with me. She is strong and has a sense of responsibility for her people to protect them at all costs.
There were bits where there is humor and others that are serious and the author balances those moments out very well.
I love books with multiple POV and this book had that. I love being able to be in the inner monologue of all of the characters in a book and this author delivered that so well.
The action and fight scenes in this book were very well written and the authors use of imagery in her captivating writing style was amazing.
Not only was the character development fantastic in this story but the world building was great as well.
The ending was a perfect setup for a next book and leaves you wanting more. I read someone call this a mix between Crescent City, Throne of Glass, and FBAA and I couldn’t agree more!
I rated this book 4/5 and definitely recommend. Go pick it up tomorrow on release day!
There were bits where there is humor and others that are serious and the author balances those moments out very well.
I love books with multiple POV and this book had that. I love being able to be in the inner monologue of all of the characters in a book and this author delivered that so well.
The action and fight scenes in this book were very well written and the authors use of imagery in her captivating writing style was amazing.
Not only was the character development fantastic in this story but the world building was great as well.
The ending was a perfect setup for a next book and leaves you wanting more. I read someone call this a mix between Crescent City, Throne of Glass, and FBAA and I couldn’t agree more!
I rated this book 4/5 and definitely recommend. Go pick it up tomorrow on release day!
September 27, 2024
I loved Seraphina’s character and her sense of honor and duty towards her people. I also enjoyed seeing how her friendship with Rhoda was truly the root to so many decisions she would end up making throughout the book.
This book was slow at the beginning in my opinion and I wanted more details in the battle scenes. I was a bit confused how our characters ended up where they were in the end, but I think we’re supposed to be because the characters themselves don’t know either.
Love the idea of “second chances”. I always find it interesting to see how a character does something different and I get anxious to see the new path they travel.
This book leaves us in a cliffhanger and wanting for more! I will definitely be reading the next one to see what happens to Seraphina and her friends.
This book was slow at the beginning in my opinion and I wanted more details in the battle scenes. I was a bit confused how our characters ended up where they were in the end, but I think we’re supposed to be because the characters themselves don’t know either.
Love the idea of “second chances”. I always find it interesting to see how a character does something different and I get anxious to see the new path they travel.
This book leaves us in a cliffhanger and wanting for more! I will definitely be reading the next one to see what happens to Seraphina and her friends.
August 2, 2024
This is an epic story of loss and love. I loved the balance of humor and serious moments. The author did a great job of threading the two together. Also, I was locked in on Seraphina's story and mission from the beginning. She's one of those characters you just want to see succeed.
Overall, this was a quick read (for a fantasy), and I'm excited what Santana releases next! What an amazing debut!
Overall, this was a quick read (for a fantasy), and I'm excited what Santana releases next! What an amazing debut!
August 13, 2024
*A Veil Of Twilight* is undeniably one of my all-time favorite reads. Its masterful blend of fantasy and intrigue will leave you spellbound, teetering on the edge of your seat, and possible a little traumatized (iykyk)—but in the most exhilarating way possible.
Seraphina is a mesmerizing character, embodying the duality of a healer and an assassin. With so many layers to her, I am completely obsessed and endlessly inspired by her fierce badassery.
Ryen crafts a vividly immersive environment that envelops you from the very first page. The world-building is nothing short of extraordinary,
Overall, AVOT is a breathtaking debut that showcases Ryen’s remarkable talent for weaving a rich tapestry of fantasy. This gripping tale will keep you up late into the night, desperate for more.
This book had me reeling for daysssss…I laughed, I cried, and I screamed….a lot
If you’re a fan of fantasy with strong character development, a riveting plot, AND shadow daddies you can’t help but love and hate, this book is an absolute must-read!
Ryen Santana you are brilliant. Thank you for making me fall back in love with reading again and for inspiring me as a woman, and a mom!!
Seraphina is a mesmerizing character, embodying the duality of a healer and an assassin. With so many layers to her, I am completely obsessed and endlessly inspired by her fierce badassery.
Ryen crafts a vividly immersive environment that envelops you from the very first page. The world-building is nothing short of extraordinary,
Overall, AVOT is a breathtaking debut that showcases Ryen’s remarkable talent for weaving a rich tapestry of fantasy. This gripping tale will keep you up late into the night, desperate for more.
This book had me reeling for daysssss…I laughed, I cried, and I screamed….a lot
If you’re a fan of fantasy with strong character development, a riveting plot, AND shadow daddies you can’t help but love and hate, this book is an absolute must-read!
Ryen Santana you are brilliant. Thank you for making me fall back in love with reading again and for inspiring me as a woman, and a mom!!
January 6, 2025
This was just not for me. The concept sounded so cool but I just had such a hard time getting into it. I would still be curious to know what happens in the next book because I know there has to be a next book lol.
August 15, 2024
Fast paced. Addictive characters. Incredible fight scenes. Shadow daddies. Love and betrayal. Political system. What doesn't Ryen Santana put in this book! I honestly didn't want to put this book down and I cannot wait for the next installment. You better put my heart back together in the next one, Santana, after those plot twists you dropped!!
September 21, 2024
8/10 ⭐️ 1/5 🌶️
Seraphina Celestara is The Luminary- the light wielding protector of the Three Realms. As her world is threatened by a slow killing poison, she and her found family try to find the source and being vengeance. Seraphina is a strong FMC with a best friend, Rhoda and together they take in the world. Shadow Daddies emerge from the corners and become obsessed, multiple kings vie for alliances, and oh by the way, a wyvern appears to help her on her fight! From daily sparring sessions, to missions in night clubs, and meetings with Kings, Seraphina Carrie’s the weight of the world and doesn’t attempt to delegate, she just lives and thrives with her best friends.
This story has it all! The world building, character development, plot, and the unexpected twists left me finishing this book saying I NEED MORE! The wit, sarcasm between characters for comic relief, the intensity of the male relationships, and the serious female rage is unmatched by any books I’ve read this year! Honestly, a little upset about the cliffhanger and totally need the next book ASAP!
Some of my favorite quotes:
“Hope is what keeps us going when everything else seems lost, you’re our beacon, the light piercing the darkness to help the ships come home.”
“What doesn’t kill you gives you unhealthy coping mechanisms and a dark sense of humor.”
“Soon, very soon, I will have my vengeance. And vengeance is a meal best served screaming.”
Seraphina Celestara is The Luminary- the light wielding protector of the Three Realms. As her world is threatened by a slow killing poison, she and her found family try to find the source and being vengeance. Seraphina is a strong FMC with a best friend, Rhoda and together they take in the world. Shadow Daddies emerge from the corners and become obsessed, multiple kings vie for alliances, and oh by the way, a wyvern appears to help her on her fight! From daily sparring sessions, to missions in night clubs, and meetings with Kings, Seraphina Carrie’s the weight of the world and doesn’t attempt to delegate, she just lives and thrives with her best friends.
This story has it all! The world building, character development, plot, and the unexpected twists left me finishing this book saying I NEED MORE! The wit, sarcasm between characters for comic relief, the intensity of the male relationships, and the serious female rage is unmatched by any books I’ve read this year! Honestly, a little upset about the cliffhanger and totally need the next book ASAP!
Some of my favorite quotes:
“Hope is what keeps us going when everything else seems lost, you’re our beacon, the light piercing the darkness to help the ships come home.”
“What doesn’t kill you gives you unhealthy coping mechanisms and a dark sense of humor.”
“Soon, very soon, I will have my vengeance. And vengeance is a meal best served screaming.”
September 1, 2024
10/10 stars.
As a new ARC reader I was chosen for A Veil of Twilight and I am very grateful for the opportunity.
I found myself so captivated by Ryen Santana’s work that I had to create an account on GoodReads just to share my thoughts. In a genre filled with familiar tropes, Santana’s debut urban fantasy is a breath of fresh air, blending the ancient and modern in a world where danger lurks in every shadowed alley.
The story centers on Seraphina, a fierce heroine fighting to save her realm from a venomous evil—a power-hungry king whose dark ambitions threaten to corrupt everything. Santana’s ability to build tension is masterful; each page pulses with urgency as the struggle between light and darkness unfolds.
What truly sets A Veil of Twilight apart is Santana’s lyrical prose. The writing is so lush and evocative that you don’t just read this book—you live it. The city streets hum with a magic that’s both enchanting and dangerous, and every scene is painted so vividly that you can almost hear the whispers of old spirits in the air.
But it’s not just the prose that dazzles—Santana knows how to deliver heart-pounding action, making you feel as if you’re right there in the middle of the battle. The tension builds with each page, keeping you hooked from start to finish.
Being the first in a series, A Veil of Twilight leaves some threads tantalizingly unresolved, but rather than feeling incomplete, it feels like the beginning of an epic journey. I’m already eager to dive into the next installment.
Santana’s ability to blend gritty urban fantasy with a timeless battle between good and evil is nothing short of remarkable. This is a story that feels both epic and deeply personal, filled with characters who are as complex as they are compelling. Their struggles, both internal and external, drive the narrative forward, making it impossible to put down.
For fans of urban fantasy, this is an absolute must-read, and it’s easily my top pick for 2024. I can’t wait to see what Ryen Santana has in store for us next.
As a new ARC reader I was chosen for A Veil of Twilight and I am very grateful for the opportunity.
I found myself so captivated by Ryen Santana’s work that I had to create an account on GoodReads just to share my thoughts. In a genre filled with familiar tropes, Santana’s debut urban fantasy is a breath of fresh air, blending the ancient and modern in a world where danger lurks in every shadowed alley.
The story centers on Seraphina, a fierce heroine fighting to save her realm from a venomous evil—a power-hungry king whose dark ambitions threaten to corrupt everything. Santana’s ability to build tension is masterful; each page pulses with urgency as the struggle between light and darkness unfolds.
What truly sets A Veil of Twilight apart is Santana’s lyrical prose. The writing is so lush and evocative that you don’t just read this book—you live it. The city streets hum with a magic that’s both enchanting and dangerous, and every scene is painted so vividly that you can almost hear the whispers of old spirits in the air.
But it’s not just the prose that dazzles—Santana knows how to deliver heart-pounding action, making you feel as if you’re right there in the middle of the battle. The tension builds with each page, keeping you hooked from start to finish.
Being the first in a series, A Veil of Twilight leaves some threads tantalizingly unresolved, but rather than feeling incomplete, it feels like the beginning of an epic journey. I’m already eager to dive into the next installment.
Santana’s ability to blend gritty urban fantasy with a timeless battle between good and evil is nothing short of remarkable. This is a story that feels both epic and deeply personal, filled with characters who are as complex as they are compelling. Their struggles, both internal and external, drive the narrative forward, making it impossible to put down.
For fans of urban fantasy, this is an absolute must-read, and it’s easily my top pick for 2024. I can’t wait to see what Ryen Santana has in store for us next.
September 6, 2024
What a read!! I didn’t really know what to expect, but what I got was a breath of fresh air. The magic system, the urban fantasy setting, and the motivations felt so refreshing.
This is a multi POV story. As typical with those, the reader knows more information than the other characters at certain points, which is usually beautifully maddening. But the way this is written, the characters are also hiding things from themselves, so it ends up not just being a fantasy but also being a bit of a mystery/suspense. That’s not a main genre at all, but every chapter I read I’d go back and forth on whether I trusted any character. The only one I trusted throughout was the FMC, because her POV is the dominant one and seems to be the only one without secrets.
Because of that, this book ends up being queen of the “just one more chapter” game, where you don’t sleep and don’t care.
I rarely leave a book thinking “wow the battle scenes were beautifully written” but there’s no other way to describe them. They read as though it was describing a dance.
Because of the mystery element, there’s some parts where I was left not fully understanding the motivations of certain characters. But it felt deliberate and not something not fully thought through. Things that were left open ended don’t feel like a plot hole but more of a “more on this later”.
This is the first book in a series, and the way it ends is so incredibly wide open that the story could truly go anywhere. I didn’t expect the ending at all, and then not only having it be a surprise, there’s just so many ways the author could take the story and that’s really exciting.
This is a multi POV story. As typical with those, the reader knows more information than the other characters at certain points, which is usually beautifully maddening. But the way this is written, the characters are also hiding things from themselves, so it ends up not just being a fantasy but also being a bit of a mystery/suspense. That’s not a main genre at all, but every chapter I read I’d go back and forth on whether I trusted any character. The only one I trusted throughout was the FMC, because her POV is the dominant one and seems to be the only one without secrets.
Because of that, this book ends up being queen of the “just one more chapter” game, where you don’t sleep and don’t care.
I rarely leave a book thinking “wow the battle scenes were beautifully written” but there’s no other way to describe them. They read as though it was describing a dance.
Because of the mystery element, there’s some parts where I was left not fully understanding the motivations of certain characters. But it felt deliberate and not something not fully thought through. Things that were left open ended don’t feel like a plot hole but more of a “more on this later”.
This is the first book in a series, and the way it ends is so incredibly wide open that the story could truly go anywhere. I didn’t expect the ending at all, and then not only having it be a surprise, there’s just so many ways the author could take the story and that’s really exciting.
August 31, 2024
I got this book as an arc.
I really really enjoyed it. Loved the characters. The plot was amazing and unique- which is difficult as a romantasy type book. Only reason why I give it 4 stars instead of 5 is because the following:
I was confused why the celestials couldn’t tell Azryl was lying from the get go- they had the power to bring Seraphina back to life but not able to identify lies. Also I would have liked more details pertaining to the cleansing at the end-it was a little confusing with them being trapped somewhere/ Seraphina should have tried to explore curing the venom - she prided her self on trying to save people, was told she had the cure but didn’t do anything with the info.
Also the celestials have no problem “cleansing all the people” but not outright killing azryl (1 person) themselves or healing the venom?
At the beginning it was mentioned that the first king had venom in him, spilling out when he was killed. I hope this will be explored…was quillon the mastermind from the beginning and he poisoned the first king???
I hope the whole mate thing gets explored more as well because it seemed thrown in randomly for caspian and Seraphina, but not mentioned for other people at all.
Overall very very good book. Just some details that could potentially be addressed in the sequel to help shed light on these things I mentioned.
I look forward to reading (and hoping to review as an arc again) the sequel.
Well done :)
I really really enjoyed it. Loved the characters. The plot was amazing and unique- which is difficult as a romantasy type book. Only reason why I give it 4 stars instead of 5 is because the following:
I was confused why the celestials couldn’t tell Azryl was lying from the get go- they had the power to bring Seraphina back to life but not able to identify lies. Also I would have liked more details pertaining to the cleansing at the end-it was a little confusing with them being trapped somewhere/ Seraphina should have tried to explore curing the venom - she prided her self on trying to save people, was told she had the cure but didn’t do anything with the info.
Also the celestials have no problem “cleansing all the people” but not outright killing azryl (1 person) themselves or healing the venom?
At the beginning it was mentioned that the first king had venom in him, spilling out when he was killed. I hope this will be explored…was quillon the mastermind from the beginning and he poisoned the first king???
I hope the whole mate thing gets explored more as well because it seemed thrown in randomly for caspian and Seraphina, but not mentioned for other people at all.
Overall very very good book. Just some details that could potentially be addressed in the sequel to help shed light on these things I mentioned.
I look forward to reading (and hoping to review as an arc again) the sequel.
Well done :)
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 17, 2024
✨A Veil of Twilight✨
This was such an exciting and fresh new read. Immediately from the prologue you are enveloped in a beautifully written immersive world. The author writes in such a way that you feel you are directly in the story. A fast paced action adventure with loveable and relatable characters. And some not so lovable. Lots of intrigue and mystery. A strong, inspiring FMC that you can’t help but root for from the very beginning. A sassy/warrior best friend. Incredible fantasy & political world building. A few grumpy shadow daddies. This book has it all. One of my favorite things is the MULTIPLE povs. Like everyones. We even get little bits of the "villains" perspective. You get such a rounded and holistic view of the story which was a nice and surprising new take. Puts a nice little twist to thinking you know someone's true intentions!
I believe this is the first in a series. So while it seems like some aspects of the story have been left unresolved or incomplete, it appears we’re setting the ground work for a much more complex journey ahead diving deeper into the characters & their individual stories and how they come together.
Overall this was a really great read and debut novel for the author. Ended on a good little cliffhanger leaving you ready for more! 😍
Incredibly grateful for this ARC opportunity! Thank you again 🫶🏼 Will be patiently waiting for the continuation of Seraphina's story and the new series! 😉💖
This was such an exciting and fresh new read. Immediately from the prologue you are enveloped in a beautifully written immersive world. The author writes in such a way that you feel you are directly in the story. A fast paced action adventure with loveable and relatable characters. And some not so lovable. Lots of intrigue and mystery. A strong, inspiring FMC that you can’t help but root for from the very beginning. A sassy/warrior best friend. Incredible fantasy & political world building. A few grumpy shadow daddies. This book has it all. One of my favorite things is the MULTIPLE povs. Like everyones. We even get little bits of the "villains" perspective. You get such a rounded and holistic view of the story which was a nice and surprising new take. Puts a nice little twist to thinking you know someone's true intentions!
I believe this is the first in a series. So while it seems like some aspects of the story have been left unresolved or incomplete, it appears we’re setting the ground work for a much more complex journey ahead diving deeper into the characters & their individual stories and how they come together.
Overall this was a really great read and debut novel for the author. Ended on a good little cliffhanger leaving you ready for more! 😍
Incredibly grateful for this ARC opportunity! Thank you again 🫶🏼 Will be patiently waiting for the continuation of Seraphina's story and the new series! 😉💖
September 25, 2024
A Veil of Twilight is an exceptionally well-written book filled with a humorous, and slightly traumatized, cast of well-developed characters coming together to do the right thing in a fantastical world where an evil sickness threatens to overwhelm the three realms, leaving Seraphina Celestara racing against the clock to save her people and fight against the evil that haunts her nightmares. It is a perfect start to Santana’s debut series.
Ryen Santana has mastered the art of weaving lyrical and emotional imagery into the story to provoke the reader into believing that this is a truly magical world, and crave for it. Her writing has made diving into the world effortless and easy to follow as the story progresses.
As for the story itself, there were a series of twists and turns that had me on the edge of the seat and second guessing myself. There were several moments in the story where I felt a strong urge to dive into the story and tell Seraphina to not do this or that (because she is sometimes reckless, but that’s okay because we love her) or to fight their battles because I couldn’t take any more heartache. Or slap the heck out of those who dared to cause more trouble for them than they deserve. And then there’s the ending, which I NEVER saw coming at all, and it leaves so many questions that I hope will be answered in the sequel.
(Side note, Caspian is my everything.)
If you are a fan of found family, enemies-to-lovers, shadow daddies, and feminine rage, then I highly recommend this book and you will not regret it.
𝐌𝐚𝐧𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐤𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐑𝐲𝐞𝐧 𝐒𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐚𝐧𝐚 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐠𝐢𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐦𝐞 𝐚 𝐝𝐢𝐠𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐥 𝐚𝐝𝐯𝐚𝐧𝐜𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐞𝐫’𝐬 𝐜𝐨𝐩𝐲 𝐨𝐟 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐝𝐞𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐧𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐥, 𝐀 𝐕𝐞𝐢𝐥 𝐨𝐟 𝐓𝐰𝐢𝐥𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐭!
Ryen Santana has mastered the art of weaving lyrical and emotional imagery into the story to provoke the reader into believing that this is a truly magical world, and crave for it. Her writing has made diving into the world effortless and easy to follow as the story progresses.
As for the story itself, there were a series of twists and turns that had me on the edge of the seat and second guessing myself. There were several moments in the story where I felt a strong urge to dive into the story and tell Seraphina to not do this or that (because she is sometimes reckless, but that’s okay because we love her) or to fight their battles because I couldn’t take any more heartache. Or slap the heck out of those who dared to cause more trouble for them than they deserve. And then there’s the ending, which I NEVER saw coming at all, and it leaves so many questions that I hope will be answered in the sequel.
(Side note, Caspian is my everything.)
If you are a fan of found family, enemies-to-lovers, shadow daddies, and feminine rage, then I highly recommend this book and you will not regret it.
𝐌𝐚𝐧𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐤𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐑𝐲𝐞𝐧 𝐒𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐚𝐧𝐚 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐠𝐢𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐦𝐞 𝐚 𝐝𝐢𝐠𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐥 𝐚𝐝𝐯𝐚𝐧𝐜𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐞𝐫’𝐬 𝐜𝐨𝐩𝐲 𝐨𝐟 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐝𝐞𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐧𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐥, 𝐀 𝐕𝐞𝐢𝐥 𝐨𝐟 𝐓𝐰𝐢𝐥𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐭!
December 17, 2025
A super interesting read where I had no idea where the story was going to go or who to trust.
Did I start off with liking a certain someone in the beginning only to curse their name by the end? Yes. Did I giggle and kick my feet at another MMCs POV? Also yes.
I really love how the story focuses a lot on relationships Seraphina has with Rhoda and Ezra. Her friendships are important to her and are the grounding that she needs as she fights the growing evil of the land.
Quillon is by far the most dynamic of the MMCs. Throughout the whole story you never know whose side he's really on. He killed before, would he again? Would Seraphina's love for him be enough? Or would the temptation of power get him in the end? I really just loved reading his POVs because you really just don't know what is going through his head.
Caspian is by far my favorite MMC. He is absolutely hilarious and his obsession with Seraphina had me giggling.
And our evil MMC, Azryl, was such a fun read because I really didn't know whether I wanted to hate him or love him. Was he really evil or was he just the product of awful circumstances?
This book is definitely full of devastation and betrayals. I was gutted by the end of the story because it definitely did not end how I thought it would! I desperately need book 2 because how this one ended can't be the end!!!!!
Did I start off with liking a certain someone in the beginning only to curse their name by the end? Yes. Did I giggle and kick my feet at another MMCs POV? Also yes.
I really love how the story focuses a lot on relationships Seraphina has with Rhoda and Ezra. Her friendships are important to her and are the grounding that she needs as she fights the growing evil of the land.
Quillon is by far the most dynamic of the MMCs. Throughout the whole story you never know whose side he's really on. He killed before, would he again? Would Seraphina's love for him be enough? Or would the temptation of power get him in the end? I really just loved reading his POVs because you really just don't know what is going through his head.
Caspian is by far my favorite MMC. He is absolutely hilarious and his obsession with Seraphina had me giggling.
And our evil MMC, Azryl, was such a fun read because I really didn't know whether I wanted to hate him or love him. Was he really evil or was he just the product of awful circumstances?
This book is definitely full of devastation and betrayals. I was gutted by the end of the story because it definitely did not end how I thought it would! I desperately need book 2 because how this one ended can't be the end!!!!!
September 2, 2024
I received this as an arc 😊
Overall, the story is unique and a fun fast paced read. If you read Reckless/Powerless and you liked the way in which it was written, more than likely you’ll also enjoy this book. Think banter, multiple POV, swearing, and quickly escalating emotional situations. Oh and a male character pining over the MFC.
The premise of the story is definitely interesting. But I had to give it 4 stars because of plot holes. One of them being that the Sera, the main FMC, is supposed to be centuries old but most, if not all the characters, seem like they’re maybe 18-22 ishhh. I was also thrown off by the world being introduced by describing kings, big battles, strongholds, sketchy in person only meetings and the like. But then all of a sudden there’s also texting and references to Dr Who. Maybe that’s just me 😂. And the venom and the power of the celestials… so much more needed to be explored here to fill in the blanks.
I’m a sucker for in depth world building and the complexity of the fantasy genre. I hope to see more of this in the next book as it has so much potential.
Would also love more solid background for the characters. It’s such a intriguing storyline and look forward to more exploration and explanation in book 2 🙌
Overall, the story is unique and a fun fast paced read. If you read Reckless/Powerless and you liked the way in which it was written, more than likely you’ll also enjoy this book. Think banter, multiple POV, swearing, and quickly escalating emotional situations. Oh and a male character pining over the MFC.
The premise of the story is definitely interesting. But I had to give it 4 stars because of plot holes. One of them being that the Sera, the main FMC, is supposed to be centuries old but most, if not all the characters, seem like they’re maybe 18-22 ishhh. I was also thrown off by the world being introduced by describing kings, big battles, strongholds, sketchy in person only meetings and the like. But then all of a sudden there’s also texting and references to Dr Who. Maybe that’s just me 😂. And the venom and the power of the celestials… so much more needed to be explored here to fill in the blanks.
I’m a sucker for in depth world building and the complexity of the fantasy genre. I hope to see more of this in the next book as it has so much potential.
Would also love more solid background for the characters. It’s such a intriguing storyline and look forward to more exploration and explanation in book 2 🙌
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 12, 2024
Rating: 5/5
Spice: 1.5/5
A Veil of Twilight is a must-read!
I'm not usually one to write a review but I got this as an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I cannot stop thinking about A Veil of Twilight. From the moment I picked it up, I was completely hooked. Seraphina is hands-down one of the best female characters I’ve read in a long time. She’s this incredible mix of light and dark, and watching her calm healer side become lethal was epic and her best friend Rhoda is so frickin' cool.
The way the book blends magic and modern-day elements is so unique. It’s like stepping into a world that’s both familiar and totally magical.
The plot? Oh my gosh, the tension never lets up! There’s a venom that turns people into terrifying vampire-zombie things, a tyrannical king who is sexy but scary, and probably the hottest MMCs, plot twists galore and you just feel the urgency and danger in every scene. The world-building is rich, and the pacing is perfect—I couldn’t flip the pages fast enough.
If you’re into urban fantasy that’s packed with action, magic, and complex characters, you NEED to read this. I’ve already told all my friends about it, and I’ll be shouting about it to everyone else.
READ THIS BOOK.
Spice: 1.5/5
A Veil of Twilight is a must-read!
I'm not usually one to write a review but I got this as an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I cannot stop thinking about A Veil of Twilight. From the moment I picked it up, I was completely hooked. Seraphina is hands-down one of the best female characters I’ve read in a long time. She’s this incredible mix of light and dark, and watching her calm healer side become lethal was epic and her best friend Rhoda is so frickin' cool.
The way the book blends magic and modern-day elements is so unique. It’s like stepping into a world that’s both familiar and totally magical.
The plot? Oh my gosh, the tension never lets up! There’s a venom that turns people into terrifying vampire-zombie things, a tyrannical king who is sexy but scary, and probably the hottest MMCs, plot twists galore and you just feel the urgency and danger in every scene. The world-building is rich, and the pacing is perfect—I couldn’t flip the pages fast enough.
If you’re into urban fantasy that’s packed with action, magic, and complex characters, you NEED to read this. I’ve already told all my friends about it, and I’ll be shouting about it to everyone else.
READ THIS BOOK.
September 30, 2024
This book was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G 👏🏼 due to many life things happening, it took me a minute to get to it, but when I did, I flew through it 😏 I LOVE when a book captivates me so much that I have to know what comes next, and keep saying "one more chapter..." Before suddenly, it's 3am, and I'm still reading 😂 (that's no small thing, I have 3 young children, but it was worth the exhaustion)
Seraphina is a strong, morally grey woman who knows who she is. While I love a good YA book, now that I'm almost 30, I love reading books with a more seasoned FMC. Her story was empowering to read. She's already powerful, she knows her stuff, and it was so refreshing!
Also, shadow daddies (yes, multiple) 👀 Plus strong female friendships!! I love that in a book. I feel like the guy best friend has become such a big thing, but reading about female friendship, girls not being catty, I love it.
The world building was done so beautifully. It was unique, and I can't wait to dive back into the realms when the second book is out!
This was such a fun and emotional read. And FEMALE RAGE 😈 I love reading about it. I don't tire of it. I adore seeing women use their rage and power. It gets me emotional every time. I adored this and cannot wait for the next one!!!
Seraphina is a strong, morally grey woman who knows who she is. While I love a good YA book, now that I'm almost 30, I love reading books with a more seasoned FMC. Her story was empowering to read. She's already powerful, she knows her stuff, and it was so refreshing!
Also, shadow daddies (yes, multiple) 👀 Plus strong female friendships!! I love that in a book. I feel like the guy best friend has become such a big thing, but reading about female friendship, girls not being catty, I love it.
The world building was done so beautifully. It was unique, and I can't wait to dive back into the realms when the second book is out!
This was such a fun and emotional read. And FEMALE RAGE 😈 I love reading about it. I don't tire of it. I adore seeing women use their rage and power. It gets me emotional every time. I adored this and cannot wait for the next one!!!
December 30, 2024
I received this ARC in exchange for my honest review. This book was not for me, I made it to 43% and was honestly just confused by the plot and how the main character is considered an assassin? She has a healing power and seems more like an emissary of sorts. I thought the pop culture references (scooby doo, and “hallmark moments”) were very out of place for an urban fantasy. I felt like a lot of the interactions were supposed to be super dramatic and it just didn’t hit for me and it made it seem cheesy. The political aspects were also confusing, specifically when Azryl was at the court of the celestial king. When it was described that they had to use a portal to another realm I was thinking okay Celestial King is very important and the highest of the leaders. And then Azryl dismissed the whole meeting. It just didn’t make any sense to me.
I do think the author had some very nice descriptive writing but that alone wasn’t enough for me to continue reading. Many people highly rated this book so it may just be that this book wasn’t for me. I appreciate the opportunity to read this ARC, even though it ended up not being for me.
I do think the author had some very nice descriptive writing but that alone wasn’t enough for me to continue reading. Many people highly rated this book so it may just be that this book wasn’t for me. I appreciate the opportunity to read this ARC, even though it ended up not being for me.
August 21, 2024
If you love found family, shadow daddies, and incredible imagery, AVOT is the book for you.
The characters Ryen Santana has created are incredibly well-developed and because of her elegantly crafted descriptions that amalgamate seamlessly with the plot, it is so easy to visualize each of the characters and their mannerisms as Ryen guides you through the story.
Ryen beautifully blends multi-POV into incredible foreshadowing moments where you just want to scream at the characters because you know something they don't.
A Veil of Twilight is a book that makes you feel every emotion - love, hate, grief, sorrow, joy - and at the end of being emotionally abused by Ryen, you will thank her for it, and ask her for more. (When is the AVOT 2 Release date?) ;)
The plot twists will have your brain working overtime and wondering what more Ryen will have in store for us (and Seraphina, Rhoda, Caspian, Ezra, Azryl, & Quillon).
Ryen, you built an incredible world, with relatable (and HOT) characters, and I cannot wait to dive back into Seraphinas' world in the next one!
The characters Ryen Santana has created are incredibly well-developed and because of her elegantly crafted descriptions that amalgamate seamlessly with the plot, it is so easy to visualize each of the characters and their mannerisms as Ryen guides you through the story.
Ryen beautifully blends multi-POV into incredible foreshadowing moments where you just want to scream at the characters because you know something they don't.
A Veil of Twilight is a book that makes you feel every emotion - love, hate, grief, sorrow, joy - and at the end of being emotionally abused by Ryen, you will thank her for it, and ask her for more. (When is the AVOT 2 Release date?) ;)
The plot twists will have your brain working overtime and wondering what more Ryen will have in store for us (and Seraphina, Rhoda, Caspian, Ezra, Azryl, & Quillon).
Ryen, you built an incredible world, with relatable (and HOT) characters, and I cannot wait to dive back into Seraphinas' world in the next one!
September 25, 2024
"I am not just Seraphina Celestara; I am the Luminary, chosen by the gods..."
☆☆☆☆.5
I just finished up ARC reading A Veil of Twilight by Ryen Santana! This is the first book in the Shadow Chronicles, and this was seriously such an epic story. It's fast-paced, action-packed, and keeps you on your toes the whole time! I loved it!
This book follows Seraphina Celestara, who was brought back from the dead and chosen to be the Luminary, a healer and protector of the realms. She has a secret, though. She doesn't always heal people... She's a deadly assassin who is trying to take down the enemies that stand between her people and the peace they deserve.
This book was such a whirlwind! Just when I thought I had things figured out, a plot twist hits and leaves me shocked! It sets up the next book perfectly, and I'm super excited to see what happens next with Seraphina!
A huge thank you to Ryen Santana for the opportunity to read this book!
A Veil of Twilight gets released on October 1st!
☆☆☆☆.5
I just finished up ARC reading A Veil of Twilight by Ryen Santana! This is the first book in the Shadow Chronicles, and this was seriously such an epic story. It's fast-paced, action-packed, and keeps you on your toes the whole time! I loved it!
This book follows Seraphina Celestara, who was brought back from the dead and chosen to be the Luminary, a healer and protector of the realms. She has a secret, though. She doesn't always heal people... She's a deadly assassin who is trying to take down the enemies that stand between her people and the peace they deserve.
This book was such a whirlwind! Just when I thought I had things figured out, a plot twist hits and leaves me shocked! It sets up the next book perfectly, and I'm super excited to see what happens next with Seraphina!
A huge thank you to Ryen Santana for the opportunity to read this book!
A Veil of Twilight gets released on October 1st!
September 5, 2024
A Veil of Twilight was an interesting book. I don’t know how else to describe it. The story building was cool, with different realms and cities. It reminded me a little bit like crescent city. The main character is determined and a figure of light. However, there were a few plot holes that kind of upset me. Besides that, it was a great book, and if you want a strong female main character with lots of betrayal, powers, and a kind of love triangle, this book is for you. I had one concern that the tension between characters wasn’t memorable until a good 30-40% of the way through, but then it picked up and the book got really good. I understand why though because of all the world building, I just had expected more tension between characters at first. Either way, this was a good read and please go read it. I have questions left unanswered that hopefully will be answered in book 2, but isn’t that how all good first books are?
September 17, 2024
Plot: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Spice: 🌶️
World-Building: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Character Development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I was so excited to receive this ARC. Once I did, I had this book devoured in two days, and that was only because I needed to eat and sleep. Seraphina is such a beautifully written character, and as a woman, I felt so seen and heard. You can’t help but root for her from the very beginning, and it truly feels as if you are right there with her through her trials.
This book has soo much going for it: amazing world-building, great characters who are perfectly flawed, a solid plot, and strong development. The only thing I was missing was spice, but the author has stated that it will be coming in the later books, so this is a slow burn. I cannot wait to buy this when the physical copy becomes available, and I will definitely be requesting an ARC of the second book.
Spice: 🌶️
World-Building: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Character Development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I was so excited to receive this ARC. Once I did, I had this book devoured in two days, and that was only because I needed to eat and sleep. Seraphina is such a beautifully written character, and as a woman, I felt so seen and heard. You can’t help but root for her from the very beginning, and it truly feels as if you are right there with her through her trials.
This book has soo much going for it: amazing world-building, great characters who are perfectly flawed, a solid plot, and strong development. The only thing I was missing was spice, but the author has stated that it will be coming in the later books, so this is a slow burn. I cannot wait to buy this when the physical copy becomes available, and I will definitely be requesting an ARC of the second book.
August 27, 2024
This debut from Ryen Santana was beautifully written. You will fall in love with the characters and have your heart torn out. I’m a fan of emotional damage in my books, so it was right up my alley. One of my favorite parts about this book is that the FMC isn’t an inexperienced teenager who somehow saves the world. I like my FMCs with a bit more baggage and grit and this one delivers. We have shadow daddies and I’m excited to see how they continue to develop in the series. There are some twists at the end that left me wanting the next book already to see where this goes. Loved it and can’t wait for more by Ryen!
October 10, 2024
4⭐️
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I feel so torn about this book. It took me a bit to get into but when I did it took off!! The names of Caspian and Azryl just threw me off 😂 otherwise Sera is a little badass. Love her and Rhoda ❤️ I felt like at times it was like their conversing then BATTLE SCENE then they are talking again and then BATTLE SCENE. And more battle scenes 😂 I don’t wanna say it felt rushed but I felt like there could’ve been more world building. BUT I still really loved this book and can’t wait for the next one!!
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I feel so torn about this book. It took me a bit to get into but when I did it took off!! The names of Caspian and Azryl just threw me off 😂 otherwise Sera is a little badass. Love her and Rhoda ❤️ I felt like at times it was like their conversing then BATTLE SCENE then they are talking again and then BATTLE SCENE. And more battle scenes 😂 I don’t wanna say it felt rushed but I felt like there could’ve been more world building. BUT I still really loved this book and can’t wait for the next one!!
September 8, 2024
I struggled to want to finish it.
Lots of talking and descriptions that I felt didn't add to the story, but it made me rather forget what was being talked about in the first place, dragging it out. There were a few modern references that felt out of place in this world.
There was also some time-line things that were off to me.
Overall, it's not for me. Maybe the next book will change my mind, maybe.
Lots of talking and descriptions that I felt didn't add to the story, but it made me rather forget what was being talked about in the first place, dragging it out. There were a few modern references that felt out of place in this world.
There was also some time-line things that were off to me.
Overall, it's not for me. Maybe the next book will change my mind, maybe.
October 4, 2024
Review- “VEIL OF TWILIGHT”
by: Reyen Santana
Spice level- 🌶️
Fantasy Dark Romance is one of my favorite categories and this books hardly disappoints. First there is plenty of world and character building that adds to the glamour of this story.
The FMC is pretty awesome and I love how the author created a transitioning character. I think it added more to the enemies to lovers theme in this Novel, but also increased her over all appeal as the story unfolds.
The story itself is full of interesting magical elements and plenty of action while also incorporating love and adventure. I would recommend this novel especially if you are a lover of fantasy or even curious about the book.
Thank you to the Author for allowing me the ARC opportunity I can’t wait to see what is next.
by: Reyen Santana
Spice level- 🌶️
Fantasy Dark Romance is one of my favorite categories and this books hardly disappoints. First there is plenty of world and character building that adds to the glamour of this story.
The FMC is pretty awesome and I love how the author created a transitioning character. I think it added more to the enemies to lovers theme in this Novel, but also increased her over all appeal as the story unfolds.
The story itself is full of interesting magical elements and plenty of action while also incorporating love and adventure. I would recommend this novel especially if you are a lover of fantasy or even curious about the book.
Thank you to the Author for allowing me the ARC opportunity I can’t wait to see what is next.
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