I received this ARC in return for an honest review. This story had the bones to be great, but it just was not executed well.
Let’s start with the positive. I like the premise of the story. Best friend’s sister comes to town, there’s a shady ex-boyfriend not quite going away, the main male character is a retired NHL hockey player, and it’s set at the beach. All of this was why I signed up for the ARC in the first place. It has so much potential to be a great story. Add in the hurricane and the two main characters getting stuck together for some time. That can go so far in the romance and spice department. But sadly, that’s all the positives I have.
The biggest thing this story was lacking was depth. Sometimes I also say this as “it needs to be fleshed out more”. The story read too choppy from scene to scene. There wasn’t enough depth to the story to make it flow nicely and really immerse you in the plot. This was also true for the characters. We didn’t really get to know them beyond the surface level. I felt like I read Grayson’s resume instead of meeting him as a friend. Harper was a little more dynamic with the background of the ex-boyfriend, but she was still lacking. So much could have been done by flashbacks to childhood give me some more insight to Harper’s crush on Grayson and frequent interactions with him in her life. There could have been more diving into each other’s hobbies more like the reading that came out of nowhere. What were they reading? How did they bond over that besides sitting with each other? We just needed more depth all around.
Next, the plot was weak and couldn’t hold its own against the spice. Again, the bones were there. Especially with the stalker storyline. I was waiting for a whole lengthy laying out of this stalker fiasco to this big finish, but it was rather disappointing. A little too straightforward. Even the relationship coming together was lackluster. It just didn’t feel real at any point. Plus, to be honest, the spice scenes weren’t even THAT great. They could barely hold their own alone.
Last, I was skimming by the end because Harper was beyond my last nerve. Her toward the end just did not make sense to me. It felt very childish and blown out of proportion. Maybe if the stalker storyline had been explored more it COULD have made some sense. Like, what if Grayson got really hurt? Or friends were threatened? Or his business suffered somehow? Ok, then maybe her actions make sense. But with the story as is, it just seemed immature and annoying.
Overall, Anders has a story in her, she just needs help filling in some of the spaces to make it magical. I’d be inte