My review of this book can be summed up in the mail I sent to the author and publisher ...
Sirs,
I recently finished the above title. While the book had some interesting insights, I was extremely disappointed by both a lack of attention to editing and some of the arguments advanced.
1. Editing
Was this book actually properly edited? Here is just a snapshot of some of the editing issues in the book:
Inconsistent use of "First World War" and "World War One". The same issue is repeated with "Second World War" and "World War Two". "Chose one and stick to it" was a common exhortation from professors at the universities I have attended. However, that doesn't seem to be the case in this text.
On page 119 a sentence reads, "During the early years of the Second World it became ...". I read this sentence and asked myself, "Second World what?!". It's obvious that the word "war" is missing, but this example just further highlights the shoddy editing.
On page 196 a phrase reads, "one of the most important insight (sic)". It should surely by "most important insights"?
On page 208 a phrase reads, "serves as resource that". The article "a" appears to be missing.
The lack of attention to editing is extremely annoying and detracts from some of the interesting points raised in the book. I found myself reading the book waiting for the next editing and/or grammatical faux pas as a form of comic relief.
I turn now to some of the arguments raised in the book.
2. Arguments
I acknowledge on this issue some of the points raised, at this juncture in my mail, are matters of conjecture. However, here goes:
Reference is made to social democrats on the left and the right. Social democracy is hardly an ideology that people on the right of the spectrum would identify with, given that social democracy is a strand of socialism. Whilst conservative governments after the Second World War may have adopted policies that reinforced the Welfare State (as a form of social democracy), is this just not symptomatic of the dearth of ideas amongst conservatives and a tacit acknowledgement of the failure of capitalism and the free market? This hardly means conservatives had suddenly become socialists.
Capitalism is referred to as a social system. I would rather argue that capitalism is a way for society to organise its economic affairs. This does not mean that a society's social systems are capitalist. Arguing that capitalism is a social system conflates our economic lives with our social lives. Whilst these two aspects of a society are inter-related, they should not be conflated.
The arguments around democracy and the promotion of democracy at the end of the Second World War seem to conflate the concepts of capitalism and democracy. Capitalism is not democracy and democracy is not capitalism. Indeed, it could be argued that democracy and capitalism are antithetical.
Unfortunately all of the above, in particular the editing, detracted from the read. To be honest, I found these issues extremely irritating and insulting to me, the reader. I was left with the impression that if you aren't prepared to take your reader seriously and edit the book properly, why should I take you, the author and publisher, seriously.
If a second edition and/or paperback is ever published I would suggest that the book be proofread - properly this time - and the editing issues dealt with, at the very least.
Yours faithfully,
Warren Weertman