I really wanted to love this book. A WWII era historical fiction set mostly in Venice? Yes please! Unfortunately, this book was hard to get through. Not because of the subject matter or because I cared about the characters, but because it felt so thrown together and poorly edited, it was beyond distracting.
From the beginning, the main character jumps from what's happening currently to some time in the past. No transition, no nothing. This lead to several instances of me being confused and having to read back a few paragraphs to see that I didn't miss something, it was just a massive leap.
And the continuity errors. In one instance, Talia sneaks a note in a church to Evelina, which Evelina reads and burns when she gets home. That night, she sneaks out to the church again and runs into the nuns protecting Talia, to whom she gives the magically un-burned note for them to read. Another case, it had been established earlier that Evelina's mother knew Talia did not get out of Venice with her father. Yet later in the book she seems to believe that both Talia and her father got out of Venice.
And then there are the parts that just don't make sense. I'm still confused how the Germans searched Talia's house, missed Mario and yet knew Evelina had Mario? She never questions how they found out?
And the ending. While I'm glad it ended abruptly to put me out of my misery, after years of not seeing her, a young child is going to tell a virtual stranger that he spent a couple of weeks with that he's got two mothers?
Much of the time, the characters thoughts and actions just didn't make a whole lot of sense. There was no backstory, there was no explanation. The reader is just shown completely opposing thoughts and feelings from certain characters, with no reason as to why. I was left not really caring about any of the characters because I had no idea what to expect from them, which led me to just not care about them.
I'm seriously confused by the so many good reviews, but as much as I wanted to like this one, I just couldn't convince myself that it was good. With a lot of editing, it absolutely could have been better, and even with all the negatives, I was, up until the last chapter, going to give it a second star. That last Evelina/Talia exchange, however, sealed the deal and unfortunately put this into 1 star territory.