I found this book on TikTok by the author. I thought the concept of this book was really cool (FMC bodyguard x MMC fashion client) and so I put it on my TBR, picked it up at Barnes & Noble -and started reading.
I had a hard time getting through this book.
The characters for me were very bland. The story was just kind of chaotic -I couldn’t figure out what the plot was. And then when the plot finally did get recognized, it was at the 10 pages of the book and it was out of left field for me. I didn’t understand how this was the conflict that was chosen for the book.
But even if we just focused on the characters themselves, it just seemed a little forced- their connection didn’t really seem to build realistically to me. Besides knowing a few facts here and there about the main characters, there really wasn’t much to them. For me, they’re just didn’t seem to be an actual connection between the two characters. I mean there are multiple points where the FMC was thinking about adding another person who she found good looking into their relationship without ever bringing it up with the MMC.
I did not enjoy the writing in this book. For me, there was just too many instances and mistakes throughout the entire book where it made it too difficult to read.
I wanted to give this book a fair shot with my whole heart and I’m still glad that I picked this up and finished. I still wanted to support a new author. It is a huge accomplishment to produce a book and put it out and for that I give her acknowledgment, but personally this book was not good. This post is just my opinion out of many others, again these are just my thoughts/ feelings.