*Received an ARC in exchange for an honest review*
I knew from the first chapter that this book wasn't going to be for me, but because I received the ARC, I wanted to be able to push through for my review. However, it took me much longer than it should have for me to get to the halfway point, mainly because I had to take a break after every chapter.
It reads very much like fans of the romance genre that weren't able to execute it well.
I found the writing juvenile. It's very stream-of-consciousness in style, and I'm also not a fan of the excessive use of exclamation points in non-dialogue contexts (and if you're writing dialogue well, you don't even need them there, either, in my opinion). There is also a LOT of exposition to explain context behind things, but again, from a first-person POV, it's not executed well.
I also didn't care for either of the main characters. They weren't for me. Avery Soko, the FMC, has a very childish tone to her POV (in that if I wasn't told her age, I'd think she was a teenager and not a grown woman). The "enemies" part of things is due to the fact that because she's immature, she doesn't forgive misunderstandings/doesn't offer Luca the chance to actually show his side of things because she constantly assumes the worst about him. She cares more about winning than the mission of her start-up, seen when she is reluctant to work with Luca's team even though their conservation efforts are complementary. She also doesn't handle rejection well - which, you would think would be a point of development for her - but at the point I stopped at, it seemed very much like she was being pandered to by the other characters who validated her instead of actually trying to be mature about things.
Luca Navarro, the MMC, is an attempt at a grumpy character that again, I don't think was executed well.
If you have to constantly spell it out for the reader that this is grumpy x sunshine/enemies or rivals-to-lovers, you're doing it wrong. Luca has a soft spot for Avery, but cannot seem to do so without putting other women down and comparing them to her. No thanks. They also "compete" with each other, which often just ended in Avery winning because Luca loses all brain cells when she's around. If there's a rivals-to-lovers story, it should be evenly matched.
They also BOTH sexualize each other very early on (probably to play up the tension aspect). I can't root for characters who can't even be around each other without thinking about doing XYZ or thinking about XYZ body parts. If I didn't know any better, I'd think at least Luca's POV was written by a man because of how bad he sexualizes Avery (not that she's much better about it in her POV).