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The Rejected Ex-mate secret Identity
" I, Ember MacGregor reject you, Alpha Paris as my mate!". " Did this woman just reject me? Did my wife renounce me as her mate?"." How dare you reject my son! You're just a lowly ungrateful Omega!", Luna Lara yelled at her. Ember clenched her fist into a ball set a sharp gaze toward them for the first time in five years and left the ward. ***Alpha Paris chose Ember to be his wife and Luna of his packs even though she's not his fated mate because he thought he was in love with her but in the third year of their marriage, he found his destined mate Kate. He couldn't resist their wolf bonds so he marked her behind his wife's back. He cheated on her and he even impregnated his fated mate. Ember couldn't give an Alpha an heir because she was infertile so to return the favor, she obeyed every order his family told her and her husband but when Alpha Paris believed Kate's lies that she hurt her; they even forced her to donate her kidney to amends her crimes, she decided to reject Paris and leave him. Paris was shocked and thought that he saw a new side of his wife. He was thinking that after almost five years of being together, he still didn't know everything about her. After Ember left, Paris regretted it and tried to get Ember back.
431 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 22, 2024
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February 8, 2025
Please get an editor!!!
The story itself isn't bad, but the language and editing are awful. Please invest in an English language editor.
Many basic mistakes make it look and feel rushed. There is a muddled POV, and it's either written by a non-native English speaker or translated directly from another language, which doesn't work well without a lot of editing.
This all takes away from the experience of what could be a decent book, and I really had to get past that to finish. Please edit ASAP!!
The story itself isn't bad, but the language and editing are awful. Please invest in an English language editor.
Many basic mistakes make it look and feel rushed. There is a muddled POV, and it's either written by a non-native English speaker or translated directly from another language, which doesn't work well without a lot of editing.
This all takes away from the experience of what could be a decent book, and I really had to get past that to finish. Please edit ASAP!!
September 18, 2025
The Rejected Ex-mate Secret Idenity
Do NOT waste your money! The spelling and grammar are terrible! Is English not your first language? Did you not have someone edit your book? The story really dragged!
Do NOT waste your money! The spelling and grammar are terrible! Is English not your first language? Did you not have someone edit your book? The story really dragged!
October 14, 2024
editor needed
Grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. It also didn’t flow. The story line has potential and I wanted so much more from a $7 book.
Grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. It also didn’t flow. The story line has potential and I wanted so much more from a $7 book.
July 3, 2025
could be better.
Has a lot of grammatical errors. Story line good. The divorce drawn out. Papers giving at first leaving then giving again yet still not signed.
Has a lot of grammatical errors. Story line good. The divorce drawn out. Papers giving at first leaving then giving again yet still not signed.
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