What do you think?
Rate this book
The Heretic
Carved into the side of a cliff, the city of Avinyón stands on the edge of the ocean. Wealth, power, and control flow into the capital of the empire from its conquests. But for those at the bottom of the city, the only thing that flows their way is a never-ending fight for survival... and crashing salt water.
In a world powered by runes, where magic and technology fuse, Damian is about to graduate from the empire's premier university. His thesis, poised to revolutionize the understanding of runes, is his ticket to a better life and saving his brother from the deadly military draft.
The Heretic unfolds conflict between sovereignty and revolution, combat and creativity, discovery and deceit.
In a world powered by runes, where magic and technology fuse, Damian is about to graduate from the empire's premier university. His thesis, poised to revolutionize the understanding of runes, is his ticket to a better life and saving his brother from the deadly military draft.
The Heretic unfolds conflict between sovereignty and revolution, combat and creativity, discovery and deceit.
493 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 12, 2024
30 people are currently reading
142 people want to read
Ratings & Reviews
Friends & Following
Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!
Community Reviews
Displaying 1 - 30 of 47 reviews
August 20, 2024
BooksGoSocial provided a galley for review.
Fantasy stories have always been in my wheelhouse, both as a reader and a writer. With an intriguing cover and description, I was interested to get in on the ground floor of a new series by a new author.
I have to admit that I had a very hard time clicking with this one. I got through almost half the book (250 out of 536 pages - a lot more than my usual 50 to 100 pages) to try to keep me interested, but it just was not sticking. Sadly, I have to move it to my did-not-finish pile; maybe I'll give it another shot later.
The narration is split between present-day Damian and alternating flashback chapters with his parents Rowin and Dawn that stretch as far back as seventeen years. The latter are there to give the reader foundational information regarding the conflicts with the church, a more dynamic way to show this rather than tell it all via info dumping or expository dialogue. For some reason, though, I didn't feel the urgency with them (since we know where both parents are come present-day). I felt that these put the brakes on the present day narration. Since the author planned for this to be a series right from the start, maybe these chapters might have served better as their own prequel novel to come later - once the reader felt some kind of connection to Rowin and Dawn and then wanted more of their story.
It is obvious that Allen put a lot of work into the worldbuilding which he parses out quite generously at points. The reader learns how the church is layered in with military rankings and structure. He also goes into great depth of the training the initiates face (a part I was actually into as it added several characters for Damian to play off) with an interesting subplot involving the chemical stimulant vival to push through the pain (a nice allegory to opioids, perhaps). But we also get a good bit about the card game Radiate which Damian is very good at (good enough to win money) as well as the vamp trade (prostitution). Again, all interesting ideas but it is a lot of a lot for a single book much less for a debut novel in a series.
If this book did not go through any kind of formal editing process on the publisher side, that might be why it fell off the rails for me. Editors can help to tighten a work, offer the tougher criticisms and encourage reworking to make a piece stronger.
Fantasy stories have always been in my wheelhouse, both as a reader and a writer. With an intriguing cover and description, I was interested to get in on the ground floor of a new series by a new author.
I have to admit that I had a very hard time clicking with this one. I got through almost half the book (250 out of 536 pages - a lot more than my usual 50 to 100 pages) to try to keep me interested, but it just was not sticking. Sadly, I have to move it to my did-not-finish pile; maybe I'll give it another shot later.
The narration is split between present-day Damian and alternating flashback chapters with his parents Rowin and Dawn that stretch as far back as seventeen years. The latter are there to give the reader foundational information regarding the conflicts with the church, a more dynamic way to show this rather than tell it all via info dumping or expository dialogue. For some reason, though, I didn't feel the urgency with them (since we know where both parents are come present-day). I felt that these put the brakes on the present day narration. Since the author planned for this to be a series right from the start, maybe these chapters might have served better as their own prequel novel to come later - once the reader felt some kind of connection to Rowin and Dawn and then wanted more of their story.
It is obvious that Allen put a lot of work into the worldbuilding which he parses out quite generously at points. The reader learns how the church is layered in with military rankings and structure. He also goes into great depth of the training the initiates face (a part I was actually into as it added several characters for Damian to play off) with an interesting subplot involving the chemical stimulant vival to push through the pain (a nice allegory to opioids, perhaps). But we also get a good bit about the card game Radiate which Damian is very good at (good enough to win money) as well as the vamp trade (prostitution). Again, all interesting ideas but it is a lot of a lot for a single book much less for a debut novel in a series.
If this book did not go through any kind of formal editing process on the publisher side, that might be why it fell off the rails for me. Editors can help to tighten a work, offer the tougher criticisms and encourage reworking to make a piece stronger.
June 12, 2024
I did listen to the audio, which may affect some of my perception of this book.
This started out really great, continued to be an action packed story, but did have a few things that made me scratch my head. Things I liked:
-The setting and magic system are unique and I liked the world building.
- There were some really insightful passages that were thought provoking.
- I enjoyed how the game play/the title of the book factored into the plot.
-The character growth and the relationships!
The head scratchers:
- I can't decide where to place the genre. Yes, it's fantasy, but based on the beginning and what I perceived the MC's age to be, I thought it was going to be YA fantasy. But it isn't. I believe the MC is actually older, but I pictured him as a teen throughout the book.
- Though there are no "scenes," there is a prostitution element and since I really thought all these boys I was reading about were teens, it was kind of off-putting.
- Toward the end, the story started to get confused about what direction it's going. I realize this is to set things up for the next book, but I felt like it started hopping around and not really finishing things up.
In all, a great debut and a creative, well-conceived world that any new fantasy author would be envious of.
This started out really great, continued to be an action packed story, but did have a few things that made me scratch my head. Things I liked:
-The setting and magic system are unique and I liked the world building.
- There were some really insightful passages that were thought provoking.
- I enjoyed how the game play/the title of the book factored into the plot.
-The character growth and the relationships!
The head scratchers:
- I can't decide where to place the genre. Yes, it's fantasy, but based on the beginning and what I perceived the MC's age to be, I thought it was going to be YA fantasy. But it isn't. I believe the MC is actually older, but I pictured him as a teen throughout the book.
- Though there are no "scenes," there is a prostitution element and since I really thought all these boys I was reading about were teens, it was kind of off-putting.
- Toward the end, the story started to get confused about what direction it's going. I realize this is to set things up for the next book, but I felt like it started hopping around and not really finishing things up.
In all, a great debut and a creative, well-conceived world that any new fantasy author would be envious of.
March 14, 2025
Absolutely love the worldbuilding, the mystery, and the magic. Several times I had the urgent need to draw what was described since I am a sucker for epic landscapes and powers. Fans of Brandon Sanderson should give this one a go!
November 14, 2024
4.5 stars
Wow that was some cliff hanger. I’m really sad the next book isn’t out yet because I really want to know what happens to these characters next.
Damien is thrown into the thick of multiple plots against each other with barely any details to help him through. Damien may be the underdog, half starved and with one arm and numerous scars, but he’s smart and strategic. Damien is the definition of work smarter not harder.
He starts out working on a thesis project with runes that would revolutionize technology, but he’s ripped away from his work before it can be officially turned in. He’s thrown into working for the priests/government and to get out of it he seeks help from his estranged father, a known rebel leader.
Damien is then thrown into a plot against the government to help save his brother from having been drafted early into the military. So Damien is racing against time to complete training to become an elite warrior while spying and trying to uncover their secrets that have been impossible for even the most experienced of rebels. But there’s a larger plot at play that he doesn’t know about yet.
Lies, deceit, betrayal, unlikely friendships, and hard choices are a constant in this world. Will Damien not only survive but also complete his mission, save his brother, and spare his friends?
I like that they used a strategic gambling game as an analogy for how Damien thought and worked through his solutions to the trouble he constantly found himself in. It made it easier to understand how he came to the conclusions he did, even if the game was unfamiliar, the concept behind it was not.
Damien is an interesting character because he’s not the classic hero, in fact, he does a lot of villainous things. He’s a character that’s likable but also not likable at the same time. This makes him feel very real as no one is all good or all bad, especially when thrown into impossible situations like he is.
Wow that was some cliff hanger. I’m really sad the next book isn’t out yet because I really want to know what happens to these characters next.
Damien is thrown into the thick of multiple plots against each other with barely any details to help him through. Damien may be the underdog, half starved and with one arm and numerous scars, but he’s smart and strategic. Damien is the definition of work smarter not harder.
He starts out working on a thesis project with runes that would revolutionize technology, but he’s ripped away from his work before it can be officially turned in. He’s thrown into working for the priests/government and to get out of it he seeks help from his estranged father, a known rebel leader.
Damien is then thrown into a plot against the government to help save his brother from having been drafted early into the military. So Damien is racing against time to complete training to become an elite warrior while spying and trying to uncover their secrets that have been impossible for even the most experienced of rebels. But there’s a larger plot at play that he doesn’t know about yet.
Lies, deceit, betrayal, unlikely friendships, and hard choices are a constant in this world. Will Damien not only survive but also complete his mission, save his brother, and spare his friends?
I like that they used a strategic gambling game as an analogy for how Damien thought and worked through his solutions to the trouble he constantly found himself in. It made it easier to understand how he came to the conclusions he did, even if the game was unfamiliar, the concept behind it was not.
Damien is an interesting character because he’s not the classic hero, in fact, he does a lot of villainous things. He’s a character that’s likable but also not likable at the same time. This makes him feel very real as no one is all good or all bad, especially when thrown into impossible situations like he is.
June 12, 2024
In Nathan Allen's "The Heretic," readers are transported to the captivating city of Avinyón, where magic and technology intertwine in a world fueled by runes. Protagonist Damien navigates a complex journey, driven by devotion and ambition, as he grapples with family loyalty and newfound friendships amidst a backdrop of rebellion and intrigue.
One of the book's standout elements is Damien's character development, portrayed with depth and complexity. His motivations, shaped by devotion for both his biological and chosen families, drive the narrative forward, while his experiences at an elite warrior school offer fascinating insights into the intricacies of magic and power in Allen's meticulously crafted world.
Allen's writing is vivid and immersive, painting richly detailed landscapes without unnecessary embellishment. The pacing is relentless, keeping readers eagerly turning pages from start to finish. I particularly appreciated the strategic use of time-hopping chapters, providing essential background while maintaining suspense until the final reveal.
As someone who doesn't often delve into fantasy, I found "The Heretic" irresistibly engaging. Fans of works like "Ender's Game" and "A Deadly Education" are sure to be enthralled by Allen's masterful storytelling and the gripping world he has created. I highly recommend "The Heretic" to both seasoned fantasy enthusiasts and newcomers alike.
One of the book's standout elements is Damien's character development, portrayed with depth and complexity. His motivations, shaped by devotion for both his biological and chosen families, drive the narrative forward, while his experiences at an elite warrior school offer fascinating insights into the intricacies of magic and power in Allen's meticulously crafted world.
Allen's writing is vivid and immersive, painting richly detailed landscapes without unnecessary embellishment. The pacing is relentless, keeping readers eagerly turning pages from start to finish. I particularly appreciated the strategic use of time-hopping chapters, providing essential background while maintaining suspense until the final reveal.
As someone who doesn't often delve into fantasy, I found "The Heretic" irresistibly engaging. Fans of works like "Ender's Game" and "A Deadly Education" are sure to be enthralled by Allen's masterful storytelling and the gripping world he has created. I highly recommend "The Heretic" to both seasoned fantasy enthusiasts and newcomers alike.
June 12, 2024
I was thoroughly impressed with Nathan R Allen's novel The Heretic, especially with it being his debut work! The rich descriptions put me right into the city of Avinyón - where we get to explore everything from the Dockside to the Peaks - and to the mysterious Fort Sang Bien, with its maze-like halls and with secrets hidden at every corner. The magic system was captivating, and getting to see the main character, Damian, improve and learn more about his abilities was really cool. My favourite part was Damian and his relationship to the other characters, like his mother and brother, and the friends he made along the way. Chaz is definitely my favourite! Their banter made me laugh out loud multiple times!
Twists and turns kept me on my toes the entire time, and the action scenes were awesome, but the moments of levity were what really stuck with me. There's a card game called "Radiate" in this world that Damian plays, and suffice it to say I really wish I could play it myself! I had the opportunity to read the first few chapters of this story last year and I was itching for more, and now that I've finished reading the completed work, I cannot wait to get my hands on the second book once it's out! I definitely recommend it!
Twists and turns kept me on my toes the entire time, and the action scenes were awesome, but the moments of levity were what really stuck with me. There's a card game called "Radiate" in this world that Damian plays, and suffice it to say I really wish I could play it myself! I had the opportunity to read the first few chapters of this story last year and I was itching for more, and now that I've finished reading the completed work, I cannot wait to get my hands on the second book once it's out! I definitely recommend it!
May 18, 2025
My my...
So, I'm currently sitting in front of the script I need to write for my upcoming video review for this book, and I am still wondering how in the world I'm going to possibly make fun of this one.
NOTHING IS FUNNY I'M JUST HURT.
Bottom line is: this book is good and you should give it a try. No, it's not perfect -- there's whole sections of the book that made me dizzy for all the wrong reasons. But I forgive that for how creative the story is, and how much I could relate to main character Damian (again and, sadly, for all the wrong reasons).
More when I decide what to do with my script 😂
So, I'm currently sitting in front of the script I need to write for my upcoming video review for this book, and I am still wondering how in the world I'm going to possibly make fun of this one.
NOTHING IS FUNNY I'M JUST HURT.
Bottom line is: this book is good and you should give it a try. No, it's not perfect -- there's whole sections of the book that made me dizzy for all the wrong reasons. But I forgive that for how creative the story is, and how much I could relate to main character Damian (again and, sadly, for all the wrong reasons).
More when I decide what to do with my script 😂
June 15, 2024
There is always a concern when your friend says "hey, I wrote a book, will you read it?" That the book is trash. Should you, the prospective reader, fall into this trap, you risk being forced to either lie to your friend, or crush your friend's dreams.
Fortunately for me, when Nathan asked me to read this book, it wasn't a trap, because the book wasn't trash. In fact, it was pretty good.
Sure I could nitpick this that or the other, and I warned him before agreeing to beta read it that I'm a literature snob so as to hedge my bets, but I was pleasantly surprised to find this wasn't needed. In fact, rather than being a chore to read, I found myself drawn to the book. The pacing was quite good, and Nathan has done a fantastic job of making you really care for the main character and want to know what'll happen to him next.
In truth, despite my fears, the predominant thought I had while reading The Heretic was "why didn't a big publisher pick this up?" This book was better than many debut novels I've read, and I've read quite a few. I honestly don't know why a publisher didn't pick this book up, but it's to their detriment.
So, from one random internet stranger to another- try out this book. You won't regret it.
Fortunately for me, when Nathan asked me to read this book, it wasn't a trap, because the book wasn't trash. In fact, it was pretty good.
Sure I could nitpick this that or the other, and I warned him before agreeing to beta read it that I'm a literature snob so as to hedge my bets, but I was pleasantly surprised to find this wasn't needed. In fact, rather than being a chore to read, I found myself drawn to the book. The pacing was quite good, and Nathan has done a fantastic job of making you really care for the main character and want to know what'll happen to him next.
In truth, despite my fears, the predominant thought I had while reading The Heretic was "why didn't a big publisher pick this up?" This book was better than many debut novels I've read, and I've read quite a few. I honestly don't know why a publisher didn't pick this book up, but it's to their detriment.
So, from one random internet stranger to another- try out this book. You won't regret it.
September 1, 2024
I want to start by saying I was surprised this was a debut novel. Allen’s writing, style and narrative showed elements of someone who really knows their craft and can execute it well. The novel grabbed me from the first page.
Allen in The Heretic weaves together a story that combines several themes and questions throughout. There is also a focus on characters and the themes of family and the church. While this is a fantasy novel it does have a touch of theological and philosophical about it, especially when we see the past and present in the differing points of view. The world building is done well but occasionally we do have a lot of information in one go. Since fantasy is a go to genre I’m used to this being the case but to some readers it might be a bit much.
I found the pace was generally good, I did find the start seemed a little slower. Then again it is setting up the novel so to be expected and things picked up more towards the middle. All in all though I really did enjoy this one and for a debut I think it’s fantastic. I will definitely be looking for more of Allen’s work in the future.
As always thank you to Love Book Tours for the copy to review. My review is always honest and truthful.
Allen in The Heretic weaves together a story that combines several themes and questions throughout. There is also a focus on characters and the themes of family and the church. While this is a fantasy novel it does have a touch of theological and philosophical about it, especially when we see the past and present in the differing points of view. The world building is done well but occasionally we do have a lot of information in one go. Since fantasy is a go to genre I’m used to this being the case but to some readers it might be a bit much.
I found the pace was generally good, I did find the start seemed a little slower. Then again it is setting up the novel so to be expected and things picked up more towards the middle. All in all though I really did enjoy this one and for a debut I think it’s fantastic. I will definitely be looking for more of Allen’s work in the future.
As always thank you to Love Book Tours for the copy to review. My review is always honest and truthful.
June 16, 2024
Blown away by "The Heretic"! This debut novel by Allen is a refreshing addition to the high fantasy genre. The world-building is exceptional, featuring a city ingeniously built into a cliff, with socio-economic tiers that are quite literally stacked. The magic and technology system is innovative and captivating. The protagonist, who is differently-abled, adds a unique and engaging perspective, and his friend's intriguing occupation was a surprise in a world where representation and inclusion matter. The action sequences are perfectly paced, keeping you on the edge of your seat.
Despite its grand scale and complex characters, "The Heretic" is impressively tight and coherent. Without giving away too much, Allen skillfully subverts traditional fantasy tropes, sparking many discussions among my friends and me. I’m eagerly awaiting book two!
Despite its grand scale and complex characters, "The Heretic" is impressively tight and coherent. Without giving away too much, Allen skillfully subverts traditional fantasy tropes, sparking many discussions among my friends and me. I’m eagerly awaiting book two!
June 12, 2024
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book for a lot of reasons.
Getting to read an author’s first book can be an adventure. Sometimes you go through it constantly having to remind yourself that they are new at this and just going to get better, but I didn’t find myself doing that in this book. It had the feel of an established writer and an established world in a way I would not have expected in a debut novel.
Nathan’s creativity was on full display throughout this novel. From creative magic systems, dark villains, flawed heroes, and twists and turns within the plot, I was regularly surprised, delighted, or horrified by this story in delightful ways.
The main character felt real throughout. My initial fear was that Nathan would handle the disability of his main character in a way that could be aptly described as cringy. It could have taken over the story, been something constantly mentioned or harped upon. But instead, Nathan has presented a character that seems to take his disability in stride and rarely thinks about it or focuses on it, instead just going through life in a normal way. To me, this was a great way to present a disability as something that doesn’t need to limit you. It was always there, and others often mocked it or worried about it, but our main character just adapts without it becoming a sob story. To me that felt good.
Overall, I really enjoyed this read and look forward to the series continuing in the future!
Getting to read an author’s first book can be an adventure. Sometimes you go through it constantly having to remind yourself that they are new at this and just going to get better, but I didn’t find myself doing that in this book. It had the feel of an established writer and an established world in a way I would not have expected in a debut novel.
Nathan’s creativity was on full display throughout this novel. From creative magic systems, dark villains, flawed heroes, and twists and turns within the plot, I was regularly surprised, delighted, or horrified by this story in delightful ways.
The main character felt real throughout. My initial fear was that Nathan would handle the disability of his main character in a way that could be aptly described as cringy. It could have taken over the story, been something constantly mentioned or harped upon. But instead, Nathan has presented a character that seems to take his disability in stride and rarely thinks about it or focuses on it, instead just going through life in a normal way. To me, this was a great way to present a disability as something that doesn’t need to limit you. It was always there, and others often mocked it or worried about it, but our main character just adapts without it becoming a sob story. To me that felt good.
Overall, I really enjoyed this read and look forward to the series continuing in the future!
June 12, 2024
The heretic is the first in what will be an amazing series. I love the way the plot develops in the present with flashbacks to the past that slowly catch up to where you are in the timeline. Immediately, you care about the characters—each is totally believable and relatable and they live in an excellently built world. It’s totally different from other fantasy I’ve read but the author does a great job describing and setting the scene so you feel like you are in it. slowly you learn more about the events that have shaped them and why each character is motivated to choose their course. It’s truly gripping. Full of intense dilemmas and crises. I’m still thinking about each character. I love how some information is given to you outright and some dawns on you over time and shocks you. I loved the pace that built up to a cannot-put-it-down climax.
I will have a hard time waiting for the second book. The characters and storyline are so rich I am just itching to know more about what has happened and what will happen next.
It is Sanderson-esque but with a refreshing new flavor and compelling discoveries yet to be made in the rich plot.
I will have a hard time waiting for the second book. The characters and storyline are so rich I am just itching to know more about what has happened and what will happen next.
It is Sanderson-esque but with a refreshing new flavor and compelling discoveries yet to be made in the rich plot.
June 18, 2024
TL;DR: I haven't read a book in years. I read "The Heretic" over just a few days. I don't think you'll regret it either.
Full review: What happens when you combine "A Song of Ice and Fire" (Game of Thrones) with "The Lord of the Rings" and "The Witcher," and throw in a bit of "The Legend of Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom"?
You get "The Heretic."
This is not to say that "The Heretic" isn't original. On the contrary, "The Heretic" gives you the same elating feeling of experiencing those masterpieces for the first time. "The Heretic" is so familiar that it feels like a good friend, yet it is so original that most writers would benefit from learning a thing or two from Nathan Allen's wordsmithing.
One of my favorite moments was when the main character, Damian, explored some ruins with nothing but some rope, some gold, and a bar of soap. Most fantasy books have ruin delving, but Nathan Allen made it fun again.
"The Heretic" is a refreshing new take on the medieval-fantasy genre that not only delivers on its promise but also avoids common pitfalls seen in other books, such as plot holes or solutions that come out of thin air. Every succeeding event is carefully planned out in advance.
I easily believe that "The Heretic" is the kind of book that will one day be made into a film series—and a good one at that; not one to be forgotten after just one season.
This book requires a time investment. It also requires you to invest your emotions. But due to Nathan Allen's new approach to the genre, this investment is not only rewarding but also one you'll find yourself desiring.
I found the pacing, the careful attention to detail, and the, at times, surreal relevance to reality to be masterfully written.
It's clear to me that "The Heretic" isn't a knife-in-the-dark or an attempt to cash in. Instead, it's a well-thought-out world, painted one stroke at a time; a story that I believe Nathan Allen crafted over years and sincerely wants to share with the reader.
I suspect that "The Heretic" is the kind of book that readers will be talking about for years to come. I look forward to the continued success of "The Heretic" and its sequels. Until then, I might just have to experience "The Heretic" from the beginning again.
If you're a fan of fantasy and have been aching for something original, "The Heretic" might just be what you've been searching for.
Full review: What happens when you combine "A Song of Ice and Fire" (Game of Thrones) with "The Lord of the Rings" and "The Witcher," and throw in a bit of "The Legend of Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom"?
You get "The Heretic."
This is not to say that "The Heretic" isn't original. On the contrary, "The Heretic" gives you the same elating feeling of experiencing those masterpieces for the first time. "The Heretic" is so familiar that it feels like a good friend, yet it is so original that most writers would benefit from learning a thing or two from Nathan Allen's wordsmithing.
One of my favorite moments was when the main character, Damian, explored some ruins with nothing but some rope, some gold, and a bar of soap. Most fantasy books have ruin delving, but Nathan Allen made it fun again.
"The Heretic" is a refreshing new take on the medieval-fantasy genre that not only delivers on its promise but also avoids common pitfalls seen in other books, such as plot holes or solutions that come out of thin air. Every succeeding event is carefully planned out in advance.
I easily believe that "The Heretic" is the kind of book that will one day be made into a film series—and a good one at that; not one to be forgotten after just one season.
This book requires a time investment. It also requires you to invest your emotions. But due to Nathan Allen's new approach to the genre, this investment is not only rewarding but also one you'll find yourself desiring.
I found the pacing, the careful attention to detail, and the, at times, surreal relevance to reality to be masterfully written.
It's clear to me that "The Heretic" isn't a knife-in-the-dark or an attempt to cash in. Instead, it's a well-thought-out world, painted one stroke at a time; a story that I believe Nathan Allen crafted over years and sincerely wants to share with the reader.
I suspect that "The Heretic" is the kind of book that readers will be talking about for years to come. I look forward to the continued success of "The Heretic" and its sequels. Until then, I might just have to experience "The Heretic" from the beginning again.
If you're a fan of fantasy and have been aching for something original, "The Heretic" might just be what you've been searching for.
September 23, 2024
I would like to thank the publisher and NetGalley for allowing me to read and honestly review an advanced reader’s copy of this book.
This was an interesting read; I don’t think it was for me, but certain readers are definitely going to devour this.
It’s very heavy on lore and strong world-building. We follow two timelines through the book; present day, with our main character Damian, and the past, following Damian’s parents, and their conflict with the church.
What this book if very strong with is character development; it takes its time, therefore can feel a little slow, but the pay off is excellent! If you are a big classic fantasy lover, I would recommend this!
This was an interesting read; I don’t think it was for me, but certain readers are definitely going to devour this.
It’s very heavy on lore and strong world-building. We follow two timelines through the book; present day, with our main character Damian, and the past, following Damian’s parents, and their conflict with the church.
What this book if very strong with is character development; it takes its time, therefore can feel a little slow, but the pay off is excellent! If you are a big classic fantasy lover, I would recommend this!
October 1, 2024
Such a unique fantasy book! I really loved the first half — the magic system and worldbuilding emerged so smoothly and the plotline really drew me in — but I did a fair amount of skimming in the latter half, especially the very long-winded action scenes or repetitive bits where Damian was working on puzzling out constructs, etc. I kind of started to lose track of where the story was going, if I'm being honest, but that might just have been me.
Honestly, I felt like this would have done better split into two books, with book one ending where Damian and Chaz escaped Fort Sang Mare. Then this easily would have been a five-star read for me!
Honestly, I felt like this would have done better split into two books, with book one ending where Damian and Chaz escaped Fort Sang Mare. Then this easily would have been a five-star read for me!
June 12, 2024
The Heretic is a fast-paced fantasy novel with complicated family relationships, tricky friendships, a few disappointments, really cool technology, stark geography, and some unexpected heroes. This is an exciting book and I found myself thinking, “Just one more chapter….” The flashbacks were an interesting device to develop the plot. It seemed that every single character added to the tale with no unnecessary, wasted storytelling. I came to love Damian and care about what happened to him, his little brother, and several others. I hope the story continues! Despite being a fifty-something-year-old woman who usually reads cookbooks and mysteries, I am so glad to be chosen as an advanced reader. I want to follow future installments in the “Runes and Ruin” saga!
June 12, 2024
This rapid-paced book with a lot of action, a entertaining concept of runes, and morally gray leaders with much power, and many different and difficult predicaments got me hooked instantly. Out of the many fictional chapter books that I have read in my life this has taken the first place with ease, and there is more to the story coming as a sequel! I am going to reread the heritic and ecstatic wait for the sequel. I recommend this book to all readers even if you don't like fictional books.
June 13, 2024
Stepped out of my normal reading comfort to try Nathan Allen's The Heretic and was truly impressed. It kept my attention and had me wanting to come back for more. It was easy to care for and relate to the character. It kept you guessing on where it was going to go next. Has me eagerly waiting for the next book.
June 12, 2024
Super fun and gripping read! I loved the amount of thought that went into the world building, as well as the character development. Really enjoyed this and would absolutely recommend!
June 21, 2024
The Heretic was a thoroughly enjoyable read. It follows two brothers through a series of clever plans, betrayals, and compromises as they try to save each other. The plot has layers to it that are cleverly intertwined and culminate in a truly surprise ending. Fantastic work for a new author.
July 10, 2024
Such a great read, I can’t wait for the next one! The characters are layered and deep, and likeable despite their obvious flaws. The world Nathan Allen has built is fascinating and forces you ponder the separation of Faith and Religion and what means are justified to over throw an unjust regime. If you liked Shades of Magic, Fourth Wing or Throne of Glass you will like The Heretic (although it is much less spicy than those last two 😘).
September 3, 2024
Here is my review for The Heretic by Nathan R Allen
I started reading this fast paced fantasy and just loved it. It’s like nothing I have read before with a mixture of magic, runes and technology. Damian, is a very gifted magical engineer and enrolled at Tonbridge, the best rune school available and paid for by his father, who is estranged from the family. Damian was aiming for a better life and was on the verge of a breakthrough on his thesis so he could graduate and save his brother but he was foiled at the last moment by a corrupt priest who set fire to his thesis. Then later that day, they stormed his lodgings and carted his brother away to join the church’s army although there was no war on at the moment. So, to get his brother back, Damian joined forces with his father to infiltrate the Empire’s elite forces and work out the runes needed to beat the Aura. The only thing foxing his father against the Empire. Can Damian do it? This was a fantastic read. So much was going on. Especially inside the elite forces. The author has got a fantastic imagination to think all of this up and to plot it all out. It is so well written and the characters are well thought out too. This is book one of the series so I’m eagerly looking forward to book two.
Blurb :
Damian, a gifted magical engineer, and cardplayer, is on the verge of a better life. His thesis, poised to revolutionize the understanding of runes, is ruined by a corrupt priest and his hopes are stolen. Faced with his brother's conscription into a brutal army, Damian makes a desperate pact. To save his family, he must infiltrate the Empire's special forces and use his unorthodox skills to survive. Can he outwit the elite forces and rewrite his family's future, or will he get swept further into a savage rebellion?
In a world powered by runes, where magic and technology fuse, contradictions grow and bleed together. Here, tyranny and revolution, combat and creativity, discovery and deception, affection and treachery clash.
A fast-paced fantasy that grabs you from the very first page, The Heretic is brimming with lovable characters, unforgettable environments, and intricate plots that keep you hooked to the very end.
I started reading this fast paced fantasy and just loved it. It’s like nothing I have read before with a mixture of magic, runes and technology. Damian, is a very gifted magical engineer and enrolled at Tonbridge, the best rune school available and paid for by his father, who is estranged from the family. Damian was aiming for a better life and was on the verge of a breakthrough on his thesis so he could graduate and save his brother but he was foiled at the last moment by a corrupt priest who set fire to his thesis. Then later that day, they stormed his lodgings and carted his brother away to join the church’s army although there was no war on at the moment. So, to get his brother back, Damian joined forces with his father to infiltrate the Empire’s elite forces and work out the runes needed to beat the Aura. The only thing foxing his father against the Empire. Can Damian do it? This was a fantastic read. So much was going on. Especially inside the elite forces. The author has got a fantastic imagination to think all of this up and to plot it all out. It is so well written and the characters are well thought out too. This is book one of the series so I’m eagerly looking forward to book two.
Blurb :
Damian, a gifted magical engineer, and cardplayer, is on the verge of a better life. His thesis, poised to revolutionize the understanding of runes, is ruined by a corrupt priest and his hopes are stolen. Faced with his brother's conscription into a brutal army, Damian makes a desperate pact. To save his family, he must infiltrate the Empire's special forces and use his unorthodox skills to survive. Can he outwit the elite forces and rewrite his family's future, or will he get swept further into a savage rebellion?
In a world powered by runes, where magic and technology fuse, contradictions grow and bleed together. Here, tyranny and revolution, combat and creativity, discovery and deception, affection and treachery clash.
A fast-paced fantasy that grabs you from the very first page, The Heretic is brimming with lovable characters, unforgettable environments, and intricate plots that keep you hooked to the very end.
June 14, 2024
I’m obsessed with this book!
What can I say, the writing is phenomenal, the story is absorbing and the characters are truly captivating. This book will make you feel all of the nuances of emotion your brain is capable of producing. Joy, dread, passion, anger, compassion, fear, love … Nathan R. Allen (the author) offers his readers a rhythmic and emotional dance which will leave you wanting more. I just couldn’t stop thinking about the story even when I wasn’t reading, it lived with me day and night.
As a storyboard artist myself, I could see in my mind’s eyes each shot thanks to the intelligent writing and well paced mise-en-scenes Nathan R. Allen describes.
What I would really want for this story is not only to continue so that my hunger for it can be satiated but I would love to see this turned into a show. I think this book truly has the potential for it : the world, the characters, the magic, the society, the politics, everything that Nathan R. Allen created feels so singular, rich, original and is simply thrilling.
At the heart of this story lives a profound understanding of love, family, friendship and tenacity. The love that Damien (the main character) has for his brother, his mother, his newly found friend is expressed with pure wit and a deep knowledge of human behavior. I found myself pausing my reading on multiple occasions in order to take the time to absorb the brilliance of certain sentences.
I feel like I’ve learned about humanity and about myself while reading this book.
And what a lesson on tenacity! The main character is able to achieve the impossible for his brother and yet his growth, the way he’s going through each obstacle feels realistic and believable. It gave me the drive to go through some challenges in my own life with more calm and confidence.
Nathan R. Allen’s book will leave you feeling inspired, moved and it will be hard to not think about it even after finishing it.
Do yourself a favor and let yourself engulf in this world which was tailored with an incredible amount of care, love, intelligence and passion.
What can I say, the writing is phenomenal, the story is absorbing and the characters are truly captivating. This book will make you feel all of the nuances of emotion your brain is capable of producing. Joy, dread, passion, anger, compassion, fear, love … Nathan R. Allen (the author) offers his readers a rhythmic and emotional dance which will leave you wanting more. I just couldn’t stop thinking about the story even when I wasn’t reading, it lived with me day and night.
As a storyboard artist myself, I could see in my mind’s eyes each shot thanks to the intelligent writing and well paced mise-en-scenes Nathan R. Allen describes.
What I would really want for this story is not only to continue so that my hunger for it can be satiated but I would love to see this turned into a show. I think this book truly has the potential for it : the world, the characters, the magic, the society, the politics, everything that Nathan R. Allen created feels so singular, rich, original and is simply thrilling.
At the heart of this story lives a profound understanding of love, family, friendship and tenacity. The love that Damien (the main character) has for his brother, his mother, his newly found friend is expressed with pure wit and a deep knowledge of human behavior. I found myself pausing my reading on multiple occasions in order to take the time to absorb the brilliance of certain sentences.
I feel like I’ve learned about humanity and about myself while reading this book.
And what a lesson on tenacity! The main character is able to achieve the impossible for his brother and yet his growth, the way he’s going through each obstacle feels realistic and believable. It gave me the drive to go through some challenges in my own life with more calm and confidence.
Nathan R. Allen’s book will leave you feeling inspired, moved and it will be hard to not think about it even after finishing it.
Do yourself a favor and let yourself engulf in this world which was tailored with an incredible amount of care, love, intelligence and passion.
September 6, 2024
What a powerful and intense story. From page one, the story starts strong and doesn't stop!
Stories about any sort of military situation can be a big "maybe" for me, but this one really stood out. I fell in love with the MC (yes, the actual main character!!) from the start. It's that big brother paternal instict that always wins me over. I don't have siblings, really, but my husband does, and there's just something about that energy that is so lovely!
Unfortunately, the action-packed storyline brings non-stop struggles to our MC and his little brother Ned. Damian has been doing everything he can to protect Ned from being forcibly drafted into the military when the area experiences another draft.
There are so many moving parts and so many interesting fantasy, sovereign, and other unique elements that I really enjoyed. The author's blending of them all together and making them work together is masterful.
I really enjoyed reading this book. Despite its near-epic length - about 180k words, it flew by, and I enjoyed all of it. For me, none of it dragged or made me feel like I was losing interest.
I can't wait to read more by this author, especially in this series!
If you love a good imperialistic war/fantasy adventure, this is the book for you! It reminds me a little of Hunger Games and The Maze Runner, as well as similar books. It's about young people carrying the burdens of their dystopian, troubled societies on their backs. In some ways, it's a little too close to home!
Content Warnings: Dystopian Society, Violence, Religious Ideology, Forcible Military Recruitment (Drafting), Religious War, Death, Prejudice against S3x Workers, Divorce, Child Harm
Stories about any sort of military situation can be a big "maybe" for me, but this one really stood out. I fell in love with the MC (yes, the actual main character!!) from the start. It's that big brother paternal instict that always wins me over. I don't have siblings, really, but my husband does, and there's just something about that energy that is so lovely!
Unfortunately, the action-packed storyline brings non-stop struggles to our MC and his little brother Ned. Damian has been doing everything he can to protect Ned from being forcibly drafted into the military when the area experiences another draft.
There are so many moving parts and so many interesting fantasy, sovereign, and other unique elements that I really enjoyed. The author's blending of them all together and making them work together is masterful.
I really enjoyed reading this book. Despite its near-epic length - about 180k words, it flew by, and I enjoyed all of it. For me, none of it dragged or made me feel like I was losing interest.
I can't wait to read more by this author, especially in this series!
If you love a good imperialistic war/fantasy adventure, this is the book for you! It reminds me a little of Hunger Games and The Maze Runner, as well as similar books. It's about young people carrying the burdens of their dystopian, troubled societies on their backs. In some ways, it's a little too close to home!
Content Warnings: Dystopian Society, Violence, Religious Ideology, Forcible Military Recruitment (Drafting), Religious War, Death, Prejudice against S3x Workers, Divorce, Child Harm
June 18, 2024
LOVED this book! Although I did feel it was clearly a first time author book, I really enjoyed reading this story.
Characters: The main character was very believable. I loved that he was fallible and although thought very highly of himself, he would miss things around him and make mistakes. I never like it when the main character, especially teenagers, come off completely perfect. I also loved that although it seemed like there could be love interests it was not part of the story or huge part of the plot. There were lots of great characters, getting to know them through the main characters point of view was done really well, but with the break out chapters I felt like the inner dialogue of the male characters all seemed too similar and I sometimes had to go back to the chapter headings to remind myself who's perspective the chapter was from.
World Building: Loved how different this world was, fantasy novels can be super fun because anything can be possible so I loved learning about this new world. I hope the future books really expound on the entire world and history!
Overall I would totally recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a new fantasy series. And I'm looking forward to the next book!
Characters: The main character was very believable. I loved that he was fallible and although thought very highly of himself, he would miss things around him and make mistakes. I never like it when the main character, especially teenagers, come off completely perfect. I also loved that although it seemed like there could be love interests it was not part of the story or huge part of the plot. There were lots of great characters, getting to know them through the main characters point of view was done really well, but with the break out chapters I felt like the inner dialogue of the male characters all seemed too similar and I sometimes had to go back to the chapter headings to remind myself who's perspective the chapter was from.
World Building: Loved how different this world was, fantasy novels can be super fun because anything can be possible so I loved learning about this new world. I hope the future books really expound on the entire world and history!
Overall I would totally recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a new fantasy series. And I'm looking forward to the next book!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 5, 2024
The Heretic is book 1 of the Runes and Ruin series and Debut Novel by Nathan R Allen. I've said this before, and I will say it again I am loving the Fantasy Genre, and this one certainly didn't disappoint.
The world building is probably one of my favourite things about the Fantasy Genre, and I thought the author was very creative in his writing with vivid and immersive world building, the magic systems, and settings.
Through Allen's writing, you are taken on the journey of the protagonist Damien, and it was a joy to read and see this characters development and growth, we learn about his motivations and experiences as he struggles with mixed emotions and new experiences.
Now I did find this a bit slow to begin with, but as you immerse yourself in the world and delve into the storyline, I found the pace picked up, it was engaging, full of action, twists and turns, but not only that I couldn't help but care for our MC! I can't wait to read the next one in this series!
Honestly, if you are looking for a new Fantasy book to read or want to try a new author - give this a read you won't be disappointed!
The world building is probably one of my favourite things about the Fantasy Genre, and I thought the author was very creative in his writing with vivid and immersive world building, the magic systems, and settings.
Through Allen's writing, you are taken on the journey of the protagonist Damien, and it was a joy to read and see this characters development and growth, we learn about his motivations and experiences as he struggles with mixed emotions and new experiences.
Now I did find this a bit slow to begin with, but as you immerse yourself in the world and delve into the storyline, I found the pace picked up, it was engaging, full of action, twists and turns, but not only that I couldn't help but care for our MC! I can't wait to read the next one in this series!
Honestly, if you are looking for a new Fantasy book to read or want to try a new author - give this a read you won't be disappointed!
September 4, 2024
The Heretic by Nathan R Allen.
Runes and Ruin Book 1.
I loved the cover. That's why I signed up. It sounded so good. This was a good read. I did struggle a bit with the writing style. I had to keep putting it down and starting again. I liked Damian and Ned. It took me a while to get into this book. Once I did I couldn't put it down. I do love fantasy world. That did surprise me. I'm looking forward to the next book.
Blurb
Carved into the side of a cliff, the city of Avinyón stands on the edge of the ocean. Wealth, power, and control flow into the capital of the empire from its conquests. But for those at the bottom of the city, the only thing that flows their way is a never-ending fight for survival... and crashing salt water.
In a world powered by runes, where magic and technology fuse, Damian is about to graduate from the empire's premier university. His thesis, poised to revolutionize the understanding of runes, is his ticket to a better life and saving his brother from the deadly military draft.
Runes and Ruin Book 1.
I loved the cover. That's why I signed up. It sounded so good. This was a good read. I did struggle a bit with the writing style. I had to keep putting it down and starting again. I liked Damian and Ned. It took me a while to get into this book. Once I did I couldn't put it down. I do love fantasy world. That did surprise me. I'm looking forward to the next book.
Blurb
Carved into the side of a cliff, the city of Avinyón stands on the edge of the ocean. Wealth, power, and control flow into the capital of the empire from its conquests. But for those at the bottom of the city, the only thing that flows their way is a never-ending fight for survival... and crashing salt water.
In a world powered by runes, where magic and technology fuse, Damian is about to graduate from the empire's premier university. His thesis, poised to revolutionize the understanding of runes, is his ticket to a better life and saving his brother from the deadly military draft.
November 8, 2024
The prologue was really good and that led me to think that that level would continue for the rest of the book. I was not proven wrong completely but some points were not so great but overall pretty happy with the rest of the read. The magic system was interesting and because you are learning along with Damien about it is makes you feel a little more connected to him and his story. There is the training school/academia that some love to read. The combat is entertaining and fun to read. Did not get the whole thing with the card game or whatever it was which is central to the story but that's just me probably. Liked Damian for the most part but with a character so young you can look forward to more growth and depth in the future. Other characters really seemed secondary and need work or just more focus on them. I am giving 3 stars for this one. I don't know if I want to do a reread which is very important for me. Still I am interested in reading the next installment in this series.
June 13, 2024
Thank you, Nathan Allan, for sending an ARC Copy of this; I was so excited to read it.
The Heretic follows our MMC in the City of Avinyón, a world powered by runes, and a city that is slowly tearing itself apart as the religious faction within the empire tries to maintain control from the rebels.
I ended up DNFing this at around 20% into the book. Initially, I thought the pacing was a little slow, but that feeling changed within 3-4 chapters. The plot was interesting, the world-building and magic system were good, and the characters seemed well-written. I liked the idea of this book (and rune magic especially); however, I struggled to connect with it.
At the point I DNFd, I don't recall getting the MMC's age, and I struggled to place this between YA and Adult fantasy.
This book has:
-Disability representation
-A world that blends sci-fi and fantasy elements
-Rune-based magic system
-Espionage / Going undercover
The Heretic follows our MMC in the City of Avinyón, a world powered by runes, and a city that is slowly tearing itself apart as the religious faction within the empire tries to maintain control from the rebels.
I ended up DNFing this at around 20% into the book. Initially, I thought the pacing was a little slow, but that feeling changed within 3-4 chapters. The plot was interesting, the world-building and magic system were good, and the characters seemed well-written. I liked the idea of this book (and rune magic especially); however, I struggled to connect with it.
At the point I DNFd, I don't recall getting the MMC's age, and I struggled to place this between YA and Adult fantasy.
This book has:
-Disability representation
-A world that blends sci-fi and fantasy elements
-Rune-based magic system
-Espionage / Going undercover
June 19, 2024
I was given a copy of this book for free on the condition that I review it via a friend.
On the whole, I enjoyed The Heretic and would recommend it. The characters, plot, and fantasy world are all gripping and kept me engaged.
I did occasionally struggle to follow parts on first reading, finding that the phrasing required a re-read (e.g. using a pronoun to refer to a character mentioned in passing several paragraphs previously) or that some points were laboured whilst others skimmed over - the pacing did not feel very natural to me. In particular, the fight scenes were quite drawn out for my preference.
On the other hand, the characters were three dimensional and it made a nice change to have a disabled protagonist who didn't just immediately somehow bypass their limitations and associated trauma! I also liked the insight offered by the different POV chapters across different times - the format worked well.
I look forward to reading the sequel and finding out what happens next!
On the whole, I enjoyed The Heretic and would recommend it. The characters, plot, and fantasy world are all gripping and kept me engaged.
I did occasionally struggle to follow parts on first reading, finding that the phrasing required a re-read (e.g. using a pronoun to refer to a character mentioned in passing several paragraphs previously) or that some points were laboured whilst others skimmed over - the pacing did not feel very natural to me. In particular, the fight scenes were quite drawn out for my preference.
On the other hand, the characters were three dimensional and it made a nice change to have a disabled protagonist who didn't just immediately somehow bypass their limitations and associated trauma! I also liked the insight offered by the different POV chapters across different times - the format worked well.
I look forward to reading the sequel and finding out what happens next!
Displaying 1 - 30 of 47 reviews