I was somewhat disappointed by this book, but not as much as I have been by other recent books by Delta James, I’m not sure if she’s just trying to write too many words too fast, or if it has to do with some health issues that she’s mentioned recently in her newsletter, but the quality of recent books has not been what I expect from her. This one is better than the last couple, but still had some serious problems. I would really call it about a 3.5 rather than a 4 star.
The romance between Mercy and Hunter had an interesting premise given that Hunter is a vampire and incapable of love, and Mercy hates vampires, as they killed her family, although we readers know that Hunter is a good vampire who has spent the last 2000 years killing other vampires to prevent them from turning anyone without their consent. A longer book that more thoroughly explored the enemies to lovers scenario would have been preferable. As it was, there was a bit of a sense of whiplash; now she hates him, now she loves him; now he’s incapable of emotion, now he’s in love. This relationship deserved a proper slow burn.
Their meeting, by the way, was thrilling and the perfect set up for that slow burn that we didn’t get.
Another problem that stood out for me, there’s an incredibly powerful fae shifter, who implies that she will be able to easily vanquish the witch and vampire that are attacking them, and yet when the time comes, she can’t. She needs help, a lot of it. Why why have her say with such confidence that she’s going to extract vengeance and destroy them, with that proves not to be the case. OK she could’ve been overestimating her capabilities, but then I would expect some sort of comment on the fact that she can’t kill the witch on her own and she can’t kill the vampire and she can’t put down all the invading vampires. It just didn’t fit well together.
The climactic battle scene was also problematic. I never had a clear sense of what was happening, how many vampires and shifters were involved, whether the fighting was all in the courtyard or scattered around the compound. Also at one point, Hunter, very clearly states ‘ We have to kill the witch. She’s powering all the vampires.’ Two seconds later, Elyria , the fea, says ‘ but first we have to deal with these vampires.’ Huh? Makes no sense. Why would she say that?
I was also puzzled by the following:
The battle was over - for now. But deep inside, Hunter knew this was only the beginning. There was still a darkness looming on the horizon., a threat far greater than the one they had just faced. And somehow, Mercy was at the center of it all.
What is this feeling of his based on? There’s nothing prior in the book that should have given Hunter these ideas. OK, obviously the author has something in mind and is a building towards a larger conflict, but it hasn’t been laid out clearly in the book up to now so this just comes out of nowhere.
I enjoyed the book in spite of these caveats, but I wish Delta had taken the time (and the necessary page length) to write the book this could have been, one that was fully up to her previous standards. I hope to see her return to form in the future.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.