At over 400 pages, this book has a lot of padding. It reads like an English class essay by a struggling students trying to write the minimum required 500 words. Understand before anything else, this is boring. The book lacks incident. The exact same scenes repeat over and over, such as the scene where Leo meets up with Lincoln: the setting changes, but the scene hits the same notes every time. Same with the scenes with the two best friends, the scenes with the brother, the scenes with the dad, the scenes at work, the scenes with the mom, etc.
But this goes way deeper than just repetition and extreme boredom. This book is truly despicable. The author piles indignities upon the mc, one humiliation after another. It reads like he is bullying his own mc. And because this comes on as a comedy, we are apparently expected to laugh at the bullying and thereby become part of it. Where is the joy? Where are the little victories for this character among the setbacks and the humiliations? Everything is excruciatingly predictable. You know exactly what is going to happen when Leo goes on stage in the high school play on opening night, don't you?
It's more than just the terrible treatment of the mc. The book heaps contempt on gays who are interested in looking good, in fashion, dressing well, doing their hair, wearing make-up, etc. Loving fashion or hairstyling is just like loving anything else that is beautiful, like a beautiful painting or sculpture. There is nothing inherently morally bankrupt or shallow about it. And I say this as someone who has no interest in any of these things. But I object to the way Lincoln is written, and also the guy Leo works with (can't remember his name, maybe Vincent?) and others. The reality is that every single male in this book is gay and there is a lot of contempt directed at every one of these characters. Hey, us gay guys actually aren't so bad. But it's actually just bad writing that does not give any of the secondary characters any kind of inner life. Lincoln is a huge part of this book, but one has no idea what is going on with him or what is motivating his strange actions. It seems that he simply does whatever the author needs him to do for the plot at any given moment, whether it makes any sense or not. And the book drips with contempt for Lincoln. Can you really write any character well if you don't in some way empathize with them and like them? It's distasteful to read page after page of this.
I won't start of the sad character of the best friend, Dillon. We don't need gay characters written this way any more.
There is also an overarching problem of tone. This comes on as a romantic comedy, but then introduces an abusive father and an alcoholic mother and as a reader, it is really hard to know how to process the story. The narrative is also weighed down with work bullshit about self-care, etc. when it would be far better served by having the characters boldly go after what they want and then let's see what wacky highjinx result.
Before I wrap this up, I want to mention one of my major problems with Leo. He gets the best-looking guy in the school to ask him to be his boyfriend. This guy has the face of a supermodel and the body of an underwear model. They kiss and the guy asks Leo to go further. We never hear another word about it. I get that we are supposed to think Lincoln is a shitty person (questionable) but why can't Leo just enjoy getting naked and rolling around with this beautiful creature? On top of everything else annoying about Leo, he seems to be totally sexless. Not exactly how I remember being 17.
I have no idea if this author is straight, gay, or something else entirely, and it doesn't matter. Gay stories and gay boys should not be written so gray and glum and hopeless and bland and passive and shallow.
Don't read this. Try an older but very charming book called "Date Me, Bryson Keller" if you haven't read it yet. You will see what this type of thing can be. On the serious or dramatic side, a wonderful book that deals with some of these themes, including abusive/alcoholic parents is "They Hate Each Other" by Amanda Woody. She also has her novel come on like a romantic comedy, but she just nails it, and she doesn't forget the joy in life even as she writes about gay characters who experience tremendous sadness.